Journey of Abhilasha---A LRL FF

Journey of Abhilasha

"A LRL FF.

Prologue

A young girl walks down a hospital corridor with her black hair bouncing up and down in her long pony tail. He mouth, curved into a big smile, and her big dark brown eyes shining with happiness. She stopped in front of room number 128, and opened the door. As she walks in the shine in her eyes decrease and her smile becomes smaller. A nurse is doing something near the heart machine and is blocking the girl from seeing whoever is laying on the bed. The girl opens her mouth to speak.

The girl: Nurse

Nurse: Ara aap agaye. (You came)

The girl: Ab yeah kaise hai? (How is she now?)

Nurse: Wise hi hai jaise kal thi. Koi improvement nahi hai. (She is how she was yesterday. There is no improvement)

The girl: Aap log hamesha negative kui soch te hai. Kal se better nai ha, to kal se aur serious bhi to nahi ha na. (Why do you all always think negative? She is not better than yesterday, but she is also not worse)

Nurse: Asha tum se hum mei so koi nahi jeet sakta. Who tumara haat mein ka hai. (Asha, none of us can win over you. What is in your hand?") The nurse pointed at something that Asha was holding.

Asha: nothing much just something for her.

The nurse: ok, to ab mein chalti hoon. Who so nahi rahi hai to tum un se baat kar sakti ho (Ok than I will leave. She is not sleeping so you can talk to her) the nurse left the room. Asha can now clearly see the woman sleeping on the small bed. She was around her mid-forties. Her skin pale with much wrinkles, and many needles poking through her skin, connected to various machines. Her big brown eyes wide open, yet they were black with no emotions. Anyone who walked in could conclude that she was long dead, except the heart machine that beeped proving that she is alive. It was a torture to Asha to see the woman she loved and admired the most in this condition, but she knew she had to be strong. She walked to the bed and sat on the stool next to it. She ran her hand through the woman's hair.

Asha: Kashi ho. Acchi hi hogi na, din bhar soti rahiti ho. Anyways, agar acchi nai ho bhi, to yeah khabar sun kar bohot acchi ho jhogi. (How are you? You must be fine, as you are always sleeping. Anyways, if you are not fine, that after this news you will be very fine.) Asha talks out a piece of paper from the envelope she was holding.

Asha: Listen to this
Congratulation, Ms. Abhilasha Singh.

Kanchanjunga Military Academy is very proud to announce that you have been accepted to this prestigious Military program. You are to report to Kanchanjunga Military Academy by June 1, 2015. If you are late than you will be replaced. Along with this letter is a handbook that has all your rules and expectations on it. The faculty and staff of Kanchanjunga Military Academy would like to advise you to read the book to familiarize yourself with the academy. Once again congratulations and we are looking forward to seeing you.

Sincerely,

Brigadier Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan

Brigadier Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan

By the time Asha finished reading the letter her face was glowing with happiness. She touched the woman's face.

Asha: aab hamari saari problems solve hoga. Aapki or papa ki khoi hui issat wapas aaigi, main wapas laungi. (Now all our problems will be solved. You and dad will get back your lost respect, I will give it back to you) Asha takes a deep, and tears fill her eyes.

Asha: 21 saal se mein yeah din ki intazar kar rahi thi. Hamasa soch thi thi ki kab aaiga who din jab mein who place jaa sakungi ja se yeah saari kahani suri hui, or aaj jab yeah din aaya to ek sapana lag raha hai. Aj se 24 saal pehala jo hua, woh aaj phir se ho raha hai. Aj phir ek ladki aapna aasli pechan chupakar KMA me admission la rahi hai. Phir ek ladki KMA mein kisi ki respect or honor wapas lana ja rahi rai. History is repeating itself, but is baar kuch different hai." (I have been waiting for this day for 21 days. I always used to think when I will be able to go to the place where this story started, and today when that day has come, it feels like a dream. What happened 24 years ago is happening again. Today, once again a girl is hiding her true identity to get an admission in KMA. A girl is, once again, going to KMA to prove someone's innocence and honor. History is repeating itself, but something is different this time.) The girl looks at the woman with warn eyes.

Asha: And that difference is that I have someone's support. Aap jab KMA mein pehli baar gaya tha To aapka saath koi nahi tha, kisi ko aap par yakeen nahi tha, aapka mom dad ko bhi nahi, phar main lucky hu ki aap meri saath hai, paas na sahi magar saath. Aapki support ka saath mein sab kuch kar sakti hoon, aap bas aapna haat meri sar par banai rakhna. (When you first went to KMA, you had no one by you, No one had faith in you, not even your own parents, but I am lucky to have you by me, even if you are far from me, you are with me. I can do anything with your support, just always keep your blessing with me.

Asha was about to say something else when a ward boy came in and told her that visiting hours were over. She half-heartily left the room and back out to the busy corridor. She left the building with a new ray of hope.

My note

A start of another story. Hope you liked it. I tried something different by writing in Hindi, but please forgive my mistakes as Hindi is not my first, or second, language. If you all think that I should not try Hindi than do tell me, plus I am not too sure about the title so if you have any suggestion than please leave it at the comment.

Lots of Love

Misha

interesting start
but plz yr story me se raj naina ko bahar mt karna i mean raj ko mar mat dena kyuki raj ki bina kuch acha nhi lagega
continue soon

One more thing Misha if possible plzz write in Hindi specially dailougues
Bcz Hindi me dailouges hone me jyada maza ata h and we can imagine better

Amazing concept please continue soon

Introduction to characters.

All of the LRL cadets are the same except that they are in higher ranks.

NONE OD THE KIDS HAVE EVER SEEN NAINA AND RAJVEER, BUT THEY HAVE HEARD ENOUGH FROM THEIR PARENTS.

MAIN CHARACTERS

Cadet Abhilasha Singh Ahluwalia (Shekhawat) ----Called Asha by friends and family. She is the daughter of Rajveer and Naina, though no one in KMA knows that. She came to KMA with a special mission, just like her mother. She looks a lot like her mother. She has a very high temper like her mother, but she is also patient, calm, and understanding like her father. She is a much focused girl. Because she grew up alone, she is very independent, and doesn't trust anyone easily. Though she has never met her aunts and uncles (Naina's friends) she trust them blindly, because her parents trusted them. She will find love in KMA.

Cadet Shaad Rajveer Ali Beig----Son of Pooja and Ali. He is a carbon copy of Pooja...Very hyper, and excited about everything, but he knows when to stop talking and listen to others. Though very loud, he is extremely shy and uncomfortable around females...just like his dad. If there is anything in the world he hates, than that thing is lies. He hate lies and all people that lie. He is every girl's dream man, but he doesn't want a relationship as he wants to focus on being a successful cadet and a successful officer and make his parents proud

Cadet Ridhima Sharma-----Daughter of Alekh and Neelu. Called Ridhi by friends and family. She is just like her father. She believes that one should full-fill all of their relationship whether it be relationship of friendship, parents, siblings. She is very quiet, but very caring. Just like with Alekh, she is very observant, and knows what is going in everyone's mind. Her only dream is to be an officer like her father, and his mentor...Capt. Rajveer. She loves Cadet Vijay Huda.

Cadet Vijay Huda-----Son of Huda and his wife Komal (Site note----No one knows how Huda fell for Komal, as she is complete opposite of Naina. She is soft, just like her name.) He has Huda's looks, but his attitude is like his mother. Calm, cool and collected are the words that describes Vijay. Though he has his mom's attitude, his ego is just as big as his father's. He has girls falling at his feet wherever he goes, but there is only one girl in his life, Ridhima Sharma.

Cadet Prerna----Daughter of Yudi and Shalini. She is very under confident like her dad. She loves her parents more than anything, and is sort of a nerd. She is very innocent and is loved by the entire gang for her child like attitude. To say she is the baby of the group would not be wrong. She wanted to become an army office because she wants to follow the footsteps of her Naina Aunty and Rajveer sir.

Cadet Abhijeet Bose----He is the first person from his family to be interested in military. Called Abhi. He is from a very rich family, and is very spoiled. His childhood was very lonely as his parents were never around, and when they were around they were fighting or not talking to each other. He is a very big flirt, but respects women at the same time. Due to his lonely child he lost his believe in true love, and built a wall around himself.

KMA FACULTY.

Suri ji

Lolita Ma'am

Major Amardeep Huda---Teaches strategies and communication. Vice principle of KMA.

Brig. Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan----Principle of KMA.

Lt. Raghuvendra Rai Chauhan----The drill commander as well as the son of Abhimanyu and Akriti. Called Raghu by friends and family. He graduated KMA a year ago as the best cadet.

Lt. Priyanka Malik---First year teaching Psychological Warfare. She has some connection with Abhilasha.

Colonel Dr. Shalini---Doctor of KMA.

OTHER IMPORTANT CHARACTERS

Lt. Samrat Sharma----Oldest son of Alekh and Neelu. Known as Sam to friends and family. He was in the same batch as Raghuvendra. He is currently posted in Goa. He is Gurbani's Fianc.

Lt. Gurbani Ali Beig----Oldest daughter of Ali and Pooja. Known as Bani to friends and Family. She was in the same batch as Raghuvendra and Samrat. She is currently studying medicine at Goa to become a military doctor. She is Sam's Fianc.

Lieutenant-Colonel Alekh Sharma.

Lieutenant-Colonel Ali Beig

Major Pooja Ali Beig

Major Yadhuvansh Sahni

Major Akriti Abhimanyu Chauhan

Mrs. Komal Amardeep Huda

Amazing character sketch
Continue soon ⭐️

Wow awsme proloug and cs
Loved it it

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling

Amazing! Concept and character sketch!
Looking forward to read it.
Continue sooon!!
Ps. Thank you for the pm.

Hey nice intro but which actress is playing the character asha and plzz name the actors who r going to play these new cadets characters