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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

awesome update...

the way u write viren's feelings just out the world...

finally viren know that nurse's story..

i love the scene when viren find jeevs..i mean yeah viren was scolding jeevs and also not even allowing jeevs to say something but in this way he was showing his love..

i hope viren able to talk to jeevs and know whole story..

update sooon :)

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13toobaf

@13toobaf

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Wow!!!

A really nice update again

Thanks for the p.m

Plz continue soon

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Awesome chapter

Poor jeevika was heart broken missing viren like hell

Finally virika came face to face

Both still misunderstood each othe nor making efforts to talk each other

Virman planing reunion for virika

Look like didn't work

When jeevika goes missing whole families especially viren was hell worried for her

Yippee finally viren got to know truth abt that idiot nurse

Still his ego didn't let him accept it

Poor jeevika still suffering for that incident as she is having nightmares

Viren realize what had he done to jeevika

Even I agree with viren needs to do more work to manofy jeevika after all he took so much time to forgive her

Continue soon

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maheenkryanite

@maheenkryanite

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

amazing serah👏

actualy i was also not at all satisfied with tht track😡

how jeevika can forgive viren so easily😡 viren was totally wrong in his place how he cannot t

trust jeevika after all she's her wife , her life😲

the makers didn't solved the matter clearly viren would have know the truth why jeevika splitted

the truth when she was the one who was pleading viren to not to tell the truth to buaji😭

and last but not the least tht idiot nurse who blamed jeevika i was also so angry with tht😡😡

coming to ur update it was really awesome 👏 u became my fav writer in this forum till now i was

confused whom to give 1st position on my fav list 😳 but now i can say with proud tht on no.1

position serah is my fav writer in this forum😆 really luv ur writing😊

now 1 request plzz atleast for this don't take much time to update the nxt part plzzz i am dying here plzz

update the next part soon🤢

u know reading this ss is giving me the feeling of reliving jeevika😭

pl plz plz plz plz plz plz

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz

update the nxt part soon...😭😊😊

Edited by maheenkryanite - 9 years ago

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VirikaLuver

@VirikaLuver

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Amazing update!!
I swear this was beta then wat they showed in the show
My favourite bit had to b wen jeevika went missing n he got so worried
U showed his emotions so wel!
In fact thru out the whole update u showed both ther emotions beautifully
The whole update was sooo awesome
Continue really soon
I cant wait to c wat happens!!
Thnx for the pm
Waiting for the next one!!
😊