Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III - Page 76

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zainza

I love the pace, so no issues with that and like someone else also mentioned before that your 'trip' was understood separately by me from the 'trip and catch'. I don't mind any, girna sambhalna would be fun and the new onites going on some trip is also an exciting idea, to cut the long story short anything you write will be loved. Lekin please Thumpa ka POV na dena behen hehehehehehehehe we can do without it so don't be tempted, pehle he itne saray logon ka drama chal raha hai LOL and all of them are so interesting that you want to keep reading and the loopholes have to all be filled and we're missing Arnav-Khushi scenes, so just give us the rabba ves, itna intezar karwaya hai, mushkil se toh kuch inki relationship patri par ayee hai, oho ab I'm requesting too much and beggars can't be choosers and right now we were kinda begging for an update (soonish), weren't we???


welcome to club...even I assumed its trip :-) heee heee
lets imagine them going on some adventure trip and Arhi getting lost in Himalayas..hayeee ..so romantic
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sman


welcome to club...even I assumed its trip :-) heee heee
lets imagine them going on some adventure trip and Arhi getting lost in Himalayas..hayeee ..so romantic


Its a wonderful idea, but they can't escape Poonam, she'll be flying on her broom and would most probably be catching Khushi if she slips/trips somewhere in the Himalaya hills, spoiling the long awaited rabba ve
PS sorry YB, I haven't warmed up to Poonam yet
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zainza



Its a wonderful idea, but they can't escape Poonam, she'll be flying on her broom and would most probably be catching Khushi if she slips/trips somewhere in the Himalaya hills, spoiling the long awaited rabba ve
PS sorry YB, I haven't warmed up to Poonam yet



Oye Nahi Nahi !! Himalaya hill Mai apni khushi trip ho gayi to sach Mai "rabba ve" Ho jayega !! Hume maidani Delhi Mai "trip" Chal jayega YB,vahna kam vale "rabba ve " ke chance jada hai !!
Btw I like the idea of poonam on broom ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully written...non date. you have your own way of writing humor.your preeto and Nk never fail to make me smile and Arnav and khushi bond is simply amazing.. love your picturesque and detailed writing... waiting for update ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just came across ur story yesterday and I have read all the chapters in one go. I found it very interesting. When r u planning to update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arnav khushi , rabba ve
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Posted: 10 years ago
Tadap tadap ke iss dil se aagh nikalti rahi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you Radhika for the note..but I am getting restless..how soon will be "real soon"?!!
I am happy with the pace and the story. For now I am eagerly waiting for the "trip and catch."

And I am pretty confused about the happyish ending..what is the catch there?😕


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: YellowBoots


Just emerging after a work deluge. Will begin writing the next chapter today and I want to say I will post real soon, but for a change I have decided not to cry wolf. Of course, as everyone familiar with the fable will know, the wolf does eventually arrive 😛 Will post soonish.

Thanks as always for the comments. And no, I am not going to write a chapter from Thumpa's pov (tempting as that is) and yes, Arnav and Khushi will get a happy ending. Happyish at any rate. And for those worried about the pace of this love story, don't fret, I am planing a trip and catch rabba vey very soon.. have to concede that Gul Khan & Co were genius and knew what they were doing. To prove my commitment to rabba veys, I even have a new header for the story. Thanks, Asma.

Until later.



Eye-lock wala Rabba Vey filled header and those bright colors for the name. Finally it looks like that ArHi will become some rangeen😉 Ho ja rangeela re!!! 😆
I hope this soonish is soon. We too can do without Thumpa's POV😛
Trip & catch - These two words can have many permutations and combinations even in Gul's collection of romantic creative ideas. 😃 I'll wait for a trip & catch and then a trip too 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just finished writing something so garbled that I am already dreading all of you having to wade through it. But in no mood to edit and make it logical now, will do that when I am back from work tomorrow. So expect an update late tomorrow night. Really late 😆

Also, desperately trying to come up with scenarios for sending Arnav and Khushi on a trip to some place. No ideas on how to though. Seriously wondering if I should just borrow a desi tv trope where couple takes one wrong turn somewhere and find themselves in the middle of a jungle and the guy after giving the girl his jacket, collects wood to build a fire. Which is of course a metaphor or something.

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