MaNan FF:~ Dil Dhadhakne Do~ upd pg 16. - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
nice update
finally manan become friends👏
plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Amazing update...
Finally manan friends bann gae!!
I hope dey realise der feelings for each other soon...
Waiting for jealous manik...
Update soon plss...cnt wait so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Wohooo awesome update finally Manan ki dosti hugai.. Oh ab yeh soha kya drama kregi. Dressed selection was superb..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Hey girl its superb yaar...
Hey u should post this on kaisi yeh yaariaan forums... you will get many likes and comment on this...
Plz cont on that na..

LOVE,
AAROHI..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Hey its soo damn osum...I was w8ng eagerly 2 read but y dint u show maddy's entry..pls cont soon..I juz cnt w8 2 c jealous manik...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarohi_angel98

Hey girl its superb yaar...
Hey u should post this on kaisi yeh yaariaan forums... you will get many likes and comment on this...
Plz cont on that na..

LOVE,
AAROHI..



Where's yaariyaan forum?? the link????? 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Dear...pls continue ..wwanna read part 13...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: akki_taarey




Where's yaariyaan forum?? the link?????😕


Dear u have exceeded the no of pms.. plz delete some..
AND Link for kaisi yeh yaariaan forums - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_topics.asp?FID=901
And if u need any help then u can pm me..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part: 13
It was time for the most awaited moment.. FAB 5 & "SPARKLINGS were ready to welcome the guest of honour.

Nandini: guys.. I hope ye decor and everythinh dad and sweetheart ko pasand aaye

Manik: ofcpurse aayega nandu.. Afrerall humne itni hardwork kari hai

Navya: right.. Waise bhi hum sab kuch kaam kare aur wo dad n uncle ko pasand naa aaye aisa kaise ho sakta hai?

Cabir: right madhubala.. Waise bhi nandini.. Tum tension kyu leti ho..? Hum sab hai na!!

Sanaya: waise i still cant believe nandu and manik ki friendship ho gayi hai

Abhimanyu: and ofcourse u girls are looking mind blowing.. And what a surprise mukti.. U r looking damn beautiful.

Mukti blushes...


Meanwhile, at Malhotra Mansion...

Suyyash: nika lets go.. We are getting late..

Nyonika: haan haan... Aa gayi... Chaliye...

They leave... But without knowing that they are being followed by someone..



FLASHBACK:

Soha was angry at manik and was leavibg college, when she heard karan talkinh to nandu on phone...

Karan: haan nandu, main pahuch jaunga, tumhare farm house...

Nandini:...

Karan: wow... Thats great news.. Finally tumhari and manik and mukti ki saari miayndersta dings clear ho gayi... I am so happy ki tum sab fir se friwnds ban gaye ho..

Nandini:...

Karan: haan baba... I will come with arjun uncle and aunty.. Naah.. I dont know na manik's parents.. Yup will meet them there...

Nandini: ...

Karan: dont worry... Chalo abhi bye.. See u in the evening..

Karan leaves from there...


Soha: ohh tph this is the reason manik mujhe avoid kar raha hai, but dont worry manik i am not going to leave u so easily.. Mujhe kisi bhi tareeke se nandini ke farm house pahuchna hoga... But how? Hmm.. I knw... How.. By following manik's parents.. Manik darling i am coming...


FLASHBACK ENDS:


Malhotras and Kirloskers reach farm house at the same time, they are stunned seeing the decor...

Suyyash: wow arjun... Bachon ne kya decoration ki hai..

Arjun: haan.. Even i am seeeing that only..

Purvi: i never knew nandu is able to handle all this alone...

Nyonika: arey alone kaise?? Manik mukti navya and unke saare friends bhi toh hai...

Arjun: what?? Manik bhi hai yahan??

Suyyash: haan he is here only.. Wo toh morning mei hi princess ki help karne ke liye yahan aa gaya tha..

Purvi: so what are we waiting dor.. Lets go inside.. Guests might be coming any moment..

Nyonika: yeah lets go...

They all go inside...

Seeing parents... Manan mukti nanya all run to hug their parents...

Nandu: dad... Congratulations..
Then she hugs.. Suyyash..

Congrats sweetheart..

Arjun suyyash: thank u princess...

Manik: dad... Uncle.. Hows The decor...??

Suyyash: beautiful... So proud of you kids..

Gang: thank u...


Arjun: okayy so u kids go and enjoy.. We will handle the guests..
Navya: but dad.. Abhi time hai.. U guys first take refreshments.. Specially the crushes.. Nandu made them...

Nyonika: really? Thats amazing baby.. Princess ab toh tum jaldi hamare ghar aa jao.. I wanna taste ur handmade dishes regularly..

All are confused listwning to nyonika except.. Arjun purvi manik mukti and suyyash..

Nandu: i dint get u jannat..

Nyonika: i mean u havent come home since so long..

Nandu: ohh like that.. Okayy i will come soon..

Then they see guests who start arriving..

Suyyash: u guys enjoy.. We see the guests now..

Saying this, suyyash nyonika arjun and purvi mives to welcome the guests..

It was quitw some time that part has started, yet the gang was sitting and getting bored...

Navya: nandu, i think most of guesta have come... Lets go and cut the cake now..

Nandu: okayy.. U guys go and call dad and sweetheart in the centre.. I will come with the cake..

Mukti: princi doll i will help u...

Nandu: okayy..

Saying this nandu and mukti left to get the cake.. And rest called the parents in the centre..

Arjun: arey hua kya.. Batao bhi..

Navya: dad.. Little patience please...

Suyyash.. Arey arjun.. Let the kids do what they want..

Just then nandu and mukti comes with the cake..

Purvi: ohh so this was the surprise??

Mukti: yes aunty... U knw princi doll specially ordered thia cake for dad and uncle.. See its their favourite..

Harshad: okayy, so what are we waiting for.. Uncles please cut the cake..

Cabir: haan i canr control anymore.. Bahot wait kar lia..

Arjun and suyyash were about to cut the cake when lights went off..

BACKGROUND VOICE: Itna bada celebration, such a good occasion aur wo bhi mere bina.. Not fair.. Darling ne saari party arrange bhi kar li and mujhe invitw bhi nahi kia.. I am so hurt..

Juat then the lights turns onn..

Everyone is surprised seeing the one standing on the top stairs..

Nandini: maddyy...

Maddy comes downstairs.. Nandu runs and hugs him...


Manik is feeling uncomfortable seeing this..

Maddy hugs nandu..

Nandu breaks the hug.. And starts hitting him...

Nandu: idiot.. Duffer.. Pehele bata nahi sakte the aa rahe ho!!

Maddy: agar bata deta tph tumhe surprise kaise deta darling.. Waise uncle aunty ko toh pata hai..

Nandu: what??

Then she turn goes to arjun..

Nandu: dad, aapne bhi nahi bataya mujhe.. Saying this she innocently pouts..

Arjun: sorry princess, but beta maddy came in the morning obly after u left home, he wanted to give all of us surprise, but when i was about to call u he forbid me.. Saying he wants to see ur reaction..

Nandu: okayy.. I will forgiv u both only this time okayy??

Mamddy and arjun looks at each other.. And nods..

Maddy-Arjun: okayyy..
Then both side hugs nandu..

Arjun then turns towards the gang.. And saya..

Arjun: u all know him right.. He is Madhyam Singhania.. a.k.a maddy.. Our son..

Maddy: uncle i know them.. And the turns towards them..

Maddy: heyy guys.. Thanks so much for keeping my arrival surprise..

Manik and nandini gets shocked listening this..

Nandu: it means u all knw..

Mukti: yes princi doll.. When u n bhai were in store room that time only he cane and asked us to keep it secret..

Navya: arey.. Baaki ki baatein baad mei hongi chalo ab cake cut karte hain


Finally arjun and suyyash cuts the cake..


Meanwhile, soha also reaches the farm house.. And fumes seeing a party going on there..

Soha: manik baby.. Here i am..


The party is going on full swing.. When the dj announce for pwople to come on the dance floor..

Suyyash-nyonika, arjun-purvi, cabir-navya, harshad-sanaya, abhi-mukti, all leave for dance floor..


Druv, maddy, nandini, aliya and manik were standing..

Just then..

Maddy forwarding his one hand in front of nandini.. Asks..

Maddy: may i have the pleasure to dance with my darling..??

Nandini laughs.. And gives her hand.. And says..

Nandu: sure..

Maddy and nandu leaves for dance floor.. Seeing this manik gets jealous.. Seeing nandini freely laughing and dancing with maddy..

Meanwhile some girl comes and asks druv for dance, so he also leaves.. Leaving manik and aliya..

Aliya: manik will u dance with me..??

Manik(ST): Yes... Now i will see nandu how u dont get affected..

Manik: sure aliya, lets go!!

Saying this.. Manik takes aliya to the dance floor..

Nandu notices them.. And smiles at Manik..

Manik(ST) : nandu mujhe dekh ke smile kyu kar rahi hai?? Is she not getting affected.?

Manik after some time excuses himself and goes towards bar..

Aliya also leaves...


After sometime the dance gets over.. And the gang joins manik..

Meanwhile, soha after so much hard work is able to fool the guards to enter the FM.

Aoha: finally.. Huh... These stupid guards.. But ur wait is over manik baby.. I am hwre..



The gang was busy talking.. Nandu and maddy were busy laughing when nandu remembered karan..

Nandu: guys where is karan bhai.. Is he not here yet...

Navya: wo nandu.. Karan called usko kuch emergency aa gaya.. And he had to leave for banglore in the evening.. He wanted to talk to u. But i only said to talk to u after he gets free from work..

Nandu: okay.. I will talk to him later..

Maddy: waise ye karan kaun hai..

Nandu then tells him about karan and soha. She was about to say more about them..

Just then manik interuppted..

Manik: soha???

Nandu was about to answer when a voice came from behind her..

Soha: hey manik baby...

The gang turns towards her and gets shocked seeing her there..

Befoee manik could say anything.. Soha comes and hugs him and kisses him on his cheeks...

Soha: i missed u so much baby.. Its been two days i dint see u.. U know now even i am membwr of FAB5 but u guys dont tell me anything

Nandini gets vwry angry seeing soha in the party..

Nandini: excuse me.. Miss soha dongly.. Its my party.. I dont remember inviting u.. How dare u come to my party uninvited...?

Soha: ohh come on nandini... I am manik's gf.. And a member of FAB 5, so obv manik invited me thats y i am here na..

Saying this she pleasingly looks at manik..

While other are shocking looking at manik..

Manik looks at soha, and then at nandini.. Who is asking her to deny soha thru her expressions..

Manik: umm... Wo.. I dint call u soha..

Before manik says anything else.. Nandu interrupts hum
.


Nandu: see soha.. Mani himself said that he dint invite u.. Now u will u urself leave, or should i call the guards.. To help u go out..

Manik: but nandu, let her be here na.. I mean theek hai.. None of us invitwd her.. But now she is here na.. We cant send her like that..

Soha is smirking at nandu listening to manik..

Nandu: but...

Manik: no nandu.. Its final.. Let her be here..

Saying this, he puts a hand in soha's waist..

Nandu sees this and gets more angry...

Nandu: okayy... Mr. Manik Malhotra.. U can keep ur gf here.. I am leaving.. Lets go maddy..

Saying this she holds madddy's hand and leaves from there..


WITH NANDU AND MADDY:

Maddy: woah!! Ye kya tha nandu...??

Nandu: that soha... She is such a...

And tgen she tells hum everything about soha..

Maddy: ohh godd.. Why dint u tell manik about her then?

Nandu: main kaise batati.. Today only we again became friends.. And i dint even knew ki she is his gf.. And a FAB 5 member.. I mean how can that happen..

Maddy: leave it yaar.. We will handle it tomorrow.. Lets not spoil out mood for today..

Nandu: hmmm...


Rest of the larty ends smoothly with nandini avoiding any talks with manik.






Precap:

Manik: sorry soha, u cant be a part of FAB 5 anymore..


Nandu: i knew itt.. Soha is upto something bad..





Manik: y u always be with that maddy nandu...?? I am ur best feiend.. And yet u dont get time to talk to me??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww its sooo awesmeee!!! U knoe i eagerly wait fr ur updates yaaar but u update so vry late.. Nt fair...try updating jldi jldi plzz... N cming to d update ..its waz just fab !!! Jelous manik was treat to read n ofcourse how can i frget ur title dil dhadhakne do izzz so so so coool dat without reading ur stry i fell in love with it just by d name yaar!!! Veryyy nyc n gan plzzz end ds soha part in d nxt update n nomore misundrstandngs.. .sepration or crius fite btween manan plzzz!!! If possble show manik falling fr nandu!!! Great job !!! Keeep writing n update nxt part sooon plzz hosake to tmrw or sunday plz plz!!! N thnk u!! :):):):)

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