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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan

Adya...first of all thank you!
When I started reading your comment...on my mobile (coz my hubby literally requested me to not visit IF AT ALL strictly 😆 but I still cheated...lol), the first thought that came to my mind was...'WHAT THE...!'...looks like Adya is making up for all her previous Res'es...seriously I kept scrolling down and down on my phone and then stopped after a while because it took so much time...hehe...so I came to my lappie now and read it completely!
Wow...what a thorough analysis my dear! Do you write too? No? Seriously? Maybe you should try...hehe...may be a SS to start with 😉

okay, now coming back to your comment...the snakewa is going to come back for a teeny wheeny short while and try to hiss but between you and I, we know he doesnt stand a chance anymore.so am sure you will love his guest appearance...hehe.
you have decoded Khushi's feelings beautifully my dear...to be honest, even I couldnt do such a good job!
Coming to Lavanya, yes she met Khushi when the designer for the show asks her to dress Khushi up, and bcoz Khushi was already dressed up in a glittery kinda dress (for Payal's wedding), she came to this name...!
I dont know much about La, but didnt she give this name to Khushi in the actual track bcoz of the frustration etc...so kinda same thing replicates here...
So Khushi was already familiar with Lavanya (she being a showstopper, Khushi heard her name), when she stumbled into her room and also, because Lavanya was the only person Khushi knew and also because she ga
ve the weird drink to her, Khushi kinda wanted to take her help to go back home as she herself was not in a state to drive!

Arnav clarifies about Lavanya-coz she actually was his friend/model for his company at that point of time...this will get clearer in the next update.

Arnav never came again to her house, after the Sheesh Mahal incident, the line you have quoted was actually a metaphor...that
when Khushi's auto pulled up in front of her house, she was still thinking of her past-when she had seen ASR for the first time, standing below the stage, while she stood on the stage, nervous and trembling in fear.


Haha...2 glasses of cold water...waise bhi its getting hot these days 😆

what do you mean - by CAR RIDE??
Ouch...you blushed? haha...I did too...when I this scene played in my head before penning it down...so same pinch! 😳
Seriously, Adya...you are asking what did Arnav give...? A child of course...isnt the answer screaming in our face ⭐️

And Khushi adds- Give or take A FEW DAYS after Arnav mentioned the exact time- which he did of course after La reminds him of the Sheesh Mahal fiasco long ago 😉

haha...I almost laughed...well scratch that...I did laugh on your question...why did Khushi agree for Shyam's proposal just after a week of rejecting him...hehe...what do you think? I know the answer will come in a later chapter but still I cant stop myself from answering you...of course coz she found out she is ********...rest you can guess...!

Once again, Adya...I so enjoyed reading your detailed description and am glad you loved this fiction...thank you once again! 🤗

HAAWWW ...
I TYPED A REPLY AND IT ALLL GOT REPEATED ...
PFFTYT..
I guess I can never ever write in my life ...
Ppl will leave IF...
But
Hahaha ,..
In my summer break ...
Will try ...
But it will be the crappiest think on earth <rofl>
And awww...
U didn't cheat ..
It's hard .. .
I too promised mamma on her birthday ...
But sneaked my phone in the washroom ...
Lol leave that ...
And

...
Aww ...
U don t need to thank me ,,,
Instead I need to thank u for giving me the opportunity to read this amazing fic ...
And ..
I too wrote it on my phone ..
An i know it was a bit long ...
Only a bit though <winks>
And
...
Of course ...
Snake is important u know ...
in this ff .. if we take the example of air ...(idk if my percentage is right .. I learnt them 3 years ago only though
Its constituents are the characters ..
for me
Nitrogen is Arnav& khushi I.e 78.084 I guess -%
Oxygen - Nikhil and his cousin sister -20.057 ya 20.067%
Argon - Anjali , Anjali's husband , Khushi and Arnav's respective siblings .. -0.93%
Carbon dioxide - la and Shyam -0.33%
Neon . Krypton . Sulphur dioxide and other 1%- Khushi's auntI Khushi ka boss
Ik I am mad ..
My summer vacations have started that makes me madder
It's just that this FF just adds to my madness ...
Making me the maddest ..
And Ik % is wrong ...
Because I have a gold fish memory
Achha leave that
...
Amd snakewa is important because see when I was daydreaming about this ff I thought ...
Snake fights case ...
Loses case ...
Makes Ar -Shi a team ...
In the process love blossoms ...
Though I feel it's already there .?
End me ..
Haar Gaya hissy snake
Making Arnav and female protagonist win ...divorce
And Their son...
And ...
Ik Whatever u wrote is gonna be better then my crappy thinking ,..

And nay ...
U did a better jib actually best ..
That why I could describe Whatever I grasped ...
Oh ..
Now I get the female protagonist 's nickname ...
While reading
I was like main BHI NA pfft dumbo ...
And mamma was like .
Wow ,thank heavens ,,.
Who's the smart prsn who made u realise that ...
She indirectly meant u r that smart person ...
OHMG ..
I need to pay attention. ..ya so ..
Back to comment ...
Hohn ..
Now I get it la ji ..
Hmm ...
That's why he clarified ...
Ok,..
I TELL U ITS SO HOT ...
IN SKUL WE HAVE P.E AT 12 ...AND URGGHH...
BUT NOW ...
MUAAHH <3
MY VACATIONS STARTED ..I literally keep a bottle next it me when reading ur update .

I myself don't remember what I meant by car ride ...oh ya ..The line she landed in the waiting of arms of ASR I guess ...
Eek's ..
I guess everyone blushed while reading that ...
Oh no no ...

Ik why she agreement ..
Maine to ch-11 me teaser me hi likes gain..
I am so SORRY ..
I forgot to wrote the reason to my own conjecture ...
U know feeling overjoyed by ur FF
And thanked for confirming ,,,
And I've again ..
I thank u ...
MUAHHH <3
Waiting for UR update eagerly ...
Huge and kisses always ...
Xoxo
I seriously can't write my name now ...


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Posted: 10 years ago
P.S IF U FEEL I AM MAD TO WRITE FEMALE PROTAGONIST FOR Khushi ...
And I have a pathetic English or Hindi ,.,
It's not like that ...
I like hinglish sometimes ...<lo>
U know wat ...
For the past 57 minutes ...
I wrote , rewrote to be precise my post ...
And it was continuously showing ...
"Error"
I. Corrected . Every . Mistake
ANd still
"Error"
Reason a hashtag ..
PFFTTT ..
ANYWAY ..
HAPPY WRITING..
ACTUALLY NO ...
I WILL WAIT OBEDIENTLY TILL,THE WEEKEND ..
AND THEN PESTER U LIKE THE ANNOYING BRAT I AM..
HAHAHA ...
JK
...
I WILL BE A GIOD READER ...
OLA

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Posted: 10 years ago
Belated Happy Wedding Anniversary⭐️
Awesome Teaser👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Belated happy anniversary .These days I have tendency in being late for every thing and I have my professors to blame. They are conducting exams every other day as if we don't have anything else to do.
Coming to mahaupdate,I loved loved loved the way you wove IPK in such an unusual alternate universe.
I was reading with my throat in mouth throughout. Khushi is going to face Arnav now ,what next ,Nikhil is there too. There meeting somehow resembled the first one but still completely different. Arnav remembered everything,he's already guilty what's going to happen when he knows about Nikhil.
She'll try hard to keep Nikhil away from Arnav but their worlds have already crashed and mixed.Payal Akash marriage.The story is interesting from each and every angle.
Waiting with bated breath to read next whenever you update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update dear...👏
just loved it 😃
cuties appu n nikhil
good that anjali knows about khushi's divorce..
the story is going great...
continue soon 😃
sorry for being late...had exams 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all a very Happy Anniversary !!

Coming to the teaser .. really good one .. So Akash proposed .. hmm .. lets see what will be Khushi's reaction when she gets to know this
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan


Hey Jayeeta...first of all sorry for the late reply!
I dont think you missed out on anything...well you are such a keen observer...you see more than what is portrayed 😉
I believe your question is- why did Khushi enquire about Lavanya/felt insecured about not being able to match up with her? correct me if I am wrong...

Well I believe (and this is entirely me...for making it all dramatic...so plz forgive me if you think I went overboard);

There were sparks between Arshi when they first met each other- looking into each other's eyes while far from one another...and later Khushi stumbling and falling into the ready arms of Arnav Singh Raizada...(a little or rather the first Rabba Ve had played in the background)...so a little jealousy was triggered into Khushi's being when she heard Arnav praising another girl, (who she knew for a fact that) as smart, independent and an indispensable person from his company...and that led her to say things which she did...plus she also (wonders) says it aloud that she doesnt know why she is feeling so emotional and blah blah.

Coming to the drinks part, yes dear...I totally agree with you. but I think some people (read Khushi) do go overboard when consuming alcohol for the first time (or maybe not...who cares right!)... this dramatization of things was essential for the plot...I would just say that...hope I answer your question to some extent..?! If I dont, please excuse...this is really the best justification I can give to you 😉

And thank you for your lovely words...! I had read your comment on that day itself...but was stuck up with work at office..so couldnt reply right away..!



R e I am really sorry for making this little drama in your story into a huge melodrama. It's just that from beginning the story was quite realistic which actually forced me to be a regular reader ... that I didn't actually expect any drama in it. But then, if there is no drama in a story, it would be highly boring. Actually, much later after commenting that I realised that why do I need so much of explanation on such a thing. I should have simply go with the flow. It's a nice story & I should just enjoy it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for d update eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am truly and absolutely and completely and definitely and extremely mad at myself because I promised not to bother you with my EWQ ( essential weekly question) . Leaving this comment now doesn't mean that I broke my promise. Never! But I didn't promise not to describe my feelings.

Oh Devi Maya! I won't ask that question, ok?
But I have a strong feeling that it is Tuesday noon here and Tuesday night over there and a few more days will be the weekend. My weekend is the hectic one and next Sunday my godmother who happens to be Indian has invited us and she promised to have jalebi and Laddu for me and I am thinking about a perfect day with Indian food and a dual update waiting for me once I get home. What do you say ma chere and belle Shalini?

PS. You see! I never break my promises. Did you see my EWQ?
Edited by mojgan - 10 years ago

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