Hamlet's Revised Fanfic Collection Index - Page 86

Ohhh Rapture was ur frst Attempt at writing..😲 doesn't seems so..!! Hmm read the frst chap.. Major Datta patil... 😎 we girls are tou wese b stumped with uniform.. or ye tou fir b datta hai.. the sleeping lion..!! Brilliant.. hayye full on action vaction n no place of romance in Datta's life.. so typical of Datta..Aye sahib the onli woman in his life..😆 I was laughing hard on ths basic trait of datta which u chose to kept intact.. ufff..
Hmm Nakku doing Meds... me n joy ginna hav some amazing time reading ths ff fr sure..
Okk will see u after the 2nd chapter soon..!!😳

hammie hammie hammie,
how many times will have to call u?
my expression after reading this,😲,d question that was coming to my mind was-is hammie real? i have read BB action sequence but this is something even better than that.how could u write it?
ur last paras shocked me,with all its association with medical term.HOW?ap doctor to nehi ho hammie?

Hammie sweetheart 🤗 yes I read the 2nd chap.. The reckoning.. Wow just wow.. The flow of thoughts n words.. Pure magic.. Can't believe it was ur first attempt.. I loved how u were proceeding with a story a bit slowly dragging it.. Mazze le le k.. I loved the whole bombing scene.. It was like I'm seeing it with my eyes.. Movie chal rahy thy.. Have successfully created the war zone environment 👏.. Y is Ram after Datta yaar😛.. Har waqt use dekhta rehta hai.. Datta after being injured Datta was superb.. Just love him there yaar.. stop looking like a bunch of lost sheep thats an order" lollies was laughing hard on the one.. Ohhh just like nakku I too was giggling chalo ab aaya oonth pahar k neeche.. 😆😆

Reading part three,when r u going to annotate our comments ????

Hammie hammie hammie,
Very interesting, no woman can control d sher in him,haan?itnaa confidence?chalo hum bhi dekhte hain what u have written in next chapter.
Haan nuspa sahi bola hain.two medics on ur ff,wo bhi hospital k backdrop wala.wont criticize that part u have done best what u could do,basically enjoying d whole background more, nuspa ko mishal k khwab aa rahe hogi as her patient where she is taking care of him checking pulse, listening to his heart beats, palpating... kyun nuspa,that's why u r getting this excited na?kuch fantasy apne ss liye bhi bachake rakhna.
Kya ham kabtak u will b free to join us here? Hum dono milke sare enjoyments karrahe hain n u bz doing that superhard boring job.
Btw naku ko halwa banane k siwa kuch aur ata hain?in BB dobar same halwa khilaya yahape bhi hai halwa,u love halwa haina?
Take care.

Hmmm Ham so yes we read the 3rd one...tarref maane sooraj ko tube light dkhana..Ufff can completely relate to nurses talk..it was so so natural..seems u hv spent quite some times in hospital wards before writing these initial chapters.. 😳 datta was a cry baby during that gown part...off can't believe how khadoos reacted.. backless nighty n ladies frock...soopabbb dear...⭐️
cleaning Dutta the wounded frenzy",hehe..Nukku's mission accomplished. .. at least the frst step she took boldly..😛.. it won't take much time to tame this lion fr the lioness...😆
Yes wen u going to annotate our replies.. karo na once ur done of compilation thread..luv u n I'm glad I'm going thru ths treasure now..!!😳

Hammie,

@joy haan re aisa khadoos pt hai ye datta.. hav seen few rebellious pts like him.. lkn yaar I agree Mishal as a pt wud b absolutely a treat... dreams ka nahi pata.. I dun remember them ever.. 😆 ab pqta nahi mai kia kia dekhty hun uss mai.. 😉 😛 😆

Hammie 🤗 So nice to see you here 😃

Phewww so I went thru 4th one.. the battle within..!! Fabb...Datta's perspective. . Hmm Ham some great stuff.. ⭐️ ohhh ye Datta moorkh hai yaar 😆 kab samjhe ga.. he was totally enjoying that Datta grooming things by bold Nakku.. 😛 some hot stuffs out there. . 😛 u ve elaborated each n every inch of Datta with fine detailing.. 😛 😉 kia baat hai..

Ohhh Datta's perspective about not destroying some other gals life like his Aye sahib is not completely wrong.. so that's the reason he dun want Nakku around him.. bt then y ths gal effect him so much.. 😳 eagerly waiting to read how ths distances will be overcome. . 😳 will read the 5th one soon.. 😃 luv U..!!

Originally posted by: pearl100

Hammie🤗So nice to see you here😃

See Nusi left me n came here without me bad girl she is😆Okay I'll start with your chota chota work ie Os n then continue...will be back soon dear😃

le uss ka tou khud ka thread hai.. y wudn'tt she b here.. 😆 haan m or joy hain intruders.. 😛 Nusi ko khud pakad k laya gya hai iss heaven mai.. wrna moorkh nusi was ooblivious to ths masterpiece 😳