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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#671

Awesome update...

Maya is such a nice soul n so is everyone else in this story, a lot of good people n general circumstances , everything this story offers is very realistic.

I think most of d readers including me can relate to the feelings of the characters n circumstances too.

Thanks for d email.

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#672

Loved every word of the update.

Thank u for such a fabulous update.

Soul friends. Arnav and Maya , lav and khushi

Amazing friends loved them

Little kiddo meera i love her

So ARS all is fair in love and war

U waged a war against ur love to win her love wow go for it man

Superd update.

Thank u

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Poju

@Poju

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#673

Loved it.. I want the story to move.. Can't wait to see these 2 confessing and hugging..

Update soon..

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#674

Loved it...they both got very good friend who wanted to unite them... Let's see how long they resist..this update was like a poem... In whole update I wanted to see if asr came to mathura,did he speak to khushi .. But I just could not skimmed through I had to read every single word. They were not together but in every word they were united... This feeling I just can not explain

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mklam

@mklam

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#675

This story tugs at the heart strings. Arnav at the door would be predictable and you chose not to do that. The conversation between the exes left me confused as there is so much feeling between the two - granted they are divorced but they still look out for each other. Look forward to maya and arnav's story later.

I had been to vrindavan recently and learnt about the widows there - khushi's childhood and and how she lost her loved ones pretty much shaped her as an individual - she needs to get past this fear and take a leap of faith with Arnav. Sigh.

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#676

Thankyou for early update n now coming to the story i thought that arnav would be on door but you chose the other way n it was more nice i really love maya n arnav friendship n looking forward for their story,khusi should listen to lav n her heart n take a step forward

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#677

that was simply superb mira and im happy that khushi has a friend like lavanya in her life that understands her and willing her to go and search for her happiness. its for sure that she will be always be there for khushi. its such a sweet and trusting friendship.

now im disappointed as well as khushi. i really thought that arnav and little mohan would be accompanying them on this trip to mathura but im happy that he will be reaching there finally and all thx to the help of maya and kailash who wants him to be happy too.

khushi will never stop missing nk, he was the one besides her during the tough times, he was the one who taught her to love again so not missing him one day is not possible but im sure that the ache she feels now will lessen over times and she will be remembering only the good memories.

i just wish khushi would give herself a chance and let arnav in, its not that she is not attracted to him. she clearly feels for him but she is just scared of being left behind once again. well she ll never know if she doesnt try.

loved the update, it was so beautiful and especially little meera conversation with her mum, she is an amazing little girl.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#678

khushi needed that.. loved it.. waiting for ASR and Mohan to join them..

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#679

Thank you for the notification. Here is my favourite line from this chapter "perspectives after all, that push and pull between the big picture and the minutiae". I am amazed by the way you put and link words to give the essence of the chapter. It's just amazing. The above sentence tells us how strongly they feel for each other.

The sharpness of MEERA is unbelievable. The way she understood Mohan's weakness and strength is just so touchable.

Why did you let us hanging, you have been leaving us hanging of last two weeks, we were so eagerly waiting for their trip. At first i was really sad, that I thought you would not let Arnav to make the trip, but after reading Meera's eagerness, I knew you are just testing the water. Can't wait for the next update.

Thank you for recommending good stories.

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shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#680

Beautiful update..

I strongly believe that everyone deserves a second chance though it is definitely difficult to forget your partner or your loved ones. But still life goes on and so shall we.

I like Khushi's hesitancy to accept somebody's love again, but since its Arnav may be she can...

Meera is soo cute...

Loved La's and Khushi's talk..

Loved your update..👏👏

Edited by shubhanjli - 10 years ago