THE MARRIAGE MAKER - CHAPTER TWENTY TWO UPDATED

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clarita

@clars

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

OMG What an Amazing scene and u wrote so well ,RD is such a charmer man ,i would have to fallen in his arms by now ,Awaiting the next part when they are gona have a dinner date 🤗

my fav line

''Find me someone as beautiful as you'' he spoke out of the blue.

and whats with her past

Edited by clars - 10 years ago

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Preetika

@DamselinDistres

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: clars
OMG What an Amazing scene and u wrote so well ,RD is such a charmer man ,i would have to fallen in his arms by now ,Awaiting the next part when they are gona have a dinner date 🤗

my fav line

''Find me someone as beautiful as you'' he spoke out of the blue.

Thank you ☺️

I look forward to your comments everytime 😃

Thank you so much 🤗

Another update? 😃

Yaa.. Thats a suspense... 😛

Edited by DamselinDistres - 10 years ago

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Awsme update

Loved it

Sandhir in goa
I so love their sizzling chemistry

Rd said he wants a girl as beautiful as sanyu out of the blue was best part

Wtng for next
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

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Preetika

@DamselinDistres

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

(PART 9)
She had changed her dress. The first thing he noticed.
...
His eyes travelled from top to bottom. He noticed how she had traded her kurti for a deep blue crop top and ankle length white palazzos .
He noticed that anklet. Seemed quite old fashioned and not according to her taste. He sighed as he observed how she NEVER wore flats.
Five six inches heels.
She was weird. He chuckled at his observation.
She was looking fresh and beautiful. The latter being a constant.
''Hungry?" He smiled.
She smiled back as she sat opposite to him.
''Very much! '' she was looking light. She wasn't being her prickly porcupine self.
''I hope fish is okay with you ??"
''Yes. Thank you !"
''Great! I'll tell the chef to send the starters.''
He excused himself for a moment.
OH.MY.GOD!
Sanyukta gulped. How on earth can someone look 'SO' SEXY!?
Nobody had the rights!
She was totally enamoured by him. That simple faded jeans , and a white shirt. That's it?! That's all Randhir needed to look like a cover page model. His hair was ruffled by the wind , emphazing his raw look.
I HAVE TO KEEP MY HANDS OF HIM!
She mentally repeated , was when he came back.
''So! Tell me about yourself!"
''Why! Don't you read gossip magazines?" She mocked him , smirking.
''Very CHEEKY!" he replied , laughing.
They chatted away , about their likes , dislikes , funny experiences.
She noticed how light hearted and REAL he was looking. The facade was invisible.
The main course arrived.
''So..uhmm.. What is your aim in life?" She spoke, picking up her fork.
''I - I want to become the richest man in India!" He answered, quite seriously.
''Mmmhmmm... That's quite achievable for you , isn't it ?"
''Yeah! That was my grandfathers last wish.''
''So... Tell me about your family , Sanyukta!"
She froze , the expressions on her face changed animatedly.
''What family!?" She stopped chewing.
''Family?! Like mom dad sister brother?"
''Uh''
Pause.
''I don't have any family'' she muttered.
Randhir thought she was joking..
''What! Crap joke... Everyone has a family"
"Not every one randhir , NOT EVERYONE!" She kept the fork on the table and stood up.
''The food is very nice but suddenly , I don't feel like eating anymore. Sorry. Goodnight.''
''Sanyukta! ''
She walked away.
''f**k! '' Randhir felt like shit.
''What an asshole I am'' he cursed himself and turned back again , just to see her retreating figure.

*****

Goodnight <3

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ILuvParsh

@ILuvParsh

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Naaice ...Gosh !! Such an abrupt end to d dinner date ... Sanyu's past ... some bitter memories .. Just loving d majestic description of d story...Waiting :)

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HotFuzz

@HotFuzz

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Randhir hurt Sanyu unintentionally. Waiting for him to manofy her

He gets a clue that something is not right in her past

Lovely update yaar ...

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Awsme update

Loved it

Poor sanyu she's hurt
Rd unintentionally hurt her

There's sum thing in her past which is bothering her

Excited for next
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

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Sumedha

@suumi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

nyc update
sumthng serious must b thr abt sanyu's family
cont soon

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Preeti

@ms.carefree444

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Just read all the parts. Amazing updates. I am trying my best not to get too involved with it though. Honestly, you might just disappear again. You better not discontinue this one.

Ps : I sound rude. xD

Pps : missed you!