SARHADDEIN - [PART 3 - PAGE 11]

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Hi Guys I am back with a new idea of mine to torture you all 😆 I had this concept in m mind from a long time as it is not related to any serial or so that is why I didn't posted it & now I wanted to
post here to have your reviews .

I hope har baar ki tarah ye aatyachar bhi aap loog jheel lenge 🤔 Hope you all will like this concept & support me. I will post the parts soon & please give your feedback on CS & Prologue given below.




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Posted: 9 years ago
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SARHADDEIN


PROLOGUE

Division or discrimination is the biggest drawback of any kind of society. Dividing people in the name of cast, creed, religion & languages leads society towards only destruction.

At times people use such things to manipulate things in their own favor & also to gain power. People who try & discriminate people in the name of religion, caste tend to forget that there is only one cast & religion that a normal human being understands & respects too that is Love & Humanity.

It is the only key that wipes out all the borders of the heart, land, caste & religion as Love & humanity is above any caste or religion. People who really believe in humanity & love more than any religion or caste are really required in this world today as most of them use religion & caste to dominate or to manipulate others for their personal needs & profits.

Today in this so called modern society people have become more self centered & egoistic but there are still few people who only care for humanity love & friendship as it's more valuable for them than any religion or caste.

Let's see do the borders of caste, religion & country really have that power which can erase Love & humanity from the hearts of human being.


SNEAK PEAK


It's bright morning at Air Control Room at Jaipur Rajasthan. Air port suddenly while keeping a watch Station officer spots a Flight from Karachi to Jaipur is deviated from the route. Station officer gets in touch & pilot responds as there is some technical problem in Plane is getting out of control.

Station officer with the help of proper security & arrangements makes the Plane land somehow. As soon as the Plane lands something unexpected happens.

Few men with ammunitions block the way of the Passengers rushing out & their leader went inside the cockpit to take over the charge of the Plane.

Sensing danger Pilot informs immediately to send help as they are in danger. After Few minutes Air force Station & other forces are sent for rescue & they surrounded the Plane as situation was quite serious.

PANCHHI NADIYA PAWAN KE JHONKE, KOI SARHAD NA INHE ROKE... (2)
SARHAD INSANO KE LIYE HAIN, SOCHO TUMNE AUR MAINE KYA PAYA INSAN HOKE
PANCHHI NADIYA PAWAN KE JHONKE, KOI SARHAD NA INHE ROKE
SARHAD INSANO KE LIYE HAIN, SOCHO TUMNE AUR MAINE KYA PAYA INSAN HOKE

JO HUM DONO PANCHCHHI HOTE, TAIRTE HUM IS NEEL GAGAN MEIN PANKH PASARE
SAARI DHARTI APNI HOTI, APNE HOTE SAARE NAJARE
KHULI FIZAO MEIN UDATE... (2) APANE DILO MEIN HUM SAARA PYAR SAMAAKE
PANCHHI NADIYA PAWAN KE JHONKE, KOI SARHAD NA INHE ROKE
SARHAD INSANO KE LIYE HAIN, SOCHO TUMNE AUR MAINE KYA PAYA INSAN HOKE

JO MAIN HOTI NADIYA AUR TUM PAWAN KE JHONKE TO KYA HOTA... (2)
PAWAN KE JHONKE NADI KE TAN KO JAB CHHUTE HAIN... (2)
LEHARE HI LEHARE BANTI HAIN, HUM DONO JO MILTE TO KUCH AISA HOTA
SAB KEHTE YE LEHAR LEHAR JAHA BHI JAAYE INKO NA KOI TOKE
PANCHHI NADIYA PAWAN KE JHONKE, KOI SARHAD NA INHE ROKE
SARHAD INSANO KE LIYE HAIN, SOCHO TUMNE AUR MAINE KYA PAYA INSAN HOKE
PANCHHI NADIYA PAWAN KE JHONKE, KOI SARHAD NA INHE ROKE

CHARACTERIZATION: Characters are:

Shaurya Singh Rathore: Working as trained fighter Pilot & Technician in Indian Air force. He is young energetic yet a soft hearted person and also bit stubborn & spoilt brat of the house as is the youngest one in the family. He is apple of everyone's eye with a pure heart & soul.




Major Vikram Singh Rathore & Kanika Singh Rathore: He is one of most brave Major of Rajput regiment and elder brother of Shaurya & is very protective about him. Kanika is his beautiful wife she takes care of the family and she got married to Vikram just 6 months ago. She is good sweet soul.




Sangram Singh Rathore: He is Grand Father of Shaurya and Vikram loves to pamper them both. As he has lost his only son & daughter in law & his wife in a car accident now Shaurya & Samar are his life lines. He Lives for both of them specially loves Shaurya as he is youngest.




Neelima Bakshi: Sweet, simple, beautiful & bubbly girl. She is an IT professional & belongs to a very rich Business family of Karachi. She is a beautiful soul & also a very quick learner.




Bakshi Ahmad Siddiqui & Najma Siddiqui: He is among one of most rich Business man of Karachi & a very powerful personality loves his family but is bit strict in terms of rules. Najma is his wife a very loving caring Lady. She takes care of entire family.






Aftab Ahmad Siddiqui: He if Grand Father of Neelima & loves his entire family. He is especially fond of Neelima as she is one and only daughter of the family. He even fights with his son at times to fulfill demands of Neelima. Neelima too loves him dearly and try all possible ways to keep him happy and contended.




Khalid Ahmad Siddqui: Khalid is bit Stubborn & arrogant person. He is elder son of Bakshi Ahmad Siddiqui and helps his father in Business. He is heir of Siddiqui family so is bit authoritative in his nature always tries to control others. He loves is family & is a bit possessive about his little sister all the time.




Karan Chauhaan: Nice & sweet hearted person. Fast friend of Shaurya and is like family member to Rathore Family.




I will add more characters if required as the story progresses.😊


So how was it ? please give your Reviews 😊





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CS N PROLOGUE -- PAGE 1
PART 1 ---- PAGE 3
PART 2 ---- PAGE 6
PART 3 ---- PAGE 11








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Posted: 9 years ago
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NOTE

Guys I will update this FF depending upon my work & ur responses too If u don't find the prologue apt n I have less comments I will stop right here n will not update the parts further or I will be shifting it to blog for my genuine interested readers I think itna attyachaar kaafi hoga 🤔 so please let me know that weather I should continue or not 😊 & If you guys liked it please let me know through your comments & wait for this story to unfold. 🤗


Love & Regards

Your Goldie





Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. this is pretty interesting !! :)
So the plane has been high jacked..
Nice prologue.. superb CS...!
Do continue..
Nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue dear.main characters raj amna?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Nice prologue dear.main characters raj amna?


No mohit & Debolina but they are also important part of the story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome CS And Prolouge Goldie. 😊
Like The Concept, And The Characterization.

Thanx For Pm. Continue Soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome. interesting. continue soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love u di for making it so fast and thank u also.
Title of the story is itself very interesting and it smells a cross border, not so rosy love story.
Loved the prologue. Its different and awesome.
The choice of faces for the characters is very nice.
Song too is perfect.
Great start and I pray ki apko isse blog pe shift na karni pade.
Plane is hijacked?????? OMG!!!!!!!
Will be waiting for its updates.
Thanks for the pm.

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