T2 | ArHi FF Second Chances | Link to Thread-Three, Pg 140

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#651

loved the way la advised kushi that life had given her a second chance she also had a right to be happy

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#652

well written chapter, emotions supported with logic, a very rare narration that you get to see in any fiction. loved the way la is so protective towards khushi and advising her to take the second chance.

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#653

to be honest, i don't really want to comment. it almost feels like i am interrupting the narrative. it's like a disturbance in the middle of a gripping story. what can i say? you go from strength to strength with each update

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#654

Awesome update MB!!! Totally loved the update!!!!

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manugan

@manugan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#655

Very well expressed emotions...there must be a reason for the past happenings, that haunts khushi...waiting to hear asr's version...

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#656

Fantabulous update
Loved it
Thanks for the mail

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GuruDeep246

@GuruDeep246

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#657

Meera unresed my space on page 103with heavy heart.

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Arshi2503

@Arshi2503

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#658

Beautifully written.Your way of story telling is amazing.
I was thinking of Arnav and Mohan on the other side of the door
Anyway they are going to join them.
Thanks for early and long update