ArHi OS: The girl I wanted to be

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Asshi...

@Asshi...

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

the os was beyond words! I loved it❤️
it was something different, different from other stories oss and that's what made it unique
awesome dear❤️

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

teekay u have nice command in this genre .there was everything in this o.s .
death was an easy option in comparison too qhat khushi had to suffer .even arnav

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sweety421

@sweety421

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Wow...Amazing OS dear...Beautiful story and very well written

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

damn girl
that was heart wrenching
she could have avoided all that heart ache
oh payal thats coward way out
trying to kill yourself
no one is worth that
but guess she just loved him too much
as did khushi
but not enough to confide the same to him

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

That was so heartbreaking for Khushi and Arnav

Damn Payal caused a lot of heartache because she couldn't deal with life without Arnav

Arnav cared for Payal but he did not love her

Thankfully they were able to salvage their love

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Omggg wat an emotional os

Loved it

Awsome

Fantastic

Loved it

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

That was such a beautiful One...

I really felt angry on kushi, but i understand why did she leave Arnav because she loves payal so much and she cant see her in pain...

Poor Arnav, between these sisters duo, he suffered also but not much as he has Payal...

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

I read it multiple times and each time the feelings are so overwhelming. your words are evoking such intensity that its difficult to remain unaffected.

I wish you could make a SS for this one.

Plzzz