I love the pace, so no issues with that and like someone else also mentioned before that your 'trip' was understood separately by me from the 'trip and catch'. I don't mind any, girna sambhalna would be fun and the new onites going on some trip is also an exciting idea, to cut the long story short anything you write will be loved. Lekin please Thumpa ka POV na dena behen hehehehehehehehe we can do without it so don't be tempted, pehle he itne saray logon ka drama chal raha hai LOL and all of them are so interesting that you want to keep reading and the loopholes have to all be filled and we're missing Arnav-Khushi scenes, so just give us the rabba ves, itna intezar karwaya hai, mushkil se toh kuch inki relationship patri par ayee hai, oho ab I'm requesting too much and beggars can't be choosers and right now we were kinda begging for an update (soonish), weren't we???
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