ArHi OS: The girl I wanted to be

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Amazing os 👏👏
Loved it 😛

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teekay

@teekay

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: _Mini_
I read it multiple times and each time the feelings are so overwhelming. your words are evoking such intensity that its difficult to remain unaffected.
I wish you could make a SS for this one.
Plzzz

Aww. Thanks for liking it darling but I literally don't have anything more to say. This was never planned. I just got bored of work and wrote this in 40 minutes flat. I even posted it without proofreading (so many typos!) and went back to work. I really don't have a story in me to narrate beyond what's already there in the words and between the words.

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: teekay

Aww. Thanks for liking it darling but I literally don't have anything more to say. This was never planned. I just got bored of work and wrote this in 40 minutes flat. I even posted it without proofreading (so many typos!) and went back to work. I really don't have a story in me to narrate beyond what's already there in the words and between the words.

try karo... hoga... this is awesome material... digging it sooo hard. I feel there is more to it...

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

it was painfully for khushi and arnav.. they have sacrificed their love..

But finally at the end they have become together

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

AMAZING!!! 👏 Very emotional but soo good!

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newfoundlove

@newfoundlove

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

an emotional story, nonetheless, very good!! At last everything was cleared between Arhi.

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satyasree89

@satyasree89

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

lovely story.

it was so amazing😊

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shubhi15

@shubhi15

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Beautiful os

U r amazing in writing emotional stories

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Lovely OS;

Amazing portrayal of different emotions!!

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MrsKhan-Sobti

@MrsKhan-Sobti

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Oh this was awesome! Finally she was the girl she wanted to be. For me it's always difficult to picture arnav with someone other than khushi but well in the end everything just fell into place (ok im not sadist but im happy that payal died :P ) glad the misunderstanding got cleared off...TK aap great hai! :*

Love,

Teens!