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sammymas

@sammymas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#981

I have been completely and utterly in love with this thriller cum romance cum adventures journey. Can't imagine how many times I spammed the thread for second update 😲

Thanks for sharing this with us

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sammymas

@sammymas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#982

I experience my childhood thriller through woods back n my grandpa house during my vacations... U made me enjoy each moment and relish the memories

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dsbj

@dsbj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#983

mind blowing.. I wonder what happened to all those girls.. are they too with drug dealers?? loved the chapter. cant wait to see next.

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#984

That was thrilling... Khushi was so brave and fearless and she caught the bad guy on camera... Too good. But you have very nicely written Arnav's anxiety.. He was so worried. Wooo... And the ending, very hot :-). Nicely written.

What is that small boy Vijay doing? Looks like he stole a bundle of money from the backpack and deposited in his account before meeting that guy in the forest. Looks like he is working for the bad guys. Will wait for the next chapters to know what exactly is his job...

Very nice and thrilling chapter. Continue soon

Edited by pinkly - 9 years ago

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jujubee

@jujubee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#985

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My updated comment here... The woods are scary, dark and deep...

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Edited by jujubee - 9 years ago

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Arshi2503

@Arshi2503

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Posted: 9 years ago

#986

Super duper second part.Intriguing
A delightful mix of love and romance
thrilling suspense made my day.Worth
waiting for the long chapter Sandhya.
With this chapter I feel Khushi will venture
into difficult situations.
Loved Arnav Want more of Arhi
😳 Thanks for the pm.

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#987

Hi !

No doubt this is a hard story to read. the turmoils characters face, the way you write oh my god . Half the time I am scared about all of them then ecstatic when they come around , it's one hell of a ride but i like it very much. I am as always spellbound by the emotions you manage to evoke...looking fwd for another dose soon...

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priya

@inlovewithtvk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#988

Thanks for the long update dear..both parts were different from each other in every sense..akash and arnav bond as brother is adorable.. un 2nd part hats off to khushi and her reporter's mind.. aranvs anguish nd his state when khushi was taking more time was heart touching.. their first fight as a couple .. aww if the aftermath of the fight is so 😳
Then bring it on..

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bkamber

@bkamber

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Posted: 9 years ago

#989

Up late or is it up early...time zones I tell you...I am reading the update. 😃

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Shhh...if he wakes up I am @#$%&...😉

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#990

HOT...HOT...HOT. this is such a appropriate name for this update. it's a amazing story and kind of adventures and mysterious especially with this new vijay angel. but in this update Arshi were best...I am sorry I can't look beyond them.

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