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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Loved the concept šŸ‘
Thank you for the pm
Eager to read more
Please let it be English as not good with hindi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved the concept šŸ‘
Thank you for the pm
Eager to read more
Please let it be English as not good with hindi

Thank you nd will write in english.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swtsam

interesting. ...loved it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Superb start
as u wish
plz continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aayt

nice concept looking forward

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sohara

Innovative concept.

Liked it.
Continue please.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kowsiRa

Nice concept.It sounds intrestibg,ecspecially the topic u choose to write about. And plsss write in english,because i cannot undrstand hindi or atleast give us a translation :-) cobtinze soon,waiting to read more

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

interesting idea...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Okay!! Back with a first chapter & thanks to everyone for appreciating this story 😊...


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Chapter 1


"Bhai..." Akash walked in the cabin where Arnav was engrossed in his files, without looking at him he hummed, "Bhai guess what!!!"


Arnav looked at him with scrunch eyes "Akash saaf saaf bol..."


( Arnav : Akash tell me clearly.)


"Bhai, abhi abhi Mr.Banerjee ka call aya tha toh woh log humare sath woh project karne ke liye taiyar hai..." Akash informed him calmly, Arnav just shook his head...


( Akash : Bro, Mr. Banerjee called me few times back and they are ready to do the project with us.)


"Par bhai, ek problem hai.." Akash was quiet hesitated..


( Akash : But bro, there's a problem.)


"Bol, waise bhi bina problem ke mera koi kaam hota kaha!!" Arnav chuckled..


( Arnav : As usual, say!! My works never completes without problem.)


"Woh chahte hai, meetings unke waha ho!! Madhupur mein.." Arnav's temper rises hearing this.. "Woh keh rahe hai, unhone iss project mein money invest kia hai aur project ka kaam bhi unke waha hoga toh!!!" Before Akash could say anything, Arnav said "Tickets book kar.." and he walked out from his cabin..


( Akash : They wants to do the meeting there, in Madhupur... They said, they invest the money for this project so..
Arnav : Book the tickets!!)


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Mr. Gupta walked in their room, tired... Khushi looked at him worried & rushed to him..


"Bauji" She offered him water & sat beside him..


"Bauji, aap kyu yeh kaam kar rahe ho?? Roz bus se seher jana aur ana, yeh apke liye achha nhi hai..." Khushi worriedly said..


( Khushi : Bauji, why are you doing this work? Daily you are travelling by bus, it's not good for you.)


"Nhi Khushi.. Mein bilkul theek hu.. Aur agar mein kamaunga nhi toh hum khayenge kya??" He caressed her hair & sweetly said..


( Mr. Gupta : No Khushi.. I'm perfectly alright.. And if I didn't earn then what will we eat??)


"Bauji!! Mere liye apse zyada maine kuch nhi rakhta.. Aap jante ho na apke siwa iss duniya mein mera koi nhi hai.. Agar apko kuch ho gaya toh!!!" Khushi's eyes filled with tears & she immediately hugged him...


( Khushi : Bauji !! There is nothing important than you for me... You know there's no one for me in this world rather than you.. If anything happens with you then!!)


Mr. Gupta caressed her hair smilingly "Khushi, iss duniya mein koi toh hai tere liye.. Bhagwan ne sabke liye kisi na kisi ko banaya hai.."


(Mr. Gupta : Khushi, there's someone in this who meant for you)


Khushi felt shy, but soon she remembered how Subhu denied to marry her, "Bauji !! Mein apko chodhkar kahi nhi jaungi.." She tightly hugged him..


( Khushi : Bauji !!I'll not leave you ever.)


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At Raizada house,


"Arey maa!! Yeh sab kya pack kar rahi ho?? Waha pe khana milta hai.." Arnav irately shouted as Mrs. Raixada packed some home made food..


( Arnav : Maa!! What are you doing all this?? There also, I'll get food!!)


"Haan mujhe pata hai, aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ki tu kaha ja raha hai.. Uss Bangali desh mein jaha sirf.. Woh kya kehte hai , misti sandesh, rossogolla milta hai.. " Mrs. Raizada said..


( Mrs. Raizada : Yes I know, and I also know where are you going.. In the bangali place where you will only get sweets...)

"Arey maa!! Bas.. Mein waha kam karne ja raha hai.. Kam hoga, wapas aajaunga yaar!! Sirf 2-3 din ki baat hai.. Arey dii kuch samjha yaar maa ko.. I'll manage!!" Arnav irately said to everyone..


( Arnav : Maa enough!! I'm going to do my works there.. I'll be back withing 2-3 days.. Di, make her understand yaar.. I'll manage..)


"Arey maa!! Tum yeh sab chodho aur chalo.. Chote kar lenge packing.." Anjali took her from there showing Arnav thumbs up..


( Anjali : Maa!! Leave it & let's go from here.. Chote will do his packing..)


"Kaise kaise insaan banate ho.." He murmured & looked up at sky as pointing God & salute him..


( Arnav : How you make people like..)


Next morning, Arnav got ready to leave, he wore a light blue shirt with grey suit.. "beta apna dhayan rakhna!!" Mrs. Raizada said..


(Mrs. Raizada : Son, take care of yourself.)


"Papa!! Maa ko sambhalo.. ." Arnav said when Mrs. Raizada hit on his arm & hugged him..


( Arnav : Papa!! Please take care of her.. )


"Bhai chale??" Akash walked in hall & soon they took a leave..


( Akash : Shall we go bro??)


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So, that's it.. I know very much short.. Actually study pressure!! Somehow manages to write this only.. Will update length one next..


Thank you..😊

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