Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III

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sanam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#741

after along time i read this one wow so much has change arshi on a non date it was awesome really love the way u write this

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sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

Just emerging after a work deluge. Will begin writing the next chapter today and I want to say I will post real soon, but for a change I have decided not to cry wolf. Of course, as everyone familiar with the fable will know, the wolf does eventually arrive 😛 Will post soonish.

Thanks as always for the comments. And no, I am not going to write a chapter from Thumpa's pov (tempting as that is) and yes, Arnav and Khushi will get a happy ending. Happyish at any rate. And for those worried about the pace of this love story, don't fret, I am planing a trip and catch rabba vey very soon.. have to concede that Gul Khan & Co were genius and knew what they were doing. To prove my commitment to rabba veys, I even have a new header for the story. Thanks, Asma.

Until later.

I love the pace of the story..aise hee rakhna.. we get to read more ..

initially I read trip and catch separately.. was thinking may be New Horizonites planned a trip to some hill station? or a trekking trip may b???? or a rafting trip to Rishikesh? what say?

later I realized its "trip and catch"...I am eagerly waiting now..am sure everyone will excited about "Trip" as well as "trip and catch"..

mera logic gaya hai tel lene..pleezzz dont mind ;-)

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Jay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

Just emerging after a work deluge. Will begin writing the next chapter today and I want to say I will post real soon, but for a change I have decided not to cry wolf. Of course, as everyone familiar with the fable will know, the wolf does eventually arrive 😛 Will post soonish.

Thanks as always for the comments. And no, I am not going to write a chapter from Thumpa's pov (tempting as that is) and yes, Arnav and Khushi will get a happy ending. Happyish at any rate. And for those worried about the pace of this love story, don't fret, I am planing a trip and catch rabba vey very soon.. have to concede that Gul Khan & Co were genius and knew what they were doing. To prove my commitment to rabba veys, I even have a new header for the story. Thanks, Asma.

Until later.

"Trip" and "Catch" thats all I can see here 😉😳

Waiting for those "Rabba veys"

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

Just emerging after a work deluge. Will begin writing the next chapter today and I want to say I will post real soon, but for a change I have decided not to cry wolf. Of course, as everyone familiar with the fable will know, the wolf does eventually arrive 😛 Will post soonish.

Thanks as always for the comments. And no, I am not going to write a chapter from Thumpa's pov (tempting as that is) and yes, Arnav and Khushi will get a happy ending. Happyish at any rate. And for those worried about the pace of this love story, don't fret, I am planing a trip and catch rabba vey very soon.. have to concede that Gul Khan & Co were genius and knew what they were doing. To prove my commitment to rabba veys, I even have a new header for the story. Thanks, Asma.

Until later.

Radhika - the pace of the story is perfect. As long as Arnav and Khushi are headed to a a happy ending...via a few trip and fall and catches...not happyish but satisfyingly happy...as the manzil...i am happy to sit in the slow moving wagon and we reach Dilli whenever...I am thouroughly happy...

Specially since we are not even on a date yet...we are only on a non date...😉. Even though she always looks very pretty...hehe...my romantic escapist soul is satisfied ...

Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago

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pravallika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: Anamika100

Radhika - the pace of the story is perfect. As long as Arnav and Khushi are headed to a a happy ending...via a few trip and fall and catches...not happyish but satisfyingly happy...as the manzil...i am happy to sit in the slow moving wagon and we reach Dilli whenever...I am thouroughly happy...

Specially since we are not even on a date yet...we are only on a non date...😉. Even though she always looks very pretty...hehe...my romantic escapist soul is satisfied ...

I'm fine even with another 2 or 3 non dates before a date ;-)

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Anu567

@Anu567

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Posted: 10 years ago

#746

Beautiful story girl, take a bow. I have always meant to comment, and always had asli duniya creep up on me as I zoom through Tiwari & Sons...but I love the fact that finally, after what seems like aeons, Arnav and Khushi are finally warming up to each other. Friends hee sahee, one realizes that for a complicated creature like Khushi even that is a luxury she never will admit to...having a friend. She will never admit even to her mind in a million years that she likes Arnav. He alone has been a strange kind of constant - always there in the turbulence that her life has been. Khushi is rightfully distrustful about Poonam Raizada and her intentions. Who wouldn't be? But unlike most 'normal' people who would let go after a space, Khushi believes in harbor ring lifelong grudges. And that has not meant well for any of her relationships...with Arnav, with Raizada senior, with Anjali or indeed with any of her New-ons friends...that she treats with alternating disdain and envy. Her inherent insecurity that she camouflages under a veneer of prosaic reserve is definitely going to be tested in the days to come. Shekhawat, the ghastly man now has bhabhi also in his clutches, he is obviously making his best efforts to grab the shop...hmm...plot thickening definitely. Please, please, writer ji, can we have Arnav and Khushi realize their love and act upon it already. I am sure that will be the catalyst in triggering all the other cogs to move...love the depiction of characters in this story - your strongest forte - although the plot is imaginative and exquisite too. All in all a fabulous read...can we have the next chapter soonish, pretty please?!😳

Best,

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Ong18

@Ong18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#747

Lovely banner or header... so happy to know there will be a happy ending and the Rabba Ve moments are coming soon. :) now eagerly waiting for the next updates.

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DilLoveRomance

@DilLoveRomance

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Posted: 10 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

Just emerging after a work deluge. Will begin writing the next chapter today and I want to say I will post real soon, but for a change I have decided not to cry wolf. Of course, as everyone familiar with the fable will know, the wolf does eventually arrive 😛 Will post soonish.

Thanks as always for the comments. And no, I am not going to write a chapter from Thumpa's pov (tempting as that is) and yes, Arnav and Khushi will get a happy ending. Happyish at any rate. And for those worried about the pace of this love story, don't fret, I am planing a trip and catch rabba vey very soon.. have to concede that Gul Khan & Co were genius and knew what they were doing. To prove my commitment to rabba veys, I even have a new header for the story. Thanks, Asma.

Until later.

Hey the pace is brilliant

Waiting for the "trip and catch"

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#749

i missed commenting here..there is so much going on again ..

with Shyam with Renu bhabhi and what the heck her marriage proposal from that creep of the guy...

Well i loved their Non-Date...Arnav and Kushi kya jodi hai...and like Arnav said if Kushi connects with Aman i wonder if we are going to see a very beautiful friendship...

Another thing i so look froward to is Debanjanas rice cermony...if Kushi comes it ought to get very entertaining...

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zainza

@zainza

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Posted: 10 years ago

#750

I love the pace, so no issues with that and like someone else also mentioned before that your 'trip' was understood separately by me from the 'trip and catch'. I don't mind any, girna sambhalna would be fun and the new onites going on some trip is also an exciting idea, to cut the long story short anything you write will be loved. Lekin please Thumpa ka POV na dena behen hehehehehehehehe we can do without it so don't be tempted, pehle he itne saray logon ka drama chal raha hai LOL and all of them are so interesting that you want to keep reading and the loopholes have to all be filled and we're missing Arnav-Khushi scenes, so just give us the rabba ves, itna intezar karwaya hai, mushkil se toh kuch inki relationship patri par ayee hai, oho ab I'm requesting too much and beggars can't be choosers and right now we were kinda begging for an update (soonish), weren't we???