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sman

@sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#571

from yesterday I am in dreamland of their first kiss...what a superb explanation Mira..loved it.. :-)

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#572

And here is my unres...

Edited by Chokri_ASR - 10 years ago

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g17jas

@g17jas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#573

MB, you write beautifully. I am thoroughly enjoying this journey of a young widow. I simply have no words to tell you how much I enjoy reading this every week. Keep writing :)

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bhavis

@bhavis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#574

Mira, this is one of the journey that I solemnly wish never ends. 😃 This journey fulfills us the reader all the flavor of the life yet keeping alive the yearning of having more.👏

If my memory serves right this is officially your first Arshilicious ch and woman you have hit the nail😳.

There was amaranthine chemistry since inception and like your story it too was out of the box. A desire initiated by young lady no wonder she remembered the exact time when they met first after 10 years. There is always 2 side of the story and for once their first kiss did not have different meaning for both and both cherished it equally one with detailed update and other just with the required detail👏.

One thing I loved about this show and its character was there was introspection on part of character. They used to think about it and that made me fall in love with it initially and lady you are doing the same thing.⭐️

I am loving this story for one thing and one thing only that there is so much positivity in this story and every character seem to have forgotten their bitter past in order to make truce with present and future. A child is always a centre stage for any couple be it together or be it apart and that you have shown it with eloquence. Be it with Arnav-Maya or with Khushi-NK.

I am so jealous of Khushi -Lavanya friendship😳 😆 They have come so far; that despite in midst of so many things and miles apart they understand each other and Lav's Just Do IT👍🏼

Usually i quote for the story but for the first time i would like to do something different. 😃

Mira this quote sums it what I feel as a reader for you:

Like everyone else in this world, I have had struggles. There's disappointment and obstacles in everybody's life. I feel like I was writing 'Second Chance' not just for myself, but also for the people who have struggled.

El DeBarge

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#575

awesome update...very well written..👏

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#576

Thank you for the mail and I should say thank you for the recommendations.

How you bring the past of Arnav and Khushi is amazing. They way you link their past and present is fasinating. The bond between the father and son it is so touching. The list will go on, as you are one of the best writer I have seen. No offence to others, but, I feel in love with your writing style.

Looking forward for the next update.

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: jduke
My unres here

Jay..your road trip quote wants me to take a road trip with my IF friends and Arhi from all our fav FFs ..it would be one awesome trip..:-)

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 10 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: sman

Jay..your road trip quote wants me to take a road trip with my IF friends and Arhi from all our fav FFs ..it would be one awesome trip..:-)

Thank you 🤗.

I am in 😛