Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7 - Page 18

congratulations for the new thread.awesome update.loved it. amazing story.beautifully written.thanks for pm.take care

Loved it.when I was reading I was seeing each scenes just like serial. Thank you

Amazing update.. Love it. Thanks for pm

First shorrryyy for being so so slate and absent,but Eid and all kept me away from this beautiful world of ArHi.

awesome update...
Loved it ...
continue soon
Waiting

congrats for the new thread!

Originally posted by: avika444

Hey faiqa superb update dear ,enjoyed reading it :-) :-)
Poor khushi was bashed badly by the ladies, why can't these women mind their own business??I thought khushi had a nightmare becoz her heart was hurt by those ladies but there is something more to it.someone killed khushi's father :-( :-( did she witnessed her father's death??poor girl suffered so much in her childhood, but really happy for her as she found shashi,garima and payal as her family who love her unconditionally:-) :-) .
Loved the bonding between them:-) :-)
The marriage proposal , is it really for payal?? I mean I don't know why but I'm feeling like the proposal is for khushi not payal. But then how can they marry their younger daughter before older one.
I think iim guessing too much😆
Hehehe this mojo is always ready with situational song
Now who r these people conspiring against arnav??who is this new villain??
Arnav back to asr mode ,he bursted on khushi and hurt her again
Can't he control his anger a bit:-( :-(
Precap piqued my interest😳😳
Want to know about arnav and khushi's past
Waiting for next chap
Update soon
Thanks for pm:-) :-)

Originally posted by: lovetoread08

Hi, start with a flashback was a good one as it arouse the curiosity of what happened between both of them at the party night. Khushi and her mom has a positive relationship and her mom feel so protective of her is narrated very well in the story. A Father-Daughter out there share an enviable bond, their understanding for each other makes them absolutely adorable.Their understanding is unbeatable,as Khushi also listen to the feeling underlying the message in the dialogue" No worries,know he is in safe hands". At midnight Khushi's condition shows nothing is terrible except fear itself and the way her family shows concern and support is portrayed beautifully. Phone conversation was like turned down to war(war of words). Arnav's retort was like taking an architecture class.😊 Hey, breaking news meet the India's poor boss"ASR"😉 and by the end of the call I guessed the reason behind the earlier smirk(the talk between Adi and Arnav)or rather where his mind is brewing.Here comes the entry of Mojo with a song reminds me of " Sweety " the character of serial "Hum Paach" on Zee TV.The conversation between Payal and Khushi shows that they are perfect as siblings.Khushi is again bowled by her father who knows before hand about her trip to Bombay thanks to Arnav. About precap my mind is intrigued how the story unfolds in upcoming chapters, I have a doubt in mind about the marriage proposal. Thanks for the dedication I am on cloud nine😉.Good job!!!

Hey Lovetoread08😊

Thnx dear for such an intrigued comment.The way you see things amazes me.

in BLUE

father daughter have deep understanding and how it developed ...u will see in coming updates.There is no doubt her mother is way too protective and that will play a crucial role in future in ARSHI meeting in NY, that will come later.


in orange

well said yes her fear of childhood is making her today what she is .A nervous wreck yet she is strong and recovers quickly because her strength is her Baba till now

THE PURPLE

You nailed it dear👏 no one else found it
Yes , he just wanted to hear from Aadi what he feels about Khushi as Khushi takes Aadi a friend and when Aadi cleared by saying that she takes me as a friend less bro ...he was fine ...A man who is running away from LOVE is actually going towards it...that is inciting desire which is making him pulling him towards her...lets see how deeply this thing go into them and especially him.

BLACK..proposal is for Payal ...read Khushi and Payal convo u will get it.

PINK...they are cute when they just use eyes convo instead of words and when words come he knows how to tease her , make her angry and all

and u r very welcome because u started this story with me as I don't see ur comments any where else.I am honored dear🤗 thnx

Originally posted by: Auchi

Thanks for the PM dear. NIce update dear. How cruel of those ladies to say such things for Kushi. there was not much of Arnav & Kushi scene here but nevertheless it was lovely update dear.

Thnx Auchi😊

I know there was not much ARSHI in it as this chapter was important to start moving forward towards their past along with the progression of their relationship...lets see

u r right , how cruel those ladies are and these kind of ladies are always among us.