Hamlet's Revised Fanfic Collection Index - Page 89

Originally posted by: pearl100

Which one is on the mend and which one is her shortest OS ?? PLz tellme😆

Originally posted by: NusiSg

onli Ham cn tell u abt her shortest... 😆 ths is her longest which I n joy reading right now.. 😃 bt its longgg... vry longgg.. 😛

Originally posted by: NusiSg

Ohhh Ham m thrilled seeing the siggie on frst pg otsepf.. thnx fr using dear.. m grateful yaara.. it's shining with ur gems.. 😳 luv u..

Originally posted by: simple2joy

hummm taz..lovely comment to give super se uppar tere appi hai he tabhi! .
Supaarrr seee uppaaarrr siggie nusipa. 👏 .ap kaha baithke padhai karrahi thi, dekho apko stalk karte hue aa gyi main.

Originally posted by: NusiSg

Joyu whr r u... aaj we hav to cmmnt fr On The Mend..!! Aajana.. 😉

Originally posted by: simple2joy

Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie,
👏 tazzz... its been so long since I wasin that frame of mind... bas hammie ko yaad hai dutta fauji tha... and a horrid patient
Best loved it.u r outstanding.n u r a romantic too.I loved d conflict u created.r u real hammie ?
This is my favourite one,
As they went back both of them fell silent, both had fears in their hearts...
Yeah dutta asking naku ,what if u get narried to a soldier ? Wont let him go...this is so beautiful.
Dutta , d mighty lion, son of a war widow falling for nakusha,a simple girl with simple dreams in her heart, of a household, where she will b d homemaker, will cook halwa for husband, will love her children,will take care of her in laws, will b loved by husband everyday,dreams...dreams that dutta can never fulfill,not a proper household he can give, not a guarantee of a secured life he can give,not a guarantee of a tomorrow he can give.poor nakusha,n her dreams, dutta cant touch them...dutta cant stop thinking about her.all these yrs of taking risks shedding blood taking lives never gave him this opportunity to know what he does want,he always wanted this simple, vulnurable girl in his subconscious mind, not someone new,someone who was always with him,he grew up with her presence,n never knew where her place was, now when he has time,plenty of time to b with himself,his innerself is telling him he somewhere was incomplete n who can fulfil his emptiness...this one girl,from his regular surroundings, n how will she fit with his life of bullets n bombs n risks n tombs I dont know.lets watch d next chapter.a jealous dutta giving rise to a more jealous naku.
hummm yaad aya taz... major's reluctance to get married.. was inspired by dutta of LTL... considering his life as a gangster.. the blood on his hands.. risk factor in his life.. not interested in marrying... waise you have persuaded me to read it... its' going back in time
keep reading... so pleased you loving PR... thanks for a lovely comment... love hammie..

Originally posted by: NusiSg

Ohh Ham I read On the Mend..!! Wow lioness u wer brilliant even then yaara.. doesn't seems ur first at all..😳 hi nus.. haaa haaa... this was creative writing... just went with the flow
Ohhh I love love the irky datta in his convalescent phase maane recovery phase.. bht chir chir karta hai babaa.. but yea revealing his romeo side unknowingly. .itni jealousy frm that champak friend of nakku.. ufff... bechara.. khamkha datta is scolding him n I can imagine champak's nerdy face then.. 😛 uff the frst physio session with nakko was hot re.. datta is thinking onli n onli about nakko.. hmmm I want to correct baji..He should kno his bhao fancies nakko more than nakko fancies him..
I recall there were friends who wanted to see a jealous dutta... hence the addition of champak
the datta-baaji boozing session I jst loved how u penned it dear...!!😳 jst felt I visualize both of them sitting by fountain...👍🏼 BRILLIANT Ham..!! I'm hooked too ur one of the longest ff... as fauji datta is too cool yet hot to handle...also I'm curious how ths datta will allow nakko in his life despite ths big dilemma within himself.. on one side he's reluctant to be with any gal bt on other side he seems completely smityen by nakku..his fight with himself wud love toeread how u progressed frm bere on...!!😉 will b bac soon..!! Take care..
dutta's and baji's drinking seesions at the bar were very famous in LTL.. male bonding.. and yaad hai Naku tried to give him bashans then ..peena se dard nehin kam hota...
waise Iam pleased you enjoying it Nus.. my first ever FF... Mishal ke yaad mein... those were the times Nus... lovely to see you.. joya and swati bhi has come after you😛..bahut yaraana hai...😃... much love hammie