~|| Akya ff..Ankaheen..Chapter 11 updated on Page 22 ||~

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi friends!!! So here I'm back wid a new story after a very long time!! This is my first ff, I mean that is what I'm calling it right now! Don't know whether I'll be able to elaborate & complete it or not but I want to start and would try my best!!
So d story begins at d point when ananya shot rohit maftlal urf babu and will feature Akya's journey till their marriage, ofcourse including their confession!! I chose this starting point bcoz I think there is a huge logical gap between this scene and their 'so called' confession scene! Don't worry, I have changed d way of their confession and tried to decorate it wid some feelings that were absolutely lacking in d scene!
This is d kind of story I visualize after d point! I know there r many beautiful stories r being written in d forum on this theme of continuing d story where it ended and I have no any intention to conflict wid those stories, they r phenomenal! So this is my lil try, hope you all would like it! I have written this chapter in car when I was traveling to Mumbai, so plz ignore any mistakes

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Chapter 1

The Gunshot echoed in d Airport! The Rohit maftlal urf babu was lying dead in d cabin! Akash had to take few moments to realise what actually happened and he turned towards ananya and swiftly took his gun from her hands and kept it into his pocket!

Ananya was trembling in disbelief! She was about to loose her balance when Akash caught her by her shoulders and lightly shook her & asked.. "Ananya... Ananya are you alright?" she shivered by his touch, came to her senses & slightly nodded yes!

Akash was also shocked by her action! He took her out of d cabin and made her sit on d nearby couch! Till then d people were gathered there hearing d sound of Gunshot! Akash tried to comfort her "Ananya...tum ghabrao mat sab Kuch thik ho jayega.. Mai..." and he was cut by Ananya's shaking words "Akash.. Maine ye... mujhe.. mujhe nahi Pata.. Kaise..mai bas tumhein bachana chahti thi..."

"Akash..kya Hua? aur babu?" It was Akash's boss who was was waiting outside d airport wid his men and had rushed inside sensing something has happened! They made d crowd to go away frm d spot And had already checked babu to be dead!

Akash and Ananya looked at him and Ananya recognized him & she said... "Doctor? Aap yahan, aap wahi hai na, jinhone Goa mein Akash ka ilaj kiya Tha?"

Akash stood up closed his eyes helplessly and Akash's boss ignoring her question, asked Akash in a low tone "Ye yahan kya Kar rahi hai Akash? Aur babu ko kis ne Mara?"

Akash took deep breath & said in a firm tone" Sir .. Maine Mara hai use, warna wo mujhe Mar deta, he had a gun..."
Ananya heard it and she was hell confused that who is this babu & what was Akash saying? Why Akash telling all this to this man? and why Akash took blame on himself?

Ananya interrupted "No actually..."

Akash & his boss glared at her! Akash's boss was very irritated wid Ananya's unwanted involvement in Mission and Akash was tensed thinking what she was going to confess!

They came lil away frm there and Akash's boss said narrowing his eyebrows "But use Jan se Marne ki kya zaroorat thi tum use injur bhi toh Kar sakte the, wo agar Zinda milta toh usse hum bahot sari information nikalwa sakte the and I guess Ananya ne bhi sab Kuch dekha hai, Excellent"

Akash lowered his head "I'm sorry sir"

Akash boss nodded in disappointment "Chalo humein abhi headquarters jana hoga"

Akash looked at Ananya who was very upset wid all d happenings and replied "Sir...Ananya iss sab se bahot disturbed hui hai, kya mai use Ghar Chod ke phir headquarter aa sakta hoon?Please"
Akash's boss was Lil angry but he agreed!

Akash thanked him and came to Ananya "Ananya chalo mai abhi tumhein Ghar drop Kar deta hoon, phir mujhe jana hai"

Ananya stared at him sometime & said "Akash, tum kya chupa Rahe ho mujhse? ye sab kya Tha? Aur tum ne blame apne Sar kyon Liya?Gunah to Maine kiya hai..

Akash said pleadingly "Tum se jo hua wo ek accident Tha ananya, use bhul jao,I know, iss waqt tumhare man mein bahot sare sawal uth Rahe honge,but abhi nahi,plz chalo"

Ananya had no option so she obliged! In entire journey they didn't utter a single word! He stopped car in front of her house! She was surprised that how Akash knows her house, when he had never been there but she didn't ask! She came out of car and before leaving she turned and said wid teary eyes "Tum phir se batein adhuri Chod ke ja Rahe ho Akash... " and she left without waiting for his reply.

Akash smiled sadly and said to himself "I promise u Ananya, mai sab Kuch thik Kar dunga"

Ananya entered in home and sat on d sofa holding her head in frustration.

Till then all had came to know abt d news, so Nanu was worried & asked "Ananya, beta kya Hua aur ye sab? Rohit?"

Thankfully her mama Mami was not at home & even Shefu was also out for college so Ananya freely described everything that happened!

Nanu and madhu were shocked but they knew that Ananya can never take a wrong step.

Madhu said "Ananya, galti toh tum se hui hai but anjane mein, tumhara irada toh galat nahi Tha na beta"
Nanu supposed madhu "Haan beta aur Akash ne jaise kaha, waise use ek accident samajh ke bhul jao, but phir bhi aage se khayal rakhna"

Ananya nodded & said "But Nanu mujhe Kuch bhi samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ki rohit sir aur babu, wo sab kya hai? Akash Kuch toh badi bat chupa raha hai. Abhi bhi wohi mujhe Ghar Chod ke gaya..."

Just then Shefu came from college and she heard d last part that Akash dropped ananya home! She was so excited "Wow Ananya di... Captain Akash aap ko Ghar chodne aaye the? Matlab ab sab Kuch thik ho gaya aap dono ke bich...?" and then she noticed that Ananya was glaring at her and Nanu and madhu was giving her confused look as they had no idea abt d matter...shefu bit her tongue & tried to explain "I.. I.. mean..aap ki unse bat hui kya?"

Ananya simply nodded! Nanu said "Captain Akash is such a nice person hum unka jitna shukriyada kare utna Kam hai" and they all smiled and Ananya & shefu went to their room!

Here After finishing meeting wid seniors on d success of mission Akash's boss and Akash was sitting in his cabin! Akash's boss said suddenly "Toh... ab Ananya ka kya karne ka socha hai?"

Akash looked at him eid Jersey & asked "Matlab?"

Akash 's boss said "Matlab,she knows many things and that too half and that could be dangerous"

Akash became conscious "I agree sir, but if u permit can I tell her everything, I'm really tired now, and I know she won't harm our missions in anyway!"

Akash's boss replied "Aur tum ye sab kyon karna chahte ho?... kyonki tum uss se chahne lage ho, am I right?"

Akash looked at him wid shockingly & said "No... no sir aisi bat nahi hai"

Akash boss said "May be, but Akash mai bhi ek insan hoon, mai samjhta hoon,but jab duty ki bat aati hai I'm d way strict person u know, so if u wanna do this I have two conditions.. one,not a single leakage to d information of d organization and secondly we can't take the responsibility of her safety, it's ur choice now"

Akash eyes glittered wid hope "Sir I promise, ki mai nahi organization ko Kuch hone dunga aur nahi Ananya ko!"

Akash boss replied "OK then best of luck and remember ur promise" and he left from there leaving Happy But somewhat worried Akash behind.

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Eager to know ur comments... plz tell me did u like d concept? ... should I continue? 😊




INDEX

Chapter 1: Pg 1
Chapter 2: Pg 3
Chapter 3: Pg 6
Chapter 4: Pg 8
Chapter 5: Pg 11
Chapter 6: Pg 14
Chapter 7: Pg 15
Chapter 8: Pg 17
Chapter 9: Pg 19
Chapter 10: Pg 21
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Anzum505 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it's awesome akka. .
haayeee.. ab lagta hai ki airlines ki uss ending ki sab sadness door ho jayegi. pkz update sooonnn...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woww lovely update dear
beautifully written
thank u for starting a new story on akya
finally akya story will be complete now
thanxx for the pm
😊 😛 😛 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow
Very happy to read one more ff on akya. U should surely continue..
Now about the ff
It was just amazing.. New ending for akya's confession..
Update soon
Please send me a pm if possible

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii Akanksha di
Happy to see you wrote something...that too something so beautiful

It was really very nice dear
I really wish ki show mein be exactly yehi hota

The scenes in the show was so cold but what you wrote is so perfect.
Akki di, time for you to be part of the cvs team

Well done 👏👏


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anzum505

it's awesome akka. .
haayeee.. ab lagta hai ki airlines ki uss ending ki sab sadness door ho jayegi. pkz update sooonnn...


Thanx dear and that's my motive!! 😛
Will try to update soon!! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anju10

woww lovely update dear
beautifully written
thank u for starting a new story on akya
finally akya story will be complete now
thanxx for the pm
😊


My pleasure dear! I hope I would able to justice wid ur expectations!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehal05

Wow

Very happy to read one more ff on akya. U should surely continue..
Now about the ff
It was just amazing.. New ending for akya's confession..
Update soon
Please send me a pm if possible


Thank u so much yaar!! Will definitely Pm u next time!! ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princessnidhii

Hii Akanksha di

Happy to see you wrote something...that too something so beautiful

It was really very nice dear
I really wish ki show mein be exactly yehi hota

The scenes in the show was so cold but what you wrote is so perfect.
Akki di, time for you to be part of the cvs team

Well done👏👏



Aww!! Thanx for d compliment dear, it means a lot to me!! I'm glad that you loved it!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow dear what a pleasant surprise--A NEW FF ON AKYA
while reading it i felt as if i'm watching airlines season 02(which is just a dream for me now)
The update was way too much awesome...i loved it
plzzz cont soon...( n plzzz complete it too if possible)

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