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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Thanks Dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Awesome start di
loved it
Shaurya, Karan aur team ne sahi waqt pe sabko bacha liya, nice!
loved Shaurya! He's really cool!
Karan is interesting too! Kahe bechare Shaurya ki lovestory ko shuru hone se pehle hi khatam kane me laga hai? haha!
Neelima is really daring girl, Shaurya ko pehli mulakat me hi wo pasand aa gayi,that's good!
aage bahot maza ane wala hai
do continu soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Awesome start di

loved it
Shaurya, Karan aur team ne sahi waqt pe sabko bacha liya, nice!
loved Shaurya! He's really cool!
Karan is interesting too! Kahe bechare Shaurya ki lovestory ko shuru hone se pehle hi khatam kane me laga hai? haha!
Neelima is really daring girl, Shaurya ko pehli mulakat me hi wo pasand aa gayi,that's good!
aage bahot maza ane wala hai
do continu soon
thanks for pm


Thanks neha glad you liked it
Well yes Shaurya and Karan are interesting
Karan has his reasons
You will no it soon
Neelima is a really a darling 😊
Abhi bahut kuch hoga
Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
fantastic update
uff thank god Shaurya saved the passengers from terrorist group 🤗
he is so brave 👍🏼
even neelima seem good girl
then what's wrong with karan? 😕
what he is up to? 😕
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: cuteariya

fantastic update
uff thank god Shaurya saved the passengers from terrorist group 🤗
he is so brave 👍🏼
even neelima seem good girl
then what's wrong with karan? 😕
what he is up to? 😕
continue plz


Thanks dear glad you liked it
Yes Shaurya is brave and witty too
Karan has his reasons and he is right too
You will come to know soon
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Thanks Sona 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
first of all pichel baar hi kahana chaha ki sourya ye naam se mohith raina perfectly suit kartha hai.

awesome intersting update so pasengers saved..good ye neelima ke paas jane se karan ka kya probnlem hei??"

kuch tho choot tha ahi ..
thanks for pm

sorry for late ha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: SATRISHI

first of all pichel baar hi kahana chaha ki sourya ye naam se mohith raina perfectly suit kartha hai.

awesome intersting update so pasengers saved..good ye neelima ke paas jane se karan ka kya probnlem hei??"

kuch tho choot tha ahi ..

thanks for pm

sorry for late ha


Thanks dear Srishti
Glad you liked it
Yes I cannot think anyone else as Shaurya
Pata chalega wait karo
Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39



PART 2A

Shaurya was totally confused by Karan's behavior as Karan never use intervene in any of his personal likes or dislikes this was for the first time he behaved this way. Finally after the meeting with commander & submitting him all the updates they walked out in the mess for tea.

Shaurya strikes the conversation saying "Karan kya baat hai tu itna ukhda hua kyu sound kar raha hai kuch hua hai kya?"

Karan said in a normal voice "Nahin yaar aisa kuch nahin hai shayad mera aisa bolna tujhe accha nahi laga hoo par main ye tujhse sooch samajh ke keh raha hoon ... I hope tu samajh raha hai"

Shaurya said making his mood light "haan kuch kuch smajh raha hoon ... pehle batana thana ki tujhe Neelima itni pasand aayi" & winks at him.

Karan now in a bit flared up tone "tu bakwaas band kar haan! kuch bhi bolta hai ... aur baate to tu bade muskuraa ke kar raha tha"

Shaurya said in a naughty tone "Ohh! To ye problem hai ... tu kahe to..."

Karan said cutting him short "Shaurya please enough! Ye mazaak ki baat nahi hai tu samajh kyu nahi raha?"

Shaurya now got that something is serious & said "Kya baat hai Karan tujhe kuch pata chala hai kya Neelima ke bare main?"

Karan said taking a deep sigh "Dekh Shaurya abhi ke liye bas ye samajh le hum services main hai hum kisi pe bhi bharosa ya dosti aasani se nahi kar sakte ... wo ladki anjaan hai hamare liye bas main..."

Cutting him short with a smile "Karan tu bhi na baccho jaise baate kar raha hai ... hum sab kya kisi ki jaan bachane se pehle ye poochte hai kitum kaun ho khah se hoo kya dharma kya jaati hai tumhari nahi na ... aur rahi Neelima ki baat to mujhe yahi baat usme bhi nazar aayi tabhi main..."

Karan said "Main samajh raha hoon tu kya kehna chahta hai aur sahi bhi hai insaaniyat se bada aur koi dharma ya Jaati nahin hooti tu aur main aisa soochte hai shayad Neelima bhi par sab aisa nahi soochte yaar ... aur yadi soochte to shayad Dharma Jaati ke naam pe jo dange hote hai wo nahi hote is liye ..."

Shaurya said cutting him short "Baba Karan dev ji bas bas! aapke pravachan khatam ho gaye ho to kuch kaam kar leen warna hamara C.O. fir murge ki tarah bang dega" Karan laughed at his comment & they resumed their work.

In next two days Neelima got better & was discharged & on 4th day she attended her seminar as per her schedule. Here Shaurya too was busy in his work schedule on the 4th day he came to know that there is party in the Mess on account of saving Passengers of the Plane successfully & also Karan & Shaurya are rewarded with gallantry award for the same.

Shaurya went back home & shared this good news with his Grandfather & his brother too. Vikram said with a smile "Kya baat hai Shaurya! Congrats main bahut kush hoon I hope aise bahut se awards jeeto aage chalke"

Kanika replied "accha! kal tak to nausikhiyaa pilot kehke mazaak udaate the Shaurya Bahisa ka"

Vikram said "hmmm Lagta ab ye kehna choodna padega" & all three laughed together.

Sangram said with a smile "Shaurya beta! Tumhe aur Vikram ko aise dekh kar bahut khushi hoti hai mujhe ... accha ye to batao jis ladki ne us bacchi ko bachaya tha aur ghayal ho gayi thi wo kaise hai ab?"

Shaurya replied "Wo theek hai Dadu koi seminar attend karne aayi thi ... pata nahin abhi hogi bhi ya nahi par aap kyu pooch rahe hai?"

Sangram said "Yadi wo hai to use bhi invite ka lena usne bhi to jaan pe khel ke us bacchi ko bachaya tha"

Shaurya said with a smile "Main bhi yahi sooch raha tha Dadu ... aap sab to party main hoonge hi aap loog bhi milna usse she is really sweet"

Vikram said raising his brow "Kya baat hai Shurya do hi mulaqaato main sweet ... Lagta hai ab to milna padega" & winks at him.

Shaurya said pissing his teeth "Bhaisa! That's not fair main to generally bol raha hoon"

Vikram said "Haan haan! Mujhe pata hai tu kitna generally bol raha hai" & stars laughing & after a while Kanika & Sangram too joined him.

Shaurya said in faking anger "aap logo ko subah se koi nahi mila jo meri taang kheech rahe hai" turning to Sangram said "Dadu waise main kal hi jaa ke use invite karta hoon"

Next morning he reached Seminar venue in which Neelima was participating & probed about her & he came to know that she is reciting in a hotel nearby. He went to the hotel & asked about her he was asked to wait at the restaurant at the left & she will join him in next few minutes.

Shaurya started to wait & after few minutes Neelima came in & wished Shaurya saying "good Morning Shaurya ji! what a pleasant surprise ... aap yaha kaise?"

Shaurya said with a smile "actually kuch khaas kaam se aaya tha ... aapko invite karne" hands over the invite to her.

Neelima sees the invite & says "Invite kis khushi main?"

Shaurya says with a smile "actually mujhe aur mere dost karan ko Gallantry Award mila hai jo Plane bacha tha uski vajah se ...

aur saath main hi chota sa celebration hai isliye aapko invite karne aaya tha kyuki aapne bhi to apni jaan khatre main daali hai aur main chahta hoon ki aap bhi is celebration ka hissa bane aur zaroor aaye hum sabko bahut accha lagega"

Neelima with an unsure smile says "Shaurya ji congratulations to you first but shayad humara aise aana theek nahin hoga ... hum waha kisi ko bhi nahin jaante hai aur ye to aapka special moment hai na ... to be honest hum waha thoda awkward feel karenge warna hum zaroor aate aapko wish karne"

Shaurya said "Neelima ji aapne bhi to apni jaan pe khel ke us bacchi ki jaan bachayi thi isliye aapka aana aur bhi important hai shayad baaki logo ko bhi isse seekh milegi ki acche kaam karne ke liye sirf jazba chahiye"

Neelima smiles at him & he continues "aur main khaas isliye aaya hoon ki meri family bhi aapse milna chahti khaas kar mere Dadu yaani mere grand pa jab maine unhe aapke baare main bataya to unhone hi kaha ki main aapko invite karu"

Neelima said with a smile "That's so sweet of you all Shaurya ji ... aur yadi aise baat hai to hum waha zaroor aayenge aur aapke Dadu se zaroor milenge ... Par humne jo kiya wo hamara farz tha humne kisi aisi intention se nahi kiya tha"

Shaurya said "Main jaanta hoon ki aapki intention aise nahi thi par aapne jaise hamara saath diya waise award main bhi hamara saath deejiye"

Neelima smiles at Shaurya sweetly & he continues "OK .. Main kal theek 7 baje aapko party ke liye pick karne aaunga see you then ... take care & have a nice day"

Neelima said "are aap to aise hi jaa rahe hai ... aap kuch leenge nahin"

Shaurya said "Some other time thoda kaam hai main chalta hoon "

Neelima wished him back & he went out of the Hotel. He reached his office happily & started his work suddenly Karan spotted him & asked "Shaurya kaha gaya tha mujhe actually tere bike ki chabi chahiye thi main ghar gaya tha to pata chala tu kahin gaya hua hai"

Shaurya said "Haan wo main Neelima ko kal ki party ke liye invite karne uske Hotel gaya tha"

Karan said with a surprise "Kya tune use yaha invite kiya hai?"

Shaurya said "Haan to kya hua itna to kar hi sakte hai ... actually Dadu ne bhi kaha mujhse isliye maine soocha use invite loon aur Bhaisa aur Bhabhi sa bhi milna chahte the"

Karan with a frown said "Shaurya ye sab kuch zayada nahi ho raha hai ... I mean hum use jaante tak nahin hai aur tune use yaha ki party main apni guest bana ke bulwaa liya maine kaha bhi tha tujhse ki us ladki se door reh par tu sunta hi nahi meri baat "

Shaurya said "are chill kar yaar! tu kyu rai ka pahaad bana raha hai aur react to aise kar raha hai jaise maine kisi choor ya aatakwaadi ko invite diya hai ...

come on Karan wo ek simple ladki hai jisne apni jaan pe khel ke us masoom bacchi ki jaan bachayi hai aur hum sab milke yadi kisi ke acche kaam ko thoda appreciate kare usme galat kya hai" with that he moved out of the cabin to resume his work.

Karan took a deep sigh & murmured "Shaurya kaash tu samajh pata main aisa kyu keh raha hoon ... yaha kisi ko us ladki ke baare main pata nahi hai aur jab pata chalega to ...

God! mujhe Shaurya ko bata dena chahiye tha koi baat nahin aaj he ye use bata doonga"









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Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2 B

Karan kept on trying & talking to him but Shaurya was assigned some important task & then Night Flying as duty so Karan could not speak to him about the exact identity of Neelima that he had found. Karan was bit restless at the growing closeness of his friend as he knew Shaurya is a bit stubborn emotional & passionate person & he only listens to his heart especially in terms of all his relations he had made till now.

Karan went back home in thoughts and thought of speaking to Shaurya next day. Next morning Shaurya reported to his duty bit late and finally Karan got a chance to speak to him.

He entered his cabin & said locking the door behind "Shaurya tujhse kuch important baat karni hai Neelima ke baare main"

Shaurya said in a annoyed tone "Ye teri sui Neelima pe jaake atak kyu gayi hai? kyu peeche pad gaya hai yaar? ... Give it a break"

Karan said equally irritated "dekh Shaurya tune bulaya hai use yaha to tujhe jaanana hoga ki wo kaun hai ... main tujhe batana chahta tha par tab wo tere saath thi ... tu jaanta hai wo Pakistan Karachi ke Business class family se yaha aur India main jo IT ASIA ka seminar hai waha aayi hai"

Shaurya said raising his head from the file & said with a smile "Thank you for the information uske intro main kaam aayegi"

Karan said in a serious tone "tujhe koi farak nahin padta par shayad doosro ko padta hai"

Shaurya said "jise padta hai usse main nipat loonga aur apne CO ko bhi bata deta hoon tab kisi ko koi issue nahin hoga ... aur itna mat sooch theek hai" Karan sighed heavily & smiled at him as he knew he would react the same way.

Later in the evening it was party time Shaurya went to Neelima's hotel to fetch her for the Celebration. After few minutes Nelima came out wearing a beautiful Suit of baby pink with minimal jewelry to go with it & her dupatta pinned neatly on her shoulders.

Shaurya greeted her with a soft smile & they went to party venue together. After a while they reached at the Party & Saurya introduced Neelima to his entire family & some of his close friends too at his workplace.

She was very happy to meet all of them & especially Vikram & Kanika as they treated her with all the affection & Sangram too blessed her with a warm heart for her courageous deed.

After all the guests arrived at the party Shaurya took the mike & voiced out "Ladies & Gentlemen! May I have your attention please ... aaj hamare saath ek bahut khaas mehmaan hai...ye Khaas Karachi se yaha ek seminar attend karne aayi thi aur inse meri mulaquaat ek mission ke dauran inke plane ko hijacking se bachate hue hui thi ...

par inko dekh ke shayad sabko sabak lena chahiye ki insaniyat ke liye pehle jazba hona chahiye kisi vardi ki ya position ki zaroorati baad main hoti hai ... inhone ek masoom bacchi ko bachane ke liye apni jaan ki parwah bhi nahin ki ... please welcome Miss Neelima Bakshi"

All clapped their hands to welcome Neelima & also as an appreciation for her act. Neelima acknowledged it with a warm smile & wishing "Thank you" to everyone with gratitude.

Little Later after distribution of awards it was time for music & fun. Vikram Karan & everyone else there was in the fun mood. All were chatting drinking & enjoying orchestra but Neelima was feeling bit out of place it was all new for her.

She just settled down with Kanika & started to chat with her on random topics. Suddenly Vikram pulled Kanika for a dance & even asked Neelima to join in.

Neelima refused politely saying "hame dance nahin aata"

Shaurya noticed that she is feeling bit out of place he went to Neelima & asked for a dance & that made her more conscious she said politely "Par Shaurya ji hame dance nahi aata"

Shaurya replied with a smile "Mujhe bhi nahi aata bas beat pakad ke follow karna hai ... now don't be spoilt sport waise bhi aap aaj ki guest of honor hai so ek dance to hona hi chahiye"

Neelima smiled at Shaurya & grabbed his hand for a dance & they too went on the dance floor. Few more couples joined the dice & a beautiful song played for all them & they started to dance closely.

Dekho dekho tum ho gaya main gum Kitni hasin raat hai
Tere qurbaan tu hai meri jaan (2) Are teri kya baat hai

Shaurya broke away first & then pulled Neelima closer to him they swayed to the beautiful tune with their eyes locked with each other.


Teri ankh me jo sharaab hai Muje thodi thodi karke pila

Meri rooh me jo pyar hai Ise haule haule aake jaga

Mere hath me zara hath de Aur dheere dheere mujhko bata

Maine choo liya tere hath ko tujhe kuch kuch hone laga kya

Tere qurban tu hai meri jaan (2) Are teri kya baat hai

Shaurya held her waist lightly & make her bend towards back supporting her & then twirled her round holding her hand & then made her landed in her arms.

Dekho dekho tum ho gayi main gum Kitni hasin raat hai
Tere qurbaan tu hai meri jaan Are teri kya baat hai
Dekho dekho tum ho gayi main gum ...

Neelima now broke away from Shurya & they swayed to the beautiful tune following each other. They matched their footsteps according to the tune & song went forward.

Tere pyar me jo ada si hai Mujhe chori chori lut gayi

Main machal gaya tujhe dekhte Koi nayi nayi baat hui
Pehle kabhi na tu paas thi Abhi pehle pehle paas hui

Yaha mit gaye sabhi fasle Koi soyi soyi aag jagi
Tere qurbaan tu hai meri jaan (2) Are teri kya baat hai ...

Shurya & Neelima swayed their shoulders alternately to the beautiful tune & then pulled her closer through her waist & their legs moved in the rhythm of the song.

Dekho dekho tum ho gayi main gum Kitni hasin raat hai
Tere qurbaan tu hai meri jaan Are teri kya baat hai
Dekho dekho tum ho gayi main gum ...


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cmcX2YwWPcQ[/YOUTUBE]


The song finally finished all clapped for the beautiful music & lovely couples for the lovely performance in the party.

Shaurya said with a smile "Neelima ji mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap itna accha dance karti hai"

Neelima responded with a weak smile when suddenly she received a call that her friend along with her brother is here to take back. She wished all & left the Party in a huff & left her bracelet which had fallen while dancing.

Shaurya noticed that & picked up the bracelet & went towards outside to hand it over but Neelima had left by that time.

He returned back to see Karan glaring at him & Karan said in a bit annoyed tone "Ye kya ho raha tha?"

Shaurya said with a smirk "English main Dance ho raha tha"

Karan said calming himself a bit "Shaurya please! Tu samjhta kyu nahi main koi andha aur bewkoof nahi hoon sab dekh bhi raha hoon aur samajh bhi raha hoon ye sab karke tu sirf uski aur apni pareshaani bada raha hai"

Shaurya said "Karan main jaanta hoon yaar tu kya kehne ki koshish kar raha hai main samajhta hoon aur tu itna tension mat le waise bhi kuch din wo chali jaayegi fir kaha milna hoga jitna waqt saath main acche se guzre wohi to rahega yadoon main"

Karan said looking at Shaurya face "ab Romantic hero ka pose dena band kar aur ander chal Bhaiya aur Bhabhi bula rahe hai khaane ke liye" with that they moved inside the party.








So how was it guys please drop in your comments as I write for you guys so please do let me know all your bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love you all



Regards Goldie 😊😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago

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