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Nice update dear. Mujhe Janna hai ke hemant ne kya kiya?

Krishuuu 🥱🥱 kya tha yeh...
itna boring update koi deta h kya??😲
na hemantgiri, na bhairavigiri, na professorgiri..😲. me to padhte padhte bich me hi so gai.. dekh abhi bhi neend me hi comment kar rahi huu... 🥱🥱
aur yeh kya stupid shana ka romance bataya... aisa koi karta h kya??😲


okk okk okk joote chapal lene ki jarurat nai h.. hanki lene ki bhi jarurat nai h... aur ande tamatar to bilkul bhi nai haan... aur apne chehre pe jo gussa aaya h na.. usse smirk aur laughter me badalde.. coz yeh sab jo maine likhe h tere update me tha hi nai...okk me to sirf tp kar rahi thi.. 🤪🤪🤪🤪

actually tera update itna mast tha.. ki meri neend udd gai aur mujhe masti karni sooji... to yeh sab likha h...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

sach me mast bhairavigiri.. bhavana aunty ne bola ronnie ka dimag kharab kar to madam uske ghar me sachme aa gai... ronnie ne bhairu ko anna pe chod diya.. poor girl.. btw mujhe anna k liye nai bhairu k liye bura lag raha h.. ki usse raat ko anna k hawale kiya gaya...😆😆😆

varsha bhi naa saare saaman k saath hemant ko chod diya... ab to yeh hemantgiri karega hi...

sharad ignoring anna.. not directly but indirectly.. refusing to go with her.. & giving up on his love for her as she doesnt trust him & believes she wont either in future specially after their truth cums out...
anna upset & yet confused😡😡😡 gosh is ladki ko koi hathoda maro sar pe plz... iski confusion hi saare phasad ki zad h...

bechare shanav ko latka rakha h...

sharad remembering his partner from d planet... hey u made my sharad lookk bad here... dhoke baaz jo apni partner k hote huye dusri ladki pe phisla... this is not fare... is baat pe to me sach me tumse katti huu krishu...

vasant proud of sharad & shocked at his decision.. all support him...

hemant's reentry crying was mast...
& he did eee & said i already helped sharad.. all ghotalaz shocked & worried now wat he did... but m sure he would hv called sharad's partner 78 sq on earth along with high command... as this high command seems to b hemant's best frnd...😆😆😆

not mentioning colonywale scene coz it was seriously disgusting.. always ghotalaz murdabad k naare.. fed up of it..

krishu u hv done a fabulous job on this update... m proud of u...
& plz mere starting wale masti k liye mujhe maaf mat karna.. aisa koi karta h kya???😆😆

lo hemant ne fir ghotala kar diyaa

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

unres on pg 11

Originally posted by: Krish58

Oh hiyu jab starting mein padha toh sachi laga mujeh ki tujeh yeh part pasand nahi aaya.. But then I was smiling as u revealed it .about sharad USSR dhokhebaaz nahi par haan guilty dikhana tha so uss hisaabbse likha tha..

Sorry about sharad part par samajh nai aa raha tha uska yeh wale decision ko kaise likhu

Sorry about that readers

sorry kyun bol rahi h...
teri story h teri imagination.. jaise tu chahe likh sakti h..
agar kisiko nai pasand to na padhe...

& yeh maine update kal raat ko 11:30 ko padha.. & seriously pehle me neend me thi.. par sochha phir kal bhul jaungi to isliye padhna start kia phir meri neend hi udd gai to. padhne k baad socha comment likh ke rakti huu phir aaj post karungi.. to raat to ekdam fresh ho gai to likh dia.. meri neend udd gai to tere hosh bhi thodi der k liye udane chahiye ki nai... taki tu bhi comment padhke refresh ho jaye...

Hahaha I m more refreshed ..actually abhi mein corporate financial reporting padh rahi thi uski theory ..or bore ho gayi toh socha forum visit karu.. Aur Tera comment padha toh sachi hosh udd gaye aur refresh bhi ho gayi

Originally posted by: Krish58

Hahaha I m more refreshed ..actually abhi mein corporate financial reporting padh rahi thi uski theory ..or bore ho gayi toh socha forum visit karu.. Aur Tera comment padha toh sachi hosh udd gaye aur refresh bhi ho gayi

achha h mera comment ne apna kamaal dikha hi diya...

hey hv sent u a pm do chk it...

AWESOME👏

Originally posted by: ajuswa19

AWESOME👏

DO CONTINUE SOON!😉

M STILL READING YET IT'S INTRESTING

WANNA READ MORE!😳

hey kanha welcum to d forum.. read this story & there r few more read them also..
u wil enjoy...

Finally read it 😃