Arnav&Khushi: Destiny Thread II COMPLETE; BLOG LINK ADDED

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ddda2006

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

great story . good to read from start to end

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johngalt

@johngalt

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Thank you for completing the story.. it takes sooo much of dedication... Thanks a Ton!!

Its a beautiful story...and I had the privilege of reading it.

Thanks sooo much!!

👏 👏 👏

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Thank you for completing this story. This is one of the first few stories i read and so glad that it reached its destiny. Throught the story the love khushi has for Arnav was strong enough cosmo to bend conspire and inspire Arnav into retruning that love back with equal passion.

Simply loved their time together. Arnav was her pillar and khushi the rock who will stand between anything which will come between their love. Loved how she showed Shyam his place.

Thank you again for this wonderful story and for completing it.

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g.s.p.r.9.4.3.

@g.s.p.r.9.4.3.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

hiii...came across ur story & finished reading frm the beginning...its amazing...loved the concept...

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kowshira9

@kowshira9

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Amazing story.A baby would have been the cherry on the top

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Akorshi Oroni

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Wow! Very nice story..

You are a lovely writer...

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

This was a beautiful story! Glad to have come across this one.

I wish you write more of such stuff! Keep up the great work :D

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coderlady

@coderlady

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+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Loved the story. This is the first time I am reading your work and I am impressed.

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krishnas01

@krishnas01

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Hi,

I just finished reading this story and you compelled me to write. It was such an experience... to be in love with someone your entire life. The bursts from Arnav in Khushi's life made me sigh over and over again. It was truly as if she had no control over the course of her destiny, indeed!

Arnav was such an ass in the beginning but completely humbled towards the end... truly appreciated his graph over the course of his story. The way you described his mannerisms was on point... i was left with an open mouth every time you described his clothing! I can totally imagine him dressed in layers, looking like a hunk from one of those burberry catalogues!

Khushi was such a joy to read... not that i related to her but it was really endearing to see her graph, from a silly teenager to a responsible grown woman. I appreciate that you did not make her into a virgin.. not that i have anything against being a virgin but i feel as thought the other stories make Arnav into more of a skilled player in the bedroom and leave Khushi to more demure' version. i also appreciated that even though Arnav was as British Indian Royal Blooded as they come', Khushi had a hard time adjusting to his wealth... it was such a relatable thing... to see that she loved him and never ever his money.

I just want to end this rambling but thanking you for taking out the time to finish this story. It was almost mesmerizing to read... and by the end i just wanted to curl up next to my fireplace, drinks coffee, and re-read it.

It caused flutters in my tummy at times, anger at times, laughter at times, and left a smile throughout the entire story.

Thank you.

❤️

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krishnas01

@krishnas01

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#70

I just re-read the entire story again! If you write more pearls like these, please do let me know. It is a total shame that people are missing out on your work!

Really a shame! But I do hope that now that this is finished people flock on here to read this. This deserves to be read and recognized as possible one of the best stories written about Arnav and Khushi. It sucks you in and you leave a part of yourself here.

Thank you again.