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Kays94

@Kays94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

res! 😉

unres!

I'm first 😆

So so so love this story... as soon as I saw you posted something had to reserve my spot!

omg the beginning just got me blushing!!

Viren kissing his beautiful wife... I legitly feel like I was seeing that scene on screen again 😳

and then Jeevika's foot almost slipped again before her Prince Charming caught her! ❤️

that scene was written amazingly! the emotions and that eye-lock was so heart-felt

Later the way they both said they need to change was hilarious 😆 I absolutely loved loved loved that!!

Viren then during her hair... oh la la la la... what have you done here Serah.. got me blushing like crazy reading this 😳

the ending where Viren wished to talk to Jeevika was awesome!!

I loved how we wanted to clear everything out, but Jeevika's emotion and pain was so visible and her demand for space still!

Awesome Update! Please update this soon as well as New Beginnings 😉😳😛

Edited by Kays94 - 9 years ago

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maheenkryanite

@maheenkryanite

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

res

unres

finally my stupid exams r over and now i got to read the ss😉

when i got time the first thing i did was reading ur update and ridhi's heartbeat soul and life😊😛

omg serah u r the best👏

finally viren got to know the whole truth😡

this update was so so so romantic tht i was blushing hardly through the whole update😳

viren's eyes welled up after knowing the truth was so cute😭

finally he understood tht he had done vry wrong with jeevika😡

i am totally on jeevika's side she really needs some time to overcome tht pain😊

eager to read what will viren will do to bring her love back😉

this ss is taking me back to the ehmmbh..🤔 sorry humbum 😆days really miss our beloved humbum vry badly specially virika😭😭

ur ss is just awesome👏⭐️

hope jeevika will show so much nakhra😉

plz update the next part soon dying for ur update🤢🤢

Edited by maheenkryanite - 9 years ago

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millee18

@millee18

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Res:)
The Kiss 😳
That was such a hot and tense update!
I don't know how you write each and every piece so beautifully that we all get hooked up with it!
The way it started i wasn't able to stop blushing and thn the moment when Jeevika and Viren talked about what happened!
I seriously always wanted them to talk about this bit it never happened! None the less we have you to fulfill all our imaginations! 😉
I hope everything gets back to normal soon:)
Update soon!

Edited by millee18 - 9 years ago

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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Oh my an update finally! 🥳

God knows how long I've been waiting for ur PM

And u nailed it again dear!

"The first duty of love is to listen." ~ Paul Tillich

Such a wonderful start of d update n I luvd how u used it in this scenario! 👏

The kiss!OMG!❤️I'm drooling right now!

Their intense romance is killing me!😳

The way jeevika confessed d happenings was well written. Her pain can be felt thru ur writing!

Can't wait to read more. Until then I'm gonna read this again n again!😉

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

awesome chapter
awe starting with virika's romance 😳
what a hot sizzling kiss was that 😳
uff but beeji disturb virika
finally its time for virika's conversation
this time viren was really rude to jeevika 😡
he just told her that she should come back home but didn't try to understand her pain 😡
finally jeevika pent out her pain 😭
its good that jeevika didn't get agree to got with viren just like that 😃
viren have to work hard to win jeevika back
continue soon

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VirikaLuver

@VirikaLuver

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

OMG!!
Loved this update!!
That kiss! I was just 😳 after reading that
But u described ih so wel
I luved how u wrote the convo between virika
Yes!! Finally viren knows the truth
If only all this happened in the show
This update was written so beautifully
The way jeevika poured her emotions out
N viren just listened
Tho can't wait to c wat viren duz to get jeevika bac cuz he has to do sumthin cuz as u said b4 she cant just forgive him so easily
Continue really soon
Thnx for the pm
😊