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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#631

LOVELY UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY AWESOME AND MIND BLOWING UPDATE.
LOVED VARUN AGGREED TO MOVE ON FOR HIS FAMILY.
GARVAYAL HAS LOVELY MOMENTS.
WOW KARWACHAUTH IS COMING VERY GOOD.
LOVED JAANVI AND RANVEER CUTE PART.
WOW FINALLY PARI REALISED HEO LOVE FOR VYOM AND WANT TO SURPRISE HIM ON KC.
WAITING FOR IT. BUT HOPE SOON WHOLE FAMILY WILL ACCEPT NIA AND FORGIVE ARMAAN AND NIA.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 😊

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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#632

Part 536!

In hall

Family watching movie.

Garv:(ask) payal, theek hona tum. Kuch chahiye toh batado.

Payal: haan kuch nahin chahiye, fasting kar rahe ho, stress free raho.

Family and garv get shock by her guessing.

Garv:(ask) tumhe kaisa pata main?

Payal: yahan rehke dekha, wife and husband ko fast karte rehte.

Everyone claps for her.

Garv:(aswell)

Payal:(smiles)

Vyom:(tells) payal dibhabhi, kitne understanding ho

Garv:(tells) ji nahin aisa kuch nahin, jab main propose karne k liye leke gaya toh payal angry hogayi infact dad ko bolnewali thi mujhe house arrest karne k liye.

Payal:(smiles) tumne mujhe daraya uska kya?

Vivaan:(ask) garv ,payal kya bolri hai.

Garv:(tells) correctiondad maine vihaan chachu ki trick use ki thi, main aj tak brothers ko nahin daraya

Everyone laugh

Nia:(arrives and greet them, wish him) happy karwachauth varun.

Varun:(getsad)

Garv: Varun, vivaaniya simple k sath jao.

Trio left.

Garv:(tells) nia, hum jab chote the, mom ko yaad nahin tha, toh dad time dene k liye ready hogaye the, tenyears k baad milne k baad bhi, selfish nahin hue Jo chahe karne mila mom ko. If u love Varun :(join hands) plz leave him alone

Nia:(went)

Garv:(went)

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In brothers room!

Varun:(is emotional)

Garv:(comes join him) Varun.

Varun:(hug him cries)

Garv:(consoles him) don't cry, maine samjhadia nia ko.

Varun:(ask) kya?

Garv:(tells) nia tujhe love karti hai toh tumse nahin mile,

Varun:(tells) thanks garv bhaiya.

Garv: don't say like that, hum brothers hain,

Vyom-jaiveer-mayur arrives.

Varun:(ask) film khatam hogayi kya?

Jaiveer: nahin.

Garv:(get up and felt dizzy and stumble)

Foursomebrothers: kya hua?

Garv:(tells) fasting k bcoz dizzy hogaya.

Varun: mere bcoz, iam sorry.

Vyom: Varun, dizzy feel hua toh rest karadete, sorry thank nahin bolte.

Garv: main rest nahin karnewala hun, payal ka mind change karne ki try karna hai

Vyom:(tells) payal di bhabhi theek hai.

Garv: Jo hota hai dikhta nahin hai, mere bhai.

Vyom:(ask) meaning.?

Garv: payal pain hai but aj k din batayegi nahin.

Foursomebrothers: oh I see.

Garv: chalen?

Brothers went.

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Back to hall!

Family waiting.

Brothers arrives happily.

Diya:(ask) theek hona Varun?

Varun: garv bhaiya k rehte mujhe kya hoga mom?

Garv:(smiles)

Brothers: agree.

Garv:(tells seriously) ek bad news hai.

Family:(ask) kya?

Garv: husbandChand apni wifechandni k sath hai, mujhe nahin lagta woh ayega, aaplog laptop main photo dekhlijiye fast complete karlijiye.

Everyone laugh.

Garv:(ask) kya hua.?

Maansi: humlog kids nahin hai, aur theek hai.

Jaanvi: don't worry.

Garv: okay then,

Vyom:(ask) lets play game,aaplog sab apne lp ki kya baat achchi lagti hai, ladies:(start question.

MaAnsi jaanvi Diya madhu poonam tells.

Vyom: ab aapki turn hai payal di bhabhi:(ask) so payal di bhabhi, aapko garv bhaiya ki kya baat achchi lagti aur kya baat buri.

Payal:(tells) mujhe achcha nahin laga tha,garv ka mere bcoz jaane se, but afterwards reveal hua garv parag tha toh relief hua.

Garv:(feltbad) iam sorry, main chahta tha, humdono ek sath confess karen,

Payal: don't be sorry garv,

Family claps.

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In backyard!

Pari:(felt hungry,inmind) pari, aj tujhe vyom se feeling share karni hai.1 2 3, vyom tum Sahi the, aare nahin, sar par chadega vyom, vyom I love you.:(keep repeating)

Vyom:(arrives hiding apple) pari tumhare liye kc gift.

Pari:(ask) kyun?

Vyom: aj kc hai isliye.:(show apple) have it. Breakfast nahin kiya tumne.

Pari: main apple nahin khasakti.

Vyom:(ask) kyun?

Pari:(tells) gift koi khata hai kya?

Vyom: nahin.

Pari: isliye mujhe nahin khana.:(ask) tum khalo.

Vyom:(tells)mujhe bhi nahin khana?

Pari:(ask) kyun?

Vyom:(ask) tumhara gift main kaise khasakta hun?:(ask) by the way mere question ka kya hua?

Pari:(ask) kya questions.?

Vyom: wahi, tum mere paas kyun ayi, itna believe kaise hai k main girls ko harm nahin karta

Pari:(ask) one last time aj evening tak ka time desakte ho plz.vyom.

Vyom: theek hai. Last chance detA hun:

Pari:(ask) tumne breakfast kyun nahin kiya? Fasting kar rahe ho mere liye.hainA?

Vyom:(ask) tumhe kaise pata?

Pari:(tells) u love me so fast for me, otherwise tum aisa kyun karunga, mr foodie.

Vyom:(madeface) tum kabhi nahin straight hogi Na?

Pari:(smiles)haan.(felt dizzy and stumble)

Vyom:(ask) kya hua?

Pari: kuch nahin.:(went)

Vyom:(also went)

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In garvyal room!

Garvyal spending time.

Garv:(ask) if u don't mind main kuch bolun.

Payal: haan bolo.

Garv:(tells) fasting kabhi aur karlo na plz.

Payal:(ask) tumhe mere liye tense kyun hore ho.?

Garv:(tells) bckz I love you tum meri friend and wife ho.

Payal:(explain) waise tum mere friend and husband ho, isliye mujhe bhi right hai fast karne ka.

Garv:wow(claps with smiles)

Payal: I should claps for u:(claps)

Garv:(ask) kyun?

Payal:(tells) aj jaise tumne situation handle kiya uske liye. Tum hamare siblings k best bhai ho.

Garv:(tells)main best nahin helpless brother hun. Trust me payal agar mujhe pehle pata hotA, nia kiski beti hai, friendship toh kya love nahin karne detA.

Payal:(rest on his shoulders) jaanti hun,(tells) tum dekhna hamare Varun koi aur milegi Jo hamesha happy rakhegi.

Garv::(rest on her head) main bhi yeh hi chahta hun.

Payal:(ask) by the way tum fasting kab se kar rahe ho.?

Garv: jab se tumse love hua tabse:(request her) day night ya time mat ask karna plz.

Payal:what:(laugh)

Garv:(smiles) thodi der rest karlo. Tiredness kam hogi.(make her rest on pillow)

Payal: tum bhi rest karlo. Tumhari tiredness bhi kam hogi.

Garv: ladies first.:(start pressing her head)

Payal:(close her eyes)

Garv:(continues pressing her head)

Payal:(fall a sleep)

Garv:(inmind) kitni cute lagti ho.

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In backyard!

Vyom feeling bore as pari sleeping like others also.

Garv:(ask) kya hora hai

Vyom:(tells) sab rest kar rahe toh bore hora hai.

Vyom: sabka theek hai but pari kyun. Varun check karke batana kya hua usko. Morning se kuch nahin eat kiya. Mere apple ko gift samajhke rakhliya.

Garv:(tells) action speaks louder then words.

Vyom: meaning.

Garv: main bataunga nahin tujhe guess karnA hoga. I will say yes and no for questiona

Vyom: ok(ask) pari ko fever hai?

Garv: no.

Vyom: food poison.

Garv: no.

Vyom: tooth ache.

Garv: no.

Vyom:stomach ache.

Garv: no.

Vyom: headache hai.

Garv: no.

Vyom: bp problem.

Garv: no.

Vyom: dieting to start nahin kardi.

Garv: no.

Vyom:(ask) kya hai.?

Garv: main nahin batasakta. Tujhe guess karnA hai. Ya wait karna hoga. Choice is yours

Vyom: mujhse angry toh nahin hai? Aaplog k birthday one day pehle usse question kiya tha, toh angry toh nahin mujhse.

Garv: no.

Vyom: then phir.

Garv:(tells) I can't tell u vyom.

Vyom:(rest on his lap) garv bhaiya, game ko change nahin karsakte. Aj fast hAi apna na.

Garv:(with smile) yes.

Vyom: aapki khushi ko dekhke lagra hai, pari fast kar rahi hai.

Garv:(smikes)yes

Vyom:(ask)mere liye.?

Garv: yes.

Vyom:(tells) thanks garv bhaiya.

Garv:(tells) thanks chod, propose karne ki preparation kar.

Vyom:(tells)ok:(take phone but stop)

Garv:(ask) kya hua?

Vyom: yes garv bhaiya, Varun sad hai, main kaise itna bada step lun.

Garv:(tells) vyom, tujhe pata hai, jab hamari surprise baby gayi thi, toh dad ne bola tha humein mom k liye Khush rehna hoga. Mom ko hurt na ho isliye.

Vyom:(tells) ok.

Garv:(ask) ab samjha tu, humdono dumb brothers kyun hai.

Vyom:(smilez) yes.i can't believe this, hum hamare grandfather's and fathers jaise hamara relation triple strong hoga.

Garv:(tells) mujhe bhi nahin:(become serious) imp talk time, tu vihaan chachu k jaise best son and brother hai, best lp banna hoga, pari funloving hai, but tradional girl hai, Jo hamare college k lovebirds main hota hai, woh tumlog k between nahin hosakta so don't ask, pari,uncomfortable hogi, dance karsakte ho, pari ko hi dekhna abse kissi aur ko nahin.

Vyom:(tells) main rules yaad rakhunga,thanks.:(hug him)

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In hotel room!

Mihika:(arrived with food) nia. Kuch khalo.

Nia: no mom. Aj mera fast hai.

Armaan: nia. Tujhe pata hai na varun tujhe love nahin karta

Nia: nahin dad. Abhi Nahi aj raat para chalega dad. Jab varun mere liye ayega aur fast break karega tab.

Mihikarmaan:(inmind) Kaise samjhaye tujhe.varun change toh BHI nahin ayega. All bcoz of me.

Nia:(inmind) varun. Main main jaanti hun.tum shadi k liye ready nahin ho isliye lie Kiya hoga.

Armaan: nia plz don't hurt yourself

Nia: dad plz.dont force me.icant say no to u

Armaan: okay fine.take time

Nia: thanks

Mihikarmaan went

Nia:(ipraying)

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In hall!

All family ladies deckup nicely doing kc Pooja.

Varun:(inmind) pata nahin nia kaisi hogi.

Garv:(whisper) nia k baremain sochre ho?

Varun:(getshock)

Garv:(whisper) dont be shock.(give key) chaho toh jao.

Varun:(stop him, whisper) I won't go.

Garv:(whisper) mujhe tarace par thoda kam hai. Yahan ki Pooja hojaye toh miss call karo. Payal ko lene ajaunga.

Varun:(nod in agreement)

Garv went.

Vyom:(inmind) moon kab ayega god. Kab pari ka izhar hoga

Aryan:(ask) Varun, yeh garv kahan chalegaya.

Varun:(tells) kuch work tha garv bhaiya ko.:(smiles)

Aryan: kV.

Karanvir: yes.

Aryan: garv k paas chalte hain.

Garv:(comes) main agaya hun.kuch work tha.

Aryan: nahin main kv k sath help karna chahta tha.

Garv: kuch important work nahin tha, checking karne gaya tha sab perfect hai.

Pooja ends.

Everyone went.

Garv:(pick his wife in arms)

Payal: garv tumhara fast hai.

Garv:(tells) tum mera rose ho dost ho:(went along her)

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At tarace!

Everyone watch sitting arrangements.

Diya:(remember that one vivaan did same) vivaan yeh kab kiya tumne.

Vivaan: maine nahin kiya? Vihaan tune kiya kya?

Vihaan: nahin. Soham tumne kiya kya?

Soham: nahin toh. Ronak bhaiya, aapne kiya.

Ronak: nahin.

Ranvir: main bhi nahin.

Everyone wonders

Vyom: lets all seat. Then

Everyone: abhi nahin

Rimjhim: gun madvi, tumhare dream man ne toh nahin kiya yeh sab.

Jrgunjan:(getshy) kya di.

Madvi: exactly koi nahin hai.

Garv:(arrives with his wife who is holding Pooja plate)

Varun:(saw him and remember) yeh sab garv bhaiya ne kiya hoga. Aap sab fast kar rahe hona

Everyone get surprise.

Garv:(ask) kya hua family?

Diya:(ask) yeh tune kiya garv

Garv:(tells) let it be mom, mr moon aate hunge.

Everyone sat.

Payal:(inmind) kitna sweet hai garv, sabke liye socha.mere liye bhi but bolega.

Garv:(ask) kya sochri ho payal?

Payal: nothing.

Garv: okay.

Pari:(inmind,practicing) vyom, ilove you.

Vyom:(inmind) pari, mujhe nahin pata tha, time Bade auspicious day mujhe pata chalega k tum mujhse love karti ho.

Vaderasehgal couples talking with eachother

Ankhon main teri playing in bg.

Young couple sharing eyelock.

Varun watching nia pic in sky

Moon appear.

Varun:(tells)moon agaya.

Everyone getup

Everyone watch moon did pooja of moon

Garv:(take pooja thali, follow ladies complete moon pooja)

Everyone get surprise including payal

Garv:(then sat on knees infront of her)

Payal:(look him through sieve then complete retual)

Garv:(feed her water and sweet)

Payal:(to feed him, water:(bend)

Garv:(stop her) be happy.

Wife did kc cermony with husband's and complete fast.

Unmarried girls did pooja

Pari:(give water to him)

Vyom:(take glass) ladies first:(feed her water)

Pari:(she feed him to) vyom main tumse kuch kehna chahti hun.

Vyom:(tells)no need mujhe time laga but guess karliya tum mujhse love karti ho.

Pari:(feltnice)

Everyone claps.

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After dinner!

In garvyal room!

Garvyal spending time.

Payal:(tells) thanks garv, kc main meri help karne k liye.

Garv:(tells) welcome.

Payal:(tells) tumhara surprise arrangement bhi achcha laga.dont try to lie.

Garv: I agree maine arrangements kiya.

Payal:(ask) sabko kyun nahin bataya.?

Garv:(tells) sab emotional hojate the happiness main, mujhe achcha nahin lagta emotional dekhna sabko fasting main.

Payal:( felt love on him and kiss him on his cheeks)

Garv:(getshock and look at her)

Payal:(get shy)

Garv:(join her and hold her hand) yeh kya tha?

Payal:(look down and tells) tumhara reward.mere caring selfless spl unique smart husband,:(ask) achcha nahin laga?

Garv:(tells) achcha laga, mujhe apne wife k sath yeh reward share karna hai, jaise sabkuch share karta hun:(ask) share karun.

Payal:(nod in yes)

Garv:(come up of her and kiss her on cheeks)

Payal:(close her eyes with shyness)

Garv:( come to his side and ask) yeh rewards se itna shy hori ho toh big reward milega toh kya hoga.

Payal:(understand) lets rest.

Garv: okay.

They take rest.

Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#633

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SWEET AND SUPERB UPDATE.
LOVED KARWACHAUTH CELEBRATION SO MUCH. IT WAS SO SWEET THAT EVEN MEN TOOK FAST TOO.
LOVED GARVAYAL MOMENTS VERY MUCH.
LOVELY PARI TOOK FASTING FOR VYOM AND VYOM GUESSED IT AND GOT VERY HAPPY.
LOVED PARIOM MOMENTS SO MUCH.
FEEL REALLY BAD FOR NIA AND VARUN. HOPS SOON MIRACLE WILL HAPPEN AND THEY WILL BE TOGETHER.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊

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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#634

Part 537

In garvyal room!

Afterbreakfast.

Family gather.

Vivaan:(tells) aaplog k liye ek news hai. Varun shadi k ready hogaya hai.

Everyone claps in misunderstanding.

Vihaan: phir se double shadi karenge wow, vyom pari Varun nia.

Vivaan: idea achcha, ek love marriege hai vyom pari aur ek arrangemarriege Varun ki hamari choice ki girl k sath.

Everyone getshock.

Garv:(tells) congrats, sorry iam not with u in this decision.

Everyone get sad.

Varun: garv bhaiya.

Garv:(turns and tells) it's my final decision

Varun: yaad hai garv bhaiya hum sab Bade hone k baad k planing kar rahe the, toh apko mera doctor banne ka plan achcha laga tha.

Garv:(control himself) mujhe Jo kehna tha kaha ,go to your room varun.

Varun:(went)

Family went.

Payal: garv, kya need thi aisa karne ki.

Garv:(tells) payal, main apne sath sabkuch hote tolerate karsakta hun, torture hote nahin dekhsakta hamare parents ho ya siblings specially younger siblings ko. Tum chaho to mujhe support karsakti ho, ya sabke jaise Varun ko support karsakti ho. But mujhse hope mat karna k main Varun ko support karunga.

Payal:(ask) tumne kaise socha main apne friend+husband ko support nahin karungi.

Garv:(get shock and turn)

Payal:iam with u:(smiles)

Garv:(hug her).

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In brothers room!

Brothers and sisters sitting with Varun who is sad by garv words.

Jrgunjan: don't worry varun, main garv se baat karungi.

Varun: No need gun di, garv bhaiya ready nahin hunge.

Vyom:(tells) Varun, hamari family Mihika devil ko family member k jaise treat kare the, uska bad reward mila unsabko,

Varun: mistake mujhse hui devils ki beti se love karne ki, momdad maasi chachi chachus uncles buas se nahin hogi. Best girl milegi.

Jrgunjan: Jo bhi teri wife banegi, usko hurt hoga, uske family ko Achcha nahin dikhega,

Varun: kuch nahin hoga.

Garv:(arrives) siblings karne do Varun ko Jo karna hai, leave him alone.

Siblings went.

Garv:(start going)

Varun:(stop him) garv bhaiya, don't leave me plz,

Garv:(seriously) mujhe bhaiya only mere siblings kehsakte hain, mere bhai ka enemy nahin Jo tu hai.

Varun: try to understand me garv bhaiya, maine Jo decide kiya theek kiya? Sab relief hojainge nia ko face karna nahin padega.

Garv:(ask)Jo tu nia ko miss karta rehta hai uska kya? Peoples toh mom dad ko sunayenge na,.

Varun:(answer back) aapne bhi toh aise shadi ki thi na? Bin faMily, tab kyun nahin socha? :(Bit tongue)

Garv:(felt bad)

Varun:(tells) iam sorry?

Garv:(tells) iam sorry, main bhulgaya tha, iam sorogate, sab Tere hai main nahin

Varun:(start leaving to talk him)

His phone rings.

Varun:(answer call) hello? What? Iam coming:(went)

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In city hospital!

Nia is unwell and denying for treatments.

Mihikarmaan is worried.

Varun:(step in) nia?

Nia:(saw him and tries to getup)

Varun:(comes and stop her) don't get up nia,(ask) tum treatment kyun nahin karne Deri thi.

Nia:(ask in weaktone) tum kyun badalgaya the.? Pehle bahot Sara love phir bahot sari hate kyun?

Varun: pehle treatments karalo, baat hote rahegi.

Nia:(tells in weak tone) pehle mujhe answer chahiye Varun?

Varun:(make story)hamari kasak Masi humse separate hoke sad hue the, mujhe laga hamari shadi hogi toh tum sad hogi, Isliye lie kiya maine love nahin karta tumse.

Nia:(getsurprise)

Mihikarmaan:(getsad)

Varun:(tells) doctor main nia ka would be fiancee hun, doctor bhi hun.(take injection and inject her)

Nia:(close eyes with injection pain)

Varun:(call someone)

Vivaan: hello Varun.

Varun:(tells) dad, aaplog k liye ek goodnews hai

Vivaan:(ask) kya

Varun: aake batata hun.

Vivaan: okay.

Varun: nia you take care, I will be back.:(went)

Nia: .:(smiles)

Mihikarmaan felt nice to saw her happy

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Back to vm

In garvyal room!

Garvyal spending time.

Payal:(ask) garv mood off kyun hai?

Garv:(tells) Varun k bcoz, usko lagta hai kissi se shadi karke woh humsabko Khush kardega, hum sab uski khushi chahte hAin? Nahin samajhta.

Varun:(arrives with sweets) thoda late hogaya but samajhgaya. Aur except karliya Nia ko.

Payal:(getsurprise) really.

Varun: yes payal di?

Payal:(ask) nia ko Sach pata chala.

Varun: no payal bhabhi,:(tells everything)

Payal: nice, (take sweet and feed him)Congrats.

Varun:(tells) thanks.:(offer him deserts) garv bhaiya.

Garv:(tells) congrats.?:(ignore him call someone)

Nia: hello.

Garv:(happily) congrats nia,:(normally) what is this? Maine tumhe Varun se away hone k liye kaha tha? Food skip karke Unwell hone k liye nahin kaha tha,

Nia: sorry garv bhaiya.

Garv:(ask looking his brother) it's ok. becareful, Tumhe nahin tumhare apnon ko hurt hosakta hai.(give phone to his wife and went)

Varun follow him

Payal: hi nia.c congrats. Nia.

Nia:(tells) thanks.

Payal: be happy, tumhare bhaiya ki baat yaad rakhna ok. Usko apnon ko hungry dekhna achcha nahin lagta.

Nia: ok payal di bhabhi.

Payal:(keep phone)

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In brothers room!

Varun trying to melt his brother anger.

Siblings also telling.

Payal:(arrive with wall support).

Garv:(ask)pain main tum kyun agayi payal?(give her support)

Payal: new chapter start hone se pehle old chapter close karne k liye bolne ayi hun.

Garv: tumhe baat pata nahin hai.

Payal: mujhe Sunna bhi nahin hai bas batana hai, kissi ne mujhse kaha tha tum wrong ko support karogi toh siblings bhi wahi karenge, so plz tum wrong mat karo aur na wrong karna learn karne do apne jaise,

Garv:(remember his and his wife talk) jaiveer payal ko support karo.

Jaiveer: ok bro.:(hold his sister hand)

Garv:(hug him) it's ok and congrats Varun.:(smiles)

Varun:(tells) thanks.

Garv:(pick his wifes and went)

Vyom: kya amazing hai payal di bhabhi. Ek second main melt kardiye. Garv bhaiya ko.

Pari: garv bhaiya toh samajhte hain.

Vyom: main bhi samajhta hun, garv bhaiya mujhe hints diye aur main samajhgaya.

Pari: negative sochke positive soche.

Vyom: mujhe kaise pata hoga tum fast karti ho.

Pari: first time fast kiya aur socha tum samjhoge. But nahin tumhe toh bolna hota hai.

Vyom: Usa main oral confession hota hai?mujhe bhi laga oral confession hoga.

Siblings: bahot achcha tha.pari, paridibhabhi.

Vyom: yes.

Pari:(smiles)

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After lunch!

In hall!

Family making plan.

Payal: sorry everyone, main help nahin karsakungi.

Vivaan: don't say like that, tum bahot badi help kar rahi ho.

Payal:(ask) meaning?

Vivaan: Varun k ek birthday main mujhe braintumor tha, aur sab toh sab yeh garv bhi mujhe kuch karne nahin diya tha.

Everyone remember and smiles.

Vivaan: so Tum garv ko apne sath rakho demands karo usse, main sabke sath preparation dekhta hun ok.

Payal:(smiles)

Varun:(inmind) pata nahi sab wohlog ko kaise tolerate karenge.

Vyom: kya hua Varun.

Varun: I was thinking, aap sab nia k parents ko kaise tolerate karenge.

Diya:(tells) Varun, call them mom dad just like nia.

Varun: I can't say, yeh baat bolke bhi aya main.

Vivaan: kya karte ho varun. Aise nahin hota, husband wife ek dusre parents ko apne parents jaise love karte hain, respect karna hoga mom dad.

Diya: nia ko dikhega toh hurt hoga.

Madhu: forget karo ke wohlog hamare enemy tha. Easy hoga.

Varun: I will try.

Payal:(tells) thanks garv mujhe itni achchi family se separate nahin hone dene k liye.

Garv:(ask) Varun, Tere paas injection nahin hai? Thanks sorry se mujhe bachane k liye.

Vihaan:(tells) garv be careful, payal k silent treatment ko face karna padega.

Garv:(tells) injection cancel.

Everyone smiles.

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In garvyal room!

Garv bring payal put her on bed.

Payal:(tells) thanks.

Garv:(tells) not again, mujhe thanks k instead wahi mini reward do,jo kc k baad

Payal:(kiss him on cheeks)

Garv:(didsame)

Payal:(remember something and tells) balm Dona garv.

Garv:(get worried) kya hua?

Payal: pehle do phir phir batati hun.

Garv:(take balm from drawer and give her) batao kahan lagana hai

Payal: ab apne sleeves fold karo.

Garv: ok(fold his sleeves)ab.

Payal:(hold his hand applying balm massage his arm)

Garv:(watching her lovingly tears comes bcoz of balm)

Ankhon main teri play.

Payal:(take other hand applying balm massage his arm)hogaya:(look him) burn hora hai.

Garv:(tells) not at all:(ask unfolding sleeves)iski kya need thi.?

Payal:(tells) jab mujhe fracture hua hai, tum mere helicopter bangaye ho. Isliye aaply kiya

Garv:(tells) helicopter:(normally) try achchi thi but plz apna pain increase mat karo, mujhe bolake Jo chahe bola ya scold karo, kuch din k liye. If I am wrong then punish me with your teacher stick.

Payal:(smiles) ok and iam glad sab theek hogaya, aur mujhe pata chalgaya tum kitne caring son ho.

Garv:(ask) koi doubt tha.?

Payal:mujhe laga tum school main intelligent hone ki acting karte the, teacherfear se.

Garv:(smiles) same here,

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Back to hall!

Garv:(join family leaving wife with sisters)

MaAnsi:(ask) balm kyun apply kiya.

Garv:(tells) payal ko laga uske bcoz mujhe pain hota hoga, toh apply kiya mujhe.

Jaanvi: so sweet.

Garv:(smiles)

Vihaan: garv, kc ki mystery solve karo aur batao? Woh arrangements tune kiya na.

Garv:(tells) yes, aap sab itne bade hoke fast kar rahe the toh socha aaplog ki energy save karlun.

Family get overwhelmed

Madhu:(ask) pehle kyun nahin bola tha.

Garv: mujhe laga aaplog emotional hojainge khushi main aur energy waste hojaigi.

Jaanvi: so sweet thought.:(smiles,) best bete , bhai, pati ho tum

Garv:(to himself) worst pati boliye jb.

Jaanvi: kuch kaha.

Garv: worst pati hun bolra hun.

Diya:(ask) aise kyun bolre ho?

Garv:(tells) main chahta tha, payal ko after marriege relax mile but dekhiye pain milgaya.

Diya:(tells) don't worry, teri extra care se, payal theek hojaigi.

Vyom:(ask) by the way, aap aur payal di bhabhi kya karnewale ho.?

Garv:(tells) aap sab bataiye kya karsakte hain. jisse payal ko problem ho:(smiles,) enjoy karsake.

Madhu: payal swing par baitsakti hai, tum uske aas paas dance karlo.

Garv: yeh theek rahega.thanks.

Madhu: no need.

They spend times.

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After dinner!

In hospital room!

After mihikarmaan went

Varunia spending time.

Nia:(ask) Varun tum mujhse upset toh nahin hona?

Varun:(tells) hun.

Nia:(getshock) kyun?

Varun: choti si baat k liye aise karte hain kya?

Nia:(tells) I am like this.

Varun:(tells)sochlo,tumhe main glocuse bottle gift karte rahunga chahe Jo festival ho.

Nia:(tells) I will not repeat my mistake.

Varun: good:(smiles) ek baat batana bhulgaya, hamare ghar main double wedding honewali hai, vyom bhaiya - pari di bhabhi aur humdono ki wedding ek sath hogi maybe

Nia:(get happy) wow. Kya news hai.:(ask) payal bhabhi kaise hai ab.

Varun: she is fine.

Nia: good to know.

Varun:(ask) by the way? Engagement k baremain plan kiya?

Nia:(tells) mujhe nahin pata tha hum unite hunge. Main toh sochri thi kya hogaya mujhse Jo tum aur sab mujhe stop nahin kare.itna love deke.:(getsad,)

Varun:(felt bad) iam sorry for whatever happened with u, I promise u aisa kabhi nahin hoga.

Nia:(tells) it's ok.

Varun:(tells) tum rest karlo. Main chalta hun.

Nia: okay, don't feel bad, new beginning k liye wait karo.

Varun:ok:(kiss her hand) see u soon.

Nia: bye:(smiles)

Varun:(went)

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In vm Garvyal room!

Garvyal spending time.

Payal:(tells) garv, maine kuch socha hai? If u don't mind bolun?

Garv: haan kyun nahin.

Payal: mujhe stick chahiye.

Garv:(ask) kyun? Maine dad ko chota hoke stop kiya isliye. Meri bandplay karna hai

Payal:(tells) not at all? Main nahin chahti tumhe mere bcoz problem ho isliye? Like

Garv:(tells) my dear payal, tumhara naam hi payal hai, but tum gold ki nahin phoolon k jaisi delicate payal ho? Jisko hold karke problem nahin khushi milti mujhe.

Payal:(get speechless by him)

Garv:(tells happuly) isliye maine sochliya, tum theek hogi toh bhi yeh helicopter Garv nahin land karne dega tumhe, sorry to say mere office join karne ka wait karna hoga tumhe

Payal:as u wish(ask) hamari country main jitne wife hai unka kya hoga.

Garv:(tells) maine two time shadi ki but 2in1 payal se.

Payal:(tells) main tumse shadi k liye nahin bolri, best lp k tip share karna hoga na dusre husband se.

Garv:(tells)main boldunga teacher wife ki permission nahin hai, otherwise house arrest karadegi dad se bolke..

Payal:(tells)wow.

Garv:(ask) jab dono wedding hojainge,tumhara pain kam hojaiga toh hum kya honeymoon par jasakte hai.?

Payal:(tells) but garv humne decide kiya tha na k jab tak siblings marriege nahin karte. Hum bachon k baremain nahin sochenge.

Garv:(laugh)

Payal:(ask)kya hua

Garv: film main hota hoga, hamare sath kuch years k baad hoga, we will be careful and roam around.

Payal:(smiles)

They take rest.

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In vm hall!

Brothers spending time with garv

Varun:(arrives) Kya baat hai San brother ek Sath?

Garv: I am not feeling sleepy. Mere bcoz yeh teeno disturb hogaye.

Varun: ab toh Sab theek haina, why r u not feeling sleepy?

Garv: bas aise. Tu bata nia kaisi hai?

Varun: pehle se better hai.

Garv: good.

Varun : aap?

Garv: Payal k liye sad hun. Jaise mujhe pain tha childhood main. Waise usko hai.phir BHI fast Kiya mere liye

Vyom: aap Payal di inspiration ho isliye fast kardiya. Jaise aap mujhe happy Karne theek hone ki aacting karke dikhare the.waise Payal di BHI theek hone acting Karen.

Garv:(smiles)

They went

Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#635

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY MINDBLOWIMG AND SUPERB UPDATE.
LOVED EACH AND EBERY PART. IT WAS SO HAPPY ONE UPDATE
WOW FINALLY NIA IS GOING TO ENGAGED WITH VARUN. NIA IS SO SWEET AND INNOCENT GIRL.
LOVED THE ADVICE GIVEN BY MADHU TO VARUN TO RESPECT NIA PARTENTS.
WOW NOW TWO MARRIAGES AT SAME TIME. EXCITED FOR IT.
LOVED GARVYAL MOMENTS SO MUCH. SO AFORABLE COUPLE THEY R.
NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON.
TAKE CARE 😊 😛

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Posted: 8 years ago

#636

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Posted: 8 years ago

#637

Part 538

Afterbreakfast

In hospital!

Garv:(waiting for payal checkup)

Payal:(cover his eyes with palm)

Garv:(remove her hand from eyes get happy to see standing by herself and hug her)

Doctor:(arrives)

Payal:(saw him get separate)

Garv:(sign her what)

Payal:(turn to Doctor side)

Garv:(saw doctor, make excuse) iam sorry jab bhi khushi hota hun toh sab bhuljata hun. Isliye mujhe koi bhi news ghar main hi dete childhood se.

PayAl:(control her laughter)

Doctor: it's ok.

Garvyal sat with doctor.

Doctor: sare reports perfect hai, lagta hai massage karadete the.

Payal:(start thinking who massage her)

Garv: mere 4 chote bhai wohlog massage karte the, payal Unki behen hai meri wife hone se pehle

Doctor: nice

Payal:(ask) mujhe pehle kyun nahin bataya?

Garv:(tells) chalke ask karenge.

Payal:(ask) Doctor main sabkuch karsakti hun na.

Doctor: yes.

Garv:(tells) chalen? Family wait kar rahe hunge.

Payal: ok.

They went.

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In vm hall!

Family waiting for gArvyal.

Garvyal:(arrives) surprise.

Family felt nice.

Diya:(did der arti and keep ricepot on ground)

Garv:(ask) iski kya need thi?

Vyom: lagta hai kissi se wait nahin hora.?

Payal:(get shy)

Garv:(glare at him)

Vyom:(tells) garv bhaiya, apne bola tha na mujhe, main dad k jaisa hun sab karsakta hun, yeh bhi isliye kiya maine? Otherwise main apne bhai se aise behave karta hun.

Vihaan:(glare at him) what main apne bhai ko irritate karta hun.?

Vyom:(tells) dad aapko Khush hona chahiye apka beta kitna sachcha achcha bachcha hai,

Vihaan:(tells) shutup

Diya: payal kick karke apne ghar ajao.

Payal:(kick and come inside with lp and take elder blessing)

Garv as well

They sath.

Garv:(ask)Gun madvi pari kahan hai.?

Varun: wohlog dusra surprise ready kar rahe hain.

Vyom: vivaaniya simple k liye aaplog phir se khelo. Uske baad ready bhi toh hona hai.

Garv: ready but kyun?

Vyom:(sign his elderdad)

Vivaan:(strict) shut up and play.

Garvyal play.

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In garvyal room!

Payal:(look her romantically decorated room)

Someone open door.

Payal:(hide her face in sari veil)

Garv:(step in with bouquet give her and lift veil with smile)

Payal:(getshy)

Garv:(sat beside her,ask) are you ready for next step.?

Payal:(nod in yes).

Garv:(play music extend hand)

Tu safar mera playing

Payal held his hand and get up.

Garv:(dance with her and then pick her in arms)

Payal:(keep hands around his neck)

Garv:(take her to their bed made her sat and joke with her) tumhare friends ne bataya kya kya hota hai.

Payal:(tells) main friends se hamari cocktail main mili thi, usse pehle toh slap ki punishment jhelri thi.(getsad)

Garv:(felt bad hug her) iam sorry payal. Main tumhe hasana chahta tha sad nahin karna chahta tha,

Payal:(tells) don't be sorry garv, agar tum nahin hote toh I think main bhi nahin hoti.

Garv: main tumhe ek baat batana chahta tha, chinky ka bhai humse dur koi aur country.

Payal:(ask) tumhe kaise pata?

Garv: chinky ne bataya tha

Payal:(get happy and hug him)

Garv:(hug her back, inmind with anger) Samar singh, agar payal ki family ki chinky krespect ki care nahin hoti toh tujhe court lejake punish karta

Payal:(inmind) dekhre mom dad, apki beti ko kitna achcha lp mila hai garv jaise friend main:(smiles)

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In brothers room!

Varun is working i laptop

Jaiveer mayur Finding gift for pariom varunia.

Vyom:(ask) what's going on?

Sehgalbrothers: kuch nahin.

Jrgunjan madvi pari arrives.

Madvi: jaiveer bro mayur what are you doing. Chatting with gfs.

Pari: invite karo, phir four couples sath marriege karenge.

Vyom: idea achcha, but as siblings enjoy kaise karsakenge.

Pari: yeh toh main bhulgayi.

Vyom: koi baat nahin main tumhe badam feed karunga. Sab theek hojaiga.

Pari: main hamesha nahin bhulti , excitement main bhulti hun.(ask) gun di ek baat bataiye aap ko kaisa lp chahiye.

Jrgunjan: main wedding nahin karungi.

Madvi:(ask) kyun?

Jrgunjan: tumlog toh jaante ho, past k baremain, mom and dad mere without nahin rehsakte na.

Madvi: haan agree with u.

Vyom: achcha idea hai, hum bhi toh abhi aye hain lets enjoy together

Brothers sisters hug eachother.

Varun:(inmind) vyom bhaiya ki wedding tak nahin jhelsakta hun nia k parents ko mom dad ko convince karna hoga:(Tells) siblings I will be back.

Jrgunjan: kahan.

Varun: abhi aya:(went)

Siblings pariom spend time.

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In vm hall!

Vaderasehgal couples spending time.

Varun:(tells) main aap sabse kuch bolna chahta hun,

Vaderasehgal couple: haan bolo

Varun:(tells) isse vyom bhaiya, pari di bhabhi se shadi karen, main nia se shadi karna chahta hun. Sochiye,Atleast vyom bhaiya pari di bhabhi ki shadi main hum aram se enjoy karenge.

Diya:(tells) vyom tujhse bada hai.

Varun:(normally) mom main nahin chahta aap sab wohlog k bcoz past yaad karo, iske liye main kabhi bhi shadi karunga nia se otherwise main apne aapko hamare dusmaan ki beti se love karni ki punishment dunga, bhag jaunga.

Vaderasehgalcouples get up

Someone slap him.

Varun and others shock to see jrgunjan slapping.

Diya: gun yeh kya kiya? Beta

Jrgunjan: Jo yeh idiot deserve karta hai.:(turn him ask with anger) dad ka birthday yaad hai.? Uske baad Jo hua woh yaad hai, ?mom dad ki condition yaad hai?

Siblings arrives excepted garvyal.

Varun:(nod in yes)

Jrgunjan:(ask) jab sab yaad hai toh itni badi baat kaise boldi mom dad se.

Varun:(hold ears) sorry mom dad. Intentionally bola.

Vivaan: no problems, vyom ne bola tha na usne sab vihaan se learn kiya, waise tune mujhse learn kiya, anyways, Varun tu doctor haina, kabhi tera patient jaldi theek hua Tere medicine se.

Varun: nahin.

Diya: waise hi difficult hamare liye hai, don't worry humlog bhuljayenge pehle jaise happy rahenge,

Varun: ok then.s sorry gun di.

Jrgunjan: it's ok.

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In lunch! At dining.

Family waiting.

Vyom:(ask) garv bhaiya, fun kiya puri detail bataiye na.

Brothers irritate him.

Vaderasehgalcouples smiles

Garv:(tells) mom dad chachu maasi uncles buas, vadera brothers ki shadi k sath sehgalbrothers ki shadi karAdijiye, details dekhenge.mere bhai

Payal:(arrives and serve everyone)

MaAnsi: join karo payal. Abhi theek hui ho.

Payal: ji(sat with them)

They taste food and pass Money to eachother then give garv.

Garv:(wantedly tells for his wifehappiness) thanks

Everyone laugh at him.

Garv:(ask) maine kiya?

Vaderasehgalcouples:(tells) payal hamari temperory bahu hai tu nahin hai.

Garv:(bit tongue) sorry :(give his wife)

Payal:(tells) thanks, double thanks brothers.

Jr.Vaderasehgal:(ask) kyun payal di bhabhi.

Payal: Garv ne mujhe bataya, tum sab ne mere leg ko massage kiya

Jrvaderasehgalbrothers:(ask) humne.

Garv:(tells) tumlog caught hogaye ho kuch bhi bolne ki try mat karo:(signing them) agree karne se problem nahin khushi hogi.

Jrvaderasehgalbrothers: don't thanks us payaldibhabhi, anything for u.

Payal: next time se yad rakhungi.

Everyone enjoy food.

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In brothers room!

Garv arrive with brothers.

Vyom:(ask) yeh sab kya bolre the payal di bhabhi.

Garv:(tells) tum uske bhai ho feet touch karsakte ho, main toh husband hun Na ladies k liye god k equal hote, agar payal ko patachalta toh bura lagta k main husband hoke leg touch kara uske toh sin samjhegi

Jrvaderasehgalbrothers: you are great.

Garv:(tells) iam not great payal is great.

Vyom:(ask) bataiye?

Sisters arrives with payal.

Payal:(ask) kya batana hai.

Garv: yehi k humlog main se eachother se love kaun karta hai.

Payal: bahot difficult hai, answer karna.

Siblings smiles.

Diya:(arrives) payal, Jo guest miss hogaye the woh garv ki wife se Milne aare tumse Milne aare, tumhe yaad hai mrs handa mrs Mehta mrs Gupta mrs sarna mrs verma mrs khurana. Aaj

Payal::(get tense) yesmom.

Siblings and Diya went.

Garv:(ask) payal tum worried kyun ho.

Payal: chinky k bhai sath engaged thi toh wohlog ne dekha humein. Aj ki tension hori hai.

Garv:(tells) don't worry,remember one thing, family aur hamare dono parents k liye mere liye tum best ho. Guest ko kya lagega important nahin hai AUR tumhare liye nahin hona chahiye unke views important.

Payal:(ask) garv ek baat batao tumhe mujhe irritation nahin hoti doubt nahin hota, mere sath

Garv:(tells) payal, agar tum meri friend bhi na hoti toh doubt nahin karta, pata hai kyun? Bcoz of our parents upbringing, they teach u live for ours,they teach u they difference of right wrong. U understand what is right what is wrong, pure cure ki tension kyun lo

Payal:(get amaze) chalen.

Garv: haan and don't worry, aj sab theek hoga.

They went.

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In hall

Guest waiting for vivaaniya d.i.l

Sisters serving snack.

Payal:(arrives with poonam dress up beautifully)

Guest getshock to saw her as garv's wife instead Samar.

Payal:(join hands then take guest blessing)

Guest look eachother.

Payal:(sat with them)

Mrs handa : yeh sab kaise hua?

mrs Gupta: Samar kahan hai?

mrs sarna: fight hui thi

mrs verma: kuch hua Jo nahin hona chahiye garv payal k Bich main kuch hua

mrs khurana: kya hua

Payal:(tells) Samar jaisa dikhta tha, waisa nahin tha,isliye hamara relation nahin raha, garv aur hamare bhai toh aise person hai, Jo apne parents ko hungry nahin rehne dene k liye aane ka wrong day batadiye,:(smiles) aaplog plz kuch bhi bolne se pehle humsabke mom dad kaise hain sochiye. It's requesr

They apologize to vaderasehgalsisters and to payal.

Vaderasehgal:(smiles) it's ok.

They praise their d.i.l and went.

Vaderasehgal men's came.

Payal:(tells) I am sorry mom. Main apke aur dad k garv k against nahin tolerate hua.

Diya: don't say sorry, I know tolerate karna easy nahin hota, ek se zyada baar, phir bhi tumhe achche samjhaya that's we like: about u(smiles)be happy.

Payal:(smiles)

Everyone claps for her

Garv:(inmind) I am proud off u.i love you.

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After dinner in hospital.

Nia is with mihikarmaan.

Varun: nia. I got a surprise for u :(smiles)

Nia:(ask) kya.

Varun:( step in tells) ajaiye nia k surprises.

Garvyal parivyom:(enters) surprise nia.

Nia:(tells) what a nice surprise varun, thanks.

Varun: welcome.

Mihika: tumlog kuch loge, tea and snacks.juice.

Garvyal pariom: no thanks, dinner hogaya hamara.

Garv:(ask) nia discharge kab honewali.uncle, guest list final karna hai mom dad maasi chachu ko.date bhi find karna hai.

Armaan: discharge Ka kaltak pata chalega, family main hum teeno hi hai,.

Garv: ok i will tell mom dad.

Nia:(ask) payal di bhabhi, after shadi sari pehenna toh nahin hoga mujhe.

Payal: shadi k baad love of life husband hojaiga but mom dad in-laws jaise nahin hoge.

Nia:(get relief)

Payal: humlog sisters k jaise rahenge.

Pari: exactly

Nia: thanks. Iam so much relief.

Garv: payal pari vyom chalo, nia ko rest karne dete hain, (give key) Varun meri car key rakho baad main aajana tu.

Varun: chalenge, nia ko rest karne dete hain:(went along them) bye nia.

Nia:(tells) iam so lucky mom dad, Varun jaisa lp aur uski family milnewAle hain mujhe

Mihika: tumhe bhi utna hi love dena hai apni new family ko, upset hoke aise waise mat karo, sabko.

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In vm

In garvyal room!

Garv:(spin with wife)

Payal: garv main faint hojaungi(stop him hold head) kya hua?

Garv: aj tumne jaise guest ko handle kiya, mujhe achcha laga.

Payal:(ask) tumne dekha.

Garv:(tells) haan mujhe laga tum badon k respect k liye kuch nahin bologi isliye main aane ka chance dekhra tha. Sunliya.

Payal:(normally) sorry garv mere support karne main tumhari image tarnish hogayi i should have go away marriege nahin karna tha pehle.

Garv:(cup her face) payal, mujhe world view se koi Matlab nahi hai, family aur tum important ho mere liye that's it.:(normally)nahin nahin kuch aur bhi chahiye mujhe tumse.

Payal:(ask) kya chahiye?

Garv:(tells) paas aao ear main bolunga

Payal:(comes near him) bolo

Garv:(shouts) tumhari jaise beautiful si cute si pretty si choti si gorgeous si no1 si smile chahiye mujhe.

Payal(smiles bcoz of him)

Garv:(tells) from now tumhe sone se aur utne k baad smile karna hai, film TV soap wife k jaise kiss bhi karsakti ho, only next kc main feets touch mat karna. Otherwise main Jo karunga tum imagine nahin karsakti.

Payal:(ask) kya karoge.

Garv: sabke blanket dhoti k jaise tie karunga karunga. Na leg dikhenge aur na tum touch karsakogi.

Payal:(laugh on his idea)

Garv:(admire his wife)

Ankhon main teri begin.

After some time they take rest.

Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#638

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY MIND-BLOWING ANDSUPERB UPDATE.
LOVED THE LOVELY MOMENTS BETWEEN GARVAYAL. THEY R SO SWEET.
LOVED VARUN AND NIA PART.
LOVED HOW PAYAL HANDLED THE SITUATION.
LOVED THE FAMILY TIME SPENDING TOGETHER.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 😛

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Ayesha_Tabassum

@Ayesha_Tabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#639

Part 539

Afterbreakfast

In brothers room!

Varun getting dressup and changing for nia and his along brother s.i.l alliance and is worried for everyone. Spoil room

Brothers:(arrives)

Garv:(ask in Varun childhood style) friends se fight hogayi kya teri.?

Varun(tells) nahin. Infact humlog toh aaplog k cocktail main enjoy kare. Uske baad nahin mile.

Payal:(arrives) kya hua? Varun tumne decide kyun nahin kiya abhi tak. Tum jaoge toh hi uncle aunty ayenge na. Tumhari aur nia ki wedding fixed hogi:(smiles)

Varun: iam worried. Mom ne Jo kaha kaise karun samajh nahin aara. Aur nahin kiya toh nia kya sochegi? Koi aur hote na toh Khushi khushi karta. How can u take their blessing.

Payal:(tells) Varun is ghar k har corner main hamare aur parents grandparents k footprints hai, tum nia k parents ko forget kardo, blessing lelo floors se ,mom dad ko achcha lagega aur nia ko kuch pata nahin chalega.

Varun:(get relief) payal di bhabhi aap great ho.

Payal: yeh sab maine yahan learn kiya chotimom+mom se.

Varun:(tells) nice.

Pari:(arrives) Varun chalen nia k paas.

Vyom: main bhi chalra hun.

Trio went.

Mayur jaiveer also.

Payal:(start falling them)

Garv:(hold her hand and stop her romantically)

Payal:(tells) garv, preparations karna hai mujhe nia and family k liye.

Garv:(hug her from behind) date par chalogi mere sath. Hum aur hamara love that's it

Payal: wedding dates decide hone k baad dekhte hain kab jasakte hain.

Garv: okay fine:(smiles)

They went from their.

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In hall!

Family waiting for nia parents. Along pandit

Mihikarmaan arrives.

Jrgunjan payal madvi bring tea & snacks For them.

Phone rings.

Garv: (went far)haan

Vyom: garv bhaiya, sabko boldijiye date same chalegi but time different hona chahiye.

Garv:(smiles) okay i will try..

Vyom: i love you my brother.

Garv: i love you too.

Someone knock on his shoulder.

Garv:(endcall and saw her wife)payal.

PayAl:(ask) kiska call tha and confession kisse hora tha.?

Garv:(start legpulling) hai koi jo tumse pehle meri life entry karli

Payal:(ask) kaun.

Garv: abhi nahin baad main batata hun:(went near family)

Payal:(follow him)

Garv:(whisper in mom ear) mom aaplog ek shadi ka time change kardiye. Date same chalegi. Hum sab enjoy karsakenge.

Diya:(pass msg to her lp)

Vivaan:(smiles and tells) panditji dono shadi alag time main hosakti toh achcha rehta tha.

Panditji: theek hai beta:(start finding date and time)

Payal:(inmind)aise kisse baat karsakta hai garv.

Panditji:(tells) divali k baad sagayi karsakte hain, uske teen din k baad shadi.

Everyone felt nice.

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At hospital

Both couples talking with eachother.

Phone rings.

Vyom: hello.

Garv: phone handsfree kardo.

Vyom:(keep phone hand free) boliye brother.

Garv: congrats,tumlog ki engagement Diwali k baad hai, shadi uske teen din baad.

Vadera brother spin their lp and forget about open door.

Garv keep telling hello.

Pari:(heard brother voice) phone on hai vyom.

Varunia pariom thanks him.

Garv: welcome..

Varun:(take phone and off handsfree) aur kuch hai.

Garv: nia k sath k sath aana hoga, they will be staying here

Varun:okay.:(endcall) pari di bhabhi aap nia ko packing main help kardo. I will go and talk about discharge with doctor.

Vyom: main bhi chalun.

Varun: I will manage. Aap car start karo.:(went)

Vyom: come fast ok.:(ask) wheel chair chahiye kya? Nia?

Nia: no need vyom bhaiya..

Vyom: ok(went)

Pari:(pack her s.i.l bag)

Nia:(ask) main kuch help karun pari di bhabhi.

Pari: relax karo.

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Back to vm!

guest room!

Mihika armaan sitting.

Poonam:(arrives to tell them)

Mihika:(felt nice to saw her) poonam kaisi hai meri behen.:(comes to hug her)

Poonam:(tells seriously) pehli baat humlog groomsider bridesider hai, dusri baat, hamari choti betiyan se dur rehna:(went)

Mihika:(sat and get emotional)

Armaan:(tells) control your self, hum yahan nia k liye aye the aur uski shadi k baad chalenge, don't forget.

Mihika: I know, mujhse control nahin hua. Itne time baad dekhke

Armaan: becareful.

Nia:(arrive her tobe fiance) mamma papa

Armaan: happy hona?

Nia:(remember) aap mamma se careful hone kyun bolre the.

Armaan: ab Varun agaya haina family main, toh bolna chahta tha ke donoko equal love karo, bete k aate beti ko nahin bhulo.

Varun:(inmind) kitna drama karte hain

Nia: okay, Varun:(sign him

Varun:(take blessing by touching floor instead their feets)

Mihikarmaan: be happy.

Varun:(fakehappily) aap teeno baatein kariye, main chalta hun,

Armaan:(ask) Varun, hospitals charges kitna hua?

Varun:nia jitni apki apni hai utni meri hai, main handle kardiya don't worry uncle.

Nia: Varun main sochri thi, humlog abhi mom dad mamma papa ki habit karen.

Varun:(tells) nia yahan ka rule hai, shadi k baad mom dad bolne ka:(went)

Pari arrives & watch nia with parents

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In sisters room!

Pari is missing her kaur parents after watching nia with her parents. Get emotional.

Vyom: pari.

Pari:(wipe tears, open door) kya kam tha.?

Vyom:(notice her eyes) tumhari eyes red kyun hai.?

Pari:(tells) nia ko uske parents k sath dekha toh mom dad ki yaad agayi.

Vyom:(tells) pari tum bhi na buddhu ho, hamare double parents hai, ek hamare dil main hai toh ek hamare samne hai.:(start rhyming) jab dono parents ka ho sath, toh ronewali hai kya baad.?

Madvihaan:(arrives) kaun roraha hai.

Vyom: aaplog ki buddhu beti.kaur Mom dad ko miss kar rahi hai.

Pari: iam sorry mere sath, main bhulgayi thi mere moms dads hai

Madhu: humlog bhi aise behave karte.:(hug her)

Vihaan:(ask) mom dad and daughters icecream khane chalen.

Vyom:(hAppily tells) main bhi chalunga.

VihAan:(tells) no need, hamesha mom dad betiyan jaate hain, aur haan car main hide hona hai toh hojao, humlog cab se chalejayenge.

Vyom: mujhe icecream achchi lagti hai childhood se.

Madhu: leke ayenge but tujhe nahin leke jayenge.

Vihaan: tum jao aur rings lao, hamari pari k liye.

Vyom:(start acting) kya time agaye hai, love person ki bad habits badalta hai, but pari toh team se out kardi mujge:(went)

Trio laugh

Madhu: fresh hojao phir pari phir chalte hain.

Pari:ok:(went)

Madvihaan:(went)

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After lunch in park!

Garvyal sitting holding hands.

Payal:(ask) garv, tum I love you kisse bolre the.?

Garv:(deside to tease her) tum meri phone conversion sunri thi?

Payal: (with guilty)tum dur hoke baat kar rahe toh mujhe laga problem hai toh main agayi tumse ask karne aur sunliya.

Garv:(tells) sab jaante hue doubt kiya mujhpe.

Payal:(felt bad) no garv aisa nahin hai,

Garv:(look otherside)

Payal: plz forgive me(get emotional)

Garv:(get worried and hug her) iam sorry, main mazak kar raha tha..

Payal:(get shock) haan.

Garv: woh vyom hai jisse main ilove you bolra tha.

PayAl:(start beating him)

Garv:(get up and climb on bench and make speaker of palm)

Payal:(get up) garv gir jaoge

Garv:(anounce) asmaan aur dharti, phool aur bagh, panchiyom titliyon, bhaiyon behhnon, main aap sabke samne apni bachpan ki dost, zindegi bharki biwi se apne pyar ka izhar karne ki chahta hun.

Everyone gather for him.

Garv:(announce) I love you Payal garv vadera

Payal:(climb on bench and hug him)

TootA jo kAbhi Tara play

Garv:(also hug her back)

Everyone claps

Both climb down and spend times

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Back to vm hall!

Family sitting.

Garvyal arrives happily.

Jaanvi: kya baat hai bahot Khush ho.

Payal: actually jb, garv bolra tha, next kc main hum sabke blanket main ghumega, but feet touch karne dega

Everyone laugh

Garv: she is right, mujhe lagta hai k, bachon ko apne parents aur apne se bodon k feets touch karna chahiye, husband feets touch nahin karte na wife k toh husband kyun karen, hum koi god thodi hai after all.

Everyone claps On his thought.

Payal: it's traditions and wife happiness.:(smiles)

Everyone agrees with her.

Garv:ok fine karo jo karna hai, main bhi wahi karunga jo mujhe karna hai.:(smiles)

Diya: kahan gaye the tumlog?

Garv:(lies) mujhe laga doctor se opinion Lena chahiye, payal wedding function main participate karsakti hai ya nahin.? Doctor ne kaha yes and be careful.

Diya: achcha kiya.

Garvyal:(smiles)

Payal:(tells) pari mere sath chalogi Kuch baat karni hai.

Pari: okay:(went along her)

Vyom:(start falling)

Garv:(stop him) kahan?

Vyom: payal di bhabhi se kuch baat karna hai.

Garv: abhi nahin baad main.

Vyom:(went)

Garv:(follow him)

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In garvyal room!

Payal pari arrives.

Pari: boliye payal di.

Vadera brothers comes one by one.

Payal: abse tujhe na change hona hoga.

Pari:(get confuse) dress main kya problem hai.

Vadera brothers smiles.

Payal: :(smiles)nahin buddhu, (normally)personal problems main family ko include mat karo, vyom par doubt mat karo. Kabhi bhi outsider par believe mat karo. Otherwise kab kiske sath kya hojaye pata nahin chalta. Becareful ok.

Pari:(start laughing)

Payal:(get serious) be serious. Pari.

Pari:(tells) lagta hai aap bhulgaye ho, hum sath rehnewale hain. Sab thoda thoda teach karsakte ho. Abhi kyun.

Payal:(close her eyes)

Garv:(arrives with his brother) pari kya haina, payal teacher mood main hai, Isliye serious hai. Class over go and enjoy.:(

Pari: thanks:(went along vyom)

Garv:(look door and join) payal, kya hogaya tha jo tum serious hogayi.

Payal: main bas chahti hun, pari mere jaise foolish nahin rahe..

Garv:(ask) kisne kaha tum foolish ho.

Payal: past main Jo kiya woh foolishness hi toh hai,

Garv: tum foolish toh ho. teacher stick leke ghumlena tha, ya phir costly gifts mangna tha hamare Usa college k girls k jaise.

PayAl:(ask) really aisa hota tha tha?

Garv: yes, most ladke toh apna direction change karte the gfs ko dekhke.

Payal:(ask) tum girls se friendship karte the.

Garv: ek hi friends thi uska naam kuch tha but mere heart mind tongue par tumhara naam rehta tha. Aur main payal bolta tha:(spends time with her)

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Back to hall!

Family spending with garv's friend koyal

Garvyal arrives.

Koyal:(get happy) garv.

Garv: payal.

Koyal:(hug him) it's koyal, nice to see u

Family felt strange.

Garv: same here(get separate) sabse toh milgayi hogi:(take his wife ahead) yeh hai,meri childhood friend and life time wife mrs payal garv vadera.

Koyal:(getsurprise) tum toh bolte the, jaake family k sath rahoge, phir apne dad k jaise lawyer banoge phir shadi. Aisa kyun kiya?

Payal:(felt bad for him)

Garv:(tells) filmy baat hai, hum childhood main alag hue, adulthood main mlgaye, love hua aur shadi hui.

Koyal: Very funny

Garv:Gun madvi leke jao. Becareful

Vaderasisters take herand went

Garv:(tells) I am sorry payal, she is like that. don't mind anything ok.

Payal:(inmind) iam sorry.garv:(smiles) I understand.

Diya:(ask inslowtone start scolding continuesly) garv jab tumhare paas payal hai is friend aur tumhe love hogaya tha toh kya need thi friendship karne ki.

Garv: mom

Diya:(ask In slowtone)Bulane ki kya need thi. Studies karne gaye the ya friendship karne. Bhulgaye 4chote bhai hai, love triangle learn karsakte

Garv:(keep hands on shoulder) mom, aap sab couples mere idol ho, jinse maine learn kiya one time jisse love karo toh lifetime uski love, woh mera favourite love rule hai, jisse main nahin bhulunga I promise.

Diya:(hug him)I am sorry garv, duniya main kuch log achche nahin hote isliye darti hun.

Garv:(hug her back) don't worry.

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In evening

In vm garvyal room!

Garvyal resting.

Garv:(ask) payal tumhe sach bura nahin laga na

Payal:(tells) thoda buralaga.

Garv:(getscare) kya?

Payal:(tells) itne bade hoke kaun behave karta hai bachchon k jaise aur friend ko apne love ka name detA hai.

Garv:(getrelief) kya payal, tumne mujhe daradia.

Payal:(laugh and tells)tit for tat.

Garv:(tries ask) jab mujhe usne hug kiya? Toh tumhe kaisa laga?.

Payal:(tells)bura nahin uncomfortable feel hua.

Garv: Usa main yeh sab hota tha toh usko habit hai.

Payal:(ask) tum kab yaad karoge woh payal nahin koyal hai.

Garv: let it be, kuch dinon main jayegi, Aur tum rahogi.

Payal:(tells) as u wish, but plz mom ki advice ko follow karo.

Garv:(tells) ofcourse, I hope jald se jald dono couples ki wedding hojaye, sab ko Nia k parents se holiday mile.

Payal: don't worry.(ask) bye the way, mere liye colour select karoge. Suit ya saari main se.plz.

Garv: okay fine, but plz comfortable dressup karna, I can't see u in pain.

Payal:(smiles)ok.

Garv:(ask) anyway Diwali par kya chahiye tumhe.? Karwachauth gift nahin kiya na, 2gifts hojainge tumhare. Batao.

Payal:(show ring and wedding chain) tumne hi gift kiya.

Garv:(bit tongue) main wrong number dial kardiya, lets rest.

They take rest.

Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

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FANTASTIC UPDAYE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SUPERB AND MIND-BLOWING UPDATE.
LOVED FAMILY TIMINGS SO MUCH.
LOVED HOW PAYAL GARV IDEA TO VARUN TO TOUCH THE FLOOR IN PLACE OF NIA PARENTS.
WOW NOW SAME DAY TWO MARRIGES BUT AT DIFFERENT TINE LOT OF FUN TO BE THERE. REALLY EXCITED FOR IT.
LOVES GARVAYAL MOMENTS SO MUCH.
LOVED THE STYLE OF GARV TO CONFESS HIS LOVE TO PAYAL.
LOVED THE ADVICE IF PAYAL TO PARI.
NOW WAITUNG FOR VARUNIA AND PARIOM MARRIAGE.
HAPPY DIWALI DEAR. MAY THE LIGHTS OF DIWALI BRITTEN AMD LITEN UR LIFE.
TAKE CARE DEAR.