MaNan FF:~ Dil Dhadhakne Do~ upd pg 16. - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Loving it!!

My favourite was Nandini's out burst! Specially with Aliya..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
heyyy...when will u update? cant wait more dea...desperately waiting for ur update...
plssa update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
i just read all the parts in one go
must tell it was amazing and superb
cabir dhurv amazed me as they were understanding nandini like anything
wanted to get a bit sense to mukti and manik but they r also someway r8 in there part as in if ur parents will give importance to someelse other than u wht it fells i know ...
ny-sy shd make them understand that it was not nandini's fault as she didn't said to pamper her and to protect her they themselves did it as they fell respon towards her
leave it thas the story

but again telling very nice
loved the title
shocked to see sanaya (one ff came across of manan and sanya in it but loving her part)

plzzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Update soon!

Have read all the parts in a go!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
I read it in an one
I must say it is super.
Eagerly waiting for next..
Plz post soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Hey ur ff is damm interesting n awsum keep writing like this only and update next part ASAP and if possible pls pm me about it i just loved ur ff..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
guys..pls continue ..asap
i am waiting 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
PART: 11

While leaving rehearsal hall, cabir messages navya to come and meet him in library.

Meanwhile, soha also leaves as she has some work in library.

Manik: guys.. what was that??

Mukti: bhai.. that nandini... what was she saying??

Aliya: ohh common, mukti she always does that with u and manik...

Manik: what do u mean aliya?

Aliya: ohh please manik dont u know, she always wanted to break FAB5, and see she did it today!!

Mukti: but how can u be so sure about this aliya?

Aliya: why not mukti.. see today cabir and druv took her side, she alwaz knew i wont ever go against u and manik.. she alwaz targeted cabir and druv..

Manik: i dont think u r right aliya.. she even said that u have been manipulating me and mukti since the age of 10 to hate her.. is it true??

Aliya gets shocked listening to manik!!

Mukti: aliya bolo.. what is bhai asking??? is it true...

Aliya: wo.. wo... i.. i.. i din.. i dint do anything like that...

Manik: then why are you getting so nervous and worked up aliya...????

And starts moving towards her...

Aliya sees this and starts moving back, as she know once manik gets angry he can cross all limits...

Aliya stays mum..

Manik(Shouts): tell me aliya... Speak up dammit!!

Aliya(Shouts): yes... I made u two hate her, as i hated the attention she got fron everyone... just bcoz i dont have parents, and she has.. even if u people used to say that u people alwaz do only those things which makes nandini happy i thought to make it as like she is over- shadowing u both... thats y i made u hate her so that she too feels the pain that i went through whenever i used to see her enjoying with her parents and yours too.. while your parents never bothered to look up to me for anything. i liked u manik... but they alwaz treated nandini as the only one meant for u.. i was jealous.. (THAP)

Manik couldnt listen more.. after listsneing aliya he just couldnt control himself and slapped her..

Manik: why? why dammit? She never hurt you intentionally.. and u.. how dare u... she was our friend.. our princess... little doll.. even if we sometime used to feel bad to not able to do what we want but we were still happy with our little doll.. u spoiled it all...

he again raised his hand to slap her... but was stopped by mukti...

Mukti: bhai.. dont... leave it.. she doesnt deserve it... she used us to fulfill her selfish needs.. in her jealousy she forgot that she is kinda spoiling a beautiful relationship.. i dont want u make your hand dirty by touching her.. leave it bhai.. lets go.. we need to clarify everything with nandini

Manik: u r right!! but will nandini talk to us after everything we said and did to her.. ??

Mukti: lets try bhai.. lets try...

Manik- Mukti leave.. leaving aliya crying behind...

Library:

Navya: Haan cabir.. tumne hume yahan kyu bulaya?

Cabir: i have a plan... to make nandini manik "MANAN".

Navya: MANAN??

Cabir: see i will tell u that nandu loves manik..

Navya: i know that.. but what can we do when manik himself hates nandini so much!!

Cabir: no he doesnt... if i know manik.. then right now he would have come to know about aliya and searching for nandini to ask for forgivness..

Navya: how can u say that??

Cabir: coz i saw his face when nandu was telling aboutaliya manipulating manik mukti to hate nandu... he wont sit quite until n unless he finds out the truth..

Navya: okayy... so what are we gonna do??

Cabir: we need to pretend as we love each other and take nandu's and manik's help to make FAb5 and sparklings agree

Navya: haan i guess this will be a perfect plan. we can also come to know if nandu and manik have feelings for one another.

Cabir: exactly madhubala...

Navya: but cabir, what about soha...

Cabir: even i am tensed about that only.. but dont worry we will handle.

navya: yes, we will not give manik enough time to spend with soha!!

Someone listens their talks...

Someone: ohh cabir, u r panning this.. dont worry, even if u try to take manik away, i will never let it happen.

That someone comes out from behind the shelves.. And its none other than SOHA..

Soha: sorry cabir, but jab SOHA ek cheez pasand kar leti hai, toh wo usey apna bana ke hi reheti hai.. tum mujhse manik ko bachana chahte ho na.. wo bhi kiske liye.. nandini ke liye.. well Soha ye kabhi hone nahi degi cabir.. kabhi nahi!!

Soha also leaves, without seeing druv who was standing behind her, and listening to her self talks...

Druv: shitt.. soha ne cabir ka plan sun lia, mujhe usey abhi batana hoga!!

Druv immediately calls cabir, and tells him about soha...

Cabir: haan druv bol...

Druv: Cabir, soha ne tera and navya ka lan sun lia!!

Cabir: ohh freak.. but kaise??

Druv: wo tere peeche wale shelf ke side pe khadi thi...

Cabir: thanks dude.. main abhi jaa ke plan start karta hun isse pehele ki wo koi plan banaye...

Druv: all the best dude!!

Cabir immediately msgs navya about the recent happening and asks her to start the plan immediately...


Manik- mukti who was searching for nandu saw cabir, and called him..

Manik: canirr!!

Cabir turns and sees manik and mukti standing infront of him... He immediately goes to him, and hugs him... Without giving him any chance to speak, he starts saying

Cabir: manik.. manik.. manik.. i am so happy... i am in love dude... i love navya... and even she admitted she loves me!!

Manik - mukti are shocked listening to cabir..

Manik-Mukti: WHAT??

Cabir: haan, i always knew there is something special that i feel for navya.. and today i confessed my feelings to her and she accepted..

Manik: wow.. congrats dude!!

Mukti: saale!! pehele nahi bata sakta tha ki tu navya ko like karta hai.. humse kyu chupaya?

Cabir: arey chupaya kahan.. sabse pehele tum dono ko hi bata raha hun!! but mujhe manik teri help chahiye..

Manik: anything... bol na kya help chahiye..

Cabir: wo actually.. abhi ke liye sirf tum dono and nandu ko pata hai as navya ne usey bataya... time and again we will need ur and nandu's help to keep our relationship secret...

Manik(confused): but tu secret rakhna kyu chahta hai??

Cabir: wo jab tak ye FAB5 & SPARKLINGS ke issues khatam nahi ho jaate we have decided to keep it a secret...

Manik: okay.. as u say..

Cabir: mukti tu bhi...

Mukti: theek hai yaar, main bhi kisi ko nahi bataungi...

Cabir: and manik for me please try to behave cordially with nandini... ab wo sirf meri friend hi nahi.. mri gf ki sis bhi hai..

Manik(sadly): yaar, even i am searching her only.. hume pata chal gaya aliya ne kaise manipulate kia mujhe and mukti ko so that we started hating nandini.. just want to apologoise..

Mukti(sadly): haan cabir.. humne princi-doll ke saath bilkul bhi achcha behave nahi kiya all these years.. she must be so hurt na!!

Cabir is astonished listening "princi-doll" from mukti.. as mukti alwaz used to callnandini like that since childhood, but then stopped calling her like that since she started hating her..

Cabir: leave it for now guys.. ek baar ye fest and all ho jaaye... then peacefully tumlog usse baat kar lena..

Manik: i guess u r right!! chal ghar chalte hai..

Saying this they leave..

Meanwhile with nandini...

Nandini was standingon the staircase behind the music block, when navya came there and hugs her from behind..

Navya: nandu i am so happy...

Nandu: really? kyu.. cabir ne propose kar dia kya??

Navya(shocked): tujhe kaise pata chala?

Nandu: matlab.. he really proposed u!! yayyy.. i am so happy... i alwaz knew he had some feelimgs for u... i was waiting ti take the first step..

Navya(blushes): aisa kuch nahi nandu...

Nandu: OMG!! u r blushing navya???

Navya turns scarlett red...

Navya: but nandu, abhi ke liye hum ye baat sab se secret rakhna chahte hai... yehi mera and cabir ka decision hai!!

Nandu: but kyu navi??

Navya: wo isiliye kyuki hum chahte hai ye baat hum sab ko tabhi bataye jab FAB5 and hamari team ke beech saari problems solve ho jaayen!!

Nandu(sighs): okayy... i wish wo din jaldi aaye!!

Navya(ST): hum bhi yahi chahte hai nandu, ki wo din jaldi aaye, i want to see you happy again... and iknow its possible only u will be with your manik...

Navya- nandu also leaves for home...

Meanwhile soha was searching for manik everywhere in college couldnt find him, and finally decide to call him...

Soha: hello baby.. kahan ho tum?? main kab se tumhe college mei dhundh rahi hun!!

Manik: sorry soha... wo main ghar jaa raha hun.. i m not in right frame of mind.. i will talk to u tomorrow!!

Soha: okayy baby.. take care...

Manik cuts the call...

SOha(ST): what the heck... mera call cut kar dia.. koi baat nahi.. main kal tumse baat karungi manik.. and thta cabir i wont leave him...

Precap:

Kirloskers and Malhotras success party...

New Entry.

Jealous Manik



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Posted: 10 years ago
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New Entry:


Madhyam Singhania (Maddy): A cool, rich, handsome, well built, cute guy. He is the son of Purvi's best friend who was a single mother and died 6 years leaving maddy to be with purvi. Maddy as nandu used to call him, and considered him as her best friend. Manik never used to like Maddy as alwaz he used to think that Maddy will snatch his princess from her. Maddy already loves a girl Sanjana.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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yipppeee...finally ur updated...tnqu tnqu tnqu sooo soo sooo muccchhh for such a lovely n wonderful update...u penned it soo well dea...i jus loved it...the way u write is jus outstanding...must say that u blessed with ur writing skill...hats off 2 u...m totally in love with ur ff...ur story is jus mindblowing...i jus cant describe it in words...m totally speechless...while reading only one word came from my mouth is jus WOW...UR such an amazing writer...u knw wot u really rocked it..
plsss continue soon...n try to update early as possible...cant wait sooo long
plsss update ASAP...desperately waiting for next update
keep writing...TC

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