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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Mai ji kha tha
Typo error
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Ab tumhe meri Ridhima kai hasne sai prob hai. Uff zoya get a life (ROFL)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Awesome
Little emotional
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Mai ji kha tha

Typo error
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --MinOch--

Ab tumhe meri Ridhima kai hasne sai prob hai. Uff zoya get a life (ROFL)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Interesting Chapt..👏
Continue soon.😊
And Thanx for the PM too😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --MinOch--


Glad u liked it Ayu
Oh M soo flattered.
Mujhe sharam agayi.
Obviously will continue with the same spirit, I m having such great reader toh spirit toh high par hogi naa.
I love u too Ayu
And abt Pm, I will do as you r in my buddy list.
Yess i ressed, hopefully raat mai padh paun, toh kal unress bhi kardungi.
Byee

Glad U did.
Surely will soon.






Hey its not ayu
I m her sis Ashlesha
ashleshapriya1 is ayu
Plz don't get confused. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

CHAPTER 2


As he drove the car, he continues to cry and think was about Zoya. He just hoped that she would be there where he is thinking. He just hoped, hoped that he maybe know her, know her so well.


He stopped the car as soon as he reached the place and he was right. There she was, the same place where she came to see the shooting star. The same place where they both each ownselves for the other. He wish that the shooting star appear again, if the wishes do come true then he also want to make a wish, wish to turn it all back to its place. He wanted it all to be right and simpler. He don't wish for a complicated life, afterall who wish that right?!

He walks slowly to her. As he reached her, he decided to keep a hand on her shoulder but as he forwarded his hand, he couldn't muster up the courage to do so. He can't after what he had done. Hell, he doesn't even know what he had done, even don't know that did he has done something or not.

"Zoya.." he whispered and she turned to his way but stumbled; and as, was about to fall was saved by Asad. Her eyes were red, red with tears. His eyes were wet. Both stood up to their place but couldn't utter a word. All do was stare. Stare at eachother. Zoya sobbed silently taking his attention.

"Mr.Khan, kyun aye hai aap?"*Mr.Khan, why did you come here?* She asked as a lone tear escaoed her eyes.

"Aapko lene Ms.Farooqui. Ghar mai sab pareshaan hai, Ammi, Nazma.."*To take you Ms.Farooqui. Everyone is worried at home, Ammi,Nazma*He was about to continue when she cutted him

"Aur Aap...Aap Mr.Khan, kya aap pareshaan nahi thai? Yaa aap apni zindagi mai itne aage badh gaye ki, ki ek mehmaan Ki tarah bhi aap meri fikr karna zaroori nahi samjhte?"*And You...Weren't You worried Mr.Khan? Or you had moved on in life that much, that you don't even think of getting worried for me as a Guest?*She asked with an accused tone.

"Zoya...Zoya I swear, I really don't know what happened!" A tear escaped of plead from his eyes. A plead to believe him.

"Why?" She whispered and asked him with all innocence.

"When I woke up...I just came to know about my state. Tan..Tanveer called me up just before I was coming from house saying she is in a big problem and all I went for was, was to help her!!" He said sitting down on a bench.

"At the time of wedding?" She asked him accusingly

"She...She w..was my best friend Ms.Farooqui. I really don't know what is happening. How, when,..." he sighed getting defeated with his own self. He don't know if Zoya accusing him was right or wrong but he couldn't even make himself, his sould getting away from accusing himself.

"Yeah..Right. Mr.Khan you still won't believe that Tannu is wrong...Afterall she isnyour Tannu, she couldn't be wrong right?" She shouted at him

He stood up with frustration and dragged her with shoulder close to himself and replied her with rage "I myself don't know anything Ms.Farooqui, try to believe. I don't know what is happening, what I knew I told you. I didn't had hope that you wouldn't even try to understand me." She hissed feeling his tight grip on her shoulders and so he left. She looked at him with pain while he looked at her with plead.

"You don't know anything which happened Mr.Khan, you didn't know, you don't know and will not ever come to know. You are saying you didn't had hope that I wouldn't try to understand. Me? Mr Khan, its only me who tries to understand everytime. How could you expect me just say I Love You and understand you, after what all I saw there. I couldn't deny my eyes. You think its easy for me to accuse you? Did you ever though how hard it was for me to see you there in that compromising state with your Tannu and still you hope that I will understand. I am tired Mr.Khan , I am tired of understanding everytime." She shouted holding his collors and then slid down his chest and fell on the ground and cried harder.

Ginta Rehta Taare, Lautu Mai Angare
Khudse Ladta Bhidta, Yeh Jag Ko Thokar Maare ;
Kheeche Kheeche Baithe, Baithe Baithe Bhaage
Na Sunta Khud Kai Aage; Yeh Paagal Ho Gaya Re.
Paya Vo Na Chaha, Chaha vo na paya
Jiske Peeche Bhaage wo ,Saya hai Re Saya;
Kya Kya Raste Dhunde, Kya Kya Ruk Na Paya
Par Sayaa Thehra Saya Kai Haatho Mai Na Aya.

"Lets Go home" he says looking away as tears left his eyes as well.

"I will come myself, you don't have to do such a thing" she stood up

"For gods sake Zoya, don't be so stubborn. Please come" he made her look himself holding her elbow.

"Allah Miyaa, Whats Wrong With You Mr.Khan, leave me for gods sake. I am not a kid." And then moved away from him.

A small smile escaped on his face. Yes even in this sitution this girl didn't forgot her,Allah Miya, Whats Wrong With You. But then again those painfull expressions came on his face and he moved away saying "Do come soon, everyone is waiting and tensed" and all she could do was nod.


"Asad Kya Hua Zoya Mili?"*Asad What Happened, found Zoya?*
Dilshaad asked as soon as saw him entering the house.

He nodded and moved to his room. As soon as he came all her words rang in his ears. He closed his eyes and slid down his door crying. He with his wrists hid his face and sobbed harder. How they were thinking sometime before, the happiness was on peak. If everything had gone well, they would had been together. Maybe enjoying eachother's company and their togetherness.

And then suddenly heard a bell and his ears sprang up. He cleared his eyes, and stood up moving out from the room. And there she was, standing beside his Ammi. All silent and then their eyes met. As soon as their eyes met, a person came in between and there she was standing there. Tanveer . And then she moved but Zoya face was turned into anghast. She threw bad glance at Tanveer and then looked at him with accusing expressions and then left from there to her room with Dilshaad and Nazma behind her.

"Jammy , wo" Tanveer tried to speak but he left to his room without listening.


"Paas toh hum apne paas aapko laake rahenge Jammy, Tanveer naam hai mera. Kaha tha na Zoya, tum iss khel mai Kachi ho, haar jaogi. Dekhliya na nateeja, tch tch tch"*I will get you close to me Jammy, anyhow afterall My name is Tanveer. I told you Zoya, you are very new in this game, will loose. Now saw the consequences.*Tanveer spoke to herself with an evil expressions.


This Chapter Is For
Shailu Ji, who is by chance my Distant Relative🤣. Thankyou for all the Love and Support.

With Love

Sanju ^_^

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Edited by --MinOch-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
aww sanju mere liye update tha😳 Love u🤗
and So emotional update tha yaar 😭
meri poor Asya😭
that tanu😡😡😡
Continue soon🤗
Edited by shailu123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

Awesome

Little emotional
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next

Thnx nilu.
Surely since u r in the PM list

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