ArHi OS: The girl I wanted to be

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

it is so so so so beautiful story...

u r such an awesome writer... wow.. amazing..

i felt so bad for khushi... for arnav.. for payal..

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

such an emotional n interesting read...

enjoyed every bit of it...

u have penned it beautifully...

thanks 4 pm...

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Very nice os
Beautifully written.

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

that was too wrong on Khushi's part...to take such a big decision bt Arnav's life, without asking him...in my opinion she doesnt deserve his forgiveness...

Payal wudve come around someday, married some other guy n wudve peacefully lived longer, had Khushi not made such a sacrifice...

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xBabyAngelx

@xBabyAngelx

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Nice os

very well written

But I didn't like Arnav married Payal whatever the reason and Khushi to take such a big decision without telling Arnav.

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diya

@luckyarshi143

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Omg...such a fabulous os...

Loved it..

Edited by luckyarshi143 - 10 years ago

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rafiki84

@rafiki84

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

*Edit*

It's like you know HOW to pinch me with your words. I don't like you. Subha subha rula dia!

Imagining Payal with Arnav is very hard but seeing them getting married and having a blissful life and having a kid as well is very bitter pill to swallow Teekay I get Khushi loves to be thensacrificial lamb, but please do have a teeny selfish bone in your body bahee!

Arnav, you idiot! People don't fake such emotions for such a long time! Of course she was always in love you!

Thank you for that ending! Else maybe I would've come after you with a danda! 😆

Edited by rafiki84 - 10 years ago

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

What a heartbreaking story. So well written. Felt the emotions right there with Khushi.

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Right!

So, where do I begin?

It was such a packed n powerful os, that I had to stop by, breathe, n then continue.

An amazing work that deserves all d applaud!

It was such a lovely start, if course with gloom intact. I loved d mushy shy intro. But yes d reality strikes, n d plot began.

Sisters, sisters, sisters. I know not about this in reality but uv presented a real scenario.

Sisters in love with arnav.

One stupid enough to take away her life, d other, far stupid enough to give away d owner of her life. But n then, I wonder, isn't that y she calls herself an idiot?

I like d struggle of d lovers uv put in. D anger, d fake betrayal, d self chosen isolation, d indifference.

And d twist!

I loved d way Arnav put forth his words.

Payal loved me so much that she gave away her life For me, dying. You love me so much that you lived a life without me

I hear pain, betrayal, agony, defeat n longing love.

There is a reason I said u excel in emotioning emotions n you've just proved me right.

I do want to b that girl, but if it were me, I'd b selfish. I'm no marytr. But having said that! I'm no khushi.

And that makes me say, I love this piece of writing, that had every emotion imbibed in it.

Amazing work. Would live to read more.

Congo's&Cheers!!!

Love&Hugs.

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PreenaRak

@PreenaRak

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

It was superb, an emotional update. At first i had a fearing that it had a sad ending. I felt if khusi chd never be the girl she wished to be. But atlast u made my wish come true. Thanku fir this wonderful os. Do write more