Virika SS: Agar Tum Saath Ho - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
awww super duper cute update...😊
brilliantly written serah as always👏

viren carrying her in his arms tll they reach their home is so romantic loved each and everybit of the update

u must be saying wht is wrong with this maheen😡 she is always commenting the same but wht to do i don't find enough words to describe ur work😊😉

omg... atsh is ended feeling emotional yaar😭

it was like i was reliving the virika memories with this ss but all the good things comes to an end and so it is😭

hope u comeup with some more beautiful ss like this😊

thank u for sending me pm's for each n every update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
OMG Serah!
talk about perfection... Hats off to you as always 👏
I'm actually running out of words cause every update you blow my mind away
the small details you include and write in each update just make the hugest difference ever!
From the beginning, just the way you wrote about the feelings Jeevika had was so heart-touching
Every thing she felt and realized regarding her love for Viren, made me so emotional 😭
Then comes Mr. Viren Vadhera, protectively and lovingly holding onto his wife and taking her inside the bedroom... damn this guy kills me 😆 that was seriously so romantic
Their conversation after is so pure and so 'Virika' simply said... like thats exactly how they would make up knowing the two
then comes all the hot stuff that got me blushing 😳 and JEEVIKA LAUGHED 🤣
I was like Viren is gonna kill you know for laughing as he's kissing you 😉
But Viren's always got his ways too... he's so naughty yet innocent at the same time
The ending was so hilarious Serah, I absolutely loved how Jeevika alluded to her husband leaving her for a case on their wedding night and Viren answered saying he's fixing his mistakes 😆😉
Such a smarty pants!!

AHHH overall this was a beautifully written SS, but now I'm excited and eagerly waiting for a PM from you saying NB updated!! Hope you update your stories soon ❤️
Take Care and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
beautiful update
finally jeevika forgive viren
she got over her pain 😃
awe jeevika couldn't take off her eyes from viren 😉
wow virika moment so cute 😳
even swamini bua & jeevika got along 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Unres'd. Second Comment.
But You've Already Liked It?! 😕 🤣

I'm Hoping You Get To Update NB & P&P! I So Miss Those Stories!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Seraaahhh
you have no idea, how big smile i have on my face, while reading ! Your truely a virika writer! Well or should i say Kryan Write(wink)!!! Reading your updates makes virika so alive and It makes me on cloud9 while reading it!
The update was
Awesome
Sweet
Romantic
Love
Wonderful
Marvelous
Lovely
Mindblowing
Mindblasting
Virika
Phenomenal
Splendid
Update!
This was the awesomest update ever! So pure, so real, and i would say so romantic! The way they were spendinh time with each other makes every virikians so happy! I am sad, that the ss has ended. But, i know you will come up with more ideas and i cant wait to read them. But this ss was the best script for ehmmbh. It would be so awesome if ehmmbh production house used this to end thier fight! Loved the way jeevika forgived viren! And specially THE ROMANCE you have add to the left-over scenes! They were phenomenal!
Love yaaa serah!!!
Come up with something new soon!
Thank u for always sending pms and updating!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
This story ended! I just can't get over this story!:)
This story was so different and my oh my the way you wrote all the emotions and thn you took this plot!
I can't thank you enough for writing it!
Starting from the first part where Jeevika was so heartbroken and angry and thn Viren came and all those sweet hot and intense moments! I always wanted to see something like that and you made my wish fulfilled:)
Your writing style is so different that you keep all your readers capitavited!
No matter how many time you read it you still wnat more and more!

And adding the os part! The was the perfect way to end this ss!
The way their sweet and hot romance happened!;)
And jeevika laughing
It was fun!
Thank you for writing this story!
Update all your other stories soon;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Definitely a better SS than the way it was handled on the show. its like you filled in all the loopholes that the CVs left in the show.
they had the much much much needed heart to heart.
and the coming home sequence was really important as well. it's good to know that they can finally put this behind them.

though I have an idea... in the show when Jeevika had once suggested that Viren should tell swamini everything and Viren had held her hand really aggressively that was an interesting plot that can be worked on. as a prologue or a separate OS maybe???? Think about it! :P

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