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Beginner

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Edited by ..Bluepearl.. - 10 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nc concept...
Would love read more..
Plz continue..

I prefer eng.. Its k if u want to write in Hindi.. :-)

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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Sounds interesting.
Continue soon.
About the updates, if u r going to write Khushi's convo in Hindi ,plz give us the translation too. Coz I'm not good in Hindi.
Thanks for the PM.

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

would love to read to see how the story moves ahead

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

very nice concept...
u should write it in english as alot of us cant understand hindi well ... may u can keep some of khushi's pov's in hindi..

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

i will love to read..but please in english..so what she is uneducated ...story can be in english...

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting concept...

Wants to read more...

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Liked the prologue very much. Two entirely different people, I would like to know how they meet.

But to tell you the truth, I am little apprehensive to read new Arshi FFs. Because new writers loose interest after posting few chapters and just stop writing.

I can not understand Hindi much. If possible, do write it in English or at least provide English translation for the Hindi dialogues. Thank you. Will wait for the first chapter.