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spg1970

@spg1970

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

You are back with a bang!!!

Loved the update and thanks for the PM.

Arnav cannot stop thinking about Khushi...glad he sorted things out with Shreya...dont get a good feeling about her.

And where is Khushi...hopefully safe...will wait for the next chapter.

Brilliant writing.

Cheers,

SPG

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anju

@anjusr06

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Beautifully written.. loved the update...so khushi called ... wat hsppen to her... continue soon

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#313

I really really liked the quote by Margaret Atwood which is so apt for the chapter.
I would say it describes Khushi, Shreya and even Aarti's state of minds. Arnav, in both of your stories, is smart, handsome and very lonely. It's unfortunate that the boy had to grow up so quickly and take over the role of the man of the house. He gets no support from his own father or his drunkard brother. Just glad his Chachu has tried to be the father he doesn't have.
Khushi's and Arnav's relationship is very complicated and quite frankly I still haven't figured out how they will ever sort it out with Anjali hanging over Khushi's head all the time.
Shreya is onto Arnav regarding khushi. i bet she is hiding in the corner eavesdropping on him. aarti and her will definitely gang up on khushi later. shreya is still not over arnav, it seems.

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#314

Nice update . Every character that's in the story has a defined purpose, introducing shreya n Jose would lead the story further but how that's the question.

It ended at a cliffhanger :-( will be eagerly waiting for the next update .

Thanks for d pm :)

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Tabs

@hatelove2012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#315

Wow. Love triangle. Not going to work. Please update soon. Can't wait for more. Hopefully you are all settled now.

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

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Posted: 9 years ago

#316

"And she cared for him. The thought warmed and hurt simultaneously. "

He understands her and her inability to move on from her past and how deeply it affects her. But can he move on from her, now that he knows how much he wants to be with her?

Shreya seems like a spoilt little rich girl who grew up with a silver spoon and always got what she wanted, except Arnav? Why did she wait for 2 years to confront him if she loved him so much? At least, Arnav is not prepared to start up a relationship with her again and he made that clear.

Not surprised Arnav's mother likes Shreya and wants her and Arnav to get together again - seems like appearances and societal-status are at the top of the list of her priorities :-)

Khushi is either drunk or hurt - cant wait for the next chapter!

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#317

I M NOT SURPRISED.. YET A LITTLE HURT..

Arnav has always his baggage,,

Though emotionally aloof,he's always been busy in physical relationships..

He took his friendship with Shreya to the next level...

though he regretted it later...

He moved on with some Racheal...

though it dint last long..

I m happy that he is in no mood to complicate things further with his friend,Shreya..

He's missing Khushi..

he's even imagining her..

it's really hard for him to forget her..

He clearly knows that his mother is never gonna accept Khushi..

as she simply hates her..

It would never be easy for him to go against his mother..

Even Khushi is unable to get free from the shackles of guilt n grief..

But hoping against hope...

I want them to be one...

However,I'll love to know Khushi's dating adventures from past n present..

nahin tou sakoon ka saans nahin aaye ga mujhe😈

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#318

Awesome update
Arnav seems like crush from everywhere, business & personal life. Both Arnav and akash are lucky to her their chachu' support
Is khushi drunk or came face to face with the creepy guy from the train?