Originally posted by: Chaverah_TFC
Yaara, this is getting more and more intense. With every chapter, there is a puzzle being solved only to make way for a more complicated one. Its is really beautiful, the way you are weaving the story. If..U say that this is a true story and that that brave girl is among us, reading this, I'd like to say, I respect the both of you. No matter how much I am loving to know more and more about the story, it is honestly painful to know that a person, in real has gone through all this. I pray and hope that everything has a good and justified end.
Coming to the story, well laid, well plotted and more so, well connected. I like the way every dot is finding its line, getting connected to another. Its such a remorse to see how ones repentance cant mend back the broken things. Its too late, I agree. Cost too much, crumpled too much.
The way Arnav stood up for, one can live with their eyes completely closed, I tell you. Oh, BTW, I loved that body guard thing, lining on both his sides in the Mansion JPalo. Bloody damn powerful!
I like the pasts coming to light and makin sense, finally! And Gawd! This girl is one strong, stubborn one. Running all the way to his building? In the night? Bare footed?! God save me!
I like the content end after going through all those thrill, excited and distressed episode. Beautifully narrated yaar. Brillant work!
Candy dear, 🤗I am honored that a writer like yourself is really coming forward and telling me that this piece of writing is connecting hearts.Really , really appreciate that.
Yes she reads with you and reads u too,
There is no question she is one heck of a strong person, when u see nd meet people like her , u always forget your own pain.Life and its miseries seem small in front of that.
Palo was way strong , no doubt ,but every strong has a weak point.He loved Lidia like no one and in his revenge mode he killed her husband ,He wanted her child as his own.That shows how much he loved Lidia , upto the point of obsession,but he had no idea that the child he is looking for all these years to have as his own, is teh one who witnessed him killing her own biological father.
That one point made him dead, Arnav is right , he is a dead man , there is no reason to kill him again.
Once again Thank you so much dear ,means a lot❤️
Love&Hugs
Faiqa
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