The Distance Between Us - An AR FF (Link to TDBU#2 - Page 1) - Page 11

Originally posted by: tanyaarora2912

This ws actually d best, nhi nhi mein kuch nhi keh rhi agli baar or acha aa jayega...

I feel u r challenging urself fr each part n d outcome is so so beautiful...!!!

This FF is stealing my heart away...!!!

And d scene from DMG oh god I almost cried...!!!

Mujhe apne aap ko yaad dilana padta h ye stry h...

Reading TDBU transport me to dat world...

N I don't want u to stop...!!

Ismein hero toh aa gya but usku aisi halat dekhi nhi jaa rhi mujhse...

Rahul n Armaan rock together...!!

Is Armaan suffering from asthma????

Tum toh nxt chapter tk wait karvayogi but mein bhi puchne se peeche nhi hatne wali ;) ;)

Hero ka reaction dekhna h ab toh jb wo ridhima ko dekhega...!!

There is so much t I knw

Ridhima n sid relationship status

Armaan ke panic attacks

Jaanhvi and armaan n nikki...

Armaan's emotional state after watching ridhima

N d list is endless...!!!

Ab itna wait nhi karna meine hafta bhi bada lagta h...;) ;)

Zaldi zaldi continue karo plzzz

Originally posted by: gaurikajen

you are such an awesome writer

the way you explaned armaan condition sereiosly i could actually see it

and rahul was exceptionally good

i have always hated this phase in dmg and flashback reminded me of the time when ar suffered

jhanvi aur armaan ka kya relation hai

hope armaan will be fine

hats off to your writing

post soon next part

Originally posted by: Jennifer_Grover

Armaan's halat was expressed so beautifully. He looked so much in pain. The entire scene was written perfectly. You did a splendid work once again. And the way Riddhima's thoughts hurt and emotions were expressed were so heart felt. And this janhvi, really just like Riddhima even I had the same feeling yaar Ki he loved Riddhima only so truly he cannot rather shouldn't love anybody else that way. And panic attack... uff. That was so horrible. The way Rahul handled him was really so sweet though. Ab no bhi hai Plzz AR ko jaldi milwa De na Ek dusre se and Plzz Armaan ko bhi jaldi se theek kar De and plz janhvi ko bhi jaldi se theek kar De... Basicallly sab kuch jaldi se theek kar De apne next update mein. 😆

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

lovely part yr .
y Armaan is behaving like this..
who is the Tammy nd jhanvi...
plz continue asap..

Originally posted by: Ashstyle

Really confusing about Armaan's reaction to Jhanvi and Tammy

Fantastic Update, amazing writing style

And Plot is also growing

Hope you update soon

AshStyle

Originally posted by: ajuswa19

u r brilliant 2 words very gud part 😊

Originally posted by: chaitrika12

Superb...

Jhanvi koan hai?

Waiting for nxt part..

Tnx for pm

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

yaar i m too much confused with all the 2 updates of this ff...
mera ko samjh nahi aa rhaa ho kya raha hai ...
just ek baat samjh aai ki rahul ko ray bol rahe hain ... par yaar mujhe jaise thode pagal reader confuse ho rahe hain rahul ko rahul jaisa hi kuch bulwao na.. pout

Omg dadu
sob sob
Kyu kiya aisa flashback scene ne to touch hi kar liya
I know m late par mene part hi abhi padha

yaar hug kiya unhone aur phir ye separation
lambi judai. ...

aur ye panic attack
upar se I was expecting Ridzi jaayegi dod ke aur kahegi relax armaan me yahi hu
pura roller coaster part tha

kab milenge m waiting. ...

friends song
dekh iss baar mene notice kiya aur mujhe pata bhi chala Konsa song hai
hehe

Originally posted by: BunnyKaJen

Omg dadu
sob sob
Kyu kiya aisa flashback scene ne to touch hi kar liya
I know m late par mene part hi abhi padha

yaar hug kiya unhone aur phir ye separation
lambi judai. ...

aur ye panic attack
upar se I was expecting Ridzi jaayegi dod ke aur kahegi relax armaan me yahi hu
pura roller coaster part tha

kab milenge m waiting. ...

friends song
dekh iss baar mene notice kiya aur mujhe pata bhi chala Konsa song hai
hehe