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FANTASTIC UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT
IT WAS REALLY AWESOME AND MIND-BLOWING UPDATE.
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BY U WHOLE PART. I AM JUST ENJOYING EACH AND EVERY PART.
WOW GARV CAME BACK . AND HOW SAMAR SISTER USED TO HATE HIM BECOZ OF HIS ACTIONS. IT WAS AWESOME.
LOVED THE REACTION OF PAYAL AT ARRIVAL OF GARV.
LOVED HOW GARV MADE ARRANGEMENTS AT HOTEL AND LOVED GARVAYAL PROPOSAL PART.
LOVED THEIR ROMANTIC MOMENTS.
WOW VARUN TOO HAS GIRL IN HIS LIFE AND THAT TOO NIA. REALLY LOVED THE NAME.
WOW NOW GARVAYAL REMARRIGE.
LIVED RAIN PART AND GARVAYAL MOMENTS.
PRECAP SOUNDS VERY INTERESTING REVEALTION OF GARV AS PARAG.
WANT MORE AND MORE GARVAYAL ROMANTIC MOMENTS.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.
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Part 531
Afterbreakfast
In vm hall!
Family spending time.
Garv:(tells) family aapsabko mujhe kuch batana hai parag k baremain.
Vyom:(tells) main batata hun, woh bahot irritating, cry baby, fashion ki dukan tha, pakau tha, timid tha, bhigibilli hai.chuha tha Chuha, ek number ka,
Garv:(tells) woh main tha
Vyom:(getshock) what.
Divaan-payal: its true
Vyom:(hold ears) sorry garv bhaiya,
Vihaan:(tease him) sorry se kya hota hai vyom? Maine toh knife se attack kiya tha.
Vivaan: tum bachche the, woh bhi bachcha hai, mistake hogayi forget it.
Everyone laugh.
Diya:(tells) maansi di, rimjhim riddhima ko call kariye, mujhe hamare bachchon ko kuch batana hai apne past k bare main.
MaAnsi:ok:(call her daughter)
Riddhima: hello mom.
MaAnsi: tum kaisi ho rimjhim kaisi hai.
Riddhima: humlog theek hai sath hi the.
MaAnsi:(tells) tumlog se gunjan Mami ko kuch kehna hai.
Diya:(tells) garv gun mere sorogate twins hai.:(tells) everything:(get emotional)
Siblings getshock.
Garv:(claps)
Payal:(ask) garv are you mad. Serious baat par claps kar rahe ho?
Garv:(tells) payal, yeh serious baat nahin Khush hone ki baat hai, gun ko mujhe mom and dad Mb jb ronak mamu Ranvir mamu maasi chachu k hath ka food mila tha.
Everyone smiles
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In sisters room
Siblings team is sad for Diya suffering is in tears
Someone knock.
Garv:(take jug sprinkle water on their face then open door)
Divaan:(getshock) yeh kya hai?
Vyom:(tells) colour holi main hum nahin the aur colour nahin hai toh water holi play kiya humne.
Diya:(ask) garv gun tumlog theek hona?
Garv:(tells shivering) we are feeling cold.
Jrgunjan: haan.
Diya:(tells) tumlog bhi na ajib ho.(ask) Varun teri friend nia kab aari hai.
Vyom:(tells) girlfriend hai
Varun:(tells) pehle garv bhaiya payal di ki wedding fix hone dijiye, uske baad invite karenge.
Vivaan:(tells) Varun, humlog se hesitate mat karo, gunjan tum bhi, jo bhi hai batado humlog support karenge. We all know tumlog ki choice tumlog jaise achchi hogi
Jrgunjan:(hug him)
Diya: exactly. Varun, love karte ho nia se. Nia love karti hai tujhse.
Varun:(nod in yes)
Siblings claps.
Vyom: Varun go and call and ask her to come, phir tum nia garv bhaiya payal sath shadi karna. Jaise maasi badepapa mom dad shadi kare
Varun: but vyom bhaiya aapse pehle shadi kaise karun.
Pari:(tell) koi option nahin pata nahin vyom ko koi milegi bhi ya nahin.
Vyom:(tells) meri tension chodo iam good, apni tension lo, fightergirlse shadi kaun karega.?
Pari:(get sad and went)
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In backyard!
Pari:(arrives, making plans for Diya garv gun birthday)
Garv:(arrives) pari,
Pari:(tells)aapko ya vyom ko sorry bolne ki need nahin hai, garv bhaiya. Bcoz our friendship is over from now. Aap sab meri family ho excepted vyom. I don't need him. Iam sorry aapki try waste hogayi. I can't give him chance
Garv:(tells) ok.(ask) by the way tum kya kar rahi thi.
Pari:(lies) aapke aur payal di ki wedding ki preparation ki list
Garv:(tells) abhi tak date ka pata nahin haina.
Pari: janti hun, but prepared rahenge toh work fast hoga na.
Garv:(tells) wow kya baat hai meri wedding planner behna.
Pari:(tells) main wedding nahin hun, kuch friends ko help kiya tha rimjhim riddhima didis k liye preparation kiya tha. Birthdays and weddings main
Garv:(tells) koi baat nahin wedding planner banjao, apne talent ko waste mat karo.
Pari: I will think later. First aaplog ki aur phir Varun nia ki shadi, Baki siblings ki shadi hone dijiye, uske baad.
Garv:(tells) idea achcha hai,(ask)but tumhara dream man agaya toh usko chahne main busy hojaogi. Toh kab dream fulfill kaise karogi.?
Pari: woh baad main sochungi.
Payal:(arrives) pari, mere sath aao Na plz.
Pari:(understand) payal di iam sorry uss fool se Patchup nahin karungi.
Payal:(tells) vyom intensionally nahin bola hoga.
Pari:(went)
Garv:(tells) payal, we should not interfere in friends, vyom angry kara toh vyom hi cooldown karega pari ko.dont worry. Sab theek hoga. Kya pata, distance jaise humein love Karaya, vyom aur pari ko love karade.
Payal:(tells) wohlog friends to hojaye pehle, sab spoil kyun hora hai.
Garv:(tells) don't worry.
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Outdoorguesthouse!
Vaderasehgal couples spending time.
Pari:(arrives) mujhe aaplog ko kuch show karna tha:(give marriege plan to Diya, and birthday plan to others)
Diya:(ask) pari tum confusion hai kya? Jo two plans banaye.
Pari:(tells) woh song plan hai jispe aaplog ko dance karna hai. Dad songs names bataiye.
Vihaan:(tells) kabhi Jo badal barse, sab tera, raabta, tere liye, hum hai rahi pyar k phir milenge chalte chalte.
Madhu: nice selection.
Pari: thanks mom.
MaAnsi: but pari yeh humlog k liye theek nahin lagega, soham poonam k liye chalega.
Pari:(tells) don't worry:(take birthday plan)
Madhu: pari ek baat bolun, vyom achcha hai but gadbad hojati usse. Usne bola ya nahin, phir bhi iam.
Pari:(tells) on no:(fakehappily) aaplog ko pata hai vyom sorry boldo mujhe, sab theek hai. Aaplog tension chodo dance style ka socho.
Vihaan:(ask) are you sure. One madhu ko meri baat se hate hogayi thi toh mamma papa k infront pretend karti thi. Tum toh nahin kar rahi hona aisa kuch.
Pari:(tells) I promise on myself humlog friends hogaya:(ask) main thode time k liye anokhi k paas Jana hai
Vihaan: ofcourse kab jaana hai.
Pari: payal di garv bhaiya ki marriege k baad.
Diya: kab tak ari ho?
Pari: anokhi par depend karega.:(went)
Madhu: kuch toh gadbad hai. Jabse aye hain tabse jaane ki baat nahin ki thi. Aj kyun bolri hai.
Diya: vyom manalega. Childishness main Kuch bhi boldeta hai but bura nahin dil ka.
Madhu: hope so.
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In garden!
Pari waiting for vyom.
Vyom:(arrives) pari.
Pari:(tells) thanks for coming, Ek request thi.
Vyom: kya?
Pari: garv bhaiya, maasi aur gun k birthday aur garv bhaiya payal di ki remarriage tak mere sath friendship ka drama karlo, uske baat main apne friend k paas tum apne ghar main rahenge
Vyom:(getshock) what but kyun
Pari: I don't want anyone getsad bcoz us during our siblings marriege function.thats y.
Vyom:(tells)woh toh theek hai but jaana kyun? Family hum dono ki hai.
Pari: tum achcha lagta hoga ghalti tum karo aur sorry mom dad ya koi sorry bole but mujhe nahin achcha lagta isliye mujhe na tumse friendship karna hai na ek family main rehna hai tumhare sath.
Vyom:(get speechless by her thought)
Pari:(ask) deal exceptHai?
Vyom: haan.
Both shake hands.
Vyom:(ask) payal di garv bhaiya Baki sab yaad karenge tumhe.
Pari: yahan aake mom dad laga hi nahin mom dad nahin hai, waise payal di ko gun di madvi vivaaniya and simple mujhe miss karne nahin denge. Tumlog bhi toh ho.
Vyom:(ask) tumhara kya.
Varun:(arrives with gf) pari di, she is nia
Pari: hi iam pari kaur,
Nia: hi Nia mehra, hi vyom bhaiya.
Vyom: hi. Uncle aunty aye ya nahin?
Nia: baad main ayenge
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At restaurant! In lunch!
Garvyal having lunch with eachother hand.
Payal:(tells) garv iam sorry.
Garv:(ask) kyun?
Payal:(tells) hamari shadi jaldi hogayi, tumhe dad and chachu ko join karne ka chance nahin mila.
Garv:(tells) payal, Jo bhi hua usmain hamari wedding ka fault nahin hai, hum brothers ne plan kiya tha, aane k baad pehle family k sath time spend karenge phir work karenge.(take her hand) So u don't need to feel bad:(smiles)
Payal:(smiles) ok:(look other couple with kids and smiles)
Garv:(follow her gaze saw couple and kids ask) tumhe children's achche lagte hain kya?
Payal:(tells) bahot lovely hote haina.
Garv:(ask) tumhe chahiye kya? As friend
Payal: haan but jab hamare siblings settle hojayenge tab, 3-4 years k baad. Elder d.i.l ka duty fulfill karna hai.
Garv:(tells) good idea. Hamare jaise lucky hojainge hamare kids.:(ask) ek baat ask karun?
Payal:(tells) ofcourse.
Garv:(ask) are you happy with me?
Payal: ofcourse garv, main khud bahot lucky manne lagi hun, otherwise lagta tha main buri hun, i deserved it. But I never thought, payal Kaur ,payal garv vadera hojaungi.
Samar:(join them) hi garv hi PayAl.
Payal:(getscare)
Garv:(hug him and whisper) kaha tha na dur raho meri wife se, humlog forgive nahin karenge
Samar:(whisper) plz garv tumlog forgive kardo mujhe. I know main wrong hun
Payal:(tells) garv mujhe ghar jaana hai.
Garv:(getseparate help his wife and went)
Samar:(inmind) iam sorry guys.
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Back to vm hall!
After lunch!
Family spending time
Madhu:(ask) mom dad ka name kya hai Nia.
Nia: Mihika mehra armaan mehra.
Family getshock but hopes it's not their enemy.
Vivaan:(ask) Varun tum mile ho.
Varun:(tells) nAhin dad.
Garvyal:(arrives)
Vyom:(tells) garv bhaiya ko tum jaanti ho, yeh hai payal di bhabhi.
Nia:(greet) hi nice to meet u, aaplog bahot lovely lagre ho sath main.
Garvyal:(tells) thanks,:(smiles)
Payal:(get confuse) yeh.
Vyom:(tells)bhai+ devraja ki honewali wife aur apki devrani.
Everyone laugh
Madhu:(tells) Mr videsi , devar hota hai devraja nahin hota.
Vyom:(tells) raja Rani king queen hote hai toh devarani devraja kyun nahin.?
Everyone laugh.
Diya:(ask) payal kya hua tum dull hogayi.
Garv: phyco beggar dekha toh toh dargayi.
Vivaan:(ask) where was u garv.
Garv: phone main signal nahin tha toh thodi der k liye choda:(indirectly) payal ek ho infinity ho beggars, tumhe mere rehte darne ki need nAhin hai, aj jaisi mistake nahin hogi, aj k liye sorry.
Payal:(tells) don't be sorry, tum mere sath wrong nAhin karsakte, iam sorry humein Early aanapada
Garv: no problem.
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In backyard
Siblings sitting varunia.
Pari: nia, tumhe Varun ki kya baat achchi lagi.
Nia: good heart hai, elders ki respect karnewala hai, chote se pyar karnewala hai, don't to earth hai:(keep telling)
Garv:(tells) bhai Varun tu toh bahot lucky hai. Jo nia jaisi loving person mili, kyun payal.
Payal: exactly.
Varun:(smiles)
Nia aswell.
Payal: aane main problem nahin hui.
Nia: kuch din pehle Mumbai se ayi thi phir friend k paas chalegayi, aj yahan agayi Varun k sath
Siblings take her to show home.
Garv:(ask) payal, tum theek hona.?
Divaan:(arrives) kya hua tha.
Garv: woh actually Samar milgaya tha, toh afraid hai payal.
Diya:(tells) payal tum alone nahin ho, humlog hai tumhare sath, dont worry ok.
Garv:(tells) mom dad, aaplog ko hamari marriege k time hona chahiye tha, payal ne Jo mara hai usko k dar ke faint hogaya.
Divaan: very good.payal.
Payal:(tells) thanks.
Vivaan:tumlog chalo panditji aare hain marriege date batane k liye.
Payal: abhi toh nia parents nahin aye na.
Diya: don't worry, woh bhi hojayega, abhi ke liye aapni shadi ka wait karo.
Payal:(getshy)
Divaan went.
Garvyal:(went)
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Back to hall!
Pandit matching horoscopes.
Family waiting.
Panditji:(tells) 4din baad shadi karsakte hain.
Vyom:(getshock) itni jaldi kyun
Family:(getshock) kyun?
Vyom:(tells) kitna kuch karna hai, preparation shopping invites.bachlor parties kaise hoga.
Vihaan: humlog ko laga tumlog ko especially tujhe time lagega isliye shopping kardiye, riddhima k shadi k time.
Vaderasehgal couples: yes.
Vyom: not bad.c congrats garv bhaiya, and payal di bhabhi.
Garvyal:(tells) thanks.
Karimjhim aridhima: congrats garv payal.
Garvyal:(feltnice) thanks.
Aryan:(tells) aaplog tension nahin lo, main aur kv bhaiyon k sath milke handle karenge.
Rimjhim: garv, shadi se pehle payal ko lekejaun hamare ghar. lene aajana.
Garv:(tells)kya behna Abhi toh aye ho aur jaane ki baat kar rahe ho.
Rimjhim:(ask, in teasing tone) hamare jaane ki baat se problem hori hai ya payal ko lekejanese?
Garv:(get shy) kya di.
Karan:(tells) don't worry, She is kidding.
Rimjhim: kya kv. Thoda Maza lene dena tha.
Everyone laugh.
Garvyal:(smiles)
Vaderasehgal couples bless them.
They spend times.
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In evening afterdinner
In garvyal room!
Payal:(arrives in room)
Garv:(switch on lights)
Payal:(getsurprise to saw room)
Garv:(pull her in arms) achcha laga.
Payal:(tells) haan,tumhe pata maine dream dekha tha jismain tumne aise hi surprise kiya tha mujhe.
Garv:(ask) aur kya kiya tha?
Payal:(remember get shy went to bed change topic) garv ek important baat ask karna tha tumse.
Garv:(hug her from behind)haan kyun nahin.
Payal:(ask) do u believe in karwachauth:(ask) main fast karungi toh problem nahin hogi Na tumhe.
Garv: main sab festivals ki respect karta hun, but I can't see anyone from family ladies hungry, to u aswell.
Payal:(tells) yeh sab hamare love karAdeta hai humse. Tabhi toh hamari family k sab couples fast karte hain.
Garv:(inmind) main bhi rakhunga.
Payal: by the way tum bahot caring ho selfless bhi ho.
Garv:(tells) same to u:(shake hands) congrats for remarriage fix hone k liye.payal
Payal:(while shaking hands) same to u.
Garv: lets rest.
Payal:. Ok.
Garv:(inmind) god plz hamari remarriege bhi Nicely hone dijiye.
Payal:(inmind) god plz hamari remarriege main koi problem mat aane denA.
They take rest.
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In guestroom!
Nia:(call her mother)
Mihika:(ask) kaise ho meri jaan se pyari nia
Nia:(tells) theek hun mom, aapko pata hai 4days k baad garv bhaiya ki remarriage hai, gunjan aunty vivaan uncle chahte hain aap aur dad ajaiye. Attend bhi karsakte ho, hamare relation ka decide karsakte ho
Mihika:(ask) full name batana.
Nia: Mr vivaan vadera and mrs gunjan vadera.
Mihika:(inmind) kahin meri mistakes ki punishment meri nia ko na miljaye.
Nia:(ask) kya hua mom.
Mihika: kuch nahin
Nia:(ask) aaplog aare hona cg.
Mihika: sorry nia, we can't come in marriege, tere dad ko kam hai, after marriege ayenge ok. Sabse sorry boldo hamare behalf.
Nia: okAy fine, take care.
Mihika: okay.:(end call)
Her phone ring.
Nia:(answer) hi Varun.
Varun:(ask) dull sound kyun kar rahi ho.
Nia: tired hun.
Varun:(ask) tumhe meri family se dar toh nahin lagra na. Don't worry tum meri wife hogi, but mom dad k liye beti, siblings k liye sister hogi.
Nia:(felt nice) Sach main sab bahot achche hain.
Varun: uncle aunty se baat hui
Nia: mom se talk hui but wohlog garv bhaiya ki wedding k baad ayenge. Dad ko work hai
Varun: koi baat nahin hum wait karenge, I love you and good night:(end call)
Nia take rest.
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Outdoorguesthouse
Vaderasehgalcouples siting.
Diya: Varun bachpan se bahot sensitive hai, agar yeh woh armaan Mihika hunge toh theek nahin hoga.
Poonam: di don't worry, nia humsabse kitna achche se behave Kari thi.
Soham:(bymistake tells) tumne bhi toh acting kiya tha gunjan bhabhi ko theek karne ka:(bit tongue)sorry
Poonam:(felt bad) gunjan di dont worry, name ek jaisa hoga log different hunge. Garv jitna lucky hai utna varun lucky hai.kuch wrong nahin hoga Varun k sath.
MaAnsi: poonam is right,
Jaanvi: Mihika deserve hi nahin karti bachche, then kya darna.
Ranvir: she is right. Kal se pehle hum nahin sochte hain.
Vivaan: Ranvir bhaiya is right, kal hi dekhna hoga hum right hai ya wrong. I hope hum wrong ho.
Diya: exactly.
Madhu:(ask) lets go and practice, garv payal ki prewedding k liye.
Someone knock.
Jaanvi:(open door) vyom tum yahan kya kar rahe ho.
Vyom:(tells) mujhe payal di bhabhi k liye bura lagra hai, shadi baad pari jaanewali haina, aaplog roklijiye na.plz
Madhu: friends paas rehne jaate the hum sab single the jab, don't worry kuch nahin hoga.payal samjhegi. Itni si baat k liye worried kyun ho?
Vyom:(inmind) mujhe khud patanahin mujhe kyun problem hori hai.(to his mom) Roklijiye plz:(went)
Madhu: isko kya hogaya.
Diya: love hogaya hoga. Usko idea nahin hoga.
Vihaan: unbelievable Jo ladka wedding ka naam sunke blanket main chalgaya usko love hua
Vivaan: bachcha tha toh nahin samjha
They went their respective room.









































































































































Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago
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FANTASTIC UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY MIND-BLOWING AND AWESOME UPDATE.
LOVED GARV ACCPTED IN FRONT OF EVERYONE THAT HE WAS PARAG.
OHO PART GET UPSET FROM VYOM ABD WANT TO GO FROM HERE. BYT LOVED THAT VYOM STARTS TO FEEL FOR HER.
OMG NIA IS DAUGHTER OF MIHIKA AND ARMAAN.
LOVED GARVYAL MOMENTS SO MUCH.
NOW WAITING FOR THEIR REMARRIGE.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.
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Part 532!
In vm after breakfast
In divaan room!
Divaan arrive with garv.
Garv:(look door and join) bataiye mom dad. Kya baat hai aaplog worried kyun hai.?
Vivaan: nothing garv,
Garv:(made them get up and bring them near mirror) kya dikhra hai aapko?
Divaan: hum log aur tum ho garv.
Garv: Jo ab bada hogaya hai samajhdar bhi hogaya hai. Jisko baatane k liye sochna nahin padna chahiye.
Divaan: we know
Garv:(normally) agar aap meri hiding ka badla hiding karke Lena chahte toh lijiye, but don't worry.
Vivaan:(tells) humlog confuse hai, ek side tum ho hamara beta, toh ek side payAl hai Jo hamari beti banke ayi hai, humein pata nahin kya:(smiles)
Diya: isliye tense hai.
Garv:(tells)don't worry main khud ready hojaunga, aaplog meri tension nahin lo,payal k sath rahiye, shadi ke time toh hum dono k sath aapdono hoge hi, payal need u.
Divaan: good idea.
Garv:(went)
Vaderasehgal couples: kya hua?
Vivaan:(tells) garv feel kara tha hum tense hain.
Jaanvi: don't worry my siblings, garv payal ki shadi hai, uske liye socho abhi k liye, sab theek hi hoga.
Ranvir: ek aur idea hai. Police se confirm karo. Wohlog jail main hai nahin.
Vivaan: ok
Vihaan: becareful garv apne dad jaisa ziddi hai, gadbad dikhi toh find karne busy hojaiga.
Vivaan:(ask) what?
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In sisters room!
Pari is packing her stuff.
Payal:(arrives) packing kyun kar rahi hai.
Pari:(tells) ghar main wedding hai, aj se decoration challenge aise main chori hogayi toh:(show herself) aise rehna padega mujhe aapdono ki wedding main.
Payal:(tells) very funny.
Pari:(ask) payal di, ab toh love hogaya aapdono ko, shadi k baat ki cermony hui ki nahin Jo couples ki Bich hoti hai.
Payal:(get shy and went)
Pari:(sat down,inmind) sorry payal di. Aapke question se bachne k liye excuse kiya.
Madvihaan:(arrives) pari.
Pari:(become normal) yes mom dad.
Madhu: pari, humdono ko tujhse kuch bolna tha.
Pari: boliye.
Vihaan: tum plan change kardo na,
Madhu: tere bhai itne years baad aye hain, they will miss u.
Vihaan: haan.
Pari:(tells) main try karungi, aaplog happy rahi, funloving behavior suite hota hai aapdono. Sad behavior nahin.
Vyom:(arrives and ask) guest daughter appearance karke janewali ho toh sad toh hunge hi.
Pari:(tells) main country se thodi jaari hun mom dad aungi.
Madhvihaan:(smiles)
Vyom: pari you know what, jab hum boarding jaare the mom ne kaha tha, garv bhaiya k jaise banke aana, jaante the aisa kuch nahin honewala hai. Main jaisa hun waise rahunga. Waise hi tum ho, mom dad bolti ho manti nahin ho:(went)
Pari:(getsad)
Madhvihaan went.
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In Garvyal room!
Payal:(get shy remembering pari questions)
Garv:(join her) kya baat hai, shy kyun hori ho.
Payal: pari k questions k bcoz?
Garv:(ask) kya questions.
Payal:(tells) leave it.
Garv:(tells) okay fine, but congrats karo. Remarriage k liye
Payal:(tells) kal hi toh kiya tha.
Garv:(tells) woh toh as friend kiya, as wife nahin.:(lock door and comes to her hold her hands, comes close her) congrats me.
Payal:(comes near to kiss him on cheeks)
Garv:(point toward his lips)
Payal:(getshy)
Garv: u can do it
Payal:(kiss him on lips)
Garv:(respond back)
Both get separate and lies on bed.
Garv:(tells) I love you.
Payal: I love you to.
Garv:( ask) tumhe bura toh nahin laga na.?
Payal:(tells) not at all, we are married v r in love, why would I mind to my worldbest husband wish.
Garv:(felt nice) woh main isliye hun bcoz mere paas bhi worldbest wife hai.:(hug her)
Payal:(felt nice hug him back)
Garv:(kiss her on forehead)
They spend times in eachother hand.
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In guestroom!
Nia is reading magazine.
Varun:(arrives) nia what r u doing?
Nia: kuch nahin sab busy the toh socha magazine read karun.
Varun: oh I see
Diya:(arrves with dresses jewelry) nia beta, garv payAl ki engagement, Sangeet, haldi, marriege, pehna ok.
Nia:thanks.
Diya: welcome.:(tells) ek request thi, tum is ghar ki honewali bahu ya beti ho pata mat chalne dena.
Varun:(ask) kyun?
Diya: nia k parents ko tumse milne aur except karne do uske baad batadenge..
Varun: ok.
Diya: tumhe koi problem nahin haina?
Nia: koi problem nahin Hai.
Diya:(tells) thanks for understanding:(went)
Varun:(watch dress) wow tumhe suite karenge yeh sab.
Nia: ek baat kahun?
Varun: haan bolo na?
Nia: sab tense kyun hai?
Varun: shadi hai 4 days main toh tension hogi:(side hug her) don't think much, be happy.
Nia: okay.
Varun: I promise u, garv bhaiya payal di bhabhi ki shadi hojayegi toh humlog drive par chalenge.
Nia:(felt nice) ok.
Varun:(went)
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In backyard!
Vyom sitting alone.
Madvihaan:(arrives)free ho.?
Vyom: haan..
Vihaan:(ask) pari se rude kyun ho?
Madhu: jab usne forgive kardia toh taunting kyun.
Vihaan:(ask) kal jab uski shadi hogi toh kya aise behave karoge uske in-laws and husband k samne?
Vyom:(getshock) husband shadi yeh sab kya bolre hain dad aap.
Vihaan:(make him jealous) garv payal ki shadi k baad, Varun nia ki wedding fix karenge toh pari ki bhi wedding fix karenge humlog.
Vyom:(getsad and went)
Madhu: yeh kya tha.
Vihaan: Vivaan bhaiya k doubt ko right prove karne ki try.
Madhu: but pari toh jaari hai. Most important baat,pari hardly forgive Kari as friend. Love kahan se karegi.
Vihaan:mamma papa Ranvir bhaiya jaanvi di, hum, kasak di arjun bhaiya. Pehle dislike karte the but like karna start kardiye automatically. Just wait and watch.
Madhu:(praise) finally tum Bade hogaye,
Vihaan:(tells) tumhari eyesight bhi.
Pari:(arrives) aaplog yahan.:(ask) aaplog k date ki planing kardun kya?
Madvi: ofcourse. And i will help you pari.
Madhvihaan went.
Pari:(tells) kitne achche mom dad, you and vyom are lucky.
Madvi: hum three lucky hai, pari.
Pari:(smiles)
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After lunch in jewelry show room!
Garv:(watching rings)
Shopkeeper:(ask) bataiye sir kya achcha laga.?
Garv:(tells) sab achche toh hain but bahot zyada hai, meri tobe wife Jo hain woh simple hai. Simple sa bataiye.
Shopkeeper:(went)
Garv:(to himself) kaise new karun?
Shopkeeper:(bring alphabet rings) yeh dekhiye.
Garv:(check rings match with payal ring) thanks:(ask) men's k liye alphabet ring, and personalise wedding milsakta hai. Rings par g and p, wedding chain par garv payal
Shopkeeper: ok fine aapko three four hours wait karna hoga.
Garv:(tells) okay.
Shopkeeper went.
Phone rings.
Garv:(answer) hello mom.
Diya: garv shopping hui ya nahin.
Garv:(tells) four hours lagenge, ajaunga.
Diya: main vivaan ko send karun he will help you.
Garv: don't worry mom almost shopping hogayi, payal aur apne liye alphabetic ring liya hai Maine, bas personalize wedding ready hora hai.
Diya:. Nice to know.
Garv: mom I won't to surprise her, so plz.
Diya: okay fine nahin bolungi.
Garv:(ask) aap sab k liye leke aun kya personal chain and bracelet.
Diya:(tells) aj tumlog ka day hai, and Jo tum lare ho payal ko achcha lagna chahiye
Garv:(tells) don't worry mom. I won't make her sad.
Diya:(endcall)
Garv:(waits)
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Back to vm tarace!
Pari guiding decoraters
Vyom:(comes to call and get surprise by her busy instead getting ready)
Imaginary vyom:(ask) kya hardworking haina?
Vyom: haan..
Imaginary vyom: uske jaane ki news se badfeel hora haina
Vyom: haan.
Imaginary vyom:aisa kyun,? woh toh hardly teri dost bani haina hone do shadi jaane do usko leave it.
Vyom: nahin.
Imaginary vyom: kyun nahin. Kyun irritate karte ho, usse hi kyun.
Vyom: pata nahin
Pari:(shake him) oh hello theek toh ho? Khud se haan nahin kyun bolre ho?kya pata nahin.
Vyom: decoration achcha hai.
Pari: thanks. But tumhe kya hogaya, (ask)pyar toh nahin hogaya.
Vyom:(get surprise,ask) tumhe kaise pata yeh pyar hai.
Pari:(tells) payal di k bcoz, unko bhi toh Garv bhaiya se dur rehke love hua na. After marriege.
Vyom:(smiles) oh I see.
Pari:(ask) ladki kaun hai.
Vyom: I will tell you afterwards, mere paas ek idea hai.kyun na hum skit karen garvyal ka.
Pari:(ask) what is garvyal.
Vyom: garv +payal=garvyal.
Pari: oh I see, but tum skit karna achcha nahin lagta na.
Vyom: haan but tumne hi toh kaha tha,? Siblings k khushi k liye kuch bhi karna chahiye.
Pari:(getsurprise)
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In hall!
Family spending time.
Payal:(is worried,inmind) garv itna late kaise hogaya, kahin Samar ne kuch kiya toh nahin:(hands start shivering in fear)
Varun,:(notice her and ask) aap afraid kyun ho.
Payal:(tells) woh:(inmind) nahin payal, sab tense hojainge:(change topic)maa papa ko miss kar rahi thi..
Divaan: hota hai,. Relax.they are and we are with u
Payal: ok.
Garv:(arrives) hello family sorry thoda late hogaya:(saw her worried)
Payal:(get relief,inmind) thankgod garv is fine.
Vihaan: aj kal hi milna hai tumlog ko jitna time spend karna hai karo Garv apni payal k sath.
Garv:(smiles) yes chachu. Payal,Surprises lane gaya toh late hogaya
Vivaaniya:(madeface)oh no garv bhaiya, aapne batadiya payal di k infront.
Garv:(tells) haan but surprise k baremain bataya, surprises kya hai evening main batadunga.
Vivaaniya: oh ok.:(smile)
Garv:(tells) payal, main tired hun toh plz tea leke aao Na.
Payal: ok(went)
Garv:,(went)
Vyom: enjoy your tea date.:(ask) surprise kya hai maasi.
Diya: personalise rings and mangalsutr.
Pari: wow.kitna unique hai gifting ka.:(smiles)
Vyom:(watch her)
Vihaan:(whisper) control yourself uske lp ko achcha nahi lagega.
Vyom:(getsad)
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In garvyal room!
Garv is waiting.
Payal:(arrives with tea) garv tea.
Garv:(take tray and keep it) tea chodo aur batao kya hua? Tense kyun ho?
Payal:(tells) wedding k time hota hai.
Garv: okay fine mat batao:(hug her from behind) don't worry, chahe k bhi kuch nahin karsakega woh devil mujhe ya tumhe ya hamari family ko. Chinky k infront caring brother banke rehna Jo hai
Payal:(hug him) I know. Main tumhare sath safe hun but aj tum late hogaye toh dagayi thi.
Garv:(pull her cheeks) then be happy enjoy in our engagement.then Sangeet then haldi then shadi, inshort whole life
Payal:(smiles) okay:(get up) dusri tea leke aati hun.
Garv:(tells) no problem mujhe ice tea achcha lagti hai.(drink tea)
Payal:(smiles and went to keep tea)
Garv:(lockdoor and call someone)
Samar: haan hello garv.
Garv:(seriously)tum agar Sach main badalgaya ho toh, aj k aj cg chod do, kahin bhi jao, cg return mat aana, payal ki parchayi se bhi dur rehna, main nahin chahta meri payal ko tumhare bcoz problem ho.
Samar: itni jaldi kaise hoga.
Garv: main online booking kardungA tumhare liye nahin apni payal k liye. U just pack bags and leave.
Samar: okay. Garv but plz ek baar maaf kardo mujhe.
Garv: no never ever Samar singh, tumhare jaise cheater black mailer forgive karne k layak nahin hote. U just pray Jo acts tumne kiya usse chinky ka future effect na ho.
Samar:(getsad) okay.bye.:(end call)
Garv:(books tickets)
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At tarace in evening.
Family waiting for payal including garv.
Arka:(arrives with triplets) congrats vivaan gunjan for garv payal engagement.
Divaan: thanks:(smiles)thanks.
Garv:(take them on side) thanks maasi, mom ne bataya mere aur behna k. Baremain.
Kasak:(tells) mujhe return gift milgaya hai, gunjan aur is family k form main, tere thanks ki place nahin hai.
Arjun:(look him up to down) kasak tumhe nahin lagta hum past main chalegaye.
Kasak: Pura believe hai. Iam sure wahi baat humeinpayal ko dekhke lagega
Pari:(tells) attention everyone.
Vyom:(get mesmerize)
Payal:(arrives beautifully dress up join her lp)
Everyone claps.
Garv:(get mesmerize by her)
Everyone congrats her.
Payal:(thanks them)
Lights gone then comes.
Pari:(teaching vaderasisters)
Vyom:(arrives get shock to see her with stick, start removing shoes)
Pari:(ask) late kyun hogaye.
Vyom:(watching stick fearing) woh main:(keep stammering)
Pari:(ask) kya hua stammering kyun hori hai.
Vyom:(tells) stick chod Dona plz. Main school main good boy tha but dusron ko maarkhate nahin sakta hun, isliye stick se dar hai mujhe.
Pari:(keep stick) u know what you are so cute. Chote bachchon jaise, thinking bhi:(pull his cheeks)
Vyom:(get lost in her words)
Garvyal lock eachother.
Pari: fresh hojao dinner arrange karti hun,(start going)
Vyom:(hold her hand) don't go.
Pari: tumhara dinner.
Vyom:(hold her hand tells automatically) mujhe dinner water kuch nahin chahiye,
Pari:(ask) kyun kya hua tum theek ho?.(ask) hospital chalen?
Vyom: I want promise from u of not leaving out of my life.
Garvyal:(inmind) yeh sab kya hai.
Madhvihaan understanding him
Vyom: I promise, I won't fight with u from now. janti ho kyun?
Pari: kyun.
Vyom: bcoz I love you.
Pari:(hug him as payal) ilove you to.
Vyom:(lift her and spin her)
Everyone claps.
Parivyom:(smiles)
Garvyal:(hug them)
Pari:(tells) vyom childhood se zyada improve hogaye ho acting main.
Vyom:(getshock and felt bad smiles) thanks.
Garv:(take him side, whisper) are you alright.
Vyom:(smiles for him nod in yes take him to stage)
Divaan:(give them rings of their alphabet)
Payal get surprise
They exchange rings.
Everyone claps.
All couple dance on retro songs and fresg.
garvyal dance on tu jo mila
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After dinner
In sisters room!
Other sisters sleeping
Payal: pari ek baat bolun.
Pari: ofcourse.
Payal: mujhe lagta hai vyom tujhse love karta hai.
Pari:(tells) hosakta hai but woh person main nahin hun payal di.
Payal:(tells) tujhe pata hai 3 4 times garv ne mujhe bola, kabhi backyard main kabhi car main kabhi as parag, mujhe pata nahin tha angel main hun.
Pari:(getshock) oh my god.
Payal:(tells) tu chahe toh time lesakti ho vyom se.hurry mat kar, usko samajhne ki try karo, iam sure vyom time Dega tujhe jaise garv ne mujhe
Pari:(tells) okay fine.
Payal: iam sure tum jab vyom k sath rahoge time spend karogi.i am sure love hojayega. U just ask for time
Pari:(ask)agar vyom mujhe hurt kardiya toh.anger main.
Payal:(tells) don't worry yeh vyom tujhse love karnewala hai. Respect karega. Just don't decline straightly.
Pari: okay fine.
Payal: good.
Pari:(tells) by the way yeh ring bahot achchi lagri hai,
Payal:(tells) tum dekhna vyom tumhare liye aise spl ring layega.
Pari: mujhe love you hone do.
Payal: hojaiga,
Pari: lets rest. Sangeet k preparation karana hai.
Payal:ok.
They take rest.
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In brothers room!
Brothers sleeping excepted vyom.
Garv:(cover himself and saw vyom awake, get up and join) kya hua rockstar.
Vyom:(tells) excited hun toh neend nahin aari mujhe.(smiles)
Garv:(reminds) vyom yaad hai hum jab bachche the toh boarding gaye the, wahan humlog k room separate the but morning tak:(smile a bit) humsab ek sath dikhte the kuch years tak aisa chala aur bhi humlog k liye room dena pada
Vyom:(smiles) haan yaad hai
Garv: jaise humlog rules ki nahin soche,waise tu meri shadi ki khushi ki mat sochna, aur batao:(ask) pari se love karte ho.?
Vyom:chodo na garv bhaiya, pari toh mujhse love nahin karti,
Garv:(tells) tu I think bhulra hai, payal k liye main friend tha slowly usko love hogaya mujhse.i am sure slowly pari ko love hoga, uske love karne ka wait kar time de. Patience's k sath raho, sab theek hojaiga.
Vyom: ek problem hai.
Garv:(ask) kya?
Vyom: dad.
Garv:(seriously) vyom, dad k liye aisa nahin bolte.
Vyom: dad apne bete k sath aise karte hain kya? Unbelievable news is mom bhi sath dad k:(madeface) even guyfind karliye
Garv:(side hug him)mere buddhu bhai, chachu reverse physicalogy kar rahe the, yeh dekhne dekhane k liye tum kya feel karte ho. Aur dekho tumhe kitna effect hua aur tumne boldiya pari ko. I love you,
Vyom:(smiles) thanks.
Garv: mujhe believe nahin hora, hamara triple relation honewala.
Vyom: haan but hum toh rahenge bhai aur friend hi..
Garv:(smilez) yes
They take rest.



Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY MIND-BLOWING AND SUPERB UPDATE.
WOW MADVIHAAN IS PLAYING WITH HIS SON VYOM TO REALIZE HIS TRU FEELINGS AND FINALLY HE REALIZED HIS LOVE FOR PARI. WOW NOW NEW LOVE STORY.
WHOLE FAMIIY IS SO GOOD THATS Y THEY GAVE CLOTHES TO NIA FOR EVERY OCCASION.
LOVED THE SURPRISE OF GARV OF PERSONALISE RINGS AND MANGALSUTRA WITH BOTH NAMES ON IT. IT WAS SO UNIQUE.
LOVES PARIVYOM PART VERY MUCH OF SKIT. IN SKIT VYOM SAID I LOVE U TO PARI. WOW AWESOME IT IS.
LOVES GARVYAL ROMANTIC MOMENTS TOO MUCH.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.
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Part 533
In vm backyard!
Afterbreakfast.
Parivyom arrives.
Vyom:(tells) pari, mujhe,
Pari: I am sorry for what
Vyom:(tells) let me speak, jabse tumhare jaane ki baat aur shadi suni toh disturb hogaya main, mujhe nahin pata aisa kyun tha, as friend happy nahin tha, phir tumne mujhe bataya, mujhe love hua aur phir maine tumhe batadia, (smiles)I love you, and I am ready to wait for you to love me. U Don't be sorry, lets continue friendship and don't feel uncomfortable plz. And plz dont go from here, for everyone and me.
Pari:thanks, tum nahin bhi kehte toh main nahin jaati,sabke liye, tumhe aur learn karne k liye.mujhe rehna padega.
Vyom:(get happy) welcome and thank you so much pari.
Pari: welcome vyom.
Vyom:(ask) kya help karsakta hun tumhari.
Pari: don't worry decorters ayenge. The will manage.
Vyom:(tells)aisa karte haina,tum inside decoration karado main outside decoration karAdeta hun, isse hum dono half-half enjoy karenge. As siblings rehna important haina,Videocall par batado ok.
Pari: ok.
Garvyal:(arrives) bAat hogayi.
Parivyom: yes.:(went happily)
Garv:(tells) sorry batana bhulgaya.
Payal: main khud hi samjhi thi vyom pari se confess kar raha hai, all thanks to you.
Garv:(smiles) good job.
Payal:(smiles) vyom is good kitna big heart hai. Tumhari tarah.
Garv: pari is also good, kitne achche se handle kiya. Just like you
Payal:(smiles)
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In guestroom!
Nia spending time with Varun aunts and mother.
Diya:(ask) tumhari mom house wife hai ya bussiness women.
Nia: housewife.
Diya:(ask) main baat karsakti hun.? Invite karna hai
Nia:(dial mom number)
Mihika:(happily)haan nia.
Nia:(tells) mom aap se gunjan aunty baat karna chahte hain.
Mihika:(get scare make excuse) main busy hun, mere behalf sorry boldo.:(endcall)
Nia:(tells) sorry, mom busy hain.
Vaderasehgalsisters smiles a bit.
Diya: hamare idea se problem toh nahin haina.
Nia: ji nahin.
Madhu: very understanding
Nia:(tells) thanks, aap sab bhi bahot achche hain.
Vaderasehgalsisters:(smiles)u to.:(went to check preparation)
Varun:(arrives) hi miss luckycharm.
Nia:(get surprise) lucky charm.
Varun: aur nahin toh kya, tum kya ayi, humein ek aur di bhabhi milgayi, isliye tum ho mera lucky charm.
Nia:(smiles) luckycharm toh tum ho kiske bcoz I have to parents.
Varun: by the way mere parents kab aare hain. Lagta hai mere test ki preparation main hain.
Nia:(tells) don't worry,jaise yahan mom dad I mean uncle aunty chahte hain, waise mom dad tum chahenge.
Varun: nice.
They spend times.
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In backyard!
Garv dancing happily after learning Samar went.
Brothers:(ask) kya hua.
Garv:(tells) iam so happy.
Brothers:(ask) kyun.
Garv:(make excuse) hum teeno ko love milgaya hai.:(make them dance)
Brothers dance with him.
Vyom: ek gadbad hai.
Garv: kya?
Vyom: ganna nahin hai.:(play chote chote bhaiyon k Bade bhaiya)
Garv:(shake head in disbelief)
Foursome brothers dance make him dance
Sisters and tobe bride arrives claps for their brothers and payal claps for lp.
They get shock and stop and garv start leaving.
Siblings leave leaving garvyal alone.
Garv: payal(spin her)
Payal:(feel dizzy by spinning and hold head)
Garv:(tells)sorry payal:(made her sat feed her water)
Payal:(ask) kya baat hai,? tum bahot happy ho.
Garv:(tells) pari hamare sath hi renewali hai, nia k parents agaye toh Varun nia ki shadi hogi. Kitni exciting hoga.:(ask) ring kaisi lagi tumhe.?
Payal:(tells) very nice, bahot achchi choice hai.,(ask) Iske liye 4hrs waste kyun kiya tumne.?
Garv: maine wahi kiya Jo tumne kiya apne love k liye kiya:(show his P written ring)
Payal::(nod in disbelief and went)
Garv:(fold hand across chest) ilove you:(went).
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In divaan room!
Diya is worried.
Vivaan:(ask) kya hua Diya.
Diya: pata nahin kyun mujhe lagta hamara past return aara hai.:(ask) tumne pata kiya?
Vivaan: haan woh log straight hogaye toh 2016 main free hogaye cg se chalegaye.
Diya: kahan.
Vivaan: woh maine nahin ask kiya? Khushi main. Apne liye important hai ke wohlog nahin agenge.
Diya: nia ki mom mujhse baat kyun nahin kar rahe phir.
VivaAn: hosakta hai mr and mrs mehra company chalate hunge.
Diya: nahin vivaan, mrs mehra is house wife.
Someone knock on door
Diya:(open door)
Foursome brothers: aapdono k liye surprise hai come in.
Garv:(arrives in wedding sherwani)
Divaan:(get emotional in happiness)
Garv:(wipe tears)
Vyom: maasi badepapa, apka bete ki shadi hai, flight nahin hai Jo aaplog emotional hore ho.
Varun:exactly, aaplog emotional honge toh main shadi nahin karunga.
Diya:(slap him playfully) aisa nahin kehte,
Vivaan: every parents ka aisA hi reaction hota, jab tumlog hamare place aaoge toh tumlog aise hi react karoge,
They went along garv.
Diya went along him
They spend times..
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In guest room!
Phone rings.
Varun:(saw mom name,recieve) hello Auntyji. Main Varun vadera.
Mihika: hello Varun, nia hai kya wahan.
Varun:(felt familiar) fresh hori hogi.
Mihika: okay fine. Jab woh ayegi toh batadena nia ko maine call kiya.:(end call)
Varun:(inmind)familiar kyun lagri hai mujhe.
Nia:(arrives) Varun tum yahan kaise?
Varun:(tells) main tumse lunch date k liye permission lene aya tha toh phone ring hote suna. Toh receive karliye,, :(ask) nia mom dad ka photo Dona, I will frame it, jab shadi hogi toh tumhe rehne main easy hoga
Nia:(tells) I don't have now.
Varun: koi baat nahin call karke ask karlo. She want to talk to with u:(went)
Nia:ok(call her mother)
Mihika:(with nervousness) hello.
Nia:(get worried) kya hua mom, aap nervous kyun ho.? Varun tha apka tobe s.i.l, mere tobe in-laws nahin, sab bhi yahan aise the jab aaplog ka name bataya.
Mihika:(inmind) oh no, kahin mera past meri beti k khushiyon ko spoil na karde,:(get emotional)
Nia:(ask) mom kya hua? Aap emotional kyun hogaye
Mihika:(control herself) nothing nia. Iam happy for u.
Nia:(remember) mom Varun chahta hai, shadi k baad main apki miss nahin karun isliye aapdono ki photo chahiye frame karane k liye.
Mihika:(tells) jab hum ayenge tab capture karenge. Varun ko sorry boldo. And plz don't make them sad by yourself, nice persons hai.
Nia:(ask) aapko kaise pata .?
Mihika: Varun ki baaton se pata chala. Pata chalgaya sab achche hain isliye Varun achcha hai.
Nia: right.
Mihika:(endcall)
Nia:(smiles)
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In lunch at restaurant.
Vyom pari having lunch.
Vyom:(tells) ek baat bolun kal main angry tha tumse, jab tumne bola k acting achchi hai. But garv bhaiya ne suggest kiya tumhe time dun so isliye time Dia.
Pari: you know what payal di ne mujhe bola time lun.
Both laugh.
Vyom: kya tuning hai dono ki.
Pari: agree.
Vyom: hamari tuning bhi same hai,hum dono hi dislike karte the each other ko, hum dono friends bangaye,
Pari: agree.:(smiles)
Vyom:(ask) allergies toh nahin haina tumhe
Pari: nahin.
Vyom: good.
Pari: lets eat now.
They eat together.
Vyom: I am happy, mere confession se hamari friendship effect nahin hua.
Pari: same here.
Vyom:(ask) tumhari ring milsakti hai kya?
Pari:(ask) kyun?
Vyom: hamari engagement ka turn asakta hai, prepare rehna chahta hun.
Pari:(excitedly) mujhe na personalise ring chahiye tumhare alphabet ki. Sorry
Vyom:(smiles) sure done. Aisa hi hoga.
Pari: Thanks.
They continue chatting.
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In vm hall!
Family spending time.
Parivyom arrives.
Vihaan: achcha tha na vyom tumhare sath pari.
Pari:(tells) thanks garv bhaiya mujhe vyom k anger se bachane k liye.
Garv:(glare at him)
Vyom:(get scare) thanks payal di bhabhi, pari se chance dene k liye bolne.
Payal: no need.
Pari went for preparations.
Garv:(ask)yeh kya kiya?
Diya: vyom, pari ki help kardo.
Vyom:(ask) garv bhaiya payal di bhabhi, aaplog cocktail party main chaloge.sangeet k baad.
Garv: vyom humlog ko after Sangeet dekhna allow nahin haina,
Vyom: theek haina humlog two groups main divide hojainge
Garv: nahin. Main bore hojata hun, drink hote hunge, ajib behave karenge after drink
Vyom: don't worry safe hai,:(keep forcing)
Garv:( by half heart) mujhe time chahiye
Vyom:(hug him ) thanks.
Garv:(smiles) welcome
Siblings went from their.
Varun:(inmind) doubt share karun ya nahin.
Diya:(ask) kya hua Varun.? Tense lagre ho.
Varun: nothing mom:(went)
Family spends times.
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In garvyal room!
Garv is worried.
Payal:(join him) are you alright?
Garv:(tells) haan and plz don't think mujhe tumhare sath ghumne main problem hai, main toh puri duniya se kehna chahta hun, grandfather's father's jaise lucky hun wife k mamle main.
Payal: I know tum meri happiness ko kam nahin karna chahte Jo party main jaane se hosakta hai.
Garv:(tells) bcoz your happiness is mine happiness. Main nahin sochunga toh kaun sochega.:(smiles)
Payal: siblings ki happiness ki bhi socho as brother,
Garv:(tells) you are right. Hum challenge.
Payal:(tells chalke batate hain aur ask karenge kya pehna hoga mujhe:(get up)
Garv:(comes infront of her take her face in palms) tumhe jaise achcha lagta hai, waise chalo,tradionally chalo, khushi se chalo.:(make her smile)keep smiling
Payal: but garv.
Garv:(tells) yeh party hamari hai hum Jo chahen pehensakte hain so don't think much,
Payal:(smiles)
Divaan:(knock)
Garv:(open door) ayiye na.
Diya:(ask) decide kiya.
Garv: yes mom, we are going.
Diya:(tells) good.
Vivaan:hamari payal k sath rehna ok. Take care bhi karna:(went along his lp)
Garv:(tells) hamare dad bhi na aise behave karte hain jaise tum bachchi ho.
Payal:(ask) jealousy hori hai.?
Garv: but dad ki beti se,:(keep hand around her neck)apni wife se nahin.
Payal:(smiles)
They went.
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In evening at tarace.
Everyone chatting
Kids are playing.
Bridal getting mehendi.
Garv is with her.
Brothers dance on mere yaar ki shadi hai their partners join them
Their parents watching them happily.
Garv:(drag their parents)
They dance goes to their place.
Vyom: garv bhaiya aapki turn agayi chaliye sing ya dance Kari.
Garv:Na.re. na.re na.re na re na na na
Na re na... din bhi tu, meri shaame tu
Mere raat ke sapno mein tu
Meri aahatein tera naam le
Yeh baat tu maan le
saal ka mera ik din ho
Jisme teri tasveere na ho (na ho.)
Berut si hai meri yeh zindagi
Jisme teri khushboo na ho
O meri jaan, tum ho kahaan
Dhoondhe tujhe mera dil.
Meri pehli mohabbat, pehli mohabbat
Pehli mohabbat hai woh.
Meri. pehli mohabbat, pehli mohabbat
Pehli mohabbat hai woh.
Garv dance with her
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After Sangeet at friend home!
Friends waiting.
Siblings team gather met their friends.
Garvyal parivyom varunia ariddhima karanjhim.
Payal:(friends) tumhare sath jo hua sunke bura laga.
Everyone start asking
Siblings and garv get sad.
Payal:(show strength)don't be sad friends, Samar drinker tha, tumlog ne suna hoga na, drink and drive not allow. Waise hamara relation tha jiska driver samar tha, thankgod accident nahin hua, aur hum separate hogaye thanks to my friend+husband. Who save me without thinking about anyone himself
Everyone claps then sat.
Garv:(get embarrassed by his praise take her in side) are you alright.?
Payal:(tells)yes
Garv:(tells) kamaal kardiya aur gadbad bhi.
Payal:(ask) kyun kya hua?
Garv:(tells) mujhe, indianspider banke help karne jaana hoga.apni one and only wife k sath time spend nahin karsakunga. Teacher wife hai meri band bajegi
Payal:(laugh)
Garv:(admire her)
They join friends and others.
One friend: garv tumne kabhi socha tha, tum aur payal couple hoge.love hoga.
Garv: aisa lagra hai,main dream dekhra hun, kahan main simple sa ladka kahan payal the super women.
Payal:(glare at him)
Garv:(inslowtone) tit for tat.
Friends claps.
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Back to vm hall!
Vaderasehgal shergills couple waiting.
Garv::(arrives picking payal in arms woh has injured feet)
Vaderasehgal shergills: kya hua.
Garv:(made her sat) humlog parking main the maine car nahin dekha payal ne mujhe push kiya aur khudke feet hurt kardiye.
Payal:(getsad) hamari shadi ka kya hoga.?
Garv:(sat beside her) believe hai mujhpe?
Payal:(tells) hai but is problem ka kuch nahin karsakte.tum kya koi bhi nahin.:(getsad)
Garv:(tells) don't worry just wait and watch, hamari aisi shadi hogi jaise Kisi ki nahin hui.:;(reminds) brother tumlog ko patA haina kya karna haina aise situation main
Foursomebrothers:(show thumbs)
Garv:(lift her and went)
Diya:(ask) garv kya karna chahta hai.
Vivaan: Jo childhood main kiya tha vyom Varun jaiveer mayur ne.haina bachpan.
Foursomebrothers: yes.
Madhu: wow kitna unique hai garv.
Vyom:(smiles) mujhe unique bhai ka bhai rehne dijiye.:(went)
Madhu: wow kitna tuning hai.i incomplete sentence samjha
Vihaan: smart nahin itne baar bola revise hogaya.
Brothers went sisters went.
Diya: nia sorry tumhe Friend banke rehna pada.
Nia: don't be sorry,:(went)
Diya:(smiles)
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Posted: 8 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT IS REALLY LOVELY AND SUPERB UPDATE.
LOVED GARVAYAL MOMENTS SO MUCH.
OHO NOW VARUN HAS DOUBT ON NIA MOM.
LOVED PARI PART WITH VYOM. IT WAS SO CUTE AND SWEET.
LOVED GARV SINGING AND THEIR PARTY PART TOO.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 534
In vm
In wedding altar.
Garv:(sitting and waiting for his bride)
Family is wating
Payal:(arrives walking on cushion join her lp)
Garv:(get mesmerize by her bridal avtar)
Payal:(inmind) har problem solution find karna koi tumse learn karen
Garvyal exchange garlands.
Garv:(whisper) some is looking palace queen.
Payal:(getshy)
Panditji says mantra.
In background jalte diye playing.
Garvyal having eyelock
Panditji: dulhan k pitaji kanyadan kariye.
Vivaan:(comes for kanyadan, sign her to smile)
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(feltnice to saw her happy)
Panditji: aaplog pehron k liye khade hojaiye.
Family get worried.
Garv:(pick his wife in his strong arm)
Payal:(keep hands around his neck)
Garv:(takes seven rounds)
Everyone shower flower petals on them.
Garvyal sat.
Garv:(put sindur in her partician.
Payal:(touch her partician)
Garv:(take gp wedding chain)
Payal:(get surprise look at him)
Garv:(put gp written wedding chain around payal neck)
They get married
Elders bless them one by one.
Garvyal:(join hand infront Mr and mrs kaur pic)
Garv:(join hands,) mom and dad, humdono k parents k bcoz mujhe payal ka love mila isliye jitna thanks kahun kam hai, I promise u both main payal ki har wish fulfill karunga,
Everyone miss them.
Vyom:(tells)mom and dad, main bhi pari ko hamesha Khush rahunga chahe hamari shadi ho ya na ho, mera signature style hai, irritate bhi karunga, it's your son promise..
Pari:(get surprise)
Everyone smiles.
Diya: garv payal ko leke jao.
Garv:(Carry her and went)
Phone rings.
Nia:(answer) yes mom.
Mihika:(ask) shadi hogayi ?
Nia: yes mom.
Mihika:(tells) we are on the way.
Nia: (get happy)come soon mom.
Mihika:(inmind) jab hum ajayenge toh tere khushiyon ka kya hoga.(end call) mom dad aane wale hain.
Diya: Varun jaake change karlo nia tumbhi.
Nia: ji auntyji.:(went)
Varun:(also)
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In garvyal room!
Payal:(tells) bahot achcha idea tha tumhara.blanket carpet
Garv: mera nahin bhaiyon ka tha, tumhe yaad haina mujhe fracture hua tha, tab bhaiyon ne apni blanket lagadi thi floor pe.mujhe aur pain na ho isliye.
Payal: bahot smart hai.
Garv:(smiles) mere bhai Jo hain smart hunge.
Payal:(ask)what do u mean by mere.?
Garv: payal hum couples hai, tum skb ho.
Payal:(get confuse) meaning.
Garv:(tells) siblings ki bhabhi.
Payal:(tells) tum pari k bhai ho toh main bhi siblings ki behen hun ok.
Garv:(smiles) sorry.:(ask) pain toh nahin haina?
Payal:(tells) haan garv.
Garv:(hug her) I love you.
Payal:(hug him back) ilove you2
Garv:(get separate and went to bring dress)
Payal:(smiles)
Garv:(arrives with her dress and help her changing dress)
Payal:(feeling shy by his touch and hug him)
Garv:(kiss her on forehead made her rest on bed) thodi rest karlo ok.
Payal:(tells) kal se aj better lagra hai.
Garv:(tells) phir bhi rest karlo, fasting karna hai ya medicine continue.
Payal:(smiles) fasting.
Garv:(tells) then rest like a good girl.
Payal:(close her eyes)
Garv:(went to change)
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Back to hall!
Family members waiting including arka for nia parents.
Mihikarmaan:(arrives) nia
Nia:(comes and hug them)
Vaderasehgalshergill couples get shock remember fb
Vivaan:(call) arjun, tum kasak vivaaniya simple ko bachchon k sath ghar leke jao. Badon main bore hojainge.
Arka:(take kids and went)
Siblings teams remember past get sad.
Nia:(bring them and introduce to family, also to family,to her love) yeh Varun hai.
Armihika: nice to meet you beta.
Varun:(seriously) don't call me beta, and take your daughter from our house.
Nia:(ask) Varun aise kyun baat kar rahe ho? Mom dad se
Varun:(show take anger)mera ghar meri choice, tum hoti kaun ho mujhse questions karnewali.? Get lost from my home.
Mihika:(felt bad) nia chalo beta.
Nia:(tells) no mom, mujhe answers chahiye.:(ask) kyun change hogaye Varun
Varun:(lies) challenge tha fakelove karne ka koi bhi ladki se, I won :(start laughing)
Family get confuse
Nia:(getshock)
Varun:(tells) now get out.
Nia:(went to bring her back)
Mihika: gunjan, isbaar main Sach main badalgayi hun, don't punish her.
Varun:(fold hand across chest) aapne suna tha, mere dad ki baat,:(went to his room)
Mihikarmaan get sad.
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On the way
Trio going.
Mihika:(hug her daughter) nia don't worry, humlog sab theek karenge.
Nia:(tells) No mom, iam sorry both off you. Cheap person se love kiya maine.
Mihikarmaan:(inmind) Jo hua usmain Varun ki ghalti nahin hai, hamare crimes ki punishment hai.:(to her) don't say like that.:(tells) ek baat karke dekho, nice person hai.
Nia:(call him)
Varun:(ask) kya hai phone kyun kiya?
Nia:(tells) anger chodo toh pehle. Batao kyun angry ho mujhse.
Varun: bola tha fakelovechallenge hai happy, don't u dare disturb me again.(end call)
Nia:(keep phone) not again.
Mihika: kya hua?
Nia: ek baat bolra hai, challenge.
Mihika: thoda time do sab theek hojaiga.
Armaan: Mihika is right. Sab theek hojaiga.
Nia: maine toh kuch nahin kiya phir aisa kyun kiya Varun mere sath:(get emotional)
Mihika:(hug her) don't cry.
Armaan stop car in corner come to his daughter hug her.
Mihika:(take Diya number from her daughter phone text her) gunjan tum aur vivaan mujhe sunshine hotel main Milo plz, ek secret tha. Jo batadena important hai..
Nia fall a sleep.
Armaan:(ask) nia ko pakdo, slip hojaigi.
Mihika:(keep her head on her shoulder) sorry nia hamare bcoz tujhe suffer hona padta hai.
Armaan:(tells) we can't become weak
Mihika: you are right.
Trio went.
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Back to vm in lunch!
Family sitting sadly
Mihikarmaan:(arrives) gunjan vivaan, (join hands) mere mistake k liye nia ko mat punish karo plz, nia meri aur armaan ki beti nahin hai, humlog guilty the good deed karna tha humein isliye Nia ko adobt kiya.
Vivaan:(ask) nia ne kyun nahin bola.
Armaan: humne usko kaha tha k hum kam k bcoz chodke gaye the usse.aur phir humlog cg se chalegaye uske sath. Main manta hun, humlog wrong kare, uske liye nia ko punish mat karo:(join hands)
Mihika: tumhare bachon main differences kiya tha na isliye motherhood feel nahin kiya:(getemotional)plz except her
Varun: ban kariye aapna lie, main driver ya watchman ki beti se shadi karlunga but aapki beti se nahin, samajhgaye aapdono. Get lost.
Mihikarmaan:(went)
Madhu: Varun, nia jabse ayi hai, kuch wrong nahin hua na is ghar main jaise Mihika k aane se hua.
Varun: I agree, nia achchi hai,but main wohlog ki respect nahin karsakta hunke bcoz hum sab suffer, aur nia k samne drama karsakta hun respect karne ka aur na usko batasakta hun hurt karne k liye uske parents kya hai. So it's better hum separate hojayen.:(smiles for them)
Familymembers get amaze.
Garv:(tells)you are so brave, aise situation main sochna tough hai:(hug him,getemotional)
Varun:thanks.
Garv:(wipe tears) welcome:(getseparate) main payal k liye lunch leke jata hun.:(went wiping tears)
Varun:(tells) main apni little sisters ko leke aata hun:(went)
Diya:(getsad) kyun hota hai hamare bachchon k sath,
Vivaan:(tells) don't worry, god hi dono se love karaye hain dono milayenge.
Diya: you are right.
They worries.
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In garvyal room!
Garv feed his wife.
Payal:(ask) kya baat hai garv, tumhare eyes red kyun hai?
Garv:(tells) while eating talk nahin karte payal. Coughing hogi.
Payal: okay but after eating mujhe batadena reason
Garv: okay boss:(smiles for her and feed her)
Payal:(ask) tumne eat kiya?
Garv: haan don't worry.(feed her,inmind) bataun ya nahin payal ko.
Payal:(inmind) Samar ne koi drama toh nahin kiya:(hold his hand stop him) Samar toh nahin aya.
Garv:(keep plate) payal, nia hamare enemies ki beti hai, Mihika armaan ki.
Payal:(ask) meaning.
Garv:(tells) mom k recovery k baad, dad ko case k liye kahin jaana pada, ek din dad agaye the aur hum enjoy karne k liye chalegaye the shimla, wahan se aane k baad problem start hue, sab theek hote bahot problem hue sabko aur mom aur Sath main maasi ko apna face sacrifice karna pada.:
Payal: oh my god. Yeh achcha nahin hua:(ask) sabko bahot hurt hora hoga na, sab yaad aake
Garv: haan, :(normally) humsabse Badfeel Varun k liye hora,hum sabka aur nia ka sochke relation break kardiya.
Payal:(ask) sab kaise hain Varun kaisa hai.?
Garv:(tells) sab tense hai. Varun vivaaniya aur simple ko lane gaya hai.
Payal:(tells) tumhe uske sath rehna chahiye tha, aate time kuch nahin hoga iam sure, but alone main kuch bhi hosakta hai.
Garv:(tells) I don't think so Varun kuch karega apne sath, we all know, hum mom dad k liye kitne dear hai.
Payal:(tells) garv, hum family k paas chalte hain, sab worried hai aur humlog yahan achcha nahin lagta plz chalo na. Otherwise.
Garv:(tells) tum bhi na:(keep her hand around neck get up with her and went)
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Back to hall!
Family sitting.
Payal:(arrives with her lp support)
Diya:(ask) kya hua.
Garv:(tells) payal ko sab patachalgaya.
Vivaan:(seriously) garv kya karun main tera, jab batana chahiye bhagjate ho jab nahin batana chahiye batate ho.
Payal:(ask) main aaplog ki beti nahin hun kya mom dad? Bina bataye shadi karne k baat se
Diya:(tells) don't think like that payal, humlog tumhe baad main batana chahte the. Don't worry ok.
Varun:(arrives with littlesisters)
Vaderasisters hug their parents and wents.
Varun:(ask) kaisa feel kar rahe ho? payal di bhabhi.
Payal:(tells) rest karke better feel hora hai:(smiles for him)
Varun: great. Don't strain your foot.
Payal: okay doctor varun
Varun:(smiles)family k liye Varun hun, hospital k liye doctor Varun.
Payal:(smiles) ok Varun.
Garv:(ask) payal chalen return.
Payal: ok
Garv:(support her hand went).
Varun:(tells) mom dad, maasis chachus, buas and mamus kal aaplog one day k liye outing, gun di aap garv payal di k sath outhouse jayenge.
Vyom: hum sab.
Varun: humsab secret mission karenge.
Everyone: ok.
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In playground!
Vyom remembering mihikarmaan acts get angry on ball.
Pari: vyom.
Vyom:(tells) pari plz leave me alone otherwise mujhe nahin pata main kya karunga.
Pari:(ask) kahan chalegaya woh vyom Jo sabko sadness main happy karta tha apne foolish talk se,? Woh vyom Jo apne bhai k dream Sach kardiya tha. Kahan gaya woh vyom Jo dad k birthday par wantedly toyguitar gift kara.
Vyom:(getsurprise) tumhe kaise pata?
Pari: tumne force kiya tha tumhare gift dekhne k liye, samajhgayi main.
Vyom:(tells) I will tell you everything thing:(tells everything)
Pari:(getshock) oh my god. Kitne cheap hain wohlog. Bechari nia ko bhi suffer hona padgaya wohlog se belong karne k liye.
Vyom:(ask) pari tumhe kya lagta hai, wohlog nia k baremain Jo bolre the woh Sach hoga.
Pari: ofcourse hoga, wohlog kaise the nia kaisi thi socho apne aap answer miljayega, for example apne aapko dekho madvi ko dekho tumlog unke reflection lagte ho funloving caring ho. Nia wohlog se belong karti toh kuch wrong hota na aane k baad se.
Vyom:(tells) tum right ho pari. But phir bhi kuch nahin hosakta, Varun nahin manega, nia se relation rakhne ka meaning hai woh devils ki respect karna, Jo impossible hai. Main Varun hota toh murder kardeta. Itni smartness nahin show karta. Jo Varun show kara tha.
Pari:(tells) agree. Bahot achcha hai varun, iam sure, Varun ko uske share khushi jald hi milegi.
Vyom:(ask) ek baat ask karun?
Pari: haan kyun nahin.
Vyom: meri warning se kyun nahin darke gayi tum.?
Pari: I know, tum guys se fights karte ho girls se nahin, mere sath verbal fight karte ho. Tum hi batao kyun darungi main sab pata rehte.
Vyom:(ask) itna belief kahan se agaya,? Mujhse baat karne kaise agayi,? Jaanti ho?
Pari: friend hoon na.
Vyom: nahin friendship se zyada hai, tabhi toh tumne engagement ka plan karliya:(went)
Pari:(inmind)kyun ayi main? Kyun risk liya,?,:(went)
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After dinner
In romaansi room!
Romaansi:(spendingtime)
MaAnsi:(call her sister)
Diya: hello maansi di.
MaAnsi: tumlog theek hona?
Diya: bura lagra hai, kash nia wohlog se belong nahin karti toh hum kuch karsakte, Varun ko samjhate the, but we are helpless.
MaAnsi: don't be sad and wait for god miracle, sab theek hoga, tum jaanti ho na, kitne baar theek hua hai, yaad haina.
Diya: haan thanks maansi di, dont worry:(end call)
Ronak:(ask) sab theek haina?
Maansi: haan.
Ronak: good. Hum sab kahin Bahar jayen kya, kuch din k liye.
Maansi: payal unwell hai.
Ronak: garv payal ko alone chodke jayenge, dono time spend karne k liye space milega.
MaAnsi: good idea.
Ronak:(ask) school se permission lelenge,
MaAnsi: ronak wait, pehle sabse baat karenge.
Ronak: good idea.
MaAnsi: kahan jayenge.
Ronak: sabse discuss karke dekhenge.
MaAnsi: ok.
Ronak: lets rest.
They take rest.
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In ranjanvi room!
Ranjanvi packing gift for Diya garv jrgunjan.
Jaanvi: I hope kal wohlog phir nahin aye.
Ranvir: I wish same, aur phir pata chalegi wohlog same hai aur change.
Jaanvi: right.
Ranvir: kal kya karen?
Jaanvi: family get together kaisa rahega.
Ranvir: ghar ya hotel.
Jaanvi: ofcourse ghar Jo situation hai, koi ready nahin hunge
Ranvir: I agree with u.
Jaanvi: kuch bhi karke sab normal karna hoga humein.
Ranvir: you are right, hum sath main sab theek karenge jaise kuch nahin hua kabhi:(give hand)
Jaanvi:(hold his head)
Ranvir:(smiles) drive par chalogi?
Jaanvi: abhi.
Ranvir: navratri k function dekhne milega.
Jaanvi: no need. Kal k liye planing karna hai. Phir kabhi humlog ghar main arrange karenge.
Ranvir:(ask) old hogayi ho isliye na?
Jaanvi: main nahin tum old hogaye ho.
Ranvir: tum.
Jaanvi: tum.
Ranvir: tum.
Jaanvi:(turn otherside with fake anger) good night.
Ranvir:(kiss her on cheeks)
Jaanvi:(smiles and hold his hand)
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In divaan room!
Divaan is spending time thinking about their younger son.
Diya:(tells) mujhe belief nahin hota, Varun itna bada secrfice kara hamare liye, nia k liye bhi.
Vivaan: mujhe bhi nahin belief hota, yeh woh Varun hai Jo innocent sa tha, hamse love karnewala bhi.
Diya:(ask) vivaan, nia ko except karlen kya? Mihika ne adobt kiya toh usmain kya ghalti hai nia ki.
Vivaan:(tells) you are but,hurry karna theek nahin hoga, tum jaanti hona doubt k bcoz soham poonam main kitne problem hue, isliye varun dil aur dimag ko samajhne do, Varun bhi right hai, nia ko itna bada truth handle karna easy nahin hoga. Jinko parents samajhti woh kitne cheap hai. Prove bhi toh chahiye wohlog ki baat ka.
Diya: we will find out. What is truth and what is lie.
Vivaan: nia ka number hai.
Diya: hai. 22-22-22-22-22.
Vivaan:(call her)
Nia: hello.
Vivaan: nia main vivaan hun Varun ka dad. Apne dad ko phone do plz.
Nia: ok.
Armaan: haan vivaan.
Vivaan:(tells) tumlog apna truth prove karne ka chance dera hun city hospital ajao.
Armaan: ok kab aana hai.
Vivaan: any time.
Armaan:(smiles)thanks vivaan mujhe chance dene k liye
Vivaan: last chance hai.nia ko bhi leke aao.
Armaan: ok.
Vivaan:(endcall) kal k baad sab theek hoga.
Diya: don't go alone.
Vivaan: don't worry.
They take rest.




















































































































































Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago
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Part 535
In city hospital!
Divaan waiting.
Trio arrives.
Vivaan: armaan nia, tumlog ko blood donate karna hai mere ek friend k liye chahiye.help karoge.
Armaan-nia: ok:(went along him)
Mihika: thanks gunjan hamein chance dene k liye.
Diya: chance nahin last chance bolo mihika.
Mihika: uncles auntys k baremain sunke bura laga. sab responsiblity tum teeno pe agayi hogi Na.
Diya: hum 5 daughters hai,
Mihika: bhulgayi thi sorry. Plz gunjan, nia ko Varun se milado. Ek mother banke socho plz , jaise Varun ne beta banke socha
Diya:(taunt her)tumhe Khush hona chahiye, tumlog ki reality nahin lake nia se separate hogaya Varun, bataya nahin tumlog kaise ho. Tumhare tarah blackmail nahin kiya aur na suicide karne k option rakha, iam proud of Varun for this.
Mihika:(felt bad)
Trio arrives.
Mihikarmaania went.
Diya:(get emotional)
Vivaan:(ask) kya hua?
Diya: Varun ne hamare liye itna bada sacrifice kiya aur hum kuch nahin karsakte.
Vivaan: haan but wish karsakte hain k Varun ko again love mile koi aur mile.
Diya: hum jaante hain love nahin hosakta.
Vivaan: kasak arjun kare na love, iam sure Varun ko bhi hoga.
Diya: haan right.
They went.
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In vm garvyal room!
Garvyal jrgunjan spending time watching movie.
Pari:(arrives with juices)
Garv:(ask) pari kya baat hai? Dinner time se dekhra tum lost si ho.
Pari:(tells) mujhe samajh nahin aara, vyom k paas hi kyun gayi? Sabke paas nahin,
Payal: fight hogayi tumlog main.
Pari: no, reason kuch aur hai, but kya samajh nahin aara, help me
Payal: kya?
Garv:( made her sat Infront of him,ask) ek baat batao, vyom se guitar learn karne main achcha lagta hai tumhe.
Pari: haan.
Garv:(ask) vyom k sath dance karne main problem nahin hoti tumhe.
Pari: nahin.
Garv:(ask) kabhi bhi Kuch bhi share karti ho vyom se, Jo hamse nahin share karti
Pari: haan. Lunch k liye Bahar gaye the tab automatic share kiya.
Garv: yeh sab ka ek hi reason hai.:(smiles) love hai tumhe vyom se.
Pari:(getshock) really
Garvyal: yes.
Pari:(get happy) main abhi batake aati hun:(turn to go but stop)
Garvyal jrgunjan: kya hua.
Pari: tension main kaise boldun vyom se.
Garv: humein Varun k liye Khush rehna, iam sure jab Varun pata chalega k uski pari di pari di bhabhi banke uske sath rahegi toh bahot khushi hogi Varun ko so batado.
Pari: ok then kc din batadungi.
Payal: fasting bhi karlo.
Pari:(went)
Trio hug eachother
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Outdoorguesthouse!
Divaan arrives with Varun.
Vivaan: Varun sorry, humlog first and last time mihikarmaan se milne gaye the.
Diya: don't worry humlog tumhe force nahin karenge.
Vivaan:(tells) tum jab chahe moveon karo hum wait karenge, thoda tough hoga but hoga.
Diya: jaise kasak ko arjun mila aur arjun ko kasak mili tujhe bhi milegi tu bas apne dil main nayi space dena usko, love karna.
Varun: okay:(ask) koi mili hai kya?
Vivaan:jab tum chaho boldo humein, hum find karenge.
Varun: aaplog find kariye dad, nia ko stop karane k liye yeh right hoga. K main shadi karlun.
Diya:(ask) Varun apne liye socho, hamare liye ya nia k liye nahin.
Varun: mom ne mujhe duniya show ki hai dad ne meri apki achche se care ki hai food feed karke, nia ne pyar show ki hai,(ask)aap hi batao itna love karnewalon k liye main nahin sohunga toh kaun sochega?
Divaan:(smiles) be happy.
Varun:(smiles) thanks.:(ask) aaplog time spend karo main chalta hun:(went)
Diya:(ask) kaun samjhega Varun ki feelings ko.honesty ko.
VivAan: koi hogi Jo Varun ko uske honesty k sath accept karegi.
Diya:(hug him)
Vivaan:(get separate)shall we dance.
Diya:(ask) are you out of your mind. Age dekhi hai
Vivaan: hum old hosakte hain love nahin.isliye lets dance.
Diya:(smiles)
Vivaan:(switch on music)
They dance.
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Back to garvyal room!
Garv(ask) tumhe kuch kehna nahin hai kya?
Payal:(tells) ofcourse kehnahai.
Garv:(ask) kya?
Payal: I love you Garv,
Garv:(madeface) yeh nahin.
Payal:(tells) tum achche loveteAcher ho.
Garv: yeh bhi nahin.
Payal:(ask) then kya? Got it.
Garv:(ask) kya?
Payal: you are the best.
Garv:(ask) kuch aur.
Payal:(explains) Jo tum mujhse sunna chahte ho woh sabse pehle mom and gun se sunne ka right hai phir mera right hai. So u have to wait.
Garv:(smiles) okay:(ask) pain toh nahin haina.
Payal: pehle se better hun. Tum chaho stand karke dikhasakti hun.:(smiles)
Garv: okay okay abhi nahin baad main.(smiles) anyways kitni achchi baat hai na, vyom pari love kArte hain. I can't belief this Jo vyom shadi ki baat sunke blanket main hide hogaya tha shadi karnewala hai,:(getsad)
Payal: Varun k liye badfeel hora hai.
Garv: haan payal, Varun ka dream tha, mom dad jaise suffer kare the, waise kissi ko suffer karne nahin Dega aur aj Khud unbearable pain main hai.treat nahin hosakta.:(getemotional)
Payal:(consoles) garv tum dekhna koi ayegi Jo Varun ko relief karke happiness degi, jaise tumne mujhe di.
Garv:(hug her) I wish tumhari baat Sach ho.
Payal: ofcourse Sach hogi.
Garv:(wipe tears)
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In brothers room!
Phone rings.
Varun:(pick and scold her) tumhari himat kaise hui?mujhe call karne ki.
Nia:(ask) kab tak angry rahoge aur kyun kar rahe ho yeh sab.
Varun:(with fake anger)I don't like repeating. Same thing again and again.so stop calling.
Vivaaniya-simple:(getscare)
Varun:(watch them end call) comes here.:(satdown on floor)
Vivaaniya-simple comes with fear.
Varun::(ask) ek baat batao? Tumlog ko kabhi koi classmates se problem nahin hoti kya.
Vaderasisters: hoti hai.
Varun: kya tumlog wohlog k instead kisse aur ko scold karte ho kya?
Vivaaniya: nahin.
Varun: just like that main kissi aur se angry hun, aaplog se nahin, bcoz I love you both.
Vaderasisters:(hug him) I love you 2 Varun bhaiya:(smiles)
Varun:(ask) by the way koi work tha aapko.
Vivaaniya:(tells) chachi ne bola tha, party k preparation main hurt hosakta toh agaye humlog aapke paas.
Varun:(smiles) good idea.
Simple: aapki friend kahan hai.?
Vivaaniya: nia didi
Varun:(tells) aapko pata hai, nia ne kaha tha k aapdono k sath nahin rehna chahti thi,but mujhe rehna toh send kardiya uske parents k sath.
Vaderasisters getsad
Varun: don't be sad we love you both.
Vaderasisters smiles)
Trio play with eachother.
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After lunch! In hall!
Family waiting for trio birthday
Garv:(arrives holding mother and sister hand)
Everyone sing birthday song for them.
Trio cut cake Feed eachother then family
Everyone feed them to.
Vyom:(ask) garv bhaiya gun di maasi hamari bhi blessing lijiye na.
Garv jrgunjan diya laugh including others
Pari:(ask) yeh kya bolre ho?
Vyom:(tells) right toh bolra hun, hamesha samething karne se bore hota hoga.
Pari: impossible ho tum
Everyone give them gift including payal.
Trio watch gifts thanks them.
Pari:(ask) payal di yeh colarge kab banaya aapne?
Payal: jab garv parag rehra tha tabse. Mere bhaiyon ne help ki meri, thanks.
Foursomebrothers: don't thanks.
Vyom: garv bhaiya,(tease him) so sad, aap yahin the aur aapko pata nahin chala.
Garv:(inmind) vyom mere bhai jaise mujhe payal k surprise k baremain pata nahin chala waise tujhe nahin pata pari k surprise k baremain.(smiles)
Vyom:(ask) Garv bhaiya aap irritate hone k instead smile kyun kar rahe ho?
Garv:(tells) main aur tu buddhu brothers hai.
Vyom:(get confuse)
Ronak: family main sochra tha, Jaise hum vivaan gunjan vihaan Madhu ki first wedding k baad gaye the, waise phir chalen after kc
Varun: main aaplog ko join nahin karsakta.:(went)
Garv:(tells) don't worry I will convince him:(went)
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In brothers room!
Varun is lost somewhere.
Garv: Varun. Mujhe family ki help chahiye bhai.
Varun:(ask) kya hua?
Garv:(tells) tum jaante ho na hamare engagement k din main late hogaya toh payal dargayi, aur socha hoga Samar ne mara mujhe.
Varun:(getshock) kya?
Garv::(normally) haan isliye plz, jab tak payal past se moveon nahin karti uske paas raho.sabko manao
Varun: main samajhta hun apki baat ko, I don't want family main nia Arman Mihika naam ya call. Problem aur ho isliye nahin aana chahta hun.
Garv:(tells) nia ko block kardo baat khatam hogi.:(take phone block her) hogAyi problem solve, ab chalo na plz.if u love payal bhabhi..
Vyom:(tells) sab ready nahin hore aane k liye, .(ask) aare hona tum ya nahin Varun.
Varun: ofcourse aata hun:(went)
Garv:(getsad and emotional)
Vyom:(ask) aapko kya hogaya?
Garv: mujhe helpless feel hora hai, hamare family badedadu ronak mamu dad kitne achche protect karte aur main kuch nahin karsakta na kehsakte hun, I want my siblings happiness.
Vyom:(change topic) aapne khudko buddhu kyun bola
Garv:(smile a bit) simply.
Vyom:kya kiya?
Garv:(makestory) feets touch karne ki baat se.
Vyom:(smiles) creative hai.
Garv: ok chalo jao mr creative.
Vyom: ok:(went)
Garv:(went to get fresh)
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Back to vm hall!
Garvyom join family.
Ranvir:(ask)ronak bhaiya jaana kahan hai
Ronak: sab decide karke boliye.
Everyone start giving different name.
Vivaaniya:(shout)plz rukiye sab.(went)
Everyone wait for her.
Vivaaniya:(comes with pencils book) humlog voting karenge, waise, hum decide kahan jaana hai
Everyone:(take pencils write names give papers)
Vaderasisters start counting.
Vivaaniya:(tells) manali k votes bahot hain k bahot votes bahot hai..
Ronak: ok hum manali challenge.
Jaanvi: garv payal k liye surprise arrange kardijiye.
Garvyal:(look eachother)
Ranvir: riddhima Aryan rimjhim kv ko bola Lena chahiye.
Ronak: exactly.
MaAnsi: kc k baad challenge.
Ronak: okay.
Garv:(ask) aaplog fast karte ho abhi.
Vaderasehgal couples:ofcourse
Diya: payal tum better feel kar rahi toh fast karo. Other har din main kabhi fast karsaktiho.
Garv: exactly.
Payal:(tells) main theek hun I will fast.
Everyone smiles.
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In evening afterdinner
In romaansi room!
RoMaansi spendingtime time
Someone knock on door.
MaAnsi:(open door)
Ranjanvi: help us.
Ronak:(ask) kya hua?
Jaanvi: ronak bhaiya mujhe fast karna hai, apka bhai ready nahin hora.
Ronak:(ask) kya hua Ranvir fast kyun nahin kar rahe ho?
Ranvir: main nahin chahta jaanvi fast kare,
Jaanvi:(ask) mere anger se problem tha na toh mere fast se problem kyun hai.m ain koi old nahin hun:(went)
Ranvir follow her.
Ronak: maansi main bhi sochra tum fast mat karo.
MaAnsi: I will fast for you.
Ronak: ek condition hai.
MaAnsi:(ask) kya?
Ronak:i love u
MaAnsi: I love u 2
Ronak: main bhi.
MaAnsi:(smilez)
Ronak: be happy.
MaAnsi:(ask) rest karen?
Ronak: okay.
They take rest.
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In ranjanvi room!
Ranvir: jaanvi plz understand.
Jaanvi: if u don't understand, I won't talk to you like before. Aur tarace hoga mera new home.
Ranvir: kitni stubborn ho tum.
Jaanvi: jaisa husband waisi wife.
Ranvir: main kab stubborn banna.
Jaanvi: ab.
Ranvir: tum stubborn ho.
Jaanvi: tum.
Ranvir: tum.
Jaanvi: tum stubborn pata nahin ronak bhaiya k bhai banke kaise agaye.
Ranvir: mujhe bhi tumhare baremain yeh hi lagta hai.
Jaanvi: what?
Ranvir: yes.anyways kya gift chahiye.
Jaanvi: be with me, sorry for past.
Ranvir:(tells) I will be with u and don't be sorry.
Jaanvi:(smikes)
Ranvir: ab toh gift batao.
Jaanvi: seriously kuch nahin chahiye,, actually mujhe fasting karne do.
Ranvir: okay fine.
Jaanvi: thanks.
Ranvir: be happy.
Jaanvi: ok.
Ranvir: lets rest
They take rest.
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In divaan room!
Diya:(is lost somewhere)
Vivaan:(ask) kya sochri ho?
Diya: bahot sunaya usko
Vivaan: tum aisi ho, khud k liye nahin apnon k liye fight karti ho. Iam proud of u.(ask) usne tumhe kuch kiya toh nahin na.
Diya: no,infact request kar rahi thi.but I didn't agree. uske baad tumlog agaye the.
Vivaan: thankgod, I was worried for u.
Diya:(smiles) I am fine and I want nice person for gun Varun vivaaniya.
Vivaan: miljayega.anyways tum Kya chahiye kc gift main.
Diya: anything u can give me
Vivaan: okay.
Diya: tumhe Kya chahiye?
Vivaan: you are my gift.
Diya: you are mine
Vivaan:(smiles)let's rest before fasting midnight dinner Karna hai.
They take rest.
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In madvihaan room!
Madvihaan spending time.
Madhu: kitni achchi baat hai. Varun ready hogaya.
Vihaan: haan.:(smiles)
Madhu: I hope Sab theek hajaiye.
Vihaan: time k sath Sab theek hoga
Madhu:you are right
Vihaan : Kya gift chahiye
Madhu: cake.
Vihaan: ok after dinner cake mileage.
Madhu: thanks.
Vihaan: but kaunsa cake chahiye.homemade ya ready made.
Madhu:readymade.
Vihaan: okay.
Madhu: let's rest.
Vihaan: okay.




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Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY AWESOME AND MIND-BLOWING UPDATE.
LOVED EACH AND EVERY PART.
LOVED THE MARRIAGE CEREMONY OF GARVAYAL. IT WAS SO SWEET PART WHEN GARV PICKED PAYAL IN HIS ARMS FOE PHERAS.
OMG NIA PARENTS TRUTH CAME IN FRONT OF WHOLE VADERA FAMILY .
FEEL BAD FOR VARUN. HE TOLD THAT THINGS TO NIA ONLY SO THAT SHE CANT KNOW ABOUT HER PARENTS TRUTH. SO SMART HE IS.
BUT FOR THIS POOR NIA IS ALSO SUFFERING AND SHE IS NOT MIHIKA AND ARMAAN REAL DAUGHTER. NOW LETS SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 😊

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