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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simple2joy

Hammie x 3, Helloo safed coat.. you know why I am here because.. no Ishq episodes for wed.thurds, Friday... and i put laagi on the side for Ishq... august 10th it will be one year since I was doing takes on that forum... sigh...
Beautifully written ud. humm.. this laagi will be in me always.. saw a lot but my heart on beats for dutta and naku!...
Lovely family time dutta spent,
And his "I m adopted," syndrome.lol. 😃 .. good you can see the funny side
Liked d whole scene.
But what came next is sooo beautiful hammie.
U write even romantic scenes beautifully, cz u know how to play with words,why do u keep saying u cant?taz.. it were so? why havent written a SS/FF on the forum i do reported takes for? my heart doesn't motivate me.. so yes I am no good at romance and happy for it too..its me! yes its true readers and veiwers want stories drizzled with romance I can only cope with a sprinkling..
It was so beautiful, under d moonlight...naku saying u r my moon, hayeee. 😳
it was a scene picked out of laagi... so not original..
And was expecting something more.fir wahi excitement rehte rehte it ended.abhi should I shout with rose DHOKA DHOKA DHOKA...
or r u reserving ur masterpiece for d last part ? 😆 what masterpiece??? 😕 in laagi there was none.. I recall we debated about their wedding night...
Waiting...
Wont u b continuting ur ff writing after it finishes ? mahi and mishal will never pair again so the answer is NO..Iam rigid in what my heart and mind wants...not into westernized expression on screen.. at all see couples kissing around here all the time.. so no way ...
D word "End" scares me d most
taz..all good things and people too come to an end.. sorry but that's the reality of life.. listen you doc sahiba are very kind to read my expired works.. makes me happy... those years I spent loving tasha...😆 makes me laugh now... catch you on ISHQ.. and haan last of me on tasha here tommorrow... final update... much love hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsemm update love it drama with romance fab
HELOO tammy ,partner, hope you doing good exams all done and great achievements.. thanks for reading and commenting my outrageous track record as a writer😆... all ending tommorrow so do catch the final episode... much love hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

awesome update hammie..🤗 helooo my dear dear stunner! ranju well done ... certainly well deserved.. wish you more rungs up the IF ladder

family scene then tasha scene in garden...
beautiful..
thanks for pm dear..
glad you enjoyed it , the jouney ends tomm... friday when I update.. the final part .. will pm you.. much love hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose


helloo rosie finally stumbled here .. had the time on my hands
Wow hammie the update was beautiful though you still kept us waiting for real the romance but I'm okay because I know now it's very close.😳..me giggling in anticipation.
i should have given it over to you rosie the creator of wonderful love stories...

Okay the dinner scene was cute. We people tend to show our love through food. The more happily our dear ones enjoy the food the more happy we are. So it was no surprising that the whole family was ready with different dishes for their dutta. True to the show here also dutta had to push his wife to sit and dine with him.haan mealtimes were covered readily in Laagi its times when families gel together
The garden scene was wonderful , both sitting by the pond and admiring the moon. Hey nakku what happened to your culinary skills? You were so happy to have your sahab back home all to yourself that you forgot to add sugar to the halwa! 😆... those laagi scenes are still in my system
Never mind you're husband is still a sweetheart, he relished it without sugar too. remember the blind dutta eating halwa scene
Okay nakku is nervous for their first night, so am I😉 but dutta is a little injured..Will it hamper my expectations in any way?😲 Hope not .😡 welll rosie..its all going to be posted tommorrow the finale of the the SS that has been going on since over a year.. thanks for still keeping in touch with my writings... will pm you... much love hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: alex1

Dear Hammie, heloo my dearest Alex... always good to hear from you.. here ,pms or at Ishq

@all, And a warm hello as well to you all too. 😃

You may know that I am still here and I can tell you with surety that there are still LTL1 members hovering IF and anything LTL1 related so here we are still pining 6 years later so please take it from this old soul that yes there are others and your SS IS BEING READ.

erhhh ALEX... thanks for recently chivving me along to finish BB... erhh just did it!

I sent you a PM do take a look, please.

yes thank salex 😃 thanks for all your love

I loved the continuing story and hoped that I can continue to read whenever I can.

will pm you the finale part tommorrow plzread it

You like others have been inspired over the years and become more and more creative as learning does for each of us.

Hammie, I hope you don't mind but I would like your readers to enjoy a fun day and experience some of the laughter created by one of the creative member from LTL1 if they have not read and enjoyed the Link below.

yes theywill gosh the laughs and guffaws we had shruti and her zingy pieces of writing good fun just checked it 😆

We the Ltlians...Note at pg 11...Edited at pg 1 | 1572334 | Laagi Tujhse Lagan Forum

Always,

Alex much love always alex will pm you final part of BB... yours hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hammie im doing fine relaxing in bangalore .. But you as always take pleasure in keeping us waiting endlessly for the updates😈
hi bart.. a year has whizzed by but somethings hammie never wants to change..mere harketien or apka gussa vakeel sahiba... hammie will always love you...😛... tommorrow will post final part BB... will pm you.. enjoy Bangalore ok for some hummm... as always yourshammie


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Posted: 9 years ago

@Hamlet53, Hammie sheesh, I know and understand all good things come to an end. End for me was about 6 years ago but I can honestly tell you Hammie, truly and factually, there are many more like me believe me. I don't like too much lovey-dovey-kissey type shows because I am a realist and know that this too comes to a halt in one's life where a person just needs true friendship, companionship and mutual respect. Laagi was one such show say it loud or acknowledge it or not but yes it was one such show. I don't want to say goodbye to you or your oh so beautiful SS but I truly understand that you must move on with your creativity and should not let it die slowly if you don't have other means of expressing or conveying your stories.

I will always care for you my dearest Hammie. simple2joy did tell me once that I too like you can't seem to move on from Laagi. She is right is some ways and believe me I know for a fact many others just can't move away from Laagi too. MR and MV are mere humans, this I know and understand who they are at the human level but their characters from Laagi were so profound that it became part of many of us. One day Hammie, I will move away. It will take that Kick to send me far far away from Laagi even though you said memories can't be erased but I know Time will be able to take care of this for me.

IKRS was not for me Hammie, truly MR in it or not. The storyline did not pan out as Colors TV/Viacom 18 initially promoted plight of these females and wanted to show knowledge of and bring about gradual change. Instead a Romance show was thrown in its place with a 34+ year old man and 16+ or 17 year old woman. I know that there are many more younger females all over the world that is in that situation so to me the real story could have been brought to light even if the Producers and Channel had to include some drama to gain eyeballs but to me Hammie, this IKRS serial did not show and bring about any change. The issue will still exists generations from now.

Love you my dearest Hamlet.

A far away friend for life.

Alex

Edited by alex1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: alex1


hi alex... saw thislast night was finishing off...

@Hamlet53, Hammie sheesh, I know and understand all good things come to an end. End for me was about 6 years ago but I can honestly tell you Hammie, truly and factually, there are many more like me believe me. I don't like too much lovey-dovey-kissey type shows because I am a realist and know that this too comes to a halt in one's life where a person just needs true friendship, companionship and mutual respect. Laagi was one such show say it loud or acknowledge it or not but yes it was one such show. I don't want to say goodbye to you or your oh so beautiful SS but I truly understand that you must move on with your creativity and should not let it die slowly if you don't have other means of expressing or conveying your stories.

alex audiences change and so do their mixed opinions.. with regards to actors.. they only deliver what they are instructed to do.. ISHQ is nearly on its last rungs.. I occupied myself as best as I could do in my takes.. shall I say in keep the birthday boy in mind... hammie did it for him.. 😃

I will always care for you my dearest Hammie. simple2joy did tell me once that I too like you can't seem to move on from Laagi. She is right is some ways and believe me I know for a fact many others just can't move away from Laagi too. MR and MV are mere humans, this I know and understand who they are at the human level but their characters from Laagi were so profound that it became part of many of us. One day Hammie, I will move away. It will take that Kick to send me far far away from Laagi even though you said memories can't be erased but I know Time will be able to take care of this for me.

ohh.. me like I said still see tasha as the eternal couple.. stubborn Iam all the tv channels on Sky+ but then what I watch is my choice.. which is hardly much.. except news,cricket matches..football and now the Olympics in Rio!

IKRS was not for me Hammie, truly MR in it or not. The storyline did not pan out as Colors TV/Viacom 18 initially promoted plight of these females and wanted to show knowledge of and bring about gradual change. Instead a Romance show was thrown in its place with a 34+ year old man and 16+ or 17 year old woman. I know that there are many more younger females all over the world that is in that situation so to me the real story could have been brought to light even if the Producers and Channel had to include some drama to gain eyeballs but to me Hammie, this IKRS serial did not show and bring about any change. The issue will still exists generations from now.

the target rating points showed audiences loved seeing an older man with a young woman.. as a veiwer , I can only say thanks to the actors ,and no thanks to the pathetic storyline ..which started well but now is rushed to end!

Love you my dearest Hamlet.

A far away friend for life. yes mate friends forever... listen lady posting the end of BB finally... love you ..hammie

Alex

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Posted: 9 years ago

Mishal Raheja

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Dutta

Blue Blood

Final part 30

Naku moved a little closer to him across the bed side. By now she relaxed as she noted that he too was like a bag of nerves. As much as they loved each other , now it appeared the moment had arrived to materialise and understand an expression of their love. Naku gulped as she mused, this now was the time to give evidence of how and what they feel towards each other? must it have to be so hyped up can it not happen spontaneously ?But where does it begin and who starts? Surely not her? she's the woman. Women are shy and coy it's the man who makes the move. One look at his grumpy face made her blush.. Poor sahib wonder what goes on in his mind? Naku's fingers shook slightly as she worried ,but how will their acceptance of each other be realized? It's not that she is a child and that he a stranger? that she is weary of him. But then how can she ignore her accelerated heartbeat the dryness of her mouth and hot flushes of her face and neck. One look at her face and neck , beads of sweat on her brow told Dutta she too likewise him felt out of depth with this consummation night scenario. He moved his eyes off her, as instead they slowly rolled around the bridal suite that once was his den! Suddenly he felt the room his cave, den! now was shared and theirs! But nevertheless, culturally it may be said that before , his room was a no go zone for her, as his was a man's room which decent ladies didn't grace at the best of times. But as of now.. He stared at her nervous frame ,and decided it was up to him now to calm the frayed nerves of his pretty wife Naku , who now tarried at his request. Without a doubt his heart warmed to her mesmerizing amber green doe eyes that latched on to his narrowed lion like stare. Dutta blinked his eyes once, his palms cradled the leather wallet which he moved towards her, as he directly looked into her green eyes

"this is for you Naku..decided to give it to you tonight..please accept this as a consummation night present from your husband.." Naku accepted it from his hands gingerly and wondered what it could be? How unusual can this be? normally a husband would present a piece of jewellery to his wife on such a night. But this? a wallet? Dutta stared across at her and urged her to open it. She did, and was rendered speechless! It's was some kind of a folded blueprint. Dutta bade her to unfold it and helped her to smooth the crispy blue paper across the centre of their nuptial bed.

" here it goes then Naku .. your dreams , your shop Gul Bahar ! it's going to be built up again and will become your running concern again! you can sell flowers again, spread the fragrance of your personality once again. Dutta's heart is large enough to share his wife's service and potential with the rest of our community! I want the world to know my wife is exceptional and I as her husband wish her to be a role model to other women , that women can be both home makers and successful in realizing their dreams" Dutta paused and reached out for her hand ,caressed it and continued tenderly

" your physically beauty I wish to celebrate alone Naku . But the beauty of your heart ,mind and soul I wish you to share with as many people you can reach out to with your talents". She smiled shyly with a nod and then poured over the blueprint spread on the bed .Like an excited child she pressed her palm over the planning map . Dutta too doubled his tummy with some discomfort and ran his finger over the illustration, gave names to sectioned areas of the diagram. Propped up upon his right palm pressed on the bed, his left shoulder sided against Naku's shoulder. He sensed her peaches and cream fragrance, it intoxicated ,and quickened an urge within him to hold her close against his heart. Still the slight pull of his flesh from the healing wound let him down! Dutta winced, receded backwards and rested against the headboard of the bed. His eyes lingered upon her rather helplessly ,at a loss to express his tenderness for her. Naku too sat up and hastily pulled the blueprint, folded it, secured it safely back in the leather wallet. Dutta doubled his right arm across his forehead , and with semi shut eyes peered at her and asked

"won't you say something Naku? did you like my gift to you? hummm? Naku nodded , completely floored by his acts! taking her by surprise even in the past, were not unknown to her

"what should I say sahib? I make the dreams and you give them life. What can Naku say? except that in my previous life I must have pleased the gods that they gave me a life partner like yourself"

" not just your previous life Naku .. that your Sahib wouldn't known about. But yes, this I have seen presently in this life, your heart is forever willing to serve others and share joy with others. See Naku , how you accepted me with all my blues.. showed compassion towards Krishna .. So much so Naku, that he accepts you like his mother. What can be more noble and compassionate than that? making two fatherless men loved.. you are one of a kind Naku .. all this Dutta wants now is, for you to be mine forever. Share my every joy and sorrow, when I am in doubt do support, show me the way when, you think of me as your god ? for then my beautiful life-long devotee.. this god of yours will require your obeisance ,Naku ,be the light of love in my life. Make my world radiate with your presence".. He glimpsed a fresh crimson flush, travelled up from her long slender neck towards her chin, past her jaw, on to her smooth shiny rosy cheeks. Slowly he inclined towards her and caressed her cheek with his folded forefinger. Naku hooded her eyes demurely and her fine lower lip quivered. Dutta stretched his arm sideways to his bedside lamp switched it off. Naku's big bold eyes expanded . Dutta caught sight of her and right before her very eyes he curved both his arms, gathered the ends of his white kurta and pulled it off his head! bare chest he sat before her. The look of shock on Naku face amused him .To tease her , he flirted with her stunned eyes by gently scratching his broad hairy chest.. meaningfully ,Dutta gently patted the left side of his chest where his heart resided. Naku twisted her face the other way as she heard his wayward chuckle.. Then his guttural whisper, flowed into her ears

"better get used to seeing me like this Naku .. don't tell me you didn't note my bare chest in the hospital Naku ? it's the same chest only difference is the bandage has come off.. So don't looked so shocked will you? He teased. Naku silently affirmed with nod, and Dutta slanted forward, reached out for her hand, pulled her towards him. Willingly she veered towards his bare hairy chest..responded to his pull! then gently flattened her palms on his chest and relaxed her head against the middle of his thorax. Naku remained mindful not to put pressure on the left side of his chest which sustained the wound. He closed his arms around her back ,doubled his chin, pouted his chin and kissed the top of her warm head... ahhh.. he sighed, utterly content. Naku closed her eyes her cheek pressed against the jet black curly mat of his chest hairs. She heard his heart pounded against his rib cages and sensed hers did just that..Dutta Naku! .. Dutta Naku! ..it beat, one pulse in perfect consistency! One thing lead to another, as Dutta endeavoured to be romantic .. What was wrong with him? why was he afraid? He dreamt about this stunning woman now that she was upon his chest to have and to hold forever ..why was he distant. Preoccupied he clenched his square stubble jaw. He'd better make a move before Naku concludes he is some timid wimp! He cleared his throat nervously and Naku gazed up at him with some degree of concern was he well?

"sahib are you ok? she asked sweetly as she moved away from his chest.. stared up at him with her green doe eyes. Dutta senses the emptiness on his chest occupied before by the gentle soft feel of her face... and before both of them knew it.. Dutta raised his palms and slowly moved them towards Naku's fair rosy cheeks. With her face cupped in his hands he just stared at her closed rosebud mouth.. As his thumbs gently stroked the smooth creamy skin of her cheeks.. Her lips apart slowly, Dutta inclined his head and his lips brushed against her smooth velvet warm lips that quivered at each tender brush of his lips upon hers. Shivers crept through Naku as his stubble chin poked her smooth chin..but Dutta's passion got the better of him.. The feel of her lips and the exploration of her mouth that he could never imagine gave him the courage take the first giant leap in the expression of his love. His grip around her tightened under the spell of his mounting ardour. Roughly he pulled her into him, cradled her in his arms his lips sealed upon hers. Naku s arms rose and become the garland of eternal love around her sahib's neck.. Dutta felt his rather bold expression of love! was rather well received by his shy wife..her arms around his neck were a sure signal enough for him .. His kisses gets harder and deeper as his whole imposing frame slowly dropped on her tiny frame in complete submission.. Naku lay beneath her sahib and closed her eyes tightly as she sensed his warm breath on the curve of her neck...

A bird chirped to its mate outside their bedroom window. Naku cames out of his bathroom, her long raven black hair bunched up in a towel over her head. One look at her lion who slept on his tummy. His smooth bare back made her blush as she recalled his wanton behaviour last night. He moved his white pyjama clad long legs grabbed a head cushion and dozed off again. Naku shuffled the towel on her moist hair , shrug and tousled it! then lets her tresses hang, as she ran her fingers and separated the knots. One look at the clock , past eight am..she dressed and dolled herself up, put the vermillion in her hair parting, fixed her pallu and left him sleeping. Naku scurried along the corridor down the main stair case and made her way towards Bappa's statue in the family puja area. Both her mother in laws were there before her. Naku touched their feet and gathered blessings from the elders. The three women go through the worship with Naku being privileged one who performed Arti. She realized she had lots to offer thanks for before Bappa .. countless blessings the lord has given her.. above all lord Ganpati had given to her own lord and master Dutta Sahib.. her protector for life. Aye Sahib's gentle tap on her shoulder reminded her, now over night her role in this home had changed so have all the expectations this family had off her. So her last prayer was a request from her lord that may she never fall of her duties towards her new family. As of today Naku would share the arti with all the members of the family..and so she did..it became an endearing act where mid morning before breakfast the whole awaited for Naku's arrival to receive arti.

But after puja Naku's daily chore was the much loved duty of appeasing her own earthly god Dutta Sahib like today her first day after she became his eternally. Naku! his roar reached her ears past the kitchen door where she stood with his morning tea held on a tray. Luckily as from today, for times to come none of the family took notice of his loud roar as he always like today categorized who he demanded to see first thing in the morning. So for the first time as Dutta's wife for days to come Naku would scurry down the corridor and like always he would be ready and dressed awaiting his morning cuppa tea. It would always begin like today for the rest of their lives.. by checking out his beloved, embracing her, peering into her green eyes from his narrowed lion like eyes.. and then a pressing of lips with a promise every morning to his Naku of much more to follow when night time, throws the nocturnal blanket over the occupants of Patil Niwas.# But this morning at breakfast the family was served with halwa prepared by the new daughter in law Naku. As Dutta relished the first spoonful into his mouth he noticed his brother Baji's dropped jaw and Dutta knew what Dutta had to do. It was not a suggestion that he gave ,but more like a reminder he served to the elders of his family. Baji and Roops wedding needed to be solemnized as soon as possible! and once done both the brothers should have their wedding receptions together. Where apart from friends and acquaintances ,the families of the general public of Patil vadi , would also be invited as he needed to share his thoughts with the general common folk of his home ground . Aye shahib , Kala were suddenly reminded of the presence of ShriRam Patil the great philanthropist of Patil Wadi. Both Kala and her mother who remembered him well, dabbed a tear as they stared at Dutta's face ..kala reflected in awe that here sat this man her foster brother ,nurtured by her mother brought into the home by her father's approval.. Dutta, not even her blood but strangely her father's person whom Dutta didn't even know.. seemed to have rubbed off on him...Today after all these years ,her father speaks to them all and makes his presence known, Dutta's blue blood speaks her fathers language!

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Baji wedding was celebrated with full pomp and ceremony complete with all the pre nuptial rituals and customs that Dutta missed out on. But Dutta being the kind of man he was preferred to go with the flow.. rather Baji! the true son of the house than him. Naku of course spear headed all the events with Seema , Krishna and Ravi's sisters. For Naku was literally directed by Dutta and aye shahib that Ravi's mother and sisters should never be made to feel ,they were not part of the Patil household.

During the preparations Dutta and Baji were seen to be joining heads, discussing matters of business constantly. Basically they had concluded unanimously they would let the rest of their vast family get on with the wedding and reception arrangements. They would only turn up as dressed studs and stand next to their dressed up dolly dames and smile and nod at all! Dutta however, since he had the licence that Baji lacked whenever he had the opportunity grabbed his wife , whisked her off to their room.. many a huddled in the corner of his room .. steamy kisses took place between him and Naku. But things hardly ever progressed further than a few snatched kisses in the haven of Dutta's den . For since his marriage Dutta had developed a new forward moving romantic policy that took him from strengthto strength,that he would readily come up with excuses which summoned her up to their room. Help in choosing his festive clothes, seeking Naku's assistance in doing up his traditional attire e.g dhoti were sweet moments when lovable interactions would become a recurrent feature in their relationship as a husband and wife. At night in bed Naku laughed at the changes in his behaviour, how he moved on from being a shy , restrained man to a bold and wild lion! Dutta in response much aroused, chuckled, squeezed her in his arms and always vowed to love her for all the days of his life! and each time he loved Naku it was as if it was the last time.. he would ever love her.

The day of the reception came at last and as required both the grooms , both brothers one by one made speeches before the huge crowd invited . Baji being the youngest was the first to go and the crowd of the locals of Patil Wadi welcomed him with whistles and loud positive hooting !Dutta sat on the stage and smiled at the affection the masses showed towards his comrade and brother. It showed Dutta his brothers oneness with the masses and his approachability. Dutta's chest swelled with pride at his brother. Baji reinforced that whatever he had strived to be and whatever he had achieved the motivating source had always been his Dutta Bhau..Dutta was aware if not stopped in time, Baji would go on and on about their bond ,and thus he thought this would be an opportune moment to share his thoughts with his people.

His family too occupied pride of place on the wide stage. It was noticeable his two mothers flanked Dutta as he sat on the stage. Naku sat next to Kanta bai. Soon as the imposed frame of Dutta clad in an ivory coloured silken dhoti, topped with an orange raw silk high collared kurta, accessorised with a throw over of a folded ivory silk patka. The crowd clapped as they received him at the rostrum. The guests in subtle admiration .But the crowd of ordinary folk chanted Dutta Bhau !Dutta Bhau! as Dutta brought his joined palms before his face.. then amid loud repetitive chant of his name he gradually raised his pressed palms above his head as he indicated , completely submission before them. Gradually he lowered his folded arms and held them behind his back and begin to talk to his people...

"what I am about to say to you all is the first my own family will hear of it. This morning after my marriage , I was taken in by how far I have travelled in my love. It humbles me today to reinforce the fact that had it not been the benevolence of Shree Ram patil and his wife Shakuntala devi, this Dutta would have ended up a lost,shunned ,destitute orphan on the streets and would have died on the streets somewhere like an unwanted insect. Instead, I was picked up from an orphanage and brought into the house whose walls protectively embraced me, nurtured me like an exotic plant , watered me with care showered me and cooled me with waters of love. Hence this Dutta that you see today, is a sturdy tree whose roots stem from the family the Patils! who gave the name Dutta! to a questioned entity" Dutta turned his head and looked at Naku . She read the message of his silence , bowed her head once,and indicated her consent.

Dutta pulled his breath in and continued much emotionally charged,

" I also want to share with you that not only was I an orphan but Bappa gave me a life partner too who came from a much troubled back ground. Both of us decided that our lives would be used as a positive statement for the lives of people at risk of disaffection in particular children deemed to be orphans at risk of being a target for crimes against society and humanity.. Krishna, I confirm as mine and Nakusha's adopted son! Krishna jumped up and ran and felt his father's feet and then turned to Naku's feet! and finally stood behind aye sahib and leaned forward and gave her a hug ! Dutta looked at the crowd, gripped the sides of the rostrum as he made yet another key announcement.

" so keeping all this is in mind after consultation with Nakusha , Roops and Kanta mai ,we have decided that Ram Sita hivali will be over hauled into an orphanage where children will be nurtured in a safe environment and groomed into being responsible citizens in society . Children will have access to free education across the primary range up to high school. The less fortunate children will also have the chance to interact with peers whose parents live below the poverty line! He confirmed that Nakusha and his mai and his adopted son Krishna would oversee this venture!No sooner had he revealed that, a loud cheer arose from the residents of Patil vadi! Applause for free welfare and education was welcomed! Dutta Bhau long live! resounded in the marquee awning of the open air reception. Dutta's mother Kanta bai, Naku and Krishna smiled at each other with future positive dreams to be realized, in their hearts. Dutta, turned his head towards Naku again and tilted it to one side, as she yet again, pulled her lower lip in total agreement.. so Dutta continued

"now a mention about flowers..that which bring colour ,beauty and fragrance into our lives. Flowers that we use to appease our gods and loved ones.. so me and aye Sahib are pleased to announce that the flowers of love that we as a family have towards the communities of Patil Vadi will bloom again! in the new flower shop Gul Bahar being built shortly! and this will be run by my brother Baji and my vahini Roops and my dear friend and adopted sister Seema ! This news was also welcomed by both his peoples, and his family.

For the final piece of news related to his life Dutta s foster mother aye Sahib stood and walked up to her Dutta and felt his arm as he cleared his throat and projected his baritone voice

"as you can see my mother who raised me up as her own, is by me side to share with you the hardest piece of announcement .. that of stripping the grandeur of our mansion Patil Nivas and converting it into a hostel for vulnerable , women. This would be overseen by aye Sahib and my Kala tai. and as for me and my family we will continue to reside in a newly built humble annexe at the side of the hostel..Our lives will be used for public service in the loving memory and good works of the head of our family Shree Ram Patil". Thus ended the briefing Dutta gave about his and his family's future expeditions on his home ground.. Patil Wadi..

Prologue

Krishna put garlands around the necks of sculptured busts of his parents Dutta and Nakusha Shree Ram patil. He gulped as he stood pressed on the sides of his waist by nine year old Aamba and ten year old Shravan his half brother and sister. Krishna recalled how happy his parents were at the marriages of Ravi's three sisters over the years , well before their brother Ravi was set see. He recalled how his father had swelled with joy at the wedding of his aunt Seema with Ravi after he been released from prison. His father had achieved his last commitment of getting his aunt Seema married off! Krishna recalled how relaxed his father was and that day too, like on previous occasions babaa had declared, he was the son of the sea! He had a strange pull towards water bodies .. that day too babba went boating with his beloved wife Naku like he frequently did to share quality time with mai.. Krishna gulped again as he recalled that day both his parents never returned. It was full moon and the tide rose without warning! Together they went to sleep painlessly on the coral ridden , floating bed of the surreal vast ocean of eternity. Anemones and starfishes swam and hovered around them but only from far.. this pair of lovers were in the midst of celebrating their love.. Dutta and Naku would never be separated by either joy or sorrow, the gloom of possessing a family or not , being of blue blood or a stray! nothing mattered as they were beyond the preoccupations of worldly matters. Krishna smiled at their busts and reflected , his parents were not gone but very much alive to date. His mother will forever remain young and the most beautiful girl in the whole wide world in the eyes of his father. His father will remain the lion of Patil Vadi. Krishna smiles at their busts. His parents youth and beauty will carry on till time immemorial , as they defied age and time! All the ventures his parents especially his father Dutta undertook, are themselves a living testimony of his success story . Thus till the orphanage salvages one orphan helps her or him to find their feet, his father Dutta s life along with his mother Nakusha's continues. Every time a flower blooms in Gul Bahar and then graces the statues of Durga maa and lord Shiva, his father and mother would smile with approval. Krishna kisses the foreheads of his parents bust.. and he reflects every time a defenceless woman is armed with strength to fend for herself in the Vulnerable woman's hostel his parents Dutta and Nakusha will come alive! Surely they were not just a romantic pair! But rather a lifelong inspiration for those who live with disaffection. Their love will still be seen as a strong message to remain united in oneness of purpose which will help others like them to overcome hurdles, challenges of life they both faced as well. The positive energy of their love vibrates in their goods deed left behind. Their tale of love is an evidence of this man and wife, who beat improbability and left behind themselves a legacy of hope that continues to make a difference to the world we now live in, long after their departure.Krishna hands slowly and gently felt the young shoulders of his siblings Aamba and Shravan. Babba and mai are still around, watching him whether he performed to the best of his abilities..

"Krishna ! Krishna! where are you ? can't find Dutta and Naku anywhere? Aye Sahib called! as she feebly forced herself out in the courtyard, Amba and Shravan raced towards aye Sahib,

"here we are dadi! they yelled! as both pressed straight into their dadi widespread arms! She gathered them to her bosom and kissed their faces, as tears of joy rolled down her wrinkled face as she cried, "my little Dutta and Naku! jagdamma ! she raised her hands up to Bappa grateful that she had been gifted with the replica of her Dutta and his wife Naku . The children dragged her to a bench that faced the busts of their parents. Amba asked her dadi..

"dadi tell me what babba and mai were really like ? it was most certainly aye Sahib's favourite topic and she replied,

"well children your father was as stubborn as a donkey !but as regal and dreaded like the lion! but with a heart made of pure gold. As for your mother she had the greenest doe eyes, and in mind she was a woman ahead of her times!.. and aye Sahib cuddled her grand children closer to her old body. From far Krishna watched the glow on aye sahib's face how her lips moved .. and the children smiled totally engaged by yet another anecdote about their mai and babba ,Dutta and Naku.. this then is the beginning of the revival of their tales and by no means the end ! For my parents good work continues ,mused Krishna ..Hamlet53~ 5 8. 16

Dear bart, rosie, tammy, afzal ,ranju, taz/joya, Alex. Thank you for putting up with an appalling writer like me, who of recent became wayward. For this final SS which I began in july 2015 hammie really took the cake! turned really and truly outrageous.. now how many of you know what took me away from Laagi was another play on the same word ,emotion .. Ishq! by Jove! The actor in male lead Mishal was a common factor. Although in character Viplav and Dutta are chalk and cheese.. and as characters never the twain shall meet, but nevertheless I applaud the actors effort at versatility. So became preoccupied with Viplav .. but one last time forgive me before I say a final farewell to my one and only romantic telly pair Mishal/Mahi Dutta and Naku.. this SS both for tasha and hamlet is a swan song.. but I hasten to add that tasha lives on in souls of viewers.. like in my soul.. I hear still Dutta's words "bol Naku ,main sun raha hoon".. and her reply. "Ab main kya bolon saab..." I rest my case .. Dutta and Nakusha the eternal love story..



Edited by Hamlet53 - 9 years ago
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Hammie, hammie ,hammie...
I take it as a swan song for ur trilogy, not for hamlet the writer.I want u to discover urself further as a writer...it was ur Destiny that u found urself as a writer, d inspiration came from d brilliant story of a doomed human being.destiny made u start watching it n now there is no turning back...pen is d strongest thing that exists in d world,n not a lot of people can do real magic with it.u have that magic in u.now it is time to explore further,inspiration never dies,it becomes a part of ur inner self.

Now coming to blue blood.I found this as d wonderful story of an orphan,he was bestowed with a good family, love, respect , but still he hesitated to accept those,did he always had d fear that he didnt deserve it?d journey starts where he was seeking for his identity...and ends when he himself becomes d identity for too many.here I found d beauty of d whole story.an inspirational one.it always had d true flavour of original laagi with added twist in d tale, in d form of krishna,a new character to me, for d first time dutta started growing as a family man,a large tree that gives shelter to all, pedestrians...d tree was well nurtured by naku,like a mother figure she kept his soil fertile... d flower of love bloomed in a subtle way n we all , as readers were thrilled to take breath in d beautiful fregrance of it, reminding us of laagi..finally dutta begins to accept life as it is,n finally d tree becomes large enough,ur story ends.I loved d whole backdrop of ur story.I always give honest comments hope u know me by now.what I felt is in some places u got distracted cz of ishq takes and felt like ending it in a haste.
I loved ur ending part a lot,how u tried to finish it in a positive ideal note.though not a happy ever after kind of way for me, u never listen to anybody so my personal views never matters.but I like d growing older with someone kind of things, n expect stories to end like that.trust me I see death everyday n its not good.so yes in prologue my heart was broken.
Being an ardent fan of urs I have discovered laagi which I never saw on tele.n d strong storyline left me speechless as I finished it...n here my offering to d writer whom I met on ishq forum.wanted to share this in ur thread.I had a plan to make u live those moments that made u a writer.congratulations for ur 1yr as a writer on ishq,who never failed to post every single day.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9tZQ21ZUsZJX3RHbmptNVJuWlE/view?usp=sharing


Sharing this beautiful poem of urs to those who never read it before.

Lies, deceit, tricks!
all consuming fire
blazing like the scourging sun
burning like warm flesh
struck by a wooden pole
stinging like an existing wound slashed by a sword!
Thurst! lunge! pierce! jerk,
spin! heave ! to destroy!
Smite! slaughter! slay!
the enemy within!
Sibilant, serpent , sissster!
Heave! sweltering with blood and sweat!
Bubbling , boiling, steaming rage
never ceasing furnace!
REVENGE! RECLAIM! REQUITE!
Avenge ! avenge! my mother's honour!
Smite! slaughter! slay
the enemy within !
My home ... my heart!
home is home none else!
My nest to which I could fly!
My traveller's rest, now another's!
My sacred home,nowdescecrated stands!
My mother's magic mantle I do miss
Her hand's culinary treats I desire!
Her gentle caress and soothing touch, I crave and want!
REVENGE! REVENGE!
I fear the quiver in my hand, the weakness in my heart !
My mother's daughter I will slay!!
Heave!!!
REVENGE! REVENGE!!
Every, gut with gore... I will get..when I strike the foes within!
Till then I will train,test and trail
every mettle in the might of thisbitter sweetrevenge!
For now I return LOVE WITH LOVE
grasp on to tha whicht is love
her love, her strength, her God!
Till I am set free from the enemy within!!!



Edited by simple2joy - 9 years ago

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