SS: The Ultimate Love *CH 14 Part 2* (10/OCT/2017) - Page 8

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Fantastic update Thank You... 😊😊😊

maanveer are so adorable Yeahhh Really They R... 😊😊😊

Originally posted by: ekra101

nice update.Thank You Sis... 😊😊
[ nt ended]😆 Yesss Not Ended OS Had Become SS But Not FF😉😛
lovbed uday and manyata's convo. Thank You... 😊

uday is in newyork. Did I Mentioned Uday To Newyork... ??? I Think I Haven't .. Seems Like Stories R Getting Mixed In Ur Mind... 😃

bt 4 which work he went there and with whom he was talking 2? suspicion.😕🤔. What Work Is Uday Doing And It Is Good Or Evil... For That U Have To Wait... 😛 And Whom He Is Talking To Will Be Revealed In Next Chapter ... 😊

who was trying 2 keep him away frn manyata ? Its Work... Or Work Load Or Even Evil Work... 😆😆😆

hope her xams go well. How It Will Be Go Good As Uday Didn't Wished Her.. Poor Girl... 😭

mera tarf se ucko best of luck keh dena. lol😆😉. will be a=waiting 4 next chappy😃 Zaroor Kehdainge Usey ... 😊😊 Aur Posting Next Chap Very Soon... 😊😊

Originally posted by: jagz11

Very emotional my friend. I almost started to cry. Nice ending.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Nice..

Originally posted by: Rukhsarr

Hey I read ur story its was totally mind blowing Thank You Dear Soo Much... 😊😊😊

plzz do continue and pm me when u will update ❤️ Yeahhh Sure... 😊😊😊

Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

Originally posted by: Simi. k Via SCRAP

here's my comment sis 😊 Okayzzz...😊😊😊😊

Hmm so the chappy was about Uday and Manyata's convo over phone.. haye... How I loved It.. 😳
Thank You Sis... 😊😊😊

Lol Manyata doesn't like to wake uo early.. she is so much alike me ;P... but apparently meri agar ek baar neend khul bhi jaye to phir se aa jaati hai 😛 Really... 😊 Aur Meri Bhi Ankh Jaldi Nae Khulti Dhr Tak Sojati Hn Jab Tak Dill Nae Barh Jata... 😊 Aur Kabhi Sote Uth Bhi Jahoon Toh Dobara Sojati Hn Aur Kabhi Nae... It Depends Upon My Mood... 😊😊

Hmm so Uday In London.. Yesss As Manyata Thinks... And Where I Uday Currenntly He Had Hide It From Manyata... So Basically Uday Is Not In London... . Plzz usse jaldi India le aao.. I want Some ManVeer Moments 😉 WIlll Try ... 😊
Haye... second honeymoon.. *drooling* kab ayega ye 😳 Abhi Nae Ayega... Halka Sa Romance Hai Is Story Main Lakin Asa Nae Hai Keh Bache Na Parh Sakhain... 😛😛 Aur Sis Where Is Dimple... And Do Tell Her That I'M Missing Her Lots...

Aww Manyata tensed about exam... Hope she does well... aur waise bhi Uday ne usse motivate to kar hi diya hai... I'm sure she'll do well 😉 Motivate Yeahhh... But Lets See What Happens Next... 😛😛

BTW sis aapka paper kaisa hua..?? 😊 Welll Mine All Paper Went Good... 😊 But My Pakistan Studies Paper Went Rocking... 😊😃😆

Yipppeee Uday is coming back 😃 U Think So... 😛 But what is he planning?? Who was he talking to?? I want answers.. Really... 😛😛😛 And Uday Is Playing Something Evil...And To Whom he Had Talked Will Be Known To U In Next Update...😊😊

fast (U know na it means U have to update faster.. Mouhahahaha 😈) All in all I enjoyed it and loved it 😊 I Would Update It Soon Sis... And Thanks Alot For Ur Beautiful And Long Comment For A Short Part...😊😊

Originally posted by: ekra101

then where is uday😕

PREVIOUS= CHAPTER 2

Chapter NO # 3

Warnings And Love

In Moscow
In Uday's House
Uday Was Packing His Bag As In Next 3 Hours He Had To Flew For India.. As Uday Was Packing His Bag Up... So He Got A Call From Some Yudi (UD) ... And Seeing His Name Uday Smiled Evilly.. 😈 And Picked Up His Phone...

Uday: Say Yudi..
Yudi: UV Its Better That If U Don't Go India...
Uday (Shockingly): What...???? 😲

Uday (Now Angerly): Didn't I Tell U About Going To India.. 😡

Yudi: I Know UV U Would Be Angry And Surprised Aswell As At Very Last Moment I'm Stopping U...
Uday: Yes I'm Very Much Surprised And Angry At U...😡
Uday (After Thinking SomeThing In His Mind): Alright Meet Me As Soon As Possible...

Yudi: Alright I'm Just Coming...

In Mumbai, India
In Devgarh's Palace
In Living Hall
Manyata Came From Jaigarh Palace As Manyata Is Giving Her Exam In Devgarh Palace As Per Saying Of Rajmata Mrinleni Devi... So As She Saw Exam Paper Which Was Being Brought To Invilgilator So Manyata Thought Of Checking Her Mobile-Phone That If She Got A Misscall Or MSG From Uday... But No She Didn't Which Make Her Soul Upset... Then She Thought To Call Him ... As This Idea Clicked In Her Mind She Started To Work On... And Bell Ring Ring Ring Then It Was Disconnected... So Manyata Again Dialed Uday's Number But This Time Listening The Ring Mobile Was Switched Off Making Manyata More Upset And Her Eyes Was Filled With Tears In A Second.. 😭 Then Listening Invilgilator's Voice Manyata Quickly Wiped Her Tears And Started To Write Her Exam... But Her Mind Was Lost In Her Thoughts That Why Her Uday Didn't Call Nor MSGed Her And When She Manyata Called Her So Why Did He Cut It...

In Moscow
In Uday's House
Uday Was Having Meeting With Yudi Then Certain Call Disturb Him.. And Listening The Ringtone Uday Want To Disconnect It But His Mobile-Phone Was Flashing Manyata's Name So He Didn't DIsconnect It Nor Picked It Up... Then Again His Mobile-Phone Vibrated And Ringtone So This Made Uday Angry ... 😡 So He Disconnect It... Then Again But This Time Uday Switched Off His Phone So That Now He Won't Be Disturbed Any More... Then ...

Yudi: So UV Tell Me When R U Going To India Back..
Uday (Angerly): Not Now Yudi... 😡 Till This Work Doesn't Complete I Can't Think About It...😡

Yudi: But UV Bhabhi ...
Uday: Yudi Leave Her... If I Won't Go Now So She Might Be Very Angry At Me.. But If I Go Leaving My Work For Which I Came Here So I Would Have To Suffer From Great Loss And U Know Yuvraaj UdayVeer Singh Doesn't Likes To Come Second.. He Doesn't Likes To Be Defeated... So Yudi Till My Work Doesn't Completes I Won't Go Back.. And If It Takes Days Weeks Or Months Thats Okayyy...

(Saying This Uday Was About To Go To His Room That Uday To Yudi)

Uday: Yudi Bring Mr. Sharma And Mr. Khanna To Me As Soon As Possible... And Do Tell Them To Bring Their Explanation Letters Alongwith Their Appologies Letter.. And Without Their Applogies Letter I Don't Want To See Their Faces...

Yudi: Alright I Would Inform Them... But UV Do Tell Me Will U Give Them Another Chance...

Uday: Yudi Just Get It Straight That I Never Gives Second Chances To AnyOne Who Might It Be... If My Princess Do Something Wrong And Hide It From Me And Lies To Me So She Will Too Have To Face My Anger.. And If Its Much Needed For Second Chance For Trusting Her Then She Too Have To Work Hard For It...

Yudi (Interuppting): But UV She Is Ur Love...
Uday: Not Love Yudi But She Is My Life... And She Knows Very Well About It That If She Is My Princess My Life My Happiness My Love So How Many Lies She Speaks And How Much Wrong Things She Do And Intends To Do So Like Others She Too Have To Face My Angerness...

Yudi (Smilingly): How Strange It Is...😊

(Saying This Yudi Went Out Of Uday's House To Accomplish His Work... And Uday Thought...)

Uday: I Know Its Very Much Strange But Yudi I'm Just Like This... And If My Princess Lies To Me Just A Very Little So She Had To Face My Anger As I Completely Trust My Princess... Then If She Tries To Break It Then She Would See An Angered Uday...

(Saying This Uday Headed Back To His Room.. Opened His Laptop And Google Some Thing... Then He Remebered That Today Not Today Infact Right Now His Princess Was Giving Her Exam And For That Exam She Called Him Thrice Time And He Disconnected It... So Remebering It Took Manyata's Photo Frame In His Hand.. And Lovingly...)

Uday: I'm Really Sorry Princess That Today Is A Very Big Day For U Because U R Appearing In A Very Important Exam Just For Me..😊 For Doing It Greatly U Needed My Good Luck Wish And I Didn't... I'm Sorry For It... But Don't Worry I As Soon As I Came Back So For Sure I Will Truly Heal Ur Pain Angerness... 😊😃

(Saying This Uday Kissed Manyata's Photo Frame And Headed Back To His Work..)

In Mumbai, India
In Devgarh's Palace
In Living Hall
As Soon As Manyata Wrote Her Exam And Finished It She Ran To Her Room Having Her Eyes Full Of Tears.. And Seeing This Act Of Manyata DS Was Surprised That What Happened Suddenly That Forced Manyata To Ran Without Telling AnyOne That How She Had Done Her Paper... And Unnati Was Coming To Hall That She Had Seen Manyata Running Towards Her Room That Made Her Surprised Aswell And Asked DS Related To It...

Unnati (To DS): DS What Happened To Manyata That She Ran Towards Her Room.. Wasn't Her Paper Was Good As She Thought...
DS: Don't Know Beta... Before We Could Ask About Her Exam She Ran To Her Room... I Think There Is A Problem...

Unnati: If It Is.. Then Don't Worry I Would Ask From Manyata...😊

DS (Placing Her Hand On Unnati's Head): Okayy Beta...

(Saying This DS Headed Towards Her Room And Unnati Towards Manyata's Room)

In Manyata's Room
Manyata Was Lost In Deep Thoughts And Her Eyes Were Crying... 😭 And Unnati Saw It From Door.. Sooo...

Unnati (Thoughts): Seems Like Dada And Manyata Had Some Fight...

(After Thinking This Unnati Went To Manyata And Placed Her Hand On Manyata's Shoulder Which Brought Manyata To Reality And Before She Could Wipe Her Tears That Unnati Give Handkerchief To Manyata Which Shocked Manyata.. And Before Manyata Could Say...)

Unnati: Manyata Don't Cry It Happens... If Today Ur Exam Wasn't Good That U Expected So Don't Worry It Happens Sometimes... Manyata Leave Exam Just Tell Me Did U Phoned Dada..
Manyata: Unnati I...

Unnati (Interruptingly): Ohhh... How Could I Forget U Can't Phoned Dada As Ur Exam Wasn't Good... And If U Speak To Dada U Can't Lie... By Speaking To U Dada Would Understand That Some Problem Or Ur Exam Wouldn't Go Good As U Thought... So U Will Never Tell Dada About It Because U Don't Want To Hurt Him... Right..

Manyata: True Unnati That I Can't Hurt Ur Dada... But Ur Dada Shouldn't Hurt Me Too...😭

(Saying This Manyata Eyes Again Filled With Tears... And..)

Unnati (Thought): So What I Thought All Was True...

Unnati (To Manyata): Manyata U Know Na Dada Can't Never Hurt U... Even He Can't Never Ever Imagine To Hurt U Then How Could U Say This...
Manyata (Wiping Her Tears): True... But Unnati Uday Did... From Past Many Days Uday Had Left Me... And When I Asked Him About His Return So He Simply Says That Soon... And Now Before Doing My Exam I Told Uday That If He Didn't Call Me Or MSGed Me So I Would Call Him To Listen Good Luck And All The Best From Him... But When Called Him He Disconnect The Call And Then Switched It Off...

(Listening Manyata Unnati Laughed... 😆 And Seeing Unnati Laughs Manyata Went Near To Window And Speaks Loudly That Unnati Can Hear It...)

Manyata: Dost Dost Na Raha...😭

(Listening More Unnati Laughs More... Then After Controlling Her Laughness Unnati Went To Manyata To Console Her... By...)

Unnati: Wrong... U Know Why Wrong... Because Mannu (Unnati Sometimes Called Manyata Mannu When Manyata Behaves Like A Small Child) U R Wrong Here... I'm Was Is And Will Always Be Ur Friend..
Manyata: Really But Then Why U Laughed On Me...

Unnati: Who Told That I Laughed On U.. I Laughed On Ur Cute Antics... That In Dada's Case U Forgot Ur Identity And Behaves Like A Small Child Who Was Being Ignored And Avoided ...Mannu If Dada Didn't Called U Or He Didn't Talked To U So Mannu There Is No Point For Being Upset... I'm Sure Dada Was Doing An Important Work...

Manyata (Interruptingly): Important Work..??? Who Became More Important Than Me... Now U Watched Unnati If Ur Dada Phoned Me I Won't Talk To Him... Infact I Would Do The Same As He Did It With Me...😡

(Listening This Unnati Smiled... 😊 Then Unnati Hugged Manyata And Lovingly...)

Unnati: Manyata I'm So Lucky That U R My Bhabhi Sa..😃

Manyata: And I'm Lucky Aswell Of Having U As My Sister-In-Law And My Best Buddy...😃

(Seeing And Listening Two Best Friends Convo Jay Was Having Tears In Her Eyes... And Was About To Go From There That Vijay Had Seen It So He Followed Her To Her Room...)

In Jay's Room
Coming From Manyata's Room Jay Was Crying... 😭 And Then She Felt Somebody Placed His Hand On Jay's Shoulder.. So Without Looking At The Person Jay Hugged ... And...

Jay: Vijay Bhai Why Me.. Why Me... Why Unwantingly I Become My Jiji's Pain...

(As Vijay Listened It So Vijay Broke The Hug And Wiped Jay's Tears... And...)

Vijay: No Jay Bhai U R Thinking Wrong.. I Know In Past All Was Bad Infact It Was Worst Then Anything Esle...

Chapter Ends

NEXT= CHAPTER 4

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Amazing update Thank You... 😊😊

very well written Thank You... 😊😊😊