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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Thank you for the update dear. Poor manav thakur bante bante reh gaya😆

Aww megha ko kya hua? Bechara sharad he too deserves to be happy.
Achha waiting for the next part. Update soon yaar.
Now study and naam roshan kar do sabka.
Love ya🤗

Thanks MTA and yes don't worry nothing will happen to mesha

And yes agar mein problem hui na during studies I will PM u
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Krish58


Thanks hiyu for ur comment
Hiyu shishir ne alien waali exam di hemant ke saath
And hemant ne dono insaani and alien wali

Yes hiyu trust me she is his better half na so he will not loose her..

Yes meri guruma mein nahi update doongi..
Pakke mein se pakka wada



my pleasure..
ur update is so beautiful that i hv to comment..
hmm.. okk...
haan i know that...i hv faith in u...😉😆
ashirwaad balike...
achhe se padhai karna...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Krish58

Thanks MTA and yes don't worry nothing will happen to mesha

And yes agar mein problem hui na during studies I will PM u

22 tere over mere shuru😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: whiteMagic

Thanks for the update krish.. megha and sharad's fight was cute.. bechara manav 😆 Anna literally le udi manav ko megha ar sharad
So there are two clear Jodi in your ff
Megha and sharad
Manav and Anna
Hope to see their romance in upcoming episodes.. it's so stupid of Anna to be jealous of manav and megha's bond when she calls him Bhaiya
Bhavna aunty ka taunt to varsha and the bhairvi's bhairvigiri.. 😛
Aur hemant hmara genda pass ho gya.. yeah 👍🏼
Awww.. apna sharad is all worried for megha sab pritesh ki galati hai. don't worry sharad she'll be alright. Akhirkar, she is your jodidaar.
Haina krish 😳
P.s- All d best 4 ur papers. Don't take stress you will definitely do well

Thanks will definitely do well I exams

Yes bich bich mein ne mesha ka romance dikhaya hai

Well still Anna don't about manav and megha being bhai behen
Yes don't worry kuch nahi hone doongi megha ko
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

22 tere over mere shuru😭

Kuch nai mein help karungi tujeh problem ho toh bolna
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really awesome. Best if luck for exams...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice updates u have... Wish u all the very best for exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update👏
All the best krishu😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hope you all will like it ... Hope havent messed up this part

Home ff part 15

Sharad- (crying) nai..nai .mujeh patah hai megha mazaak kar rahi hai mere saath ..haina.


They all take her to varsha's room...

HC gives formula 070 to megha...

After some time ..though formula 070 was given Megha's condition was not good..


Megha- HCji meri energy kam ho rahi hai...

HC- bas megha thoda aur sabar karo tumhare doses aa rahe hai...( towards
Vasant) mere saath aao vasant.. Aur hemant ..sharad ,aur varsha tum dono yahi ruko...aur agar zaroorat ho toh mujeh bulaana..


Here at bhatt house,

All were present except liza and Anna and manav was on his way...

Mitesh tells everything to Bhavna regarding pritesh plans and Bhavna aunty was hell angry on pritesh...

Pritesh-( crying) par dadi..mein sach keh rahaa hoon...aap sab meri baat par yakin kijiye..

Bhavna(in anger tone)-chup ek dam chup hojaa priteshiya..tujeh pataah bhi hai tune kya kiya hai... Aaj teri ek masti..ki wajah se teri yeh faltu ki research ki wajah se kuch hojaata toh...

Pritesh- par dadi mein sirf yeh proof karna..

Bhavna- ( in anger) kahaa na ek dum chup hojaa pritesh..kya proof karna chahata tha tu haan bol kya sabit karna chahta hain...

Manav comes too..lajo has already informed him that everything was fine now

Manav notices that ghotala family was not their

Bhavna asks bhairavi to bring laptop..

Bhavna- Bhairavi jaa mitesh pritesh ke room se laptop ,laa ... Jaldi se laa ..aajse iska laptop.. Moblie sab bandh...


Lajo- Bhavna bhabhi shaant hojaaye bachaa hai chotta hai nanadan hai toh usse galti hogayi..hai ..

Bhavna - lajo,kaise shaant ho jaau mein haan aur yeh jitna nanadan hai na itna hai nahi ..'aa tane ane mane vechi ne channa khaay avo che' (yeh tujhe aur mujhe bech ke khaye aisa hai... )agar iski nanadani ki wajah se Aaj sach mein isse kuch hojaata toh...aur isske kaaran woh sharad ya megha ko kuch hojaata toh..tujeh paatah hai na woh do smoke sticks kitne khatarnaak hai...


Pritesh - par dadi..

Bhavna- chup ek dum chup..jaldi se tera moblie phone de .Ab yeh moblie phone hi nahi rahega...
.Aaj toh tujeh saaza milegi...

Bhadresh- baa ,rehne dena Ab galti hogayi pritesh se woh sorry keh raha hai ..

Bhavna(in anger)- tu chup kar bhadresh ..aur Khabar daar Aaj iski vakilgiri ki hai toh .warna Aaj tu bhi pitega mere haath se ...
Chakudi jaldi laa laptop aur de iss Rajasthan express ko .

Bhairavi leaves...

At ghotala house...

HC was talking with vasant, and hemant...

Vasant- boliye HCji...aapne hame kamre ke bahaar kyu bulaaya..

HC- vasant , baat bahut serious hai..megha ki halat dhire dhire bigadti jaa rahi hai...aur uski energy bhi kam hoti jaa rahi hai ab jab tak usse surya ki kiran nahi milti tab tak uski halat mein bahut hi kam sudhaar aayega...

Vasant- kya??? Par hum toh usse formula aur doses toh hum dene wale hai toh phir...

HC- vasant hum usse yeh formula de rahe hai taaki uski energy jaise ke bhi karke kal subha tak rahe

Hemant-( in tears)HCji toh mein chachi ko abhi apne superpowers se thik karta hoon..na phir jaldi se thik hojaayegi na...

HC- nai hemant ,agar tu usse abhi healing power se thik karta bhi hai toh bhi woh kaam nahi karega uss par..

Vasant- kyu high command varsha par toh asar hua toh phir megha par kyu nahi?

HC- kyuki vasant ,varsha chup gai thi tab jab tumhare yaha woh pritesh ne yeh sticks rakhe the...

Yeh insaani scientist Jo aliens ko pakdte hai woh yeh stick tab use kar the jab unhe koi alien ko kamjor karna ho ya unhe pakdna ho... Yeh sticks Jo bhi smoke nikaalta hai woh hamare superpower ke saath saath hamari energy ko bhi kamjor karta hai ..aur yaha toh megha ne oura smoke inhale kiya...hai vasant. ...

aur issliye Ab surya ki kiran se Ab megha thik ho sakti hai .kyuki usme itne power utna energy hota hai ki woh smoke ko puri tarke se mita sake..

Just then they hear sharad voice...from room...

Inside Varsha room ,

Sharad- megha ..aankhe kholo megha ..utho ..megha..megha

Varsha- vasant,HCji jaldi aaye ... Megha utho megha ..utho..

All ghotala's come their ..

Sharad - HCji,dekhiye na megha ko kya hua abhi toh woh jagi hui thi ...

HC- sharad mein dekhta hoon megha ko shaant raaho...tum ghabraao mat..kuch nahi hua usse..

HC checks megha through glasses ..megha has fainted as her energy was decreasing..

HC - vasant jaldi se formula 359 laao...aur Jacky tum jaao aur mere kamre se bag leke aao mera ..megha ki energy kam hai..issliye woh behosh hui hai...aur
Sharad jaldi se formula 490 ka dusra dose laao..

Sharad and Jacky brings what HC has told them..

HC was giving formulas when door bell rings.. .

All gets scared...

Vasant- shishir dekh toh kaun aaya hai.

Shishir checks through his superpower...

Shishir- papa bhairavi didi aaye hai

Vasant- areee yr Ab yeh bhairavi yaha kyu aayi..varsha jaao aur jaake bhairavi ko sambhalo

Varsha- haan vasant mein aati hoon..

Varsha and hemant both leaves.

Varsha opens door and hemant and varsha comes out...

Varsha- areee bhairavi tum ..? Kya hua pritesh thik toh hai na ? Tumhe kuch chahiye???

Bhairavi- varsha bhabhi pritesh thik hai lekin abhi baa daant rahi hai pritesh ko kyuki woh gusssa hai pritesh par aur mein bhi gussa hoon pritesh par..

Varsha- haan toh jaroor koi shaitaani hogi pritesh ne..tumhe kuch chahiye bhairavi ?

Bhairavi- varsha bhabhi ,sahi kaha bahut shaitaan pritesh ..woh toh meri baat sunta hi nahi

Varsha was getting restless


Here vasant was calling out varsha and hemant..

Bhairavi- varsha, bhabhi..vasant bhaiya aapko bula rahe hai... Lagta hai kuch important kaam hoga..

Varsha- haan woh vasant ko kuch kaam hoga...
bhairavi,tumhe kuch kaam tha??

Bhairavi- areee haan varsha bhabhi dekhiye baato baato mein bhul gayi .. woh subha mein yaha laptop rakh ke gai thi aapke ghar..matalb freezer mein toh woh mujeh chahiye.. Baa maang rahi hai..

Varsha- kya ?? Tumne laptop freezer mein rakha tha...?

Bhairavi-haan varsha bhabhi ,woh baa ne mujeh kahaa tha ki laptop zyaada use karne se bahut garam hogaya hai uska upar ka surface toh bandh kar de thodi der taaki woh thanda hojaaye jaldi..toh mein ne socha ki jaldi thanda karne ke liye freezer mein rakhu..toh pehle hamare ghar ke freezer mein rakhne ka socha par hamare ghar ka freezer toh kaam nahi kar raha tha toh issliye aapke ghar mein rakh diya...

Varsha-achi baat hai bhairavi,,tumne sahi kiya.. Yeh toh mmm idea hain mein leke aati hoon freezer mein se laptop...

Varsha - ( whispering) hemant kuch bhi mat bolna hooon?

Hemant- hooon.

Varsha leaves

Bhairavi- kya hua Hemant baki sab kaha hai aur Tera mooh kyu utra hua hai..kya hua mere bhai ... ?

Hemant starts doing hafu hafu.

Hemant- sorry bhairavi mein aapko kuch nahi bataa sakta. Mein nahi bata sakta ki kya hua hai.

Bhairavi gets worried

Bhairavi- hemant bolna ki kya hua ...kuch hua kya ?? Tere ghar kuch hua? koi problem.hai mein teri help karoongi ..

Hemant starts doing more hafu hafu...
He badly wanted to tell about his problem..

Hemant - nai bhairavi didi ..mein nahi bata sakta..ki kya hua hai.. Mein kisiko kuch bhi nahi bata sakta

Bhairavi- aeee hemant meri teri behen hoon..bolna ki kya hua... Mein tujeh rote hue nahi dekh sakti .bolna kya hua ..

Hemant - bhairavi didi mein nahi bataa sakta ki megha didi behosh hogayi hai..

Hemant bits his tongue as he didn't wanted to tell.

Bhairavi gets shocked..

Bhairavi - kya hua megha ko ..hemant ..bolna kya hua megha woh thik toh hai..

Hemant - bhairavi didi smoke jo aapke ghar mein hua tha na uske wajah se megha didi behosh hogaye...plz plz aap yeh Mummy me saamne mat bolna mujeh manana kiya tha bolne se phir bhi mein bol gaya .. Plz aap yeh baat kisiko mat bataana

varsha comes with wet laptop..

Varsha- yeh lo bhairavi... Laptop woh zarra sukhe kapde se pocha dena woh kya haina fridge ki switch mein ne bandh ki thi issliye lagta hai pura barf pighal gaya aur laptop Gila hogaya hai...haan

Bhairavi- koi baat nahi varsha bhabhi mein poch doongi..

Varsha- achaa toh bye.. Mujeh kaam hai chal hemant..

Hemant- bye bye...


They go upstairs... here vasant and HC had given formula to megha but still she was unconscious..

Varsha- kya hua vasant megha ko hosh aaya..

Vasant- nai...sharad,varsha meri baat dhyan se..abhi megha ki halat achi nahi hai..aur jab tak...
Vasant tells everything what HC has told him..
At bhatt house,

Ohja is happy as he was getting laptop.. And that too free..

Ohja- aree waah Bhavna bhabhi aapne toh muft mein dediya waise yeh kitne ka hoga laptop Bhavna bhabhi.

Ronnie- yeh dekho man ...ohja uncle tum aise time pe...bhaav kaise puch sakta hai...

Manav - papa aap kya laptop lene baith gaye..aap shaanti rakhiye...papa ( looking towards Bhavna aunty) Bhavna aunty aap sahi keh rahi hai..

Bhairavi enters..

Bhairavi- baa yeh lijiye laptop...

All looks at wet laptop

Bhavna- yeh laptop gila kyu hai bhairavi.. Aur tu bahaar se Kyu aa rahi hai..

Bhairavi- baa woh..woh mein ghotala ke yahaa unke freezer mein rakha tha laptop aur varsha bhabhi ne fridge ki switch off ki thi baa..

Bhavna anger was rising.. More...

Bhavna- kya..par Ben... Tune yeh laptop fridge mein kyu rakha aur woh ghanchakkar ghotala ne rakh ne diya tujeh.

Bhairavi- kyu baa ap hi toh boli thi ki . chakudi laptop abhi bahut garam hogaya hai zyada use karne se toh usse bandh kar de taki thanda ho jaaye yeh..toh mein ne socha ki isse jaldi thanda karne ke liye freezer mein rakh doon ..lekin baa hamare freezer mein jagah nahi thi issliye mein ne ghotala's ke freezer mein rakh diya

Bhavna- waah kya idea nikala hai bhairavi tune...tune yeh socha ki freezer mein rakh de aur ghotalas ne rakh ne diya tujeh ..jaa jaake bula woh ghanchakkar ghotalas abhi unki khair nahi hai..waise sahi hi kiya chakudi ne issi bahaane yeh laptop bigaad gaya hai toh yeh priteshiya use hi nahi kar paayega laptop...

Bhairavi- baa.rehne dijiyena aap unko mat bulaate woh abhi busy hai...

Bhavna - kyu tujeh kaise patah ki woh busy hai..aisa kya kaam kar rahe hai woh saari chandaal chaukdi ke woh busy hain

Bhairavi- baa... Baa ..woh hai busy ..

Bhavna- ek min...ek min..tu jhut bol rahi hai na...? Tu aise jawaab nahi deti jab mein tujeh ghotala ko bulaane ko kehti ..hooon...tu jhut bol rahi haina chakudi.. Sach sach bol..

Bhairavi- baa..mein sach hi bol rahi hoon woh log thode busy hain..baa..

Bhavna- sach sach bol bhairavi... Warna abhi ke abhi mein ghar se chali jaaungi..sach bol ke mein jaaun ghar jaaun chodke!!

Bhairavi- baa..aap ghar chodke mat jaaye baa...

Bhavna- haan toh sach bol...

Bhairavi- baa..mein ne 'Kahaa na woh log busy hain kyuki unke yahaa chotti se problem hui hai..
Bhairavi realises what she spoke..

Bhavna- kaise problem..bhairavi?

Bhairavi sees Bhavna anger face and spills out everything what hemant has told her..

At ghotala house ,

VV were worried for sharad..he was sad
..sharad was praying to patharwale bhagwan for megha's health..

Vasant calls sharad from back...

Sharad hugs vasant ..and cries...

Vasant-( getting emotional) shhh..sharad shhh... Kuch nahi hoga megha...ko...trust me...kuch nahi hoga...patharwale bhagwan pe vishwas rakh ...

Sharad( crying)- bhaiya, mein wapas nahi kho sakta megha..ko..mein wapas khona chahta nahi usse...

Vasant breaks the hug...

Vasant- sharad kuch nahi hoga megha. Ko..hum usse dawai de rahe hain na aur.sharad himmat mat haaro..kuch nahi hoga...usse... apne pyar pe vishwas rakh... Kuch nahi hoga...usse aur patharwale bhagwan pe bhi bharosa rakh woh kuch nahi hone denge..mein jaanta hoon sharad abhi teri situation...issliye keh rahaa hoon.Sharad himmat mat haar.. Tujeh patah hai yeh patherwale bhagwan hamari exam le rahe hum yaha jis maksad se aaye hai...usss maksad ko Paane ke liye hamari exam le rahe aur woh apni tarike se hum sabki exams le rahe.. Hai

.aur yeh tum dono ki exam hai sharad ..tumhari aur megha ki..woh dekhna chahte hai ki tum unki iss exam ko kaise paar karte ho.. ...woh dekhna chahte hain ki iss exam ko kaise solve karte hi tum .kaise..chahe kuch bhi hojaaye sharad himmat mat haarna.a.ur apne pe aur apne pyar pe bharosa rakh...hooon

Sharad- hooon...

Vasant- jao tum upar jaao hum aate hai...

Sharad was leaving when shishir came down..

Shishir- papa..papa colonywale aa rahe hai...

Vasant- kya...kahin unhe patah toh nai chal gaya megha ke baare mein??..

Vasant remembers bhairavi had come earlier

Vasant- varsha, bhairavi ko tumne bataya toh nahi na megha ke baare mein

Varsha- nai vasant , mein ne nahi bataaya..aur hemant ko bhi mein ne bola tha kuch na baatay woh..


Vasant- aeee hemant tune bataya toh nai na bhairavi ko megha ke baare mein?

Hemant- papa .. Mein bataana nahi chahta tha par woh bahaar jab mummy laptop lene gai tab bhairavi didi mujeh puchne lage ki mein kyu manhar uncle banna hua hoon...

Varsha- kya bol raha hai hemant,tu manhar uncle yeh sab kya bol raha hai..

Vasant-aree hemant yeh manhar uncle kya hain haan..ek toh musibat aa rahi hai aur hint de ke baat kar raha hai...yeh manhar uncle kon hain?

Hemant- papa manhar uncle ..wohi Jo gaana gaate hain...

Vasant- aeee woh manhar udaas hai..manhar udaas..

Varsha- yeh manhar udaas kon hai vasant ??

Vasant- areee manhar udaas varsha jin hone woh Gujarati gaana gaya hai...

Varsha- konsa ganna??
Vasant- wohi...haan yaad aaya ..

'Nayan ne bandh raakhi ne mein jyare tamne joya che ,nayan ne bandh rakhi ne mein jyare... Tamne joya che tame cho ana karta pan ...'

HC - aeee vasant tu gaana baad mein gaana aaram se pehle yeh puch hemant se kya kaha issne bhairavi se..

Sharad- aeee hemant bol na kya bola tune bhairavi didi se..

Hemant- chacha, woh mein udaas tha aur bhairavi didi baar baar mujeh puch rahe the ki kya hua toh mein ne bol diya ki megha didi woh dhue ke kaaran behosh ho gayi hai...

Vasant- kya..aeee gende mein ne tujeh manna kiya tha phir bhi bol diya..

Vasant runs after hemant to beat him but varsha comes in between ...

Varsha- vasant ,aap kya kar rahe hai abhi yeh sochiye ke kya kar na hai.

Vasant- haan sochne do kuch ...

HC- jaldi soch vasant jaldi soch warna koi bole na bole pritesh zaroor mauka dhoondhega...bolega...

Vasant- ek idea..hain...jisse hum colonywalo ke saamne Bach bhi jaayenge aur hum formula bhi de sakte hain suno sab kya karna hain...

Soon all colonywala arrives at ghotala house,

In varsha room...
Lajo- varsha, megha hosh ko mein laane ke liye koshish ki..

Varsha- haan lajo aunty ,hamne paani chidka lekin woh hosh mein nahi aa rahi hai...

Ronnie- areee tum chinta mat karo vasant hum abhi megha ko hospital lejaate hai...

Vasant- nai nai...nai..hospital nahi lejaana hame..

Liza- areee par kyu megha tabiyat kharab hojaayega man...

HC- nai..hum hospital nahi lejaa sakte...megha ko...

Ronnie- thik hai , par mein Dr.fernandis ko phone karta hai abhi woh yahaa aake check up karega megha...

Varsha- nai nai...Ronnie bhaiya.. Dr..bulaane ki jaroorat nahi hai..

Manav- varsha bhabhi ,aap yeh kya keh rahe megha ki tabiyat kharab hai aur agar dr..ko nahi bulaaya toh aur bhi kharab hojaayegi...

Varsha- manav, hamara matalb hain ki Jacky aur sharad already hamare family Dr..ko bulaane gaye ..hain woh bas aate hi honge..issliye humne na kaha

Bhavna- acha kiya ghotala bhai.. aapne ne bulaaya hai..Dr..lekin..aap ne hum sab ko bataya kyu nahi ..jab megha behosh hui tab...haan ...

Liza- haan vasant bhai aapne hum ko bola kyu nahi..

Vasant- woooh actually kya hain ki yeh sharad ne kaha tha na ki pritesh ko pair chot lagi thi ..toh hame lagaa ki aap sab abhi uski tension mein honge issliye nahi kaha khamakha.. Aap ko aur tension aaur badh jaayegi

Bhavna gets emotional..

Bhavna- vasant bhai..yeh sab pritesh ki masti ke kaaran hua hain..uski shaitaani ke kaaran hua ..mein aapse maafi maangti hoon..yeh pritesh ki galti ke kaaran Aaj megha ki halat aise hai..

Vasant- nai nai Bhavna aunty yeh aap kya kar rahi aap mere aage haath jodke ke mujeh sharminda kar rahe hain... Plz..aap maafi mat maange aap mujeh se badi hain...

Here,sharad and Jacky were hiding..

Sharad takes roop parivartan of old an doctor and comes ..

Sharad-(doctor)- hato hato sab mein aagaya..patient kon hain yaha...patient kon hain..
Ronnie gets a bit angry on foolishness of doctor(sharad)
Ronnie- aeee doctor patient woh ba woh ba woh ba...

All- tch tch tch..

Anna- offo ho Ronnie bhaiya aap abhi kaise atak sakte hain..

Ohja- jaldi bol jhallar .. Jaldi bol jhallar jaldi bol

HC- aeee wallah...jaldi bolne bhai

Manav- aap log chup rahenge...aur Ronnie bhaiya jaldi boliye na plz ...

Ronnie- ek min... Man..liza ...woh der hogaaya ko .. English mein kya bolte hain...

Liza- ek.min..ek min... Haan... Late hogaaya bolte hain..

Ronnie- haan toh..doctor.. Yeh tumhare saamne patient late hai aur tum puch raha hai tum patient kaha pe hain..

No one understands what does Ronnie says..

Liza- Ronnie woh laataya hota hai late nahi..mein tumhe late Ronnie banna dega agar Ab ek bhi sabd bola toh..

Manav- doctor ,,aap plz megha ko check kijiye...

Sharad acts as if he is checking megha..

Sharad- dekhiye inhe kuch hua nahi hai...logically... Inhe dhue ke kaaran behosh hogaye hai..kyu ki yeh dhue mein kuch chemicals use hue the jinse yeh behosh hui hai..inhe daawai aur kuch injection de doonga jinse yeh thik hojaayegi...abhi jaise hi injection woh Jacky aur sharad leke aata haii mein de doonga.. Injection ... Inhe...


Jacky enters...

Jacky- doctor yeh lijiye injection.aur dawaai... Woh

Jacky handles a injection which was actually their instrument by which they use to take their doses and formula..

Ohja- yeh kaisa injection hai..yeh toh koi khilona laage hain..

Sharad- haan woh kya hain na ...logically bacche injection ko dekhe ke dar jaate hai issliye aisa injection mein banaaya hain taaki bacche dare naa...
Ab pehle mujeh inhe injection de dene dijiye...

Sharad was giving formulas ...

Liza- yeh sharad kaha hain..woh toh tumhare saath hi tha na Jacky...

Jacky- liza..bhabhi... Woh..woh..sharad..haina..dusri dawaai lene gaya hain..woh ek dukaan mein nahi mili issliye dusri dukaan mein gaya hai..lene...

After sometime.. All colonywala leave

Vasant-- Aaj toh baar baar bache hain...sharad tune ache se formula diya tha na megha ko..

Sharad- haan bhaiya...

Vasant- bas Ab jaldi se subha ho jaaye ..(in mind) hey patharwale bhagwan .. Plz megha ko kuch mat hone de dena..mein apne bhai ko phir se tut te hue nahi dekh sakta...


All were resting in varsha room..
Hemant and shishir were sleeping.. Except sharad all were resting...

Sharad was sitting besides megha ..

Sharad-(in mind) mujeh patah hai megha hum yeh patharwale bhagwan ka intehaan hum jaroor pura karenge.. Mujeh vishwas hai mujeh par aur tum par bhi... Mujeh patah hai tum abhi meri baate soon rahi hogi...I know you will not leave me again..tum ne mujeh se waada kiya hai..ki Ab tum mujeh wapas akela chodke nahi jaaogi..and I know tum apni promise pura karogi...

Next day morning...

All ghotala family were giving dhoop to megha...

Sharad checks through glass...

Sharad- HCji kabse dhoop de rahe hain.. Lekin megha uth kyu nahi rahi hai.. Dekhiye na woh abhi bhi behosh hain..

HC- sharad glasses de...aur tune thik tarah se dosea diye tha na subha..

Sharad- haan HCji..

HC checks megha ...

HC-( emotional) vasant,megha ki energy regain ho rahi hain.. Par hosh kyu nahi aaya megha ko...kahi...

Vasant- yeh aap kya keh rahe hai HCji aisa kuch nahi hua ...

Sharad- ( on verge of crying) nai nai aise kuch nahi hua ..shayad dhoop abhi bhi kam ki hogi...haina bhabhi ..

Varsha- HCji sharad sahi keh raha hai...shayad aisa hi hoga..

Varsha tries to give some dhoop through mirror...

Hemant comes near megha ..and uses his healing superpower.

Sharad-(crying) hemant...hemant..yeh tu ..

Hemant-( in tears) chacha ...aap chinta mat karo kuch nahi hoga mujeh ..meri umar kam nahi hogi ...mein sirf heal kar raha hoon chachi ko..kuch nahi hoga unhe..

Sharad ( crying)- hemant tu samjh nahi raha hain..teri umar..

Hemant- nai nai chacha kuch nahi hoga mujeh..
Hemant said while healing megha.

After healing megha...
Varsha- hemant ,mera baccha thik toh hai tu...

Hemant- mein thik hoon mummy.

Varsha- mera baccha .(.keeping hand on hemant forehead) patharwale bhagwan tujeh lambi umar de mere bacche..

Sharad was trying to wake up megha...

Sharad- plz megha utho...megha...plz...megha..

And After few moments..

Sharad felt some one was giving him electric shocks...

Sharad- aaah.

Sharad looked towards... Megha ...
She was awake...
Finally ..megha opened her eyes..


Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago
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Krishu... babu... yeh kya tha...
tujhe kisine daata tha kya??
itna emotional bhara roller coaster update...
ek taraf khushi hui dusri aur ghum, ek aur rahat mili, ek aur pareshani badhi...


but kuch bhi bol.. tu itna mast likhti hai..
me toh teri fan ban gai abse...
haar emotion itna achhe se explain kia..
har situation itni mast describe ki...

abhi toh bolna hi padega...
waaah waaah waaah waaah adbhut adbhut...

abhi update pe aate hain...
megha abhi bhi critical hai...
hc explaining vasant d situation.. hemant wanting to cure his chachi...
but cant as she is currently not curable..
d formulas part was too good..
itne formula ke naam aur unke baare me kahan se pata kia...??
cvs ko contact kia tha kya??
aab bol.. WIL naam sahi rakha h ya nai...??


bhavana aunty too angry on pritesh as mitesh told her d truth & pritesh doings..
poor pritesh..
koi uski baat nai sunn raha...
felt bad for him...
bhale hi uski wajah se megha ki halat kharab h..
par h toh yeh utsaahi masoom bachha hi..
aur mera fav bhi h...

bhairavi & hemant at their best...
hemant wanting to share her worry with his sister..
bhairavi wanting to help her brother...
so nicely written..
finally hemant tells her half truth..
megha is ill..

all colonywale cum to ghotala house to chkon megha.. so sweet..
felt bad wen bhavana aunty asked for forgiveness from vasant...
that small dialogue was too emotional...

hemant curing megha...
but continuously repeats..
meri umar nai kam hogi...
y?? does he cum to knw abt this??
does he feel sumthing??
or jst wrote to create suspense??
megha finally cums to consciousness...
aur hosh aate hi sharad ko shock de dala...🤪


now cuming to my fav part bhairavigiri...
superb bhairavigiri...
laptop ko thanda karne freezer me daal diya..
aur permanent band karva diya..🤣
bechare ojha uncle free ke laptop ka sapna dekh rahe the.. sapna shuru hone se pehle hi tut gaya...🤣

continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...

yesterday was too tired to type this long comment..
& today evening was too emotional to write...




Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago

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