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Posted: 10 years ago

#661

Hi,

I am new reader of your story and this is my first comment here :)... I have been trying to catch up with this story for past couple of months (since I am back to IF after 2 years...)... and finally I am all caught up...Honestly I could have done an overnight marathon but I didn't want to. Despite that urge to read the next chapter immediately, there is more contentedness in taking time and indulging in every chapter, every sentence, word and above all the emotions evoked by your characters and writing.

I realized that there is something about this story that makes me want to finish everything I am doing, sit in a cosy, secluded and comfortable corner of the house with a cup of tea and read the story. Even though, this story is about loss of loved ones, heartbreaks, failed relationships, bleak future and hearts filled with memories that trigger pain, yet yearning and hope for love...there is something very calming about it.

I especially enjoy the pace you have set for this story and how you dwell deeper into every character and make them real, period. Every character from Arnav Khushi to Ramdhan are such integral part of this story.

I want Arnav and Khushi to embrace their second chance but I am in no rush. It's the journey that matters and makes the end more cherish-able and more than the end it's the memories that we look back to.

Having read all 17 chapters I should be saying more..but this is the best I could do :( I wish to comment regularly and hoping I will have more words and things to say :)

Thank you.

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kiran1992

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Posted: 10 years ago

#662

Very nice update...

So it was not ASR...I was prepared for it but still I wished it was him...

The thing I loved most about this update was the conversation between Khushi and Lavanya...

Its a blessing to have a friend like Lavanya...The same goes for Arnav aswell...

I know its not a easy job to reach the comfort level Arnav and Maya shares...Waiting to know more about them...

Why did you stop there?😭

I kind of knew that you will stop there...

But I guess thats the thing I love about your writing...😉

Now I have to wait for another 10 days😭...😃

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afsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#663

They were together for jus a week

I thought a year

Lets c what future holds for them

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arnshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#664

amazing...filled the heart with warmth...I think arnav might have heard khushi n lav convo...arhi needs to talk but before that khushi needs a push to realize that she must give a chance to love.

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BroknAngel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#665

Awesome update. I have no words to describe hw ur writing touch my heart n mind... its beautiful.

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KeerthiRajkumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#666

she missed the sound of car in all this
hope arnav heard at least half of the things khushi said to la
la is such a wonderful friend
who can put sense into khushi's brain
love between arnav & maya is wonder & unique
kailash is awesome person who can let her wife to continue her relationship
between her & her ex it takes so much of guts to make this happen
loved it

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#667

that was a brilliant update..Arnav and Khushi's points and perspectives were very well portrayed...I really hope Arnav and Khushi grab the second chance life is giving them with open arms...looking forward to read the next update...please do continue soon..👍🏼

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nisha_mehta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#668

Loved the update.

Khushi and Meera and both disappointed that arnav and Mohan are not going to join them.

Maya is indeed a sweetheart she just wants to see arnav happy and will do anything for him. The equation between arnav Maya and Kailash is the rarest of the rare but most soulful.

Lavanya is the mirror to khushi's feelings and emotional struggle. She just wants khushi to give herself a second chance.

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#669

i'm glad Arnav and Khushi have friends like Maya & Lavanya... loved the friends' convos... and Meera is one samajhdar bachha... she's sweet... really love her... waiting for ASR and Mohan to reach Mathura...

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sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

#670

Again a very beautiful update dear. ...
I was disappointed to know that arnav did not join them... but then maya made a good plan and I hope in the next update arnav will be with Khushi. ...
I love the little Meera... The way she enquired about Mohan ' s condition states that she likes her new friend...
Khushi ' s monologue was sad... Itz natural on her part to think so much about the pros and cons about Arnav... She is a widow... And she will take time around to give herself a second chance... loved Lavanya n's advice to Khushi. ... She is a true friend... I hope Arnav - the sexy dish - Singh -Raizada will make his appearance soon and wooh khushi...
Very well written dear...