Journey of Abhilasha---A LRL FF - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
A big sorry for late commenting

But it was very nice
Specially dairy part
U know partial towards raj naina
Plzzz do cont soon

Chandni
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey,
I won't be able to upload as I am in vacation out of state.
Hope you all understand.
Misha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RNgirl

Hey,

I won't be able to upload as I am in vacation out of state.
Hope you all understand.
Misha


But will you continue this ff after your vacation? Pleaseee???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RNlove4life


But will you continue this ff after your vacation? Pleaseee???


I retun from vacation tomorrow. I will update day after
misha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RNgirl


I retun from vacation tomorrow. I will update day after
misha


thats lovely..waiting for it!!!!!!!!
thank you so much😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Recap: Person: Bhala hamara hota hui, tum aakali kaisa ho Shakti ho. (How can you be alone when I am here?" No one recognized the person except Asha. She threw her arms around the person and hugged them tight, leaving everyone one on the table questioning the person's identity.

Chapter 3

The person looked deep into Asha's and held her shoulder.

Person: maine tume bohat miss kya Asha, lekein tum yaha kaya kar rahi ho? (I missed you a lot Asha but what are you doing here?)

Asha: Main yeha ghar ghar khelne aaye hu. Di, yea military academy so of course main yaha mere training lehne yaaye hu. Lekuin aap yaha kaya kar yahi hai? Aap to Shimla chali gaye thi na? ( I am here to play. Sister this is a military academy so of course I'm here to get my training. But what are you doing here? You had gone to shilma right?)

Person: Actually

Vijay: Oay kudhya koi huma to batai kay yaha ho kaya raha hai. (O girls, can someone please tell us what is going in here)

Asha side hugs the person and says: Yeh meri payye si di hai, Priyanka. Hum orphanage hum saath bada huia hai. And di there are my friends Vijay, Ridhima, Abhijeet, Shaad, and Prerna. (This is my sweet sister Priyanka. We grew up in the Orphanage together. And sister these are my friends Vijay, Ridhima, Abhijeet, Shaad, and Prerna). Priyanka is about to say something but an orderly interrupts her

Ordearly: Lt. Priyanka, Brig. Chauhan nai aapko meeting room main buliya hai. (Lt. Priyanka, Brig. Chauhan is calling you to the meeting room.)

Priyanka: Thik hai tum jaao main aati ho. The orderly nodded and left the mess and Priyanka turned to the cadets: Thik hai cadets, main aap logo se baad main milti hu. (OK cadets I will catch you all later.) Priyanka left the mess.

Brig. Chauhan looked around the room and smiled at the new staff: Welcome everyone. Yeh ek naya saal hai with new cadets aur kuch naye faculty members. (Welcome everyone, this is a new year with cadets and some new faculty members.) As if on cue, the door opens and Priyanka enters. She looks apologetically at every one.

Brig Chauhan: So nice of you to join us Lt. Malik. Priyanka looked at her superior and gave a small apologetic smile: Sorry sir. Main kuch 1st year cadets say baath kar rai thi issi liya...(Sorry sir. I was just getting to know some 1st year cadets) Before Priyanka could go on with her with her explanation, Brig. Chauhan held up his hand to stop her: Relax Lt. It's perfectly fine, just take a seat. Nodding her head, Priyanka sat down next to a very handsome guy.

Brig. Chauhan: So Lt. aaj aapka pehala din hai, so let me introduce you to the rest of the faculty. (Today is your 1st day) Abhi pointed at the guy sitting next to Priyanka: Yeh hai Lt. Raghuvendra Rai Chauhan KMA ki drill commander, aur yeh hai Major Amadeep Huda Strategy and communication teacher. (This is Lt. Raghuvendra Rai Chauhan the drill commander of KMA and this is Major Amardeep Huda, the stratigy and communation teacher.) Abhimaynu's eyes held sadness and pride as he introduced the two officers but it was gone as soon as it came. Abhi pointed to the other side of the table and continued the introduction: Yeh hai Colonel Dr. Sahani the doctor of KMA and that is Subedar Suri, the boy's hostel monitor aur mess ki incharge incharge aur yeh hai Subedar Major Lolita Sen, girl's hostel monitor. (This is Dr. Shalini the doctor of KMA and that is Subedar Suri, boy's hostel monitor and the incharge of the mess and this is Subedar Major Lolita Sen the girls hostel monitor.)

Suri ji smiled warmly at Priyanka: Welcome to KMA hai priyanka ji. Agar app ko kuch chaiya hoga to bejikhak mera paas aa sakte ha. (If you need anything, you can come to me without any hesitation.)

Shalini: Haa ji. Aab hum hi aap ki parivaar hai so no need to feel uncomfortable. (Yes, now we are your family so no need to feel uncomfortable.) Piryanka smiled at the warm faces inside the room, feeling of acceptance settling in her.

Huda: Waise app yaha kaya subject parana wali hai. Priyanka gave a smile to Huda: Ji Sir main Psychological Warfare paraungi. (Sir I will be teaching Psychological Warfare.) Huda nodded his head and looked towards Abhimanyu: Sir if you don't mind I will take a leave. I have to prepare for my lesson tomorrow.

Abhimanyu: Of course major. I think we have introduced everyone so I have no objection. As soon as Abhi said those words the door opened and entered an old man with a smirk on his face. Seeing the men Huda, Shalini, Suri ji, Lolita ji, and Abhi turned pale.

Person: I beg to differ Sir. I don't think I have been introduced yet.

Diary:

The moment I stepped off that cab I knew this was my destiny. I had to survive two years in this place to begin to accomplish my goal. Right then and there I promised myself I will not give up no matter how much difficulties I have to face. With a blank face I took the first step and then another towards my destiny and goal.

Hey Guys,

Sorry for the long wait but here is the next chapter. Sorry that it is so short but this is my first time writing something like this so please overlook it.

Meehek

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intrstng update
Loved a lot


Excited for next
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Very nice update
Keep it up
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Hey guys, what's up.
I have some bad news and some good news.
The bad news is that I am not getting enough support on this book. I mean, i am not doing this for a pat in the back or a compliment or anything like that, but I would like it If I get feedbacks, good or bad, so I can make the story even better.

Good news is that...
remember how I said I made it through state contest and will be represent our state in National competation. ..well the time is here. I am currently on a train riding to Washington DC. So wish me all the best.
I will return back on the 11th of July. I will try my best to upload tomorrow, but If I can't than I will have to post after returning. We have 4-5 all day conference to attend so i can't promise anything, but will try my best. Hope you understand.

Wish me luck
misha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Part 3 was superb
Do continue this story
Congratulations
Will wait till 11th July after that please update soon

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