The Distance Between Us - An AR FF (Link to TDBU#2 - Page 1)

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DMGThings

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Sanju spamming ke alawa kabhi unres bhi kar diya kar!

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Nazzz16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Nice part...

But lil confusing since the characters are not known...

Very emotional...especially the flashback.. i was crying alot while reading it :(

Omg armaan is getting panic attacks :O

Waiting to know about new characters especially jaanvi and tammy :p

Hope yeh dono armaan ki behne type ho ;)

Update next part soon ...

Very exicted for it

Thnxx for pm :)

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Priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

awesumm part
well im confused
bt i guess that makes me hooked up to this ff

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tanya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

This ws actually d best, nhi nhi mein kuch nhi keh rhi agli baar or acha aa jayega...

I feel u r challenging urself fr each part n d outcome is so so beautiful...!!!

This FF is stealing my heart away...!!!

And d scene from DMG oh god I almost cried...!!!

Mujhe apne aap ko yaad dilana padta h ye stry h...

Reading TDBU transport me to dat world...

N I don't want u to stop...!!

Ismein hero toh aa gya but usku aisi halat dekhi nhi jaa rhi mujhse...

Rahul n Armaan rock together...!!

Is Armaan suffering from asthma????

Tum toh nxt chapter tk wait karvayogi but mein bhi puchne se peeche nhi hatne wali ;) ;)

Hero ka reaction dekhna h ab toh jb wo ridhima ko dekhega...!!

There is so much t I knw

Ridhima n sid relationship status

Armaan ke panic attacks

Jaanhvi and armaan n nikki...

Armaan's emotional state after watching ridhima

N d list is endless...!!!

Ab itna wait nhi karna meine hafta bhi bada lagta h...;) ;)

Zaldi zaldi continue karo plzzz

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gauri

@gaurijw

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

you are such an awesome writer

the way you explaned armaan condition sereiosly i could actually see it

and rahul was exceptionally good

i have always hated this phase in dmg and flashback reminded me of the time when ar suffered

jhanvi aur armaan ka kya relation hai

hope armaan will be fine

hats off to your writing

post soon next part

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Jennifer_Grover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Armaan's halat was expressed so beautifully. He looked so much in pain. The entire scene was written perfectly. You did a splendid work once again. And the way Riddhima's thoughts hurt and emotions were expressed were so heart felt. And this janhvi, really just like Riddhima even I had the same feeling yaar Ki he loved Riddhima only so truly he cannot rather shouldn't love anybody else that way. And panic attack... uff. That was so horrible. The way Rahul handled him was really so sweet though. Ab no bhi hai Plzz AR ko jaldi milwa De na Ek dusre se and Plzz Armaan ko bhi jaldi se theek kar De and plz janhvi ko bhi jaldi se theek kar De... Basicallly sab kuch jaldi se theek kar De apne next update mein. 😆