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Posted: 9 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: --Shamoo--
part 14:
wow awsm update
the first part was soo cute ..just love megha n sharad's cute fights
and wow once again learned a msg from ghotalas aka u ..that if u keep fighting with eachother for something ..an outsider will come and take that thing ..thank u for teaching me this lesson krishu
yeh ana zada gussa nahi hoti kya ??!!
yar yeh priteish ko kya hai ..apne jaan pe khel kar bas ghotalas ka sachai bahar karna chahti ..khud pasjata hai aur dusro ko bhi phasati hai ..hud hoti hai kisi baat ki
n omg megha behosh
and aww sharad's love for megha is clearly showing in this part
awsm part loved it
keep it up
ps: will read part 15 tomorrow

Awww shamoo thanks ya...well anas issliye zyada gussa hain as pehle manav toh de raha tha attention megha ko ab liza bhi megha ke saath friendly hogayi hain...so in a way anaa is getting jealous. As she is not getting attention. Plus she is getting insecured...yes hamara sharad loves megha...

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#272

Home ff part 16

Megha is cured...

At, bhatt house...

Bhadresh- bhairu...bhairu ...

Bhairavi comes...

Bhairavi- boliye ..mitesh pritesh ke papa..kya kaam hain...

Bhadresh- bhairu mujeh abhi duphar ko Jamnagar jaanaa hai toh jara meri bag pack karde na..

Bhavna comes ...

Bhavna- aeee baba tu jamnagar jaa raha hain...aur mujeh bataya bhi nahi...aur tu jamnagar kyu jaa raha hai...

Bhadresh- baa kuch kaam hai...issliye jaa raha hoon...mein aajaunga thode din mein...

Bhavna- areee haan par aisa kya kaam aagaya..aur tujeh toh mein ne kabhi koi kaam karte nahi dekha..toh aaj aisa konsa kaam aagaya tujeh...

Bhadresh- areee baa ..mein sach keh raha hoon mujeh kuch kaam hain jamnagar mein dekh abhi kal hi mama ka phone aaya tha unhe mera kuch kaam hain...issliye mein jaa raha hoon..Ab mein nahi jaaunga toh tu kahegi ki mein kuch kaam nahi karta...

Bhavna- thik hain ..chalo acha hua ki tu jaa raha thoda kaam karke aana aise aalsi ram ki tarah pade mat rehna...

Bhadresh- nai baa mein aalas nahi karunga ..( looking towards bhairavi) mera saaman pack kar dena .. Bhairu...

Bhavna- aeee tujeh jaana hain tu pack kar dena saaman..bhairavi ko kya bol raha hain..usse pehle se hi bahut kaam hain

Bhadresh- baa mein thoda aaram kar leta hoon..abhi jamnagar jaake bahut kaam hain toh thoda aaram karleta hoon tab tak... Same majaa aayega..

Bhavna- ek number no..aalas no pir che...( looking towards bhairavi ) jaa chakudi..bina koi gadbad kiye bhadresh ke kapde aur baaki sab jaruri ka saaman pack kar.jamnagar jaa raha hai..na baba ...issliye .tab tak mein khanna bana deti hoon...

Bhairavi - toh barobar...

At colony garden...

Manav was doing exercise...

Ohja Comes ...

Ohja- (in mind) areee manav yaha Ab rambha arora yaha se jaayegi toh mein baat kaise karunga..aur yeh manav toh jaake bataa dega lajo ko..manav ko yaha se bhejna hoga..

Manav sees ohja..

Manav- areee papa aap yaha aapko kuch kaam tha..

Ohja- nai nai manav kuch kaam nahi tha..lekin tu itni garmi mein exercise kar raha hai..jaa ghar ke ander jaa ke kar exercise..

Manav- papa kaha itni garmi hain.. .

Ohja- haan toh thodi der mein badh jaayegi na garmi tu ander jaa ..

Manav- papa...

Ohja- bolanaa ander jaa...tu aise nahi maanega..(holding manav hands)

O hemant...o lambe jhallar...hemant ..hemant..

Manav-- papa aap hemant ko kyu bulaa rahe hain...mein jaa raha hoon ander

Ohja- tu shaant re manav( in mind) areee yeh manav ko hamare ghar nahi bhej sakta lajo ko boldega ki mein ne zabardasti usse ghar bhej diya... Yeh rambha arora kabhi bhi aati hogi..

Ohja mutters rambha name little loudly and manav hears it..

Manav frees himself from ohja ..

Manav- acha ab patah chala ki papa aap mujeh kyu Bhagana chahte hain...mein abhi Ma...ko bulaata hoon woh bhi rambha bua se mil legi...

Ma... Ma ...Ma .bahaar aaye..Ma

Meanwhile hemant comes and does eeeh...

Hemant-( happily) boliye ohja uncle kya kaam tha...

Ohja- hemant ja manav ko apne ghar le jaa.. Aur manav ko ghotali behen se milva laa

Manav- papa..aap yeh kya kar rahe hain..

Hemant- ohja uncle hamari surname ghotala hain..aur hamare yaha koi ghotali behen nahi hain...

Ohja- reee jhallar mera matalb hain manav ko woh. Megha se milwa ke laa .manav ko bahut yaad aa rahi thi megha ki ...jaa jaldi leja manav ko...aur megha ki tabiyat bhi kharab hain toh padosi Milne aate hain na..manav hamari taraf se milke aayega

Hemant - heeein..chaliye manav bhaiya.. And he starts to drag manav along with him...

Manav - Ma... jaldi aaye bahaar...papa rambha bua se Milne ke liye bahaar aaye hain ..Ma...jaldi bahaar aaye hain..

Ohja- reee jhallar chup hojaa.

Manav- Ab koi faayada nahi papa Ma bas abhi hi aate honge..

At ghotala house ,

Inside varsha room..

All 3 megha sharad Jacky were playing snake and ladders.

.sharad was going to take dice . when...

Sharad- aaah ..megha kitna zor se jhataka diya tumne...

Megha- sorry.. Sorry sharad kaha tha na mera electric super power abhi control mein nahi hain...aur bhul se jhatka tumhe laga gaya.

Sharad-areee par dhire se jhataka Dona ya phir logically warning do tum ...pehle .. Ki mere powers fluctuate ho rahe hain...

Megha- sorry.. Kaha na tumhe patah haina mere electric power control nahi hai abhi ...

Jacky- megha tum pehle phirse dose lelo agar koi colonywale ke saamne tumhara power fluctuate hogaya toh problem hojaayegi.

Megha takes her dose..

At main hall,

Vasant - areee hemant tu manav ko khich ke kyu laaya ..manav ka haath chod hemant ..(looking towards manav) manav sorry haan yeh hemant ne tumhe aise khich kar laaya yaha..par yeh hemant tumhe yaha kyu laaya..

Hemant- papa woh ohja uncle ne kaha ki manav bhaiya ko megha didi se milwane..taki manav bhaiya apna padosi deol nibhaa sake

Manav doesn't understand what hemant said.

Vasant- aeee gende... Kya bol raha hai tu.

Hemant- papa deol nibhaa sake aisa bola

Varsha- hemant beta thik se bolna kya bol raha hain..

Hemant- mummy deol nibhaa sake

Vasant- areee gende woh dharamendra deol aur ..dharamendra nahi woh dharm hota hai..dharm...yeh dekho..

Vasant was going to show his powers when varsha stops him ...

Vasant- matalb yeh dekho manav yeh hemant aise gadbad karta hain..tum hi samjho isse..aise nahi chalta beta ..

Varsha- vasant aap apni paathshala mein baad mein padha na hemant ko ..

Vasant- haan haan..mein yeh puch raha tha manav ki achank yeh hemant tumhe aise kyu le aaya ..

Manav- areee vasant bhaiya woh papa ko bahaar rambha arora se Milna tha ..issliye mujeh waha se bhagaana chahte the...

Varsha - haan toh manav jaao na tum lajo aunty ko bataao ..isske baare mein...

Manav- varsha bhabhi aap chinta mat kariye mein ne Ma ko keh diya hai ki abhi papa rambha bua se Milne wale hain toh bahaar aaye ..

Varsha- areee manav yeh toh mmm kiya tumne...

Manav smiles...

HCji- aeee manav kaise ho...acha lajoben hain ghar pe hai??

Manav- haan hai na Ma ghar pe hi aapko kuch kaam tha ...

HCji- haan woh yeh lajo Ben ke liye mmm gift laaya hoon toh woh dena... Hain..aeee mein deke aata hoon woh kya haina Aaj hum log hamare grah wapas jaa rahe hain..

VV gets shocked.. Hemant does heeein..

Manav- kya ?? Grah yeh kya bol rahe hain aap himanshu mama

HCji- woooh ooo ..AAA raha hain bas..aa raha hain..

Vasant- ( whispering)dekha ab yeh HCji ne shastriye sangeet chalu kiya ..aur mujhe sab bolte hain ki mein shastriy sangeet chalu karta hoon.

Varsha- vasant kya aap abhi yeh sab lekar baith gaye ( looking towards manav) ..manav woh HCji ke kehne ka matalb hain ki woh ghar Aaj yeh aur megha wapas suryanagar jaa rahe hain.. Haina HCji

HCji- haan varsha ne sahi bola...

Manav- par sharad keh raha tha ki aap aur megha toh thode din baad jaa rahe hain..

Varsha- woh kya hain na manav megha ki tabiyat thik hai lekin woh uske Jo ghar ke family Dr..hain woh waha hain issliye Aaj Jana hai ..

tum jaao na upar hain woh... sharad aur Jacky bhi upar hain..tum jaao upar mein tum sab me liye mmm naasta leke aati hoondegi

Manav goes upstairs followed by hemant...

In evening...

At ohja house,

Ohja- lajo ,lajo, jaraa maareh liye chaai laana...

Lajo comes and she is angry..

Lajo- yahaa kyu chaai maang rahe ohjaji..jaaye jaaye apni rambha behen ke ghar jaaye woh bannake degi chaai...

Ohja- ke ke ke bol rahi hai lajo...kon rambha ..mein koi rambha ko nahi jaanta

Lajo- acha Ab aap rambha ko nahi jaante ..koi baat nahi toffee ko toh jaante hain toh jao na apni toffee behen ke paas jao...woh chaai banake degi

Ohja- kon toffee lajo..mein koi toffee ko nahi jaanta ..

Lajo- aapko bhul ne ki bimaari hain.. Ohjaji.. Haan...aapko toh

(Lajo picks up a pillow and throws towards ohja)

Ohja- areee lajo ke kar rahi hai..mujeh lag jaayegi ...

Lajo- haan toh lagne do...

Manav comes and stops lajo...

Manav -Ma rukh jaaye..Ma aap ki tabiyat kharab hojaayegi...

Meanwhile ohja sees opportunity and goes away from their ...

Lajo- jaa kaha rahe hain ohjaji..haan...

Manav- Ma shaant hojaaye ..

Manav gets call...from karthik

Manav- haan bolo karthik...

Karthik- manav tum Aaj shop par mat aana mein rustom uncle k saath thode din bahaar jaa raha hoon..toh tum mujeh Jo info...dene wale the woh mein aa jaau uske baad dena..

Manav- haan thik hain karthik par achanak se ..tum kaha jaa rahe ho...

Karthik- manav mein jamnagar jaa raha hoon rustom uncle ke saath ...

At ghotala house,

HC and vasant and jacky were in main hall...

Vasant suggests to Jacky that if he wants he can go back to their grah as the problem is solved on their grah. ...

Jacky- uncle yeh aap kya keh rahe hain...

Vasant-- Jacky tum samjho ..tumhare Ma papa kitne pareshan hain tumhare liye..aur Ab hum hamari wajah se tumhe musibat nahi daal sakte...

Jacky- uncle mein aise kaise jaa sakta hoon...Aaj hum sab yaha hai iss musibat mein hai ,Jo musibat hum har waqt jhelte hain. woh sirf aur sirf meri 2015, aur 212 ki wajah se hain.

mein aise chodke nahi bhag sakta ..

agar Ab mein wapas chala jaaunga toh mein apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paaunga aur naahi kabhi 2015 aur 212 ko face kar paaunga..

aapne kaha tha uncle sharad se ki patharwale bhagwan hamari exam le rahe hai..2015 ko dhoondhne mein ,

Jo bhi problem aati hai woh hamari exams hai..toh uncle mein meri dosti ki exam mein kaise fail ho sakta hoon..Ab mein jaaunga yaha se toh aap sab ke saath bhi jaaunga...HCji aap mere MA papa ko samjhana woh aapki baat maanege ..

At night,

Megha and manav were in colony garden..

Manav- megha tumne mujeh yaha kyu bulaaya kuch kaam tha ...tumhe abhi jaana hain ...tumhe der hojaayegi..

Megha- nahi bhaiya ..mujeh der nahi hogi..woh actually jaane se pehle mein aapse milna chahti thi ...aapko kuch dena chahti thi..

Manav- areee megha insab koi jaroorat nahi hain..mujeh kuch nahi chahiye...

Megha- nahi bhaiya...plz...aapko Lena hoga..aap apna haath aage kijiye...

Manav- areee megha..

Megha- plz..bhaiya manna mat kijiye mein aapke liye raakhi laai hoon..aap bandhenge na rakhi..

Manav was overwhelmed and he forwards his hand..

Megha ties rakhi...

Megha then hugs manav and starts to cry. Even manav had tears in his eyes..

Breaking the hug...

Megha( wiping her tears)-manav bhaiya,mujeh aapki bahut yaad aayegi...

Manav- mujeh bhi megha.tumhari bahut yaad aayegi...tumhe kya chahiye ...tohfhe mein ..rakhi par har bhai apni behen ko kuch dete hain...tumhe kya chahiye megha..

Megha - mujeh kuch nahi chaihye bhaiya.mein sirf yehi kehna chahti hoon ki...thank you..bhaiya...

Manav- tum thank you kyu bol rahi ho megha...

Megha- bhaiya aapne hamesha saath diya hain mere parivaar ka..jabhi unhe jaroorat hoti hain..bhaiya jab..kisi ne saath nahi diya tha tab aapne saath diya hai tha aur .. Agar hum yaha kisi par apne aap se bhi zyaada bharosa kar sakte hain toh woh aap hain..bhaiya aur ...yeh sab hum..

Manav-- megha mein hamesha Jo sahi hota hain uska saath deta hoon aur mujeh patah hai megha tum sab kuch chupa rahe aur ho . tum sab majboor ho issliye chupa rahe ...ho.

. . Mein jaanta hoon megha apno se baat chupana aasan nahi hota..mein bhi majboor hoon..tum sab ki tarah and I promise..you..megha.. Jabhi ghotala family ko meri jaroorat hogi mein unka saath doonga...yeh mera promise hain ..I will always be their for Ghotala family...

At ghotala house...

Shishir - papa mein ne check kiya koi nahi hain... Bahaar...

Vasant- acha hain..sharad space ship bahaar nikaal...

Sharad- ji bhaiya...

Jacky and sharad keeps some saaman in space ship...

HCji was sad ...

vasant hugs HCji..

They break hug..

HC- vasant tum sahi kehte ho yeh prithvi bahut yaad aayegi ..aur sabse zyaada yeh colony ke log ...bahut anokha grah hai yeh...

(Looking towards ghotala family) - himmat mat haarna ..tum sab patharwale bhagwan par bharosa rakhna woh hame hamari manzil tak paunchayenge...

Hemant was doing hafu hafu

HC- aeee hemant tu kyu ro raha hain..

Hemant- aap mat jaaye na HCji

HCji- jaana toh padega hemant..warna tu mujeh yahaa ki baate kaise bataayega..aur nayi nayi baate kon sikhayega mujeh...

Hemant dekh tu royega toh mein tujeh company doonga...

Hemant stops doing hafu hafu..

Megha hugs varsha...

Megha- varsha bhabhi aap chinta mat kariye mein 333 ka ache se dhyan rakhungi aur patharwale bhagwan se haroz prathna karungi aap sab ke liye.

Megha goes towards vasant and was about touch his feet..when vasant stops her..

Vasant- megha...mera aashirvaad tumhare saath hain..apna. Dhyan rakhna aur yahaa Jo bhi hum ne sikha hain..Jo bhi usse bhulna mat..hoon

Megha- hoon

She then hugs Jacky and hemant and shishir.. And at last..sharad.

Both were in tears..

Sharad- apna dhyan rakhna ..hum log bahut jald wapas aayenge 2015 ko lekar..

Megha- tum bhi apna khayal rakhna aur haan..aur jaldi aana ...

Megha then gives him electric shock...

Sharad- aaah megha.. Tumhe bahut mazza aata hai mujeh electric shock dene mein ...

Megha- kya karu aadat..hain...

Hc- jaane ka waqt hogaya hain..vasant..apna dhyan rakhna aur jaldi aana 2015 ko lekar...intezaar karunga tum sab ka...aur apna dhyan rakhna tum sab. .hoon.

All ghotala's- hoon

HCji - ishaaba

All- ishaaba

HCji and megha enters in space ship and soon space ship leaves...

As soon as space ship leaves..their was a big dhamaka..

Varsha- vasant yeh toh bahut bada dhamaka hua hain..colony wale jaroor bahaar aayenge...

Shishir - mummy aaye nahi aagaye ...

Varsha- Ab hum kya jawab denge..

Vasant- kuch na kuch toh jawab denge par abhi bahaar chalo...shaq bade hain usse pehle...

Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#273

krishu...
me tuhjse bahut naraz huu
sach me naaraz huu... (katti)

tune promise kiya tha mesha ki date aur unke moments..
aur uske bina hi megha ko wapis bhej diya😲😲very bad...
aur jab bhi mesha saath hote h yeh jacky kyun bich me hota h.. aur koi h nai uske liye...😡
bhairugiri bhi nai thi isme... hemantgiri bhi nai thi😭😭😭
emotional part megha-manav talk & megha-hc leaving...😭

ojha uncle aur unki items... by god yahan bhi aa gaye...🥱 lajjo achha tana marti h ojha ko...😆

hemant manav ko khich ke leke gaya.. bechara manav...😆😆😆
megha jate jate bhi sharad ko volt deke gai😆😆

bhadru gng to jamnagar... 😲 kyu?? koi twist??
overall superb update... 👏👏
well written...
thodi grammatical mistakes thi... sudhar lena... sudhar pai toh.. nai toh... hihin...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...

Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: Kunsh
Awesome update

thanks kunsh bdw how is ur health now

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whiteMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#275

Bhadresh is so lazy.. chalo kisi kaam pe to laga jamnagar me he sahi. Bhairvi kitna kaam krti h aur uska pati uthna b ni chahta. 🤔
And yeh ojha ji bhi na.. rambha ke peeche pade hai. Pillow q mara lajjo ne inke to belan marna ta wo b sarr par. 😉 😆
Aur hemant kaise keench ke leke gya Manav ko..
So, karthik bhi jamnagar he ja rha hai. Interesting. Lgta hai agla part zydartar jamnagar me he hoga.
And HC and Megha ka departure scene is so emotional. Everyone has tears in their eyes and hemant doing Hutu hufu 😒 😭
But yeh end me kya twist hua dhamaka... space ship kharab ho gyi kya..
Lovely update krish waiting for the next part.

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: whiteMagic
Bhadresh is so lazy.. chalo kisi kaam pe to laga jamnagar me he sahi. Bhairvi kitna kaam krti h aur uska pati uthna b ni chahta. 🤔
And yeh ojha ji bhi na.. rambha ke peeche pade hai. Pillow q mara lajjo ne inke to belan marna ta wo b sarr par. 😉 😆
Aur hemant kaise keench ke leke gya Manav ko..
So, karthik bhi jamnagar he ja rha hai. Interesting. Lgta hai agla part zydartar jamnagar me he hoga.
And HC and Megha ka departure scene is so emotional. Everyone has tears in their eyes and hemant doing Hutu hufu 😒 😭
But yeh end me kya twist hua dhamaka... space ship kharab ho gyi kya..
Lovely update krish waiting for the next part.

Thanks fNO for comment well yes..bhadresh jaa raha hain jamnagar.socho socho aage kya hoga...yes hamara hemant ... And. Ohja kotoh padhna chahiye tha par nikal gaya ...

Hc and megha even i was emotional

No simple dhama,a johar waqt hota hIn aisa hi hua hai

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
krishu...
me tuhjse bahut naraz huu
sach me naaraz huu... (katti)

tune promise kiya tha mesha ki date aur unke moments..
aur uske bina hi megha ko wapis bhej diya😲😲very bad...
aur jab bhi mesha saath hote h yeh jacky kyun bich me hota h.. aur koi h nai uske liye...😡
bhairugiri bhi nai thi isme... hemantgiri bhi nai thi😭😭😭
emotional part megha-manav talk & megha-hc leaving...😭

ojha uncle aur unki items... by god yahan bhi aa gaye...🥱 lajjo achha tana marti h ojha ko...😆

hemant manav ko khich ke leke gaya.. bechara manav...😆😆😆
megha jate jate bhi sharad ko volt deke gai😆😆

bhadru gng to jamnagar... 😲 kyu?? koi twist??
overall superb update... 👏👏
well written...
thodi grammatical mistakes thi... sudhar lena... sudhar pai toh.. nai toh... hihin...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...

First of all really really sorry mere dimaag se nikal gaya tha mesha ka date and all...

Pakka agle part mein bhairu giri aur hemantgiri hogi

Socho socho koi twist hain socho socho aur batao

Thanks for ur comment hiyu

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: Krish58

First of all really really sorry mere dimaag se nikal gaya tha mesha ka date and all...

Pakka agle part mein bhairu giri aur hemantgiri hogi
Socho socho koi twist hain socho socho aur batao

Thanks for ur comment hiyu

hmm..
koi nai abhi flashback me bata dena same maja aayega..
sharad yaad kar raha hoga megha ko tab...
welcum😳