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Originally posted by: Krish58

Next part Aaj noon tak post karoongi

Me abhi tujhe puchne Hi wali thi... Parso se likh rahi h abhi tak khatam ni hua... Ya shanav story k chakkar me isse bhul gai...
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Me abhi tujhe puchne Hi wali thi... Parso se likh rahi h abhi tak khatam ni hua... Ya shanav story k chakkar me isse bhul gai...


Yr likha par tum sab ke liye surprise hai iss part mein toh usse likhane ke liye time laga hiyu
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Surprise😃😃😃
Wow m curious now...
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Home ff part 5

New day, with new surprises, and adventures...

At ghotalas house,

Vasant- hemant ... Hemant kaha gaya yeh.. Jaldi aa formula 070 lele beta.. Warna phir se aadha adhura hojaayga...

Hemant- aaya papa..

Hemant comes down and takes formula...

Hemant- papa, mein aur shishir bahaar garden mein khelne jaa rahe hai... Pritesh ke saath hum cricket khelenge..

Vasant - haan thik hai,jao par dono meri baat dhyan se suno.. Kal raat Jo hua uske baad pritesh pakka tum dono ko apne sawaalo mein fasaaiga ..chahe kuch bhi hojaaye usse kuch bataa nai hai ki kal hum kaha the,...aur gende .. Uski baato mein mat aana... Hooon

Shishir and hemant- hoon...

Sharad and Jacky comes down...

Vasant- sharad ,Jacky tum dono formula 070 liya..

Both noded in positive


Varsha- vasant aapne kuch socha ,kaise doondhenge 2015 ko kyuki kal jab contact hua toh patah hai woh mandhir ke pass se timi timi hona start hua tha yaani woh tabh aas pass tha.. Vasant mujeh lagta hai 2015 bhi hame aur 1947 ko doondhne nikla ho...

Vasant- haan varsha, Woh bhi hame doondhne nikla ho... Jacky kya tum log jabse yahaa aye ho . tabse yeh hi insaani roop mein the ya phir apna roop tum log change karte rehte the?

Jacky- uncle hum ek hi insaani roop mein rehte the aur jab jarrurat hoti thi tabhi apna roop change karte the. Uncle iss seher mein aane se pehle hi mein apna roop change kiya tha.. Mein ne Jo photo dikhai thi aapko woh bichad ne se pehle ki hai.. 2015 ki

Vasant- isska matalb yeh ki shayad hamare bte ne agar dusre kisi insaani roop liya ho sakta hai..

Sharad- haan bhaiya, yeh bhi toh ho sakta hai 2015 ne pehle Samar ka roop liya ho lekin shaq badne se usne dusra kisi insaani roop liya ho aur kisi naye naam ke saath... Bhi...

Vasant- baat sahi hai sharad, lekin hame yeh bhi patah karta na ki manav hamara 2015 hai ya nahi... .

Varsha- lekin hum yeh patah kaise lagaye vasant..

Vasant- hame nazar rakhna hoga manav par. .
Varsha gets a call...
After receiving the call

Varsha- vasant,abhi abhi lajo aunty ka phone aaya tha woh aur baki sab market jaa rahe hai,makarshankranti aa rahi hai toh uska saaman lene jaa rahe hai.. Toh mein ne bhi haan bol diya.


Vasant- yeh thik kiya varsha ,tum jao aur haan tum yeh list lejao woh kal bukhadpati high command ne bola haina saaman laane ko.aur dusre khaane ka saaman mein ,shishir aur Jacky ke saath leke abhi lene jaa rahe hai.. aur tum sharad aur hemant ko saath mein lejaana . . aur haan bahaar ka kuch bhi mat khana yaad hai na kya hua tha...

Sharad- bhaiya logically, dekhne jaaye toh hum detector bhej dete haina... Baad mein Jo high command ne kaha hai woh bhej denge na...
Vasant- oh hemant chacha . .. . Tumhe patah hai na high command kitne bhukkad hai ..jab tak unhe yeh saaman nai bhejenge haroz aajayenge briefcase se bahaar aur kahenge Ab tak nai bheja khanna..

Aur phir unhe kehne ka moka mil jaayenga ki varsha ki MA ki tarah kahenge ki hum dono fatichar hai..

Varsha- vasant!

Vasant- sorry, kya karu mei. Pehle tumhari MA aur Ab high command mujeh aur sharad ko fatichar kaha aisa thodi chalta hai... ( vasant crying and sharad and giving company) uss din patah hai Jacky, jab aayi thi.. Itna pair dabaake diye..phir bhi kaha kuch kaam ke nahi hai..yeh insaani husband apne saauma ke pair nai dabaate phir bhi mein ne daabye hai na sharad ..

Sharad ( crying)- haan Jacky aur bhabhi mein ne unhe naasta banake diya toh kaaha yeh nahi kahaana..phir dusre naasta banna ke diya ko kaha toh yeh bahut oily hai..aur parathe par Jo tel tha woh mere muh pe lagaa diya..

Vasant- aisa toh koi karta hai.. Mein aur sharad unki kitni seva ki ..bina kuch bole phir bhi aisa kehte hai.. ... And starts crying

Varsha - vasant ,sharad Rona bandh karo ... Mein high command aur MA ko samjha doongi.. Chaliye Ab Rona bandh lijiye.. Varna hemant ko kahungi company dene ke liye...

Vasant and sharad stops crying...

Vasant- chalo saaman Lana hai na...hum detector le jaa rahe hai.. Aur tum bhi dhyan rakhna market mein ..sharad tum try karna phirse contact karne ki .. Hoon
All- hoon
While going out Jacky asks vasant


Jacky- uncle phir aapki saas ne kya kiya

Vasant- chalo Jacky, mein raaste mein bataa hoon aage kya hua kaise varsha ki MA mujeh aur sharad ko pareshan karti hai...
All ghotala's and Jacky do ishaaba..

Vasant, Jacky,and shishir leave's

At colony garden,

Lajo- aree sharad,aur hemant tum dono bhi hamare saath market aa rahe ho ke...

Hemant- haan lajo aunty, woh hamare high command hai na unhe... Yeh sab khaana bhejna hai... Hamare grah par..

Lajo- grah. ??. Sharad ke bol raha hai hemant?

Sharad- lajo aunty, woh yeh.. Hemant bol raha hai ki hamare ghar matalb suryanagar saaman pauchana hai

Lajo- lekin yeh high command kyu bola?

Varsha- woh , high command hamne kaha tha na hamare ek risthedar hai unhe hum sab pyar se high command bulate hai... ..

Sharad- lajo aunty manav nai dikh raha ? Kaha hai woh usse bhi saath le lete..

Lajo- manav toh subah se bahaar gaya hai.. Subhe pucha tha mein ne usse kaha jaa raha hai..par kaha ki kaam se bahaar jaa raha hoon shaam tak aa jaaunga..

Lagta hai koi army ke kaam se bahaar gaya hoga..

Sharad and varsha look at each other.. .

Sharad- haan aisa hi hoga lajo aunty...

Lajo- areee yeh Bhavna bhabhi aur bhairavi kaha reh gaye... Mein bhulake lati hoon...

Hemant - mein aao aapke saath lajo aunty ...

Lajo- areee usme puchna kya hai chal..

Lajo and hemant leaves..

Varsha- sharad,suna lajo aunty ne kya kaha ..

Sharad- haan bhabhi,manav subha se bahaar, aur woh bhi shayad army ke kaam ke liye..

Varsha- yaad hai sharad,kal bhi manav ne kya kaha tha ke woh subha se bahar tha.. Aur tune hi kaha tha na ki army ne records ke hisab se manav ohja shahid ho gaya ho...

Sharad- haan ,bhabhi aur
Anna bhi kaha tha ki manav usse keh raha tha ki woh bhi hamari tarah aise koi aisa raaz chupa raha hai Jo woh kisiko nahi bata sakta.

Varsha- kya?? Iska matalb yeh bhi hai ki manav hamara 2015 ho sakta hai..

Sharad- haan ,bhabhi, ho sakta hai ..

Meanwhile at bhatt house..

Lajo and hemant enters

Bhairavi is crying ...

Bhavna- oooh daakanbala,buddeshmati.. Lohipini.. Rona toh mujeh chahiye.. Aa tara chehra par aavo gai ne lai aavi tane.. ..mein ne saaf saaf kaha tha ki chakudi meri aander ke almarih se saari nikal kar rakhna bed par.. Aur kitchen mein Jo sabji rakhi hai woh bahaar jaake daalna...kyuki sabji kharab ho gayi hai..

Lajo - ke hua Bhavna bhabhi.. Aap itna kyu chilla rahi ho bichari bhairavi pe...

Hemant- aur meri bhairavi didi dekho bichari phut phut ke to rahi hai... Aapki wajah se.

Bhavna - areee yeh bichari. Nahi hai... Ek no.. Ki akal ki othmir, hai.. Daakan hai daakan,, buddhimati hai .. Vampire hai mera khoon pine wali ..

Lajo- Bhavna bhabhi shaant ho jaaye .. Aapki tabiyar kharab ho jaayegi...

Bhavna - mein kaise rahoo shaant puch isse lajo kya kiya isne..

Lajo sees the saree..

Lajo- bhairavi yeh tune kya kiya saari sabji saree pe daaldi ..

Bhairavi- lajo,aunty Baa ne mujeh saaf saaf kaha ki chakudi jaa aur alamarih se saree nikal ke rakhana aur kitchen mein Jo sabji woh bahaar jaake daalna toh mein saree par sabji bahaar Jake daali jaisa baa ne kaha...

Bhavna- aree ae dakan bala mein ne kaha tha ki sabji bahaar daalne ka matalb woh sabji bigad gayi thi ..issliye
Kaha tha ki sabji bahar daalde saree par daalne ke liye nahi

Bhairavi - nai nai baa.. Aapko kitni bahaar kaha hai ki matalb baad mein kya matalb...

Lajo- aree Bhavna bhabhi rehne do ..der ho rahi hame bazaar jaana hai...

Here at rustomji shop..

Karthik- ( to himself)uncle kaha hai woh do din ke baad aayenge... Tab tak dukaan sambhal na hoga

Mein yaha iss seher mein kaise doondhu apne parivaar ko.. Kisi pe bharosa nahi kar sakta..
Here, Bhavna ,lajo,and 3 ghotala's enter market. Sharad tries to contact 2015 but due to superpowers fluctation he couldn't contact..

Sharad- bhabhi, contact nai ho paa raha 2015.. Aur bhaiya ko bhi contact karne ki koshish ki par contact nai ho paa raha..

Varsha- chinta, mat karo sharad phirse try karna thodi der baad. Hoon.

Sharad- hooon...
( rustomji owns a general store..)

Bhavna- yeh dekho aa gaye hum rustomji ki dukan le..yahaa sab chize world best milti hai..

Varsha and lajo -world best!!

Bhavna - haa bhai ave .. Chal na mera aur na aapka India ka...
.sharad- India ka!!

Bhavna - acha thik hai na mera na Tera iss area ka rakhna hi padega...
Chali ander...


Bhavna calls out for rustomji..


Karthik appears...


Karthik looks and he is happy to see varsha ,sharad, hemant.. Surely he remembers them they reminded him of his family but also because that day his chacha contacted him ..and he came to know about his family being here on earth..

What a irony of fate it is...

Ghotalas came on earth to search for 2015 and 2015 was in search of them ..and here they were in front of each other face to face them but none recognise each other..

Hemant does eeeh and ways hi to karthik..


Karthik waves him hi...


Karthik- woh uncle bahaar gaye hai aur mein yaha kaam karta hoon .. Kahiye aapko kya chahiye...

Bhavna and lajo asks for things..

Varsha - yeh list mein Jo Jo likha hai woh dijiye na.
Karthik sees the lists and goes to bring the saaman.

Hemant sees a whistle.

Hemant - mummy mujeh yeh chahiye.
Varsha- hemant yeh toh hai Tere pass phir kyu chahiye tujeh..

Bhavna - lagta hai bigad gaya hoga issliye naya chahiye. .

Hemant- nai nai Bhavna aunty woh mera doosra sar hai na uske liye..

Bhavna and lajo are shocked ... Karthik enters and heard what hemant said...

Karthik - kya..


Bhavna- varsha yeh kya bola...


Sharad - nai nai aap log dariye mat hemant ke kehne ka matalb hai woh dusra Lena hai kyuki agar woh pehla wala bigad gaya toh dusra hoga toh acha hoga..
Hain na hemant.


Varsha isshara karti hai hemant ko to say yes

Hemant - haa.

Varsha changes topic.


Varsha- acha aapke pass dry fruits hai..

Karthik- haan..hai..


Varsha- haan toh ek packet sukhe sab,ek packet thoda sukha aam ..sukhe banana lana


Bhavna and lajo were shocked..


Bhavna- ae hemant mata yeh tu kya bol rahi hai...


Varsha - Bhavna aunty yeh dry fruits hi hote hai .dry matalb sukha aur fruits matlb aam,seb banana gives hote hai toh..


Woh dry fruit halwa banate waqt mein daalungi . sharad ko aur uske bhaiya bahut pasand hai..


Bhavna - amm ..phir tum log toh badaam ,kaju, woh sab fruits ki khate hongena.. Summer mein badaam ka ras nikalte honge.. Haina..


Lajo- shaant Bhavna bhabhi shaant..


Varsha sharad karthik and hemant dar jaate hai..


Karthik keeping things aside starts listening to Bhavna..


Bhavna- areee kaise ho jaaun shaant..ghar pe bhairavi aur yaha yeh tino..


Uss din mere ghar par yeh logical ghotala aaya tha prasad dene..
Us waqt sahi mein laga ki bhairavi toh bhagwan ki den hai..


Lajo- Bhavna bhabhi aisa kiya kiya tha sharad ne..


Bhavna- puch iss ghotala se .


Sharad- lajo aunty woh hum ne prasad mein Bhavna aunty ko aaloo,tamater aur gajar ka halwa diya tha..


Lajo- haan toh usme ke hua Bhavna bhabhi


Bhavna - puch jata hemant mata se kya daala tha usne halwa mein ..

Varsha- lajo aunty woh halwa mein ne ketchup aur lahsoon dala tha..


Lajo was unable to say anything


Bhavna- Ab bol...
(Sees towards karthik)


Ab tu hi bol aise koi deta hai prasad..mein aaloo ,tamater.. Bhagwan ko..


Karthik- haan, mein deta hoon na mein toh bhagwan ko fruits, vegetable deta hoon kal hi mein ne bhagwan ko prasad mein angoor diye the..


All 3 ghotalas are shocked.. They look at. Karthik..


Bhavna- ( laughs a little) tab toh tu jaroor varsha ka beta hoga...


Varsha gets emotional and looks at karthik


Both karthik and varsha look at each other..


Here,lajo was asking Bhavna aunty to calm down as she was getting more angry ..on karthik reply


Bhavna- mujeh koi bhi jagah bhairavi ki kami hone nai dete.. Bhagwan


Sharad and hemant too looks at karthik .


Karthik goes from their saying he will bring all things which they have given in list and smiles a little.


.But in reality he was getting emotional on Bhavna words.. He missed his mother..

Sharad and hemant knew how varsha must be feeling now..they were upset too.Though they don't know who karthik was ..but felt a attachment towards him..
Like they have known him for years


Sharad - bhabhi,aap chinta mat karo dekhna hame hamara 2015 bahut jald mil jaayega dekhna.



Hemant- haan mummy aap honsla rakheye..


Karthik comes with their grocery items...


While leaving shop Bhavna asks varsha that whether she will come for further shopping..


Varsha says no..as she has some work at home.. So lajo and Bhavna goes to other shop..



Here karthik helps varsha ,sharad,and hemant with their grocery items.. While leaving ..


Hemant- bhaiya aapka naam kya hai ??


Karthik- karthik..


While leaving a box fells from varsha hands .. She is going to pick up when karthik helps ... And accidentally he touches feet of varsha..


Varsha- thank you beta,...
jeete raho..


Karthik is happy to listen ' beta' word from varsha..he felt like as if his mother gave him blessings..

Hemant - bye bye in his style


They leave From shop..


All 3 ghotala's reach home..


Varsha - sharad abhi woh shop mein Jo ladka tha karthik usse dekh ke laga ki wohi hamara 2015 hai.aur toh aur tumne sunna ussne kya kaha tha..



Sharad- haan bhabhi, lekin bhabhi jab mein ne aate waqt phir se contact karne ki koshish ki par contact nai ho paaye 2015 se..


Vasant,shishir and Jacky comes back and told them what had happen with them at shop...

Here at shop,karthik was keeping things back to respective places when he saw someone passed through his shop ..he knew that person ..


. Someone who could help him in finding his family.. On whom he can trust without any fear..


He definietly knew that person as he helped that person long back..



Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update krishu...
well done👏👏

vasant remembering his saasuma... & telling jacky hw she troubled him... jacky so much interested in this gossip...

vasant, sharad & hemant go with bhavana aunty & lajo aunty to market...
bhairavigiri full on... saare pe dal bahar jake dal ke ayi... mast h...😆😆😆 isme surely bhavana aunty ki galati thi... saath me do instructions dene ki kya jarurat thi... aur phir bechari meri bhairu ko datti h...
hemant kitna mu khol ta aur sabko phasata h.. gud vasant nai tha iske saath warna bechare ko pitta..
bhavana aunty jaha bhi jati h bechari ko bhairavi mil hi jati h...
superb ghotalagiri by varsha & sharad karthik adding to it...
bhavana aunty ko kaise pata chal jata h... sab... pehle usse pata h ki ghotalaz aliens h... remember usne bhairu ko neend me bola tha... ab varsha & karthik maa bete...
both becum emotional.. rula dia indono ne..

gajar ke halwe me ketchup & lasoon... chipkali ka dialogue...😆😆

dry fruits... sukha banana aur sukha aam ka packet...😆😆😆 yeah toh pakki ghotali h...

sharad ke superpower abhi bhi fail.. & abhi bhi ghotalaz thinking manav is 2015 coz woh do din se dinbhar bahar rehta h.. aur kisiko kuch bolta bhi nai...

karthik seeing sumone go aar par. & thinks only he can help him... who??

yeah update me surprise toh tha.. hemantgiri aur bhairavigiri aur ghotalagiri zabarjast thi...
but last ine me toh suspense bhi dal diya..
r u gonna connect manav & 2015..??

high command dharti par aa rahe h.. toh unke saath koi aur aane wala h?? like sharad ya hemant ki life partner..??
achha hua isme chipkali nai thi...

continue soon..
thnks 4 d posts...

loved it thoroughly...
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hv read d update...
need more time to give detail comment... abhi kuch kaam kar rahi huu...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update krishu so the person to help karthik is either jacky or manav eh
good one
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Yes di.. But do read the part of Jacky once again and u will know whom karthik had seen
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Thanks hiyu dear for comment
About suspense you are right my Sherlock holmas.. And do you want ki sharad life partner aaye isme?
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Originally posted by: Krish58

Thanks hiyu dear for comment

About suspense you are right my Sherlock holmas.. And do you want ki sharad life partner aaye isme?

i wont hv any problem with either...
but i thought ki sirf high command ayenge to only bhukkad giri hogi & ojha uncle ko co milegi.. par aur thoda masal bhi hona chahiye so i asked...

Sherlock Holmas.. nai me pritesh nai huuu... me bhairavi hu... birbal ki bhanji bol ya kuch aur bol.. ye nai...

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