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Posted: 9 years ago

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Home ff part 7

Hemant wants to help his chacha and when sharad says yes that he can help him...

And when asked what did he do .

Hemant does eeeh .

All are shocked..

Vasant- yeh hemant ne eeeh kyu kiya..?

Varsha- mujeh kya patah vasant,aap puchiye hemant se

Vasant- mere gende,mere bte..bol tune kya kiya ... Bolna hemant kya kiya tune..

Hemant- nai mein nai bataunga yeh surprise hai...

Vasant goes do beat hemant like he always do but varsha comes in between..

Varsha - aap kya kar rahe hai kyu maar rahe hemant ko...

Shishir- bhaiya aap batayie na surprise sirf mujeh batayie mein kisiko nai bataunga..

Jacky- hemant, dekho batao kya surprise hai,agar tum batao ge na ..mein tumhe yeh guitar kaise bajaate hai woh sikhaunga hoon?

Hemant - nai mein kisiko nai bataunga ... Yeh surprise hai.. Aur aap hi ne kaha tha na papa ki surprise dena ho toh kisi ko nai bolte. . toh mein aagakari putra hoon toh mein kisi ko nahi bataunga. Hoon..

Vasant- simple hindi mein bolna gende aagakari kya hota hai gende.. Woh aagayakaari hota hai gende..aagayakaari matalb ..Ab yeh aagayakaari ..

Vasant makes appear his invisible board.. And says

Vasant - oh mere aagakari matalb aagayakaari putra yaha dekh

But before he could proceed further varsha and sharad makes disappear the board with their hands.

Sharad- bhaiya aap baad mein samjhana(looking towards hemant) hemant bolna tune kya eeeh wala kaam kiya hai .dekh tu bolega na mein tujeh woh mall mein hamne woh bada wala khilona dekha tha na woh kharid ke doonga.

Hemant- heein.. aap mujeh woh bada wala dinosaur ke saath woh chotta insaani teddy bear kharid ke dena.

Sharad - haan,woh bhi kharid ke doonga Ab toh bol kya kiya tune meri help ke liye..

Hemant- nai mein nai bataunga...

Vasant gets angry and says

Vasant- sharad isse dinosaur nai agar mall mein genda ka khilona Milena toh woh de dena...

Hemant starts doing hafu hafu...

Vasant - yeh dekho hafu hafu kar raha yahaa.. Meri noubat aa gayi hafu hafu karne ki aur yeh hafu hafu kar raha hai.

Varsha- vasant aap shaant rahiye..

Kutu kutu kutu.

Vasant- sharad yeh hemant ka dimaag padh..

Sharad - haan bhaiya, mein abhi hemant ka mind read karta hoon

Hemant blocks his mind..

Sharad tries to read his mind...

Hemant - mein nai sochunga mein kuch bhi nahi sochunga..mein kuch bhi nahi sochunga. Mein yeh bilkul bhi nahi sochunga ki abhi yaha hamare grah se kon aaya hai

Sharad is shocked..and had strange expression on face..

Sharad- bhaiya ,bhaiya, bhaiya

Jacky- sharad kya hua sharad...kya kiya hemant ne sharad...

Vasant- ae baniyan bhaiya bhaiya ke aage bol..kya kiya ussne

Sharad - bhaiya, aree yeh hemant ne hamare grah se kisiko bulaya hai abhi aa raha hai koi

Varsha- kya...kon aa raha hai hamare grah..se..

Vasant - aeee hemant ..yeh kya kiya tune... Kon aa raha hai hamare grah se tune bol ...hemant...

Hemant - Ab to mein kuch nai bolunga toh surprise hai..

Vasant - sharad iska dimaag padh..

Hemant again blocks his mind again..and goes to his room and hides..

All ran to his hemant room.. He was no where..shrad tried to read his mind but I vain...

Sharad- bhaiya issne logically apna dimaag bandh kar diya hai toh mein kaise padhu isska dimaag..

Vasant- sharad yeh logically word bolana toh abhi pani mein dhoke sukha dunga...

Sharad- bhaiya chill,chill relax..

Just then their was a movement .. It was a big dinosaur toy which was trying to move and it was behind vasant..

All were scared to see dinosaur moving.

Vasant- aeee dinosaur kyu hil raha hai..yeh yahaa kaise aaya and moves back wards.. Dinosaur comes near them ... the ghotalas ran towards downwards dinosaur

Dinasour takes his mask out

Hemant- eeeh papa mein hoon mein...hemant hoon...

Vasant- areee gende..tujeh sharam nahi aati apne papa ko aise darta hai aise dinosaur ka costume pehne ke..

Hemant-papa mein daara nahi raha tha chup gaya tha..kyuki aap mera surprise jaana chahte the..issliye..

Varsha - mera,beta tu mujeh toh baatade kya surprise ..mein papa k nahi bataungi

Hemant - nahi mein nai bataunga

Vasant gets an idea..

Vasant- mujeh patah hai ki kon aanewala hai.. Chalo sab tyaari start kardo..bahut kaam baki hai

Varsha- vasant aapko patah hai ? Aap ne pehle kyu nahi bola ..khamkha mere bte ko daate hai.

Vasant- (comes near varsha) oh hemant mata , mein natak kar raha hoon.taki patah chale ki iss gende ne kisko bulaya hai ..

Varsha does heeein when vasant calls hemant gende..

Vasant- daant kya dikh rahi ho...

Hemant - aapko kaise patah chala papa ki kon aanewala hai

Vasant- yeh surprise tha..mujeh patah hai kon aanewala hai..

Shishir - aapko patah hai papa.. Kon aa raha hai.

Hemant- haan papa aapko jaise patah chala ki high command aanewale hai..

Abhi..

Vasant- haan dekha mujeh patah tha ki high command aanewale hai... ( after a moment vasant realises what hemant said )

Kya..kaha tune ki high command aa rahe hai ..

Hemant- haan..eeeh

Vasant- aeee tera mein kya karu..

And for a moment

Vasant got fainted...due to sudden shock

And surprise from his fav.student

Varsha- vasant uthiye vasant..kya hua aapko vasant...uthiye na..Jacky jao paani leke aao ...sharad dekhna Tere bhaiya uth kyu nai rahe...

Vasant wakes up..

Vasant- mein thik hoon... Mein thik hoon ..Ab khade kya ho sab .. Shishir bag la high command ko contact karke bolte hai.. Hai ki wapas u turn maro space ship ka yahaa Anne ki jaroorat nahi hai..yaha ..bolna hoga..ek bhukkad ko toh jhelna rahe hai hum..Ab dusre bhukad ko nahi jhelna mujeh...

Shishir comes down with bag..

Meanwhile vasant says to varsha

Vasant - tumhi ne kaha tha le chalo isse le chalo isse Ab ...

Sharad- bhaiya relax relax ,chill chill...

Varsha- haan shaant hojaaye yeh .na itna kyu chilla rahe hai..sharad ja Tere bhaiya ke liye paani leke aa jaa

Sharad- ji bhabhi

Vasant- areee mein chilla nai toh kya karu Ab yeh high command aagaye toh colony walo ko kya jawab denge hum ke yeh kon hai kaha se aaye hai..

Aur woh pritesh aur 3 bander toh aur bhi sawaal punhenge ne lage ki yeh kon hai kaha se aaye hai.. Toh kya kahu mein unse ki yeh high command hai hamara grah se aaye hai

Hemant- papa sirf high command nai aapko yeh bhi bolna padega ki yeh high command hai aur yeh hai 78 square chachi matalb hamare shishir aur hemant ki chachi..

Vasant- 78 square bhi aa rahi hai ?

Hemant- haan,.. Kyu ki unhe chacha ki yaad aa rahi thi..

It was now sharad who was in shock...

He didn't know how to react...

Memories of 78 square flooded his mind.. He had not seen 78square since their fight.

Flashback starts

Sharad and 78sq life partner cum best frnds .one day sharad plays a prank on 78 sq... 78sq gets upset and couldn't understand the prank . 78 sq .leaves from meeting place as she was upset .sharad goes after her to tell her it was just a prank..and nothing serious..

And, Fate played its own prank on them..

78sq met with accident due to technology break down...

Sharad witnessed the whole scene.. He tried to save her but couldn't she was not found..

This incident killed sharad from inside he regreted that he couldn't save 78sq.his best friend and his life partner..

Everybody tried to find her but she was not found..high command had to declare her dead ...Sharad was depressed..

After few months ... When 2015 left for earth.. vasant thought it was better to take sharad with them so that he may not b left alone & wont do anything to himself.

so they ask sharad to accompany them in name of taking care of Hemant..

Flashback ends..

Varsha-sharad phir tujeh kaise patah chala ki 78 square Tera intezaar kar rahi hai ...

Sharad(with tears) bhabhi thode din pehle aap jab bhaiya se baat kar rahe the tab..

Flash back starts

Varsha- vasant,vasant jaldi aaye

Sharad was with jacky

He goes down as as varsha was calling vasant..

When he heard what varsha was saying to vasant

Varsha- vasant , abhi abhi high command ka msg aaya tha 78sq thik hogayi hai... Puri tarah se...

Vasant- kya.. ,par woh toh toh... toh.mil nahi rahi thi na varsha..?phir woh kaise mili? Aur yeh sab tumhe kaise patah chala ki 78sq mil chuki hai ? Tumne sharad ko kyu nahi bola varsha?

Varsha- vasant, mujeh 78sq.ne hi kaha tha ki yeh baat kisi ko na bolu...

Aapko yaad hai ek baar mein high command se baat kar rahi thi jab aap niche aaye toh mein ne briefcase bandh kar diya tha..mujeh high command ne tab yeh msg diya tha ki 78 sq mil chuki hai... Lekin uski haalat bahut kharab hai .woh thik ho paayegi ya nahi woh bhi kuch nahi ke sakte..

High command ne kaha tha ki 78sq ne kaha tha ki 87sq.ko yeh sab na baataye..kyuki uske bachne ke chances nahi hai..toh woh usse jhuthi aash nahi dena chahti..

Vasant- phir, tumne baat ki 78sq..se?

Varsha - haan vasant kuch mahine pehle hi baat hui meri..mein bahut request kiya high command ko tab jaake meri baat hui usse.. 78sq ..mujeh se mazak mazak mein kaha ki mein sharad ke liye prithvi par hi koi ladki dhoondhu..

Mein ,usse kehna chahti thi sharad aur Anna ke baare par socha ki woh kuch samay ke liye hi hoga ..

Aur abhi high command ka msg aaya ki 78sq..puri tarah se thik hogayi hai...

Vasant - yeh toh bahut accha hua ki woh thik.. Hogayi... Varsha hum kal hi patharwale bhagwan ko ice cream ka woh dryfruit wala ice cream ka prasad chada ke aayenge.. Aur saath mein woh tumne Jo halwa banaya tha na kadu ka woh bhi... Hooon

Varsha didn't respond she was a bit tensed...

Vasant- kya hua varsha kya soch rahi ho...

Varsha- Vasant ,mujeh ise baat ki fikar ho rahi hai ki agar 78sq ne sharad ke baare mein pucha toh hum kya kahenge.. usse kya jawab denge.. Kyuki shaayad jab hum wapas jab grah par jaayenge toh woh toh sharad ka intezaar kar rahi hogi...

patah hai vasant usse jab meri bich baat hui toh ussne mujeh mazzak mein hi kaha tha ki ho sake toh sharad ki shaadi kisi insaani ladki saath karva dena..

Kyuki usse lagta tha ki uske bachne ke chances nahi hai... Aur woh sharad ko koi jhuthi aash nahi dena chahti..thi.. Lekin Ab vasant ...Ab kya karenge..hum...

Vasant- patah nahi varsha ,lekin yeh decision hame sharad ko hi tay karne dena chahiye... kuch chize hame niyati par hi chodh deni chahiye.. Kuch faisle... Hamare haath mein nahi hote.. Woh niyati hi tay karti hai...

Kuch rishte niyati hi Tay karti.

.Ab sharad ki niyati mein Anna ka naam likha hai ya 78 sq.. Ka naam likha hai..yeh toh waqt hi batayega..

Mujeh nahi patah aage kya hoga kyuki Ab Jo bhi faisla Lena hai woh sharad ko Lena aur woh bhi soch samaj kar aur dil se Lena hoga yeh faisla ... Jo bhi sharad ka fausla hoga hum uske saath rahenge..hoon

Varsha- hoon..lekin vasant Ab yeh baat hum sharad ko jaayenge

Vasant- sahi waqt aane par (looking towards) tum chinta mat karo mere lehraate huye baniyan ki bhabhi woh Jo bhi decision lega woh samajh ke lega..samajdar hai tumhara lehrata hua baniyan..

Sharad was in tears he didn't know how to react... He couldn't think properly even for a minute after what he heard... He just went to his room...

Jacky asked him why he was crying...sharad told him all the matter..

Jacky console him and said that he is with him...

Flash back ends...

Varsha- sharad,mujeh karde beta mein ne tujeh yeh baat pehle nai bataayi .. 78sq.. Se vaada kiya tha mein ne. Issliye nai baata paayi..

Sharad- nai bhabhi aap maafi mat maangiye...

And just then a voice comes from briefcase...

It was high command's voice..

High command- hemant , kaha ho.. Kaha ho..

Vasant- ja gendelal woh ohja uncle bhukkad judwa alien bhai bula raha hai..

hai..briefcase mein se...

High command- kya kaha vasant tumne???

Vasant- aree high command in kuch nai ..mein toh bas yeh puch raha tha ki aap hamare ghar mein space ship utaarenge ya phir aur kahi...

High command- mein yeh keh raaha hoon ki...

Vasant cuts in between and says with big smile

Vasant- aap nahi aa rahe..aap yahi kehna chahte hai na .

High command - na na ave,

Vasant- samajh gaya aap maazak kar rahe the yaha aane ka haina hemant ke saath?

High command- oh jhallar !!!! Mein yeh keh raha tha ki mein aa raha hoon thoda khana baane ke rakhna.. Varsha se kehna ki khanna banna ke rakhe

Vasant gets angry

Vasant- ae high command aap kya khanna kar rahe hai... Sidhe sidhe boliye na ki aap kaha aa rahe ho jab dekho tab woh bhukkad ohja uncle ki tarah waqt khanna khane ki baat karte ho.

Sharad- bhaiya chill chill relax.. High command hai.

Vasant- haan toh ... And after that...

High command ache se sunnata hai vasant ko in their alien language.

Further he informs tha he will land in within 20 minutes in their house along with 78sq ... but their may be some dhamaka during landing.toh thoda sambhal Lena...agar kar paaye toh... Nahi toh... Same maajha aayega...chalo Ab dharti par milte hai..hooon

All- hooon...

Vasant- 20 minute ke ander high command kabhi bhi aa sakte hai.. ...sharad ,Jacky jao jaake saare woh piche wali khidki khol do aur baaki saare bandh kardo..aur shishir tu dekh bahaar koi hai ya nai..aur yeh bhi dekh ki woh pritesh kya kar raha woh uske room mein hai ya nahi.. Aur varsha...

Varsha- haan,haan vasant mujeh patah hai..Mein abhi high command ke liye aur 78sq..ke liye sarso ka tel tyar rakkha black pepper daalke aur mein abhi undono ke mmm wala khanna banati hoon...

Vasant was now even more angry.

Vasant- areee haan haan banao aur saath mein mithe mein kya banaya hai..

Varsha- ( happily not understanding vasant sarcasm) halwa baando mein..???

Vasant- oh hemant mata tum kya khaana bana rahi hoon.. Yaha musibat aane wali hai aur tum bilkul woh insaani bahu ki tarah abhi raat ke 1:00 baje khaana banaogi...yaha kya koi buffet laga hai ...

Hemant- nai nai papa woh buffet nai hota woh ' muh pe' hota hai ..woh Bhavna aunty nai kehti bhadresh uncle ko dekh kar...bhairavi didi ko...

' oooh chakudi ooo chakudi jaara thanda paani maar iss baba ke muh pe jone aakho divas suto reh che.' ( chakudi splash some cold water on baba face )

Vasant- gende woh buffet hota hai..yeh dekh ...

But he was stopped by shishir ...

Shiahir- papa kuttu kuttu kuttu..

Vasant- aree kya kuttu kuttu shishir yeh gende ne toh bulaya liya hai high command...

Shishir- papa aap shaant ho jaayi...ae..kuch nai hoga..aur mein ne dekh liya hai... Pritesh apne room so raha hai.. Aur colony garden mein bhi koi nai hai...

Vasant- shabaash beta... Ab bas koi aur gadbad na ho..

Meanwhile. Varsha slowly calls Jacky..

Varsha- Jacky... Yaha jaldi.

Jacky- aaya aunty...

Varsha- Jacky apni super power se thoda ghar saaf karna..yeh le jhadu. ...

Vasant- yeh kya kar rahe ho tum dono ..hemant mata aur hemant bhai.. Varsha tum kya kar rahi yeh sab saaf safai..

Varsha- vasant, thoda ghar saaf kar rahi hoon.. High command aa rahe hai...

Vasant- haan jao karo karo...

Varsha- heeein... Sharad ja beta aur jaake guest room mein ja aur thoda saaman jaata de..aur vasant Aaj aap sharad Jacky ke saath sona ... Kyuki 78 sq...hamare kamre mein rahegi... ..

Vasant - ( making face) thik hai...

It was only 5 minutes left ..for landing..sharad was trying to contact high command... ..

Meanwhile shishir and vasant were keeping watch outside to ensure that no one is outside..

And Jacky helping varsha in kitchen...

Sharad- bhaiya,bhabhi... Sirf 10 seconds reh gaye.. Hai kisi si bhi waqt landing ho sakti...

Though sharad didn't say anything to anyone.. After the eeeh wala surprise given by hemant.. But his heartbeats has increased with every passing minute.

After that...

Sharad heartbeats was doing dong dong with more intensity then it did when he saw Anna for first time.. He was more tensed ..all he would think right now was what he will tell 78 sq.. How will he face her...

His trance was broken with a sudden loud noise..

It was the time which he was waiting for last few minutes ..

Spaceship landed ...safely in their house.. And doors opened...

Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

super duper fantabulous update krishu..
well done...👏👏
hemant ee kya kia sab ke pasine chutt gaye...
all worried ki ab ye kya karega... 😆😆
hemant coming as dinosaur... & scaring ghotalaz... m really shocked ghotalas dint even get frightened frm bhoot... but wenever hemant wears any mask they get frightened..😆😆
hemant closing his mind so that no one can read.. but sharad manages to read that sumone is cuming ...
high command cuming & tells varsha to prepare food for him.. & varsha gets ready to make food too...
finally v get to know that not only high command but 78sq.. sharad's life partner is alive & cuming on earth...
flashback was so emotional.. i felt like crying... 😭😭 actually tears wer formed in eyes...
sharad in turmoil that how wil he face 78sq. & wat wil he tel her...

missed bhairugiri... nxt me pakka dena...
waiting 4 87sq-78sq meet...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago

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Anamta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Wow Krish bohot achha likha hai. I love it🤗

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Kulasya.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Nice amazing update Krish :)

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ice-cold

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Well written krish👏👏⭐️

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Home ff part 8

Okay all u their readers. For high command unko insaani roop diya hai j.d.majethia. ka .or for better imagination .. High command(HC) ko imagine karo as himanshu of khichadi... And woh bhi in himanshu's voice...

And for 78sq.(megha).. Imagine kaniska

Imagine Kar paaye toh.. nahi toh..

Spaceship landed ...and doors opened..

A man nearly age of vasant came out along with a girl who was of around sharad's age...

Hemant-- eeeh papa high command aagaye aur saath mein 78sq.chachi bhi aaye hai..

Vasant- dikh raha hai mujeh hemant..

HC &78sq - ishaaba...

All - ishaaba

Varsha brings Aarti ki thali...

Vasant ( whispering to varsha)- raat ke 1:30 ko Aarti karogi..subhe kar Lena abhi yeh socho ki colonywalo ka kya kahenge...

Varsha- vasant, hum baad mein soch lenge..high command aur 78sq...aye hai hamare insaani ghar mein pehli baar.. Aur high command hamse bade hai.. Toh aap plz apna gussa shaant rakhiye.. Ab aa gaye hai...woh aur mehman toh patharwale bhagwan ka swaroop hote hai..

Vasant- ( joining hands)thik hai devi varsha gyaneshwari..

Meanwhile here HC and 78sq..were looking the house ..as this was all new to them ...

HC - areee waah kitna acha ghar hai...issme toh hamare grah ke sab log aajayenge..

Vasant- HC issme????

HC- ha ha ha Ave..chal na Tera na mera at least aur 3-4 toh aa hi jaayenge..aur isse zyada nai parvadega..

All look at hemant when HC behaves like Bhavna.. And hemant like does mein ne sikhaya..

Varsha- HC ji.. aur 78sq ek.minute.. And she does Aarti...

Vasant asks shishir to see whether any colonywala is at colony ground or not ...

78sq- says hello to everyone and greets Everyone... when she goes to greet sharad ..she was emotional.. Tears formed in their eyes...

they both were about to hug eachother...

Back at their planet they always used to hug eachother whenever they met since,childhood ...but stopped now as all were present their .

78sq.and sharad shake hands..and in next moment sharad got a big jhataka...

He screamed.. Aaah

and immediately 78square realised her hand...

78 square had the special power to give electric shock ..whenever she Want...

And most of time the victim of her electric shocks was none other sharad as when she used try to control her powers .sharad would help her..out..

78sq-(with tears) sorry,sorry sharad..woh adaat hai na ..issliye..tum thik toh ho na sharad?

Sharad( with tears) -tumhe abhi tak apne power ... Control karna nai aaye...mein thik hoon 78sq...tum Ab...

But before he could say further..shishir comes...

Shishir- mummy ..Papa sab kisi bhi waqt colony garden mein aa sakte hai..dhamake ka awaaz bahut hi zyaada tha

Vasant- areee baapre..jaldi kuch sochna hoga hame ...koi bahaana hoga...

Sabse pehle toh yeh spaceship ander rakho...

Sharad puts spaceship inside bag..

Vasant- aur Jo mein kahu woh sab ko karna hai. Hooon

Except HC all do hooon...

HC- nai ...nai mein high command

Hoon toh sabko meri hi baat Sunni hogi...

Vasant- oh high command plz,,,aap abhi shuru mat hojaao...aapko yaha ke colonywale kaise hai patah nai hai..plz plz mujeh yahaa situation sambhal ne do

HC - nai nai..vasant , mein high command hoon toh meri baat maani hogi. Mein situation sambhal loonga..mujeh patah hai colonywale kaise hai..hemant ne sab sikhaya hai hame... Hai na hemant...

Hemant- eeeh.. Haan papa mein ne sab sikhaya ohja uncle kaise baat karte hai ..Ronnie uncle kaise baat karte hai..,manav bhaiya kaise ... Baat karte hai...taki unhe yaha aake problem na.ho.

HC- haan,vasant yeh dekho mein na sab kaise baat karte hai woh dikhata hoon tumhe..

Yeh dekho pehle tumhare woh ohja uncle hai na unki acting karta hoon..

'Areee o Bhavna bhabhi o Bhavna bhabhi mein aaya hoon mein Rajasthan ka shur veer yodha..mein murli ohja toh jaraa lao maarhe liye thoda chai naasta ... Le ke aao'

Phir woh Ronnie...

Vasant to sharad- yaha musibat aayi. hai ..aur yeh HC chalu hogaye sabki mimicry karne.

78sq- ooo high command aap baad mein sabki nakal uttarna... Aapko koi nai rokega.. Abhi yaha kya karna hai woh sochiye na..

Vasant- haan,high command aap abhi mujeh yaha sambhal ne dijiye..phir aap Jo kahenge woh karenge...

HC - thik hai. Abhi tu itna keh ro ro ke keh raha hai..toh abhi mein hai na maanjaata hoon phir meri baat maani hogi..kyuki mein HC... Tum sabka.. Hooon.

All - hooon..

At bhatt house,

Bhavna was with bhairavi as due to loud voice... Bhavna woke up.

Bhairavi- baa aap itna Dari hui kyu ho... Kya hua aapko...

Bhavna- bhairavi,abhi itni bhayank awaaz aai abhi ... Abhi woh illadi ka phone aaya tha keh rahi thi ki koi spaceship uttara hai.. Aisi khabar aayi hai..chal chal chakudi baba ko uthate hai...

At ohja house

Manav -(on phone)... karthik tum thik tarah se paunch gaye. Na... Aur jitni jaldi ho wapas yaha aajana...

Karthik- manav tum chinta mat karo..mein safely Nagpur pauch gaya hoon... Manav mujeh abhi abhi patah chala hai ki Nagpur ke aas pass gaon mein aliens dekhe jaane ki Khabar aayi..mein waha confirm karne jaa raha hoon...

Hoon??

Manav- hooon...

Manav comes out of his room as ohja and lajo were calling him due to sudden loud noise..

At bhatt house..

Bhavna- ae baba jaldi utth jaldi chal niche areee bahut badi dhamake jaise awaaz hui hai.. ..jaldi utth baba ...

Bhadresh- (yawing) baa tu aur bhairu chali jaana niche same majha aayega...mujeh sone de... bahut nind aa rahi..baa. Tu aur bhairu jaa..

Bhavna-(angry) aeee.baba kya pura din sota rehta hai..haan.. Chal uth varna yeh jhuta maarongi Tere sar pe...utth ...

Bhadresh- (in sleepy tone) baa kyu itni mehnat kar rahi hai..rehne de na tu aur bhairu ja na niche.sone de na mujeh

..and then again bhadresh sleeps..

Bhavna- ( in angry tone) - aalas na peer.. Tujeh toh uttne ke liye mein 3 balti thanda paani bhar kar daalungi aur phir bhi nai uthana toh yeh jhadu se maarugi..

Liza calls out Bhavna from colony garden ..and Bhavna leaves

Bhavna- haan bol liza...

Liza- Bhavna aunty aapne woh dhamake jaise awaaz suni...

Before Bhavna could speak they here bhadresh scream

Bhadresh- o baa o baaa

All ran inside.. On hearing bhadresh scream..

Bhavna- baba kya hua baba ... Baba kya ..hua...

They entered the room and they saw bhadresh was all drenched in water and he was shivering..

Bhairavi enters with a bucket full of cold water and even one could understand what was happening she emptied the bucket full of cold water on bhadresh...

Bhavna - (in loud voice)aee. bhairavi ..buddhimati ...kya kar rahi hai ..ruk tu.. Abhi ke abhi ruk tu .

Bhairavi stops.. Ronnie wraps bhadresh.. With towel...

Bhairavi - abhi todi der pehle hi toh aapne kaha tha ki aap mitesh pritesh ke papa ko thanda paani daalke uthayegi aur woh nahi utte toh jhadu se maaregi... Aisa bolke aap bahaar chali gayi toh mujeh laga aap jhadu dhoond rahi hogi..toh aapka kaam aasan karne ke liye mein ne mitesh pritesh ke papa par 3 baalti thanda paani woh bhi baraf daalke un par daal diya.. Toh bas aapko Ab jhadu se maarna hai unhe...

All were in total shock with this bhairavigiri..

Liza- bhavna bhabhi bhairavi ne thand ke mausam mein bhadresh par pura thanda paani daal diya. Aap kuch boliye usse..

Bhavna- bolti hoon na liza...

Coming besides bhairavi.. And says...

Mari chakudi..meri charubala...meri gyaneshwari.. Bhairavi.. Aaj mujeh teri bhairavigiri pe bilkul bhi guassa nahi aa rahi..balki tune toh bahut accha kaam kiya hai.mari bhairu.yeh baba ke saath tune sahi kiya..itna bol bol kiya phir bhi nahi utha yeh aur tere bhairavigiri se ek dum se uth gaya yeh...

Bhairavi- sach baa aap bahut khush hai mere kaam se.

Bhavna- haa mari..charulata.. Maari dikari...ka baba

Bhadresh doesn't speak anything..

Bhavna again asks ka baba

Bhadresh- haan baa.

Bhavna and bhairavi hug eachother...

Liza to lajo- yeh saas bahu ka kabhi samajh nahi aata... Man...

Bhavna- ae chalo chalo sab niche chalo colony garden mein... Aur baba kapade badal kar niche aa warna bhairavi ko bhejungi.. Ka..baba

Bhadresh- haan baa..

At colony garden,

Pritesh- ek min..sab aap sab ne ek baat kar dhyan diya itna saara hungama hogaya itni badi dhamake jaise awaaz aayi par ghotala nagari se ek bhi ghotala dikhai diya...

Manav didn't like it..he thought that before all start their morcha against ghotala family he have to save them.

Manav- tum kya kehna chahte ho pritesh??

Pritesh- manav bhaiya.. Mein yeh kehna chahta hoon ki...

But before he could complete his sentence they saw ghotala family

Coming towards colony garden..

Manav- ( in mind) thank God ghotala family aa gaye.. Warna sab UN par phirse shaq karne lagte... Lekin yeh dono kon hai...

Ohja- areee ghotala parivaar kaaha the tum sab haan itna bada dhamake jaise awaaz aayi aur tum mein se koi bahaar bhi nai. Aaya..

Vasant- woooh ooo...aa raha hai bas aa raha hai.

Bhavna - lo chalu Thai gayu shastriy sangeet aamnu...

Vasant- hamare ghar mehman aaye hai..toh patah..nai chala . .yeh dekhiye ...

All look towards 78sq and HC..

Ohja comes forward...

Ohja- ( looking towards 78sq)he he he he mein...murlidhar ohja

Aur baki sab altu faltu ...

78 sq- hello, uncle..lekin yaha toh bahut saare log hai... Toh isme se altu kon hai aur faltu kon hai

Ohja- ke ke ke ke.. Areee mein toh

Manav cuts in between..

Manav- hi, mein manav hoon inka beta(pointing towards ohja)...

Manav shakes hand with 78sq...

HC and 78sq.greets with everyone..

Pritesh had some plans in his mind...

Pritesh- uncle ,aapka naam kya hai...

Vasant- woooh ooo woooh ooo pritesh naam jaanke kya karoge tum inhe uncle hi bulao na...

Pritesh - areee vasant uncle ,jaise mein aapko vasant uncle bulaya hoon toh mein unhe bhi kuch kehke hi bulaunga na...

Vasant- ooh acha aisa hai..inka naam bas yaad aa raha hai..bas zubaan par hai

Pritesh- areee vasant uncle der kyu lag rahi hai...

HC knew the situation was going out of hands...

HC -(in mind) isska naam bahut sahi rakha hai vasant ne. ... chaar daanto wala rakhas ..yeh na humko phaasne koshish kar raha..jaldi hi kuch sochna hoga...

HC - ae mera naam na himanshu hai..lekin aap sab mujeh HC buka sakte hai.aeee mere yaha na sab mujeh HC bulate hai.. Yeh dekho mere licence mein bhi yehi likha hai...

All these while ghotala family + Jacky and 78sq.. Were surprised..

Vasant--( in mind) ab toh pakka wapas jaana hoga hamare grah wapas.. Kitna kaha ki mujeh sambhal ne do..par...

HC shows the licence..

Pritesh plan failed again...

Ohja - ( looking towards 78sq..) He he he he . aur aapka kya naam hai..?

78 sq towards ghotala's.

78sq- mera naam ..woh. .woh..mera naam ...

Then ghotala family said together

Vasant- shreya

Varsha- kaniska

Hemant- diya

Sharad- megha

Shishir- kavya

Jacky- jhanvi

Bhavna- areee baapre itne saare naam...kya yaha sale laga hai.. Naam ka..

Varsha- nai nai Bhavna aunty yeh sab uske hi naam hai matalb pyar se hum sab usse alag alag naam se bulate hai.

Bhavna - haan toh issme se iska asli naam kya hai..

78sq- aunty mera naam asli naam 'Megha' hai

Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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yay me first...🥳

superb update krishu..
very well done👏👏

JD is perfect for High Command.. only he can make justice to this character...
Vasant vs HC is superb...
HC is Hemant's best frnd it seems... aur kisine Hemant ko uske grah pe miss kiya ho ya nai i m sure HC missed him a lot... as hamesha usse baat karke nai nai chize sikhata rehta h...
is baar bhavana aunty ki nakal..😆
aww 78sq cant control her superpower & gives shock to sharad.. achha badla liya sharad k prank ka...😆😆😆 sabse mast meet tha yeh couple ka... i really loved this...👏👏
HC doing his mimicry class.. vasant ko achhi competition milne wali h..😆😆
78sq stops him...
bhavana aunty scared of d dhamaka... she wakes up bhadresh but he doesnt get up.. mean while liza calls her...
but bhairu had heard wat bhavana wanted to do to wake up bhadresh.. & she dutiful daughter in law does exactly that... this was d best part of the whole update...
bhairu ne bhadresh ko finally uth hi diya..
3 balti bharke baraf wala pani dalla🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
this time even bhavana aunty proud of bhairu for succeeding in waking up bhadresh.. alsi raam.. but woh dracula wala isse jyada better tha...😆😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

again pritesh makes all doubt ghotalaz ki y they rnt here... on d time ghotalaz arrive & intro starts..

HC k pass licence h apne naam ka...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
all asks who is 78sq..
all ghotalaz plus jacky gv different human names..
our 78sq chooses megha given by Sharad... so lovely... this shows hw much she loves Sharad...

oh yes dont hink that in this i forgot manav's scene..
i remember...
manav talking with karthik(2015) so he knows he is an alien.. & aliens r around in human form.. but karthik going to pune to search there as he got news aliens r found there...😕😕 any new twist?? or is his nani there again in alien form..?? 😲

continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm..
sorry for late comment...

Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago