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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

oh I likey this for starters!

English please

thanks for pm x

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Interesting beginning. ...

Continue soon..

Eagerly looking forward how arshi will meet n fall in love..n how Arnav fulfill all her dreams..

I think u should write in English otherwise not everyone will able to understand n you have to translate n type twice which in my opinionwill required lot of effort..

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

i want u to write khushi's dialogues in hindi with english translation hope it is ok wid u

well interesting concept do continue soon

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Nilpori

@Nilpori

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

nice concept..and i think you should write it in English..but the choice is yours...

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angal

@Neha.AS

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

In English plzzz good one story

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Akhira

@Princessdream

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Starting is very nice👏👏.

Would love to read more... Poor khushi cant even study...😭😭

I hate those people who doesn't like girls studying.😡😡😡😡😡

I ll prefer English and hindi both.U can write hindi when khushi will speak.Otherwise,Everything ll be good in English. .

Read my ff UNKNOWINGLY ONLY MINE

Edited by Princessdream - 10 years ago

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thiyamappy

@thiyamappy

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Thanks for the pm..

Very good prologue and would love to read further.

Just one request if you could write this FF in English.

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Beautiful start of the story..
Concept is very different anf heart touching..
I think you should only write Khushi's dialogue and pov in hindi..
Waiting for next eagerly..

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ruchivishal

@ruchivishal

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Good concept, pls write in English

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Awesome start.

One suggestion, put Khushi's dialogue in Hindi and english translations in bracket. So people who have trouble in Hindi can also understand it...

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