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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cupcake.

amazing update

Flashback part was so good
Gupta family support and love her

Khushi-Shashi part was so beautiful
father-daughter relation beautifully portrayed

Amazing chapter
excited to read next part

thanks for the pm




Thnx cupcake😊

glad you liked Father-daughter and flashback of Last night party ...both are showing the sneak peak of their coming back events and how things wee in the past ...lets see

thnx for the lovely comment
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SarunNArshi

As usual AWESOME.but ye kya.aise kaise rok diya.

next chapter is surely going to be suuper intense.i am very sure.
plz jaldi karo yaar.very very eager.

all my assumptions wrong😆😆😆 but this one was tooo gud.same ipk dialogues.i love it.next updte mein she wil be crying he wil go and they wil fight and they will again reconcile😉😉😉

plz update soon


Thnx SarunNArshi😊

😆 Your summary of this fighting and reconciling is making me laugh here.

BUT your assumptions were too good.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi2503

Intriguing chapter. Just hooked on to it.
The narration of of the story is too good
Keep it up Faiqa

Khushi might be the eye witness to the killing of her father and those nightmares are as a result of it ?
Loved ASR commands over the phone without giving her any chance to speak
Somebody in the Raizada family working
against him right?

You are teasing with such type of precap
Impatiently waiting for the next
Thanks for the pm




Thnx Arshi😊

underlined...yes, her childhood horrific experience is what has instilled fear in her.

😳 When he wants he knows how to shut her up and see her seething in anger just to enjoy her.

Red ...hmmm. u have to wait for that...coming updates
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tuli_jayee

Okay ... so here I am again. First of all really sorry for not commenting regularly. I guess I needed some time to get into the flow of this story. & the precap where I found ASR's word going to heart Khushi , I felt like , not again yaar. The same abusive ASR , den Khushi crying , not again (may be I expected a different story line with less tears & nagativity)

But after reading the update , I was quite relaxed actually. May be Khushi can understand Arnav's reason of outburst & may be soon they will be on same page with differences being over.

Eager to know more abt how their relationship wud develop.

Waiting for nxt chapter.


tuli_jayee😊

Thnx for your efforts and that underlined ...

one thing I want to assure you.

There is no such thing as abusive him and crying Khushi...

The only thing is their main characters will be intact very much as his anger but he will realize it soon not like taking forever...in the show😕

She is what we have in the beginning of the show, who will never take crap from him and will give him the very same as in this story from the beginning...

Regardless the will be separated for whatever he will say or do , she will not be a crying one all the time but def she won't be the same for a while ...she will be sad for a while though...natural reaction.

so I am so happy that u r relaxed...and remain that way dear and sit back and enjoy the story


Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tushaline

awesome update...congrats for the new threat ... coming to the update, the update was awesome...so kuhsi is not fully an indian she is italian mixed...n she must had know something about her real father's murder that makes her to have those panic attacks when ever ppl try to question about that incident to her ...it must b filled with horror thats y only jesus's statue able to clam her apart from her baba... n about arnav some one is planning something big behind his back so it will be better if he watch out for those ...or may b those ppl wont do anything first as they already knew that kushi had overheard them ...but arnav shouldnt have shouted at her ... when he comes to know that kushi is also orphan just liek him he will regret for sure... mayb their trip to bombay will bring them more closer n eventually will make them realise their feeling for each other pyar na hi sahi atleast they will really that they are attracted to each other




Thnx Tushaline😊

In blue, yes...she is half Italian and half indian...coming updates you will find out.

Some one yes my Last character is going to enter soon , and why is he doing all of this

Pink, absolutely they will fight and the very next moment they will make it up .Lets see first how wil he manofy Khushi after this ...he is already running after her in his SUV
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Posted: 10 years ago
Faiqa seriously wonderful this plot. Her nightmare had me shaking and my heart pounding. Love ASR's antics. Very cute the banter. A mystery??? A good story always has a mystery.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758

Faiqa seriously wonderful this plot. Her nightmare had me shaking and my heart pounding. Love ASR's antics. Very cute the banter. A mystery??? A good story always has a mystery.


Cynthia😊 🤗

I knew it , u will love it...so sit back and enjoy because your fav romantic moments are on the way along with her past and the reason of her nightmares and revelation of his enemy and enemies...


Thnx for stopping by...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.


Cynthia😊 🤗

I knew it , u will love it...so sit back and enjoy because your fav romantic moments are on the way along with her past and the reason of her nightmares and revelation of his enemy and enemies...


Thnx for stopping by...


Thanks for inviting me and it is good to be back here with you!🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SharuAG

Thank you for the PM.

I m drawn to this story by your poem. It was amazing. Just started reading today and finish 4 chapters on a go.

Back to the chapter.

The chapter started with giving and end of crying.

Does Khushi has any relation to India? Just curious after hearing the gossipers. Some people just love to put thier nose into others life and they take pride in spreading gossip.

Why does Vimla and the other lady care who Khushi is? No matter what, Shashi's inheritance wont't be shared with them. So, why care, who Shash decided to share it with. Some nosy Gossipers...

Are those two guys really planning something against Arnav? I thought they were just discussing the plan ahead. Did I missed something here?

I thought Arnav did a background check on Khushi. So, he should know, she is adopted, right? Or, didn't he go that far with the check?

Reading the first few chapters, I though Khushi was the master of Anger, Rather Arnav is cool and controlled. That's what I thought you have portrays their personality...

Eid Mubarak..





hi SharuAG,😊

that was such a fantastic and loving note from you. Always thrilling to know someone read a story or started reading it and gets hooked on it...gives a writer a nice and loving feeling ...I loved writing and always enjoy writing on ARSHI... I hope I have so much time to do so yet I can't,but still whatever I have I do what I like to do the most...

thanks for liking the way the story is going.

you liked the details?I can see that as you noticed so many things... I am touched and amazed.

IN RED..Khushi has no relation to India...she was born and raised in States.Chapter 1

U didn't miss anything and yes those guys ...meaning workers were planning something against him...coming updates

IN BLUE...Yes he didn't go that far yet and slowly slowly he will know all the detail

IN PINK: No Arnav is angry one and so is Khsuhi yet Arnav is also a controlled one ,instead of Khushi .
He becomes angry quickly,but comes back to his senses quickly too with his controlled nature...while Khsuhi takes steps right away , right or wrong doesn't care.

coming updates you will see more detail...

Welcome aboard dear...🤗
Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hmm nice update..i must say few people never become mature and they always poke their nose in other affairs not thinking about hurt they cause...


arnav hurts her...he done in it anger..well atleast they both are on a starting point..i am liking this care free flirting arnav..

i love mithooo .i too had a parrot ..he only speaks mitho chori khani and meaow meaow not realising when this meaow come infront of him will not leave him :P


thankx for pm
khair mubarik..Eid mubarik to you too <3

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