Virika SS: Agar Tum Saath Ho

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Shasha

@adoomy_krystle

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Omg I luvedthis sooo much, never have I seen jeevika like this but I guess the old jeevika is what viren is missing. Hope jeevika let's go of her thoughts and forgives viren cuz viren is trying so hard to get her back.

I honestly luved everything u wrote from pain to emotions this was ur leaving me speechless!!! I don't really know what to say, luved this!!!! I like the way viren distanced himself from jeevika, giving him some time cuz it shows how much he respects her. I missed virika sooo much and I'm so glad u bringing them back cuz I can actually imagine what's happeningI am soo happy I made an account to read ur stories on virika, seriously ur the best at writing virika ss. Plz keep me updated serah and after new beginning this is my fav. (Sorry nothing can beat new beginning) this is my second fav dw and update ASAP!!!!Thank you for updating'

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Riddhi Agrawal

@rid_29

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Thank you..!
Each event of virika, their love, emotions.. Well defined..!

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VirikaLuver

@VirikaLuver

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Amazing update!!
This was sooo sweet
I luved how ih started wid the fire scene
Always luved virika in that scene bt u made ih even beta!
Bt ih was so sweet the way viren gave jeevika the space she needed
The end tho!!
That was tooo cute
So sad this was the penultimate update
Continue really soon
Thnx for the pm
Waiting for NB and P&P updates as wel
😊

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maheenkryanite

@maheenkryanite

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

wowww one more beautiful update👏👏

serah i really don't have words to describe ur talent u r superb👏😊

virika sleeping in each other arms😳😳

finally they have sorted out their differences😊😊

i am feeling really sad tht this ss is going to end😭😭

hope u come up with other beautiful ss like this may be on the track when viren act like he is upset with jeevika and fight with her😉😉

eagerly waiting for ur next update😊

update soon

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Riddhi

@Riddhi_S

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

#Unred'd

First Comment! 😆

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

lovely chapter
oh god jeevika dupatta catch on fire
thank god viren saved her time
viren worked hard to get back jeevika 😃
look like jeevika quite enjoying 😉
loll viren got tensed when jeevika talk abt Dr manan 😆
but naughty jeevika was teasing viren 😉
virika moment was lovely yet emotional 😃
look like finally ice melted
continue soon

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

wow
absolutely amazing
totally loved it
cannot wait

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Kays94

@Kays94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

that was a beautiful update Serah! 👏

It totally felt like all the broken pieces were being put together with your magical words

I would have killed to see all this happen on the show in real, Karan and Krystle would have portrayed this so beautiful 😳😉

My utmost favorite part of the update is where they both realize how much they mean to each other after seeing their wedding photo; loved the way the reminisce about the past and how they have progressed in their relationship and their lives

that was definitely the highlight of the update!!

and the ending where he just holds onto her as they sleep, pure bliss 😳❤️

beautiful update as always! hope you update the next part of this real soon cause I'm dying to read more of NB!

thank you for the PM!