PURE LOVE ~ Sujal Kashish~**Completed**Last part on page 41 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Amazing part

Kashish is soo sweet
What about sujal's love that angaad and sujal talking about
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon




THanx neelu for following and liking my fic
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Nice update
Kashishs is a sweet girl
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Kashish is always praying 4 sujal.she luvs him a lot.hope sujal too.waiting 4 SK meeting.Loved sujal angad scene.poor sujal.he is depressed.Kashish won gud result.she wants 2 start a bridal attire boutique as she is dreaming of sujal as her bride groom.loved d sentence that all lovers' destination is marr.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: RNgirl

Great start.

You really have a talent for writing.
Please continue what you are doing.
Can't wait to read more.
Love
misha




thanks misha for praising my writing... i m just rajeev fan therefore can write only on him thnks for reading...

chandni...

Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
kashish love sujal so much ❤️❤️per sujal ka pyar kon?😲 hope so k kashish e ho koi misunderstanding ho very nice part cont soon👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
thanks a ton all my lovely readers for reading and commenting on my fic thanxxx

chandni
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Rajeev diwani
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Posted: 10 years ago
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****Sk- Pure love***

part-3

Boy:- kis gift ki baat ho rahi hai, kashish jii, kahin aap mujhey kuchhh...

Kashish:- tum !!!

Charu:- hiii, abhi tum kab aaye ?

Abhi:- bas 1 mint pehle, aaj in madam ne ( pointing 2ward kashish )mujhey itane dino baad milne ka plan banaya tha, par main pichhley 1 ghante se coffee shop par inaka wait kar raha tha , par inka kuchhh pata hi nahi tha...

Kashish ( holds her ears very cutely ):- sorry abhii... ab chale...

Abhi:- are par kis gift ki baat ho rahi thi ... kahin mujhey kuchhh, u know...

Kashish:- shut up, tumhey aur gift wo bhala kyun dungi... ( holds his hands ) ab chalo yahan se...

Charu:- sujal bhaiya k liye gift lena mat bhulna byeee ( & she rans aways for her class )

Abhi:- byee charu ... le yeh to gayiii... kashish yeh sujal kaun hai... kahin mera saut to nahin...

Kashish:- Whattt... kya kaha tumne...

Abhi:- nahin- nahin ... kuchh nahin meri maa... chal ab ( they both left for the coffee shop , aaj kashish ki treat thi bcz abhi ne pehle hi kaha tha ki kashish hi is baar top karegi aur wahi hua )


Garewal Office...

Angad ( boring expression ):- oye sujal 10 bajne wali hai, ghar chal yaar tujhey kaam k shiwa kuchh nahi sujhta par mujhey aur bhi bahut se kaam hote hai, chal na mehek mera wait kar rahi hogi...

Sujal:- bas angad 5 minutes more...

Angad:- main pichhale 1 ghante se yahi sunn raha hun , tu thakta nahi hai yaar... jab dekho sirf kaam, kaam, kaam... achha khasa kavya bhaiya ne kaha tha, ki main unke sath business join karu, par meri hi matt mari gayi thi ki tere sath merging k chakkar me phas gaya ...sujal tu college me kya mast Item tha kitna Dhasu tha par ab 1 no. ka boring ho gaya hai... aur dekh tune mujhey kutta bana kar rakh diya hai...

Sujal:- chup kar kuchhh bhi bolta hai... waise ab chal mujhey bahut bhukh bhi lagi hai... mere pet k sare chuhe kudd rahe hai...

Agand:- aaliaaa... yeh to kamal hi ho gaya ... sujal the best , workoholic ko bhukh bhi lagti hai ...

Suajl (with very sad expression & with rahul anjali style frm KKHT ):- ha ha ha... yeh joke tha...

Angad:- tha to ?...

Sujal:- i dont like jokes...

Angad :- i dont like u... ab chup kar aur chal... pehele mujhey mere ghar chhod hir apne ghar jaa

dono office se bahar aate hai aur car me baithte hai...

Sujal;- tu bhi mere ghar chal na ... aaj sath me mast sa diner kareinge

Angad:- nahi yaar mehek wait kar rahi hogi... aur kavya bhaiya bhi delhi me hai ( sujal pehle angad ko uske ghar drop karta hai then wo apne ghar chala jata hai )

Garewal House...

Prerna to Anurag:- dekha aapne apne ladle ko, rat ke 11 bajne ko aaye hai, par zanaab ka kuchh pata nahi .

Anurag:- prerna , wo aa jayega ab wo bachha nahi hai, sayad angad k sath hoga... chalo hum chal k so jate hai, are tumne to abhi tak khana bhi nahi khaya, tum kha lo aur ha maine sabhi ko ghar me mana kar diya hai ki sujal ko koi bhi party se pehle wish na kare , angad ko bhi mana kiya hai, uske liye surprise hoga...(prerna nods in yes )

Prerna :- aap ja kar so jaiye main aati hun...

Anurag:-aur plzzz sujal ko kuchhh galat mat kehna aaj... kal uska janam din hai ( anurag left )

prerna thinks:- hey bhagwaan mera jii itana ghabra kyun raha hai sabhi ghar aa gaye hai par sujal abhi tak nahi aaya hai... hey bhagwaan mere bachhe ki raksha karna , pata nahi kahan reh gaya ( tabhi phone bajta hai aur prerna phone uthati hai, saamne wale ki baat sunkar bahut darr jati hai aur shocked ho jati hai, ki tabhi sujal ghar k ander aata hai , prerna phone ka reciever nahi rakhti aur bahut gusee se)

Prerna:- kahan tha tu ab tak ha, time dekha hai tune ( sujal is shocked with this behaviour of prerna bcz wo bahut gusse me thi) tujhe kuchh hose hawas hai ki nahiin ki teri wajah se ghar k log kitane paresaan honge

Sujal:- plzz mumma aap mere liye mat paresaan... ( sujal ko katte hue)

prerna:- main tere liye kyun pareshaan hone lagi, tere papa paresaan the, bas tu apne baare me hi sochta hai, ghar walo ki jara si parwah nahi hai ...( sujal ki aankhon me anshun aa jate hai par wo unhe behne nahi deta )
aur ha kal se tu 8 baje k pehle ghar aa jaya karega samjhaa...

Sujal:- ji mumma.

Prerna:- chal ab khana khale...

Sujal:- mujhey bhukh nahi hai mumma, ab aap ja kar aaram kijiye , good night ( aur sujal bina khana khaye apne kamre me chala jata hai )

Raghu kaka:- memsaab sujal baba ne to mana kar diya, par aap to khana kha lijiye ,aapne aaj dopahar me lunch bhi achhe nahi kiya tha .

Prerna:- nahi ... mujhey bhi bhuk nahi hai...( aur prerna phone ka reciver rakh kar apne room me chali jati hai.)

anurag bed par leta hai aur prerna dressing table par baith kar apni chudiyaan utar rahi thi

prerna in her mind:- kitana kuchh keh diya maine use... wo bhukha tha , par usne jhuth bola , hey bhagwaan kaisi parikhsha le raha hai tu meri... 1 maa hokar bhi mujhey mere bachhe k sath aisa salook karna padta hai, jaise wo mera dushman ho... mera bachha aaj bhukha so jaayega, par main kuchh nahi kar sakti , agar khana bhijwati bhi hun to wo nahi khayega... mujhey pata hai...kal uska janam din hai , aur mujhey sabse pehel use wish karna chahiye , par wo bhi nahi kar sakti ... mujhse jayda badkismat maa to koi ho hi nahi sakti...( anurag looks at prerna jo khoyi hui thi )

Anurag:- prerna... (prerna apne khayalo se bahar aati hai) kya hua , tum thik to ho ?

Prerna:- ji,... ji kuchh nahi

anurag:- to chalo so jaao , kal party ka bahut kaam hai, GN...

Prerna:- JI...GN... ( aur prerna bhi bed pe jaakar so jati hai)

Sujal apne kamre me pe apne bed par baitha hai... uski aankhon se aanshun beh rahe hai,,,,,

Sujal ( in his mind ):- mere sath hi aisa kyun hota hai ki jin logon se main sabse jayda pyarr karta hun wahi log mujhey sabse jyada dard de jaate hai...pehle mujhse mera pyarr alag ho gaya aur ab mumma bhi mujhsey aur dur hoti jaa rahi hai... aaj tak unhone kabhi bhi , mere ghar late aane pe pabandi nahi lagayii, maine jo chaha hai , mujhey mila ...mujhsey kisi baat pe , kabhi nahi roka...par ab to unhe mere late aane par bhi...thik hai mumma aap jaisa chahte ho waisa hi hoga ...main kal se ghar time se aa jaya karunga... agar isse aap khush ho to mere liye wahi bahut hai...

tabhi sujal ka cell bajta hai...wo ghadi dekhta hai, par 12 bajne me abhi bhi 20 minute baaki the aur jab no. dekha to wo hairaan ho gaya kyuki phone pe PRIVATE no. flash ho raha tha, sujal phone uthata hai aur , jo saamne wale ne kaha... wo sunn kar hairaan ho jata hai...kind of completely shocked ... aur phir gusse me aakar apna cell floor pe patak deta hai , jisse phone tut jata hai... sujal k sath aisa pichhle kuchh dino se ho raha hai, ki private no se use call aate hai...

end of part 3
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Gr8 part
Prerna is behaving so badly with sujal that's make me curious why she doing that
Whose call is that
Excited for next part

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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confusing hai part bohat bt acha hai cont soon :) 👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Sorry for late comment
Part 1 was awesome
Mihir was so greedy because of him sk was sepreated in childhood.
Prena is so rude with sujal.
I felt sorry for him.
Agar prena sujal se itna pyaar karti hai toh phir aisi behave kyun kar rahi hai?
Sujal is such a loving brother.
Anurag ko sujal par kitna trust hai how sweet.
Awww tulsi ko sujal ka birthday yaad hai.

Part 2 was amazing
kashish prayer was so sweet
Really she love sujal very much
I hope usse uska pyaar jaldi mil jaye
Angad and sujal convo was so funny and emotional
Their relationship was so sweet
Aakhir sujal itna change kaise ho gaya?
Sujal ka pyaar chin gaya kahi sujal aarohi se pyaar toh nahi karta tha?
Kashish ne uni mein top kiya aur woh bridal dresses design karna chahti hai.
kashish ne pehle hi sujal ko gift bhijva diya hai how sweet.

Part 3 was short and litle bit confusing
Prena ko kiska call aaya tha jo voh itna shocked ho gayi?
Prena sujal ke saath aisa behave kyun kar rahi woh kyun nahi use sabse pehle wish kar sakti?
Sujal ko kiska call aaya tha jo voh itna gussa ho gaya?
Sujal aur kashish kab milenge?
I hope inn sabhi swalon ke jawab jaldi mil jayenge.

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