Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Finally finished reading your this SS.
Just amazing and perfect. π π π
I have already told you that you are a brilliant writer and you mix your FFs with perfection. I mean in your FFs we find every emotion and feeling. Raj and Naina didn't get much time to fulfill our demand of romance but our FFs make it possible. You know we love to see romance and you filled this SS with perfect romance.
Naina's zid that she has to go at Point 1857 and Raj's indirect denial as he knew that very well if he goes with Naina there he will not be able to control his desires more. But he didn't have to control his feelings any more and now he should not have to as she also loved him. She said it directly to him and now he understood that she too wants that.
Raj and his shy nature which also give him very less chance to romance. Point 1857 is very special place for them and so as for us. We always wanted to enjoy the romance at that place but never got that opportunity. Finally they kissed too and it was a sort of trust they have started to do on each other. I know you do a lot of work but I would suggest you to write on RED SAREE scene as well.π π π
Well done please do write more such beautiful stories. π π π
Finally finished reading your this SS.
Congrats for your achievement! ππ
Just amazing and perfect. π π π
Thank you so much π³
I have already told you that you are a brilliant writer and you mix your FFs with perfection.
I am happy that you liked my work and the mixing up too π
I mean in your FFs we find every emotion and feeling.
Thank you π
Raj and Naina didn't get much time to fulfill our demand of romance but our FFs make it possible.
Absolutely ππΌ
You know we love to see romance and you filled this SS with perfect romance.
I glad to know that π³
Naina's zid that she has to go at Point 1857 and Raj's indirect denial as he knew that very well if he goes with Naina there he will not be able to control his desires more. But he didn't have to control his feelings any more and now he should not have to as she also loved him. She said it directly to him and now he understood that she too wants that.
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Raj and his shy nature which also give him very less chance to romance. Point 1857 is very special place for them and so as for us.
Indeed! ππΌ
We always wanted to enjoy the romance at that place but never got that opportunity.
I agree! πππ‘
Finally they kissed too and it was a sort of trust they have started to do on each other. I know you do a lot of work but I would suggest you to write on RED SAREE scene as well.π π π
I have written on that too! Please check π
Well done please do write more such beautiful stories. π π π
Will do that π I have started with a fic on Sujal-Kashish, Rajveer-Naina and Kabeer-Ananya named 'Hongey Juda Na Hum' do give it a look π
Thanks for reading this π
Stay blessed!
And keep loving Rajveer-Naina
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