#3: The Alternate Universe-Retelling IPKKND (Thread 4 link on Pg 1)

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Mojgan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Just wanna tell you how happy and relieved I am while reading this:

I could never allow him to come close to me.

My second Comment to you:

Even though it is hard to imagine that disgusting Shyam has touched Our beloved Khushi with his filthy hands ...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

awesome update...simply brilliant...👏

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adyaa

@adyaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

you know its the first time i have not RESed,

wohoo .. thenx <3 for updating b4 the weekend ..

and u know ...

i loved the way you have written this chapter ..

u know i can imagine it happening in front of me , its like a TV show ..

its not just one persons perspective and that we r able to see the thing frm the others point of view is so beautiful ,

i have more to write ..

will complete b4 2

Edited by AdyaXoxo - 10 years ago

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Super awesome update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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Mojgan

@mojgan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

You rock!

Mind blowing!

You deserve a very long comment cherie!

I loved it!

I am more than eager to know the next step of ASR.

LOVE you!

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dianapadhi92

@dianapadhi92

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#276

WOW WONDERFULLY WRITTEN.
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART.
UPDATE SOON

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#277

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Mindblowing sissy... I mean twists and turns are your speciality kya?! But am not complaining, am I? It is so exciting, like a roller coaster ride, where u have no idea what is next!!! So coming back, both of them are not clear with the facts..? Especially arnav!! And lavanya deserves worst sissy..come on u have soft corner for her kya?! Poor.khushi... But why does Shyam want nikhil custody? Valid point. Well made by payal.. does he know nikhil is arnav's son?! At least then it is valid if he asks for his custody..But I leave all that brain triggering job to u.. Oh and bechari payal couldn't share her happiness.. hope she gets it soon.. and so only arnav and khushi left behind? I guess they will make it in the last minute at least.. sarla?! Who is she? Someone shyam is related to?! Am not doing too many thesis as I don't want all of them going down the drain.. so I leave that to u sissy..and am tooo eager to know what happens next..so pls update sooon!! And sorry for the very big comment!

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anjale

@anjale

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Posted: 10 years ago

#278

wow phewww... i think all the blind fold is over plz make him no wat she had gone through and plz make sure he give all the happiness in tis world 2 her... and s if shyam no's tat nikhil is not his son ten y he need him is because he no tat nikhil is arnav's son and by using nikhil he can get his property r sm... and s i think because of that 1 night hw many life has been damaged yaar...kushi payal tere family reputation and even tat small boy nikhil if in future if he comes 2 no wat al his mother went through r whose son he really is will he able 2 survive with tis...