Res: Finally I am going to UNRES
1- My deepest apology for the comment. You know well how I am busy these days ma belle Shalini, however I feel so bad not being able to leave a comment for my favorite story.
2- I love love love this cutie pie Nikhil and his antics that we all know from whom he inherited. I love the way he shows his dissatisfaction to his mumma and I admire the way Khushi handles her son :) The poor Khushi needs to handle both father and son. Like father, like son we say, hai na?
3- It was really high time for Khushi to open out her heart to her Jiji. You know the main problem in IPKKND, in my opinion, was the miscommunication or the lack of any communication between Arnav and Khushi as well as between Khushi and her immediate family even her Jiji.
4- This Lavanya is truly getting on my nerves. She is hiding something that I am sure it is related to Shyam. She saw something or someone in the video that you mentioned : "Then something, or someone on the screen caught her eye and she went steel-straight again and gave a little growl under her breath."
However, she is a smart girl and knows how to change the subject. The best way to distract the mighty ASR is to attack back and that is exactly what she did at that moment by asking him the reason Chamkeeli entered his private room.
PS. What does Chamkeeli mean exactly? Clumsy? stupid?
5- You beautifully managed to revive the past and the way the protagonists remember the past is awesome. The use of sentences in italics when Khushi talks to Payal was really great. I enjoyed reading it.
6- I feel so much better now that it wasn't Arnav who cruelly released that disastrous video of Khushi in ASR's arms. hope Khushi gets to know it as soon as possible. And i adore that we got to know Arnav and Khushi's different version of that event. On one hand, Lavanya talks about it and Arnav doesn't even know about the video, on the other hand, a few lines further, Khushi mentions that video release and express how she feels about it. I like this side by side version.
7- I didn't get it. Why ASR doesn't want to break up immediately with Lavanya? I understand that Lavanya keeps him in a forced or out of guilt relationship by twisting the truth. But now, what keeps him tied to this farce of engagement?
8- I feel sorry for Payal not to be able to talk about her new born happiness and not to be able to break the news to her sister but I trust you and I know that you will fix it bella :)
9- Number nine, chapter nine :) I think Shyam is in sex trafficking business. Or he is blackmailing the young innocent respectable young women. He seduces them first and then once they are trapped in his net, he abuses them.
10- By reading number 9, you will understand how much I hate Shyam :))) He is a cheap miserable creature indeed.
11- I am sure, Arnav will notice Nikhil's absence. Wasn't he supposed to drop the little cutie pie home? It is not like ASR forgetting about the cutie pie. Well, he forgot once about the cutie pie's mother but he is excused because he wasn't sober. I trust you ma belle Shalini and I know that you will have an explanation for that.
12- I think Arshi will go to that school outgoing as well. I don't know how 9 I have some idea but won't tell you hahahahaha) but they will go there both and you will write and create a very beautiful, romantic, breathtaking Arshi scene. With subtle kisses and hugs. after all, why not?
PS1. What the! I am so tired!
Ps2. When will be the next update? Pleaseee I really and badly need some more chapter to read before ... you know :)
PS3. you are a tres belle et douce Shalini and you will write some more chapters. I know it!
Love you and your awesome story. Have I ever told you how awesome you are?
Edited by mojgan - 10 years ago
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