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archmink

@archmink

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice story
but a small request
can you pzl write it in English only?

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

It was a nc start
Luking frwrd to read more

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 10 years ago

Superb starting
Arnav character is superb
thanks for pm
plz continue soon

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice one...actually when u r writing English i can't see any expression what going on ...just translation. ..so it better u write in english

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@infinity_flame

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pixi_nightingal
Nice one...actually when u r writing English i can't see any expression what going on ...just translation. ..so it better u write in english

I will write in english next time and thanks..

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice start. .

Arnav is going to meet khushi? ??

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suji5

@suji5

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice update
waiting for Arnav and khushi's meet

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ggd30565

@ggd30565

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice update

Beautifully penned down

Loved it

Want to read more

Pls update ASAP

Thanks for pm

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting start...looking forward to read more.

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

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Posted: 10 years ago

interesting concept! looking forward. you should write khushi's pov in hindi and give eng. translations for those who don't understand. rest of the story you can write in english.

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